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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys this poem is for aarti i hope you like it ,

Something Broken


Between you and me someting was broken,


I do not ask you who was defeated or who has won

My only concern, at night, is for pain to forget me

so that oblivion and regret become one

who do I complaing to,

about the injustice my heart has witnessed

its is difficult for the melody

to not feel nostalgia for the absent chord

Between you and me someting was broken,

I do not ask you who was defeated or who has won

if some hope about you was left in me,

I would have been patient

and suffered the insurfferable

But you became bored and how I fear boredom...

blame is easier for me and sadness as well

My voice called for you

but didn't get an echo from you ,

something ended between us as soon as it began

i still love you but

Between you and me someting is broken
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is simply superb dear !! nice poetic sense 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was BEAUTILFUL!!!!! Heart touching!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was so beautiful poem by u...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it great job 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW that one amazing poem!!! too good yaaar!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys , im realy happy that you like it

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