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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

@Indu and @ Kadeen :

What can I say differently from what you guys have already heard from other members.

Well you deserve all the praise and then some more.

I loved how you are introducing twists in the story.

I am hoping for a flashback somewhere down the line to get more on Aarti's past or are you planning on a shock revelation before Yash ???

I am liking how you are giving the the supporting characters meaty roles too.

I am liking the world you have created the with the words be it the description of the costumes or the settings. Your world seems real to me.

I could picture the ball happening in front of my eyes. The music added to the effect of the words.

Lastly a BIG thank you and a BIG HUG 🤗 for going ahead with the ball idea. It was a joy to see to come to life.

Edited by Deepti1808 - 12 years ago

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen
LOL! Well, we're saving all of your future antics for the next two updates, so be happy that we didn't talk about your ballroom dancing skills...or lack of 😛. And yes Kinshuk is currently part of the Kingdom of Bhua- Noncona and I must say, whether he had fallen in love or not, there is no way he would have remained in that conless land.😛

well of course the person who he wants to con with is in Con land...wait wat sh** am I saying u ppl hav me talking about CON hmm...*SMH* but yea who wants to stay in bua noncoca he'll be miserable for da rest of his life😆

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

@Deepti: Thank you so much...this appreciation means so much to us. WE give you a double hug right back for springing the idea in the first place. 🤗TSR is in a way DC's baby as it was conceived in DC and is growing in the outer world of MF... If you look at it in any which way, the entire journey of TSR has only been unique so far.

I am so glad we could take you back in times and inside a Ball room with the words and the music. Aarti's background will surely unfold now...

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

haila!!

how do you guys manage to write so well?!!

i'm forever in awe of wonderful writing 👏👏👏

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Pearl

@Pearl_27

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Congratulations for the color change! Kadeen.🤗

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Pearl_27
Congratulations for the color change! Kadeen.🤗

Thank you Pearly!!!!🥳

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

@Kadeen: Congratulations my Aqua sis!! The color becomes you.🤗

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: InduG64
@Kadeen: Congratulations my Aqua sis!! The color becomes you.🤗

Thank you Didi!!! Now we're matching🥳

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

That was really beautifully done Kadeen and Indu. And must say i loved the addition of the music.

When did Lord Yash allow himself to soften towards Arti?? Must go back and re-read the previous update - this Kesha girl i tell u is very distracting.

Everything was beautiful but the sweetest touch? Lady Tilashini felt the warmth of Arti's smile - ahhh really liked that.

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: kdsubs1
That was really beautifully done Kadeen and Indu. And must say i loved the addition of the music.

When did Lord Yash allow himself to soften towards Arti?? Must go back and re-read the previous update - this Kesha girl i tell u is very distracting.

Everything was beautiful but the sweetest touch? Lady Tilashini felt the warmth of Arti's smile - ahhh really liked that.

He's been softening up since the story began: returning after fleeing the castle suddenly, watching from a window until she had returned to the safety of the castle...but the most obvious answer to your question is found in Part 7 A😊.

Great to see you around Didi🤗 and thank you so much for stopping in😳.

P.S. loved how you noticed Tilu's response to Aarti's smile. I say no more.😆