I, Me Myself - My new Poem

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I, me, myself

I tally my life's rally:

To enter my grave, I am yet not brave

Oh my lord, to meet you just as yet, I dread

I, me, myself is all I could see, so never could be of service to thee

An eye for eye suits me just fine

A friend in need is no longer my problem indeed

A heart made to glee, is forever green with envy

I, me, myself is all I could see, so never could be of service to thee

To earn that dime, I lost my prime

A heap of gold made me bold

What it is in for me, was the motto, that brought me, to esteem

I, me, myself is all I could see, so never could be of service to thee

A thunder to awaken from slumber, my lost soul to re-encounter

Gold, silver and platinum attract me yes, but less

Unconditional love, health and happiness for all I now wish


Friends pls do give your comments


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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was beautiful. It spoke clearly of so many underlying factors that rule a person's heart and mind. Great job!!!👏
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Thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so nice
loved it very much
keep it up dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: A2ZV

I, me, myself

I tally my life's rally:

To enter my grave, I am yet not brave

Oh my lord, to meet you just as yet, I dread

I, me, myself is all I could see, so never could be of service to thee

An eye for eye suits me just fine

A friend in need is no longer my problem indeed

A heart made to glee, is forever green with envy

I, me, myself is all I could see, so never could be of service to thee

To earn that dime, I lost my prime

A heap of gold made me bold

What it is in for me, was the motto, that brought me, to esteem

I, me, myself is all I could see, so never could be of service to thee

A thunder to awaken from slumber, my lost soul to re-encounter

Gold, silver and platinum attract me yes, but less

Unconditional love, health and happiness for all I now wish


Friends pls do give your comments




@RED: Bang on...😆😆

@PINK:😍


awesome writing dear...loved it sooo much...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

This was beautiful. It spoke clearly of so many underlying factors that rule a person's heart and mind. Great job!!!👏



Thank you so much dear for the appreciation.
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Thank you dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetysaran

loved it...

awesome...
beautifully written...



Thank you so much for your appreciation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gcluv

so nice

loved it very much
keep it up dear



Thank you so much dear for our appreciation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC



@RED: Bang on...😆😆

@PINK:


awesome writing dear...loved it sooo much...👏👏



Thank you so much, I am so happy you liked it.

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