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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pearl_27

It was just awesome!👏
Such a beautiful piece.
So less dialogues but you depicted thousands of emotions.



Hi Pearl - About the lack of dialouges... As you can tell, I like doing the talking😆 I don't give the bechaare a chance! Haha. But, jokes apart, thank you so much. That is very kind of you!



Thank you!



😳 Shukriya!

Originally posted by: PuvZ

Beautifully written... 👍🏼



Thank you as always PuvZ😃

Originally posted by: saf24

This was beautifully written and it captures the emotions so well. Loved it



Thank you Saf! I'm glad it was worth your time😊



Thank you!



Thank you Freya!

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

Nice OS love ur style of writing 😃



Thank you - much appreciated😊



Thank you for the time.

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Excellent loved it😳❤️😊



Thank you so much! Looks like it inspired some different emotions😆



Thanks Jojo!

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Beautiful OS Desi-chic and beautifully written. You are right - this "date" is much more appropriate with the right set of emotions, given the place where the show is now. Lovely - thank you.



Thank you, for the agreement and time. The stuff they showed was alright, but I didn't connect to it considering my perspective of AarYa's unique relationship. What was shown - in my opinion - was too redundant for them. Anyways, I appreciate their efforts nonetheless. Thanks for connecting!

Originally posted by: morris

That was so beautiful. Loved it. 👏


This date was way more beautiful than what was shown in the serial. I loved how simple sentences (like the below) had more depth and more feelings.

So clever he was, the man that spelled meaning in her life.

Looking towards the man next to her, she took in an image that lasted a life-time. If time were to ever freeze for her, it would be in a moment like this... where the entire world sat compiled in front of her.




Thank you for the kindness. As I have mentioned earlier, I think AarYa are unique, and the scenes shown were all too familiar. While this is nothing new, I felt it was a little bit more suitable for the awkward familiarity the duo holds in their unique relationship. As for the words, thank you for taking notice. Your time is highly appreciated.



Thank you Disha!

Shout out to you all for your patience for having lived through my ramblings. Your time and consideration is greatly valued!

Cheers,
dc

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