ArYa SS: A Father's Trial - PART 5 Up (PG 22)

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Oh, dear wonderful imagination and write up of about the teeny palak and ansh, yes this how i would love to see in PV too.

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Piie Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG!! That was one totally mind-blowing story, buddy...loved Ansh & Palak's bonding...a combi of sibling & friendship...awesome!!

Hope you'll continue very soon...could hardly wait for Palak's reaction seeing Ansh's signal.

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Thanks for the PM friend and you are so awesome in capturing yash and aarthi life after 10yrs...I could visualize it

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

@Pearl, Angie182, Supransi, Freya123, Deepti, Darrish, Shree123, Maha9, priya_drizzles, teju1816, lulujjj, SarahRam, Anituram - thank you for reading. I am glad you all liked the story. Thanks for the encouragement.

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hello madam Kat!

Welcome back with a new story dear.
Something different from ur previous one ha!

Loved Yash as the concerned father and absolutely loved Aarti. She really does know how to control the situation.

Just imagining ur characters for real. Kitne bade ho gaye. Ansh and Palak so close. Wow!!! Kitne ache dost ho gaye hain. hai na??? n whats their usual warning sign??? curious to know.

n where are Payal and Pooja. Hope to see them too, soon.

loads of love
Vinu

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

kat it is just amazing. wow its really nice. loved it so much . thanks for the pm and pm me after u finish the next update

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow dude new story 😃
Fantastic. start , I loved it 😛
Both Yash-Aarti n Ansh-Palak bonding is awesome , beautifully written 👏
The pinch of romance there was cute 😳
Continue sooon 😃

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I don't think could handle a father like Yash I wud've beaten him up long ago 😆 but good ss so far and I see u hav spilt the story into two... I feel so special😛😳😆