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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: lulujjj
My lovely Buddies first of all i want to hug you both 🤗🤗

Awesome wonderful update sweeties loved the description about the Ballroom , its interior decorations, costume designing, the dance and the romance splendid i was just imagining the scenes while i was reading the whole update till the end. As that crystal comb reminded me of the Film "Titanic" ❤️ 😉 😳 *Muah* 🤗 great going👍🏼 after a long time i felt such wonderful excitement run down my spine.

Waiting for your next update.

Hey Naeema!! Thank you!! We wanted you to see the Ballroom, the characters, and the particular era in which they were in with ease while still keeping with the lyrical flow of the storytelling. It seems we got it!! *high-fives Di* Nothing is more pleasurable to an author than hearing that the reader was able to visualise the scenes behind the words, so once again, thank you for the wonderful words! Especially the last line: after a long time i felt such wonderful excitement run down my spine. 🥳

P.S. Titanic is one of the few movies that actually makes me teary eyed😆.

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams
Kadeen and Indu...

That was BEAUTIFUL.

Too beautiful for me to even consider writing more right now...I was swept away by your words and the loveliness of the music...Thank you so much for this!

Sighs in relief. It's been ages since I've seen you near anything with my name it😳, I was beginning to wonder what had happened to me.😆 Now to your comment.😃

First of all...We've struck YOU speechless? OH MY GOODNESS!!!😲🥳YIPPEEE!!! I just knew you would love the music. Didi and I were actually completely caught up with this song, if I remember Di told me that she'd even had it playing while she did her work. It's haunting but in such a good way, isn't? I remember when I first found it, I downloaded it instantly and walked the streets of New York attempting to waltz on the sidewalk. I was even pacing my breathing to it, because if you've noticed, the slower you breathe the more the melody seems to drag you under, and it made even easier for me to see Aarti and Lord Yash spinning and twirling on the ballroom floor- elegant and cocooned. If you ever do find your words, we'll be waiting Borna dearest. Thank YOU for loving this so much!

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Gosh this was so beautiful. I was actually lost in it. Awesome job Kadeen and Indu. Your combined effort is just amazing.

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: saf24
Gosh this was so beautiful. I was actually lost in it. Awesome job Kadeen and Indu. Your combined effort is just amazing.

Whoa. That is the first time I think I've ever heard something like this coming from you.😲 Thank you Saf. We're really honored to hear that🤗

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Dead on the floor- seriously that was so beautifully written!

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877
Dead on the floor- seriously that was so beautifully written!

@Inkpen: Oh wow...thanks. We are glad that the parts floored you... Thank you so much.😊

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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Finally, I read the update! 😆

OMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! Kadeen and Indu Di, what have you guys done to me??? 🤢 🤢 🤢

That was breathtakingly beautiful! Just just...*need to make my own word up* No word in the Oxford Dictionary can begin to describe how this Ball was written! I can picture every dress, every room and the dance so vividly in my mind's eye!

Indu Di, Fabulous use of description whilst Aarti was dressing!!!👏 👏 👏

Indu Di and Kadeen, your combined writings entwine to create the perfect symphony! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Aarti's fear was spot on, even her alone moment was segregated yet beautifully included in this whole perfect dance! 👏 👏 And last, but not least, the dance was sealed with one of the most sensuous kiss I ever read about! 😳 😳 😳

Urghhh...I just love it!!! I want to go on and on!!! 😆

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Kadeen darling, I thank you for including me in your acknowledgements! 🤗 We both know it was a spur of a moment thing! 🤣

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smileymj10

@smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

And we will try to update sooner...actually since there's no more music involved, updates ought to be prompt, so you won't need your angry smiley except for "Pareshan-T"

LOL! 😆 am just kidding! Actually, am not in a hurry, u can update it whenever u want... I know there's a reason why u'd take it so long, but behind that reason is a positive outcome of the story. And we can see the hardwork in it, and it deserves a great appreciation.. 😳

pareshan-T - as in Prashant?? 😲 or Pareshan?? Urggh, sorry, don't know the meaning of it.. 😕

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: smileymj10

LOL! 😆 am just kidding! Actually, am not in a hurry, u can update it whenever u want... I know there's a reason why u'd take it so long, but behind that reason is a positive outcome of the story. And we can see the hardwork in it, and it deserves a great appreciation.. 😳

pareshan-T - as in Prashant?? 😲 or Pareshan?? Urggh, sorry, don't know the meaning of it.. 😕

Pareshan-t is my name for Prashant😆

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
Finally, I read the update! 😆

OMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! Kadeen and Indu Di, what have you guys done to me??? 🤢 🤢 🤢

That was breathtakingly beautiful! Just just...*need to make my own word up* No word in the Oxford Dictionary can begin to describe how this Ball was written! I can picture every dress, every room and the dance so vividly in my mind's eye!

Indu Di, Fabulous use of description whilst Aarti was dressing!!!👏 👏 👏

Indu Di and Kadeen, your combined writings entwine to create the perfect symphony! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Aarti's fear was spot on, even her alone moment was segregated yet beautifully included in this whole perfect dance! 👏 👏 And last, but not least, the dance was sealed with one of the most sensuous kiss I ever read about! 😳 😳 😳

Urghhh...I just love it!!! I want to go on and on!!! 😆

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Kadeen darling, I thank you for including me in your acknowledgements! 🤗 We both know it was a spur of a moment thing! 🤣

Vanny beta, it wasn't a spur of the moment thing.😆 I had it settled who we would need to remember to mention😛. I'll leave the comment for Indu Di to respond to and head to straight to the combined comments you made.😆

First of all thank you. Who would have thought that we would erase your ability to find a suitable word in the dictionary and force you to create a new one? And thank you! Symphony 😃 You used the perfect word to please this musical kid (me)and that lyrical genius (Indu Di). We certainly do love the words symphony, harmony, and jugalbandi😆. As for the Aarti's fear as you mentioned it, it would have been remiss of us of we hadn't kept flowing as a darker undercurrent when she has recently had to revisit her past, so another thank you for noticing that.🤗And finally, that kiss that you've fallen in love with, I've already given you the "insider's dish" on why it was handled the way it was, but for those who might visit and wonder here is the reasoning behind it:

Aarti initially considered herself a widow but recently got the news that her husband was actually still alive. In addition, there are things in her past which acted as a restraint against any feelings she may have developed for lord Yash. In lord Yash's case, he was already attracted to Aarti, but he had already moved past the traumatic incident of his past which made it easier for him to actively pursue Aarti. As a result, their first kiss represented the tentative step forward that Aarti was going to take before Pareshan-t's reappearance in her life, while lord Yash's pursuit of the kiss showed his willingness to be the first to lead them forward. The simplicity and innocence was kept in place because both were unsure of the relationship for varying reasons, and their connection in that particular moment was more from the heart than from the usual physicality they tease each other with. And of course, we had to keep in mind the fact that as of right now...Aarti is still married.😛

All in all, my point is, we're extremely satisfied that the kiss was so well received.🥳