Originally posted by: Allbut1
I was reading this story in bits and pieces as you guys took turns in posting in the DC, and for some reason I completely skipped over this thread and by extension missed out reading that phenomenal 4th part! LOL! I'm sorry! I thought we had posted the link up in the DC for the new thread as well😳
I said it multiple times in the DC and I'll say it again, this is sheer talent and utter brilliance combined from both of you exceptional writers and it has been a complete treat reading it all in one go! We thank you very much for the high praise! Coming from another amazing writer, it certainly is a pleasure to receive ☺️
You have written Yash and Aarti with so much care and honesty that makes them seem like they belong in that time period, and my god the chemistry between the two is absolutely scorching! I have really missed reading about their hot and heady encounters ever since Lord Yash decided that he needed to get away before he does something deliciously inappropriate, so it made me really happy to see that he was back at the end of this part (or at least I hope that it was him).When you guys say things like this, I can assure you that we are left reeling. We do try our best, but it's only good enough if you, as the reader, are enjoying it. It's even more fascinating when we consider how this all started out. I can still picture those DC pages in my mind, and when this does end, I'm going to miss the fun we had doing this.
Oh and I absolutely loved, loved, loved how Palak referred to her as Mumma unknowingly! Beautiful progress, and the fact that Payal has also said it before made me all the more happy! The girls have completely taken to her, and I wonder what our Lord Yash will have to say to such a slip up!
So far the maiden has kept them from uttering it in his ears, but who knows when children will really drop a bombshell on unsuspecting adults? Four years with only Aarti as a mother figure and hearing Ansh call her "mumma" is bound to make an impact, so we figured why not use it?😃
Some little tidbits that had doubled over in laugher:
-Maya being Prashant's sister! That was an absolutely brilliant move and that letter was sheer genius, both what she had written and Aarti's caustic replies to it!
-The story takes place in CONland 🤣🤣 This CON business really has taken over our heads, can't go anywhere without a mention to it! But it's highly appropriate considering that there is all sorts of CON going on between the lord and maiden at any given opportunity! 😉😈
-And finally the best bit: Perhaps Sanju had gone off to meet Kinshuk 🤣
OMG I seriously died after reading this! I knew the name Sanju was used for a reason and when you hooked her up with Kinshuk, well I am sure you made all her dreams come true 😆😆😆 Sanj having a good time with our gorgeous Kinny, this is stuff that dreams are made of, literally!
If you did laugh, it looks like we did our job well enough.🥳 CONland, DCians Antiquities is a world meant to keep us all with little smiles on our faces even when the characters have dark moments. Well, off to finish writing my part. Looks part 5 will be up tomorrow night at the latest.😃
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Sports
Current Affairs
Sadda Haq Season 2
CID
Jhanak
