*THE GOLDEN DAYS* new FF part 2 updated pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Very cute Rasheeda. I am impressed how you are bringing in all the leads from the 3 serials - you have shown their interaction very nicely. Oh and i hope in one of your updates you will have Maya suspended - what she is doing with Arti is punishable by law in some places. Would love to see Maya getting her just deserts 😡.

thanks u very much kat. yes for sure bua will get what she deserve..😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

Ahahaha Oh God Yash fell into Ricky's arms I swear if I was gng to tht skool I would hav stand up infront of Yash and ricky and laugh real hard it was interesting do cont. soon😃

thanks😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: maha9

Wonderful update little sis !!!

Good job and all the pairs were awesome in their story line 👏
Continue soon dear

thanks maha ka will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
interesting part...

already hated maya...

Ricky is funny...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
a very great start...liked it a lot...awaiting the update... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Nicely written Rasheeda! Liked the way you portray the closeness of all three characters.
You brought back my university nostalgia...love it buddy!
Please continue soon...it's very interesting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
hey guys..long time no see...im really sorry for the very late update...so here the story goes...

yash:so.. cant u ask me for a plan ... after all im a secret prankster u know!!

ricky(laughing):come on..mr yash scindhiya..u..the son of great suraj pratap scindhiya...wants to give me advice??? in ur dreams yaar.

yash: dont judge a book with its cover!! ricky...u still dont know me very well.

ricky: yeah i know u very well all right...when ur father is all boring..then what do u expect from his son????.

yash:meaning???

ricky: which means ur boring too..right

yash:fine in that case..i will leave now..i thought of giving u a free advice..but it is ur choice..if u want u take it otherwise dont!!

yash leaves..

ricky(thinking):he must be having a good idea too...i must ask him somehow..

ricky : yash...wait a minute

yash: what now??

ricky: hmmm..u said u have a plan right...

yash:soo...mr ricky diwan wanted to here my plan now..i can see that..

ricky:err..excuse me...i just want to check ur plan..whether it good or not!! only for that,, nothing else..

yash: im pitying u ricky...

ricky:just say it..

yash:fine...its silent treatment...trust me..it is the best u can do...all...
ricky(laughing hysterically): what silent treatment??? r u out of ur mind??

yash: let me finish...what i was saying is that...u should stop calling her shreematiji,,and all the other flirty names..look ricky..u must not behave like a flirt..u must behave like a gentle man ..and

ricky: u know what..i really thought u have a big plan and all..come on yash ..this is 21st century for ur kind information..silent treat ment wont work..u can go now..

yash(feeling bad): ok fine..i will go for now...but i will be back ..just to check on u.

ricky:yeah yeah ok...
after a lot of thinking..ricky finally decided to accept yash's plan..he saw indira and aarthi talking..

ricky(lookind at them): pinto, i think im going to go with yash's plan ..what do u think??
pinto dint reply.

ricky: if yash's plan worked..i have decided to make him my official royal adviser what say???

ricky turned his face towards pinto only to see he was looking at krishna adoring her..

ricky(tapping on him):pinto..hello..pinto

pinto:she is so smart..beautiful..intelligent...she may not have the beauty outside..but she definetly beautiful inside..her smile..her hair..her ...

ricky was looking at pinto who is completely out of his senses..he was talking to himself...
about some girl..who is it??

ricky(whispering in pinto's ears):who is the smart, beautiful girl pinto??

pinto: its krishna yaar!!

ricky(shouting):ha got ya ! i knew it..u r in love with her..i knew it very well...

pinto(gets annoyed):ricky... fine i accept...but leave it for now...by the way what was u talking??

ricky:its a long story..any way i will explain it after class..

pinto:ok ok...

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in the class...its vidhi mam's period..she has not come yet..aarthi and indira was busy talking..

aarthi:indira u know what??

indira: what?? tell me

aarthi:i think yash is cute..

indira:love at first sight ...haaan?

aarthi: i think its love at second sight...he looked so cute when he fell in ricky's arm..

indira:speaking of ricky...dont u think..the monkey usually comes here and talk rubbish??

aarthi: he must have got bored...because of u.

indira: in some way it is good.

indira(thinking): its all wierd..i usually behaves as if i does not care what ricky says..but deep inside i know i care for him..but does this mean love...why is ricky not even looking at me..why is my mind screaming???is there something on my teeth..or is my eyeliner spreaded

indira:umm.. aarthi..

aarthi: what?

indira:is there something in my teeth..i mean in my face??

aarthi: no u seemed to be all right..

indira:oh ok..thanks

aarthi:why are u asking??

indira: just asking ..nothing else.
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pinto who cant stand anymore. goes and sits near krishna...

pinto: dont u even get bored???

krishna: hi pinto ji..i dint see u sitting here..

pinto: its ok..by the way what r u reading??

krishna:its nothing..u know this lesson babloo sir said he would take tomorrow..i was just reading it..

pinto:umm..krishna..i was saying that.

krishna:what is it pinto ji??

pinto: i ..i ...i just dont know the previous lesson..im trying to study it..it is just dont get it in my mind..u know it is so difficult..

krishna: the previous lesson??..but thats only has 5 pages.

pinto: but i dint understand anything in it...so can u pls make me understand...

krishna:sure pinto ji..

krishna was teaching the lesson to pinto..but pinto was happy that his plan finally suceeded

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yash:aarthi..

aarthi's heart beat started increasing the moment he stood infront of her..

aarthi: y..yes .yash

yash: i need to complete my notes..and i asked arpita.but she said she dint complete it..so i was wondering...

aarthi:come on yash..sure how can i not give u ..
aarthi took all her books and messed up her table...

aarthi:here u go..i completed every thing if u want u may take it to home too...

yash: thanks..i was just wondering..can i have ur phone number..

aarthi:phone number???

yash: just in case ...for study emergency nothing else..

aarthi:sure yash..by the way can i have ur phone number too...just in case..

yash: sure why not...

aarthi and yash scribbled their phone numbers in a paper...

yash:here u go...by the way where are u coming from?? r u in delhi..

aarthi: nah..im from bhopal..im staying here just to study..

yash:hey im from bhopal too...

aarthi:from which place..

yash: im near the main market...

aarthi: omg ..im just backside of the main market.!!

yash: we r so near but still never seen each other..

aarthi:its so funny...looks like our destiny made us to meet here..

yash:yeah...hmmm we will be friends...

aarthi: why not..sure..

yash led his hand to aarthi..

yash: friends.

aarthi smiled as she saw him go to his place..
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the final bell rang..it was time to go home...indira feeling restless...she somehow wanted to speak to rishi..at least hi ..
she saw him coming towards her...she want to make him see her..but how..

indira suddenly threw her bag onto the floor... which landed up hitting somebody's leg..but its not ricky...

precap- prashant and sameer to plan to embaress aarthi...indira makng friends with rishi..
krishna and aarthi to be friends...

guys how was it...comments are compulsory..even though its bad i accept it...do press the like button..😃😃





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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Intresting Character Sketch ...

Yaar Continue Soon Let See What The Story Brings...😉

Intresting Work Buddy ⭐️

edit ...

okay woo hoo first to cumnt ...

read your both of your update it was totally adorable..

the way yash landed on the guys arm i can barely imagine how it wud have been ??? 😆

so nice ..poor guyz trying ther best level to pataoo gurlz..😳😳😳

aww hate this maya ..how can she tell a gurl to sweep her class yaar ???😕

awsum work rashi ⭐️
Edited by Thabs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Hey dear awesome write up yep after a long wait got to read, pls continue your update soon.Insha Allah looking forward to it and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Thabs

Intresting Character Sketch ...

Yaar Continue Soon Let See What The Story Brings...😉

Intresting Work Buddy ⭐️

edit ...

okay woo hoo first to cumnt ...

read your both of your uopdate it was totally adorable..

the way yash landed on the guys armm i can barely imagine how it wud have been ??? 😆

so nice ..poor guyz trying ther best level to pataoo gurlz..😳😳😳

aww hate this maya ..how can she tell a gurl to sweet her class yaar ???😕


awsum work rashi ⭐️

thanks thabs di...love ur comment...

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