Rescued- A Kittya_Cullen FF. Note: Pg 85 - Page 9

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

K good FF so far but wud rally lyk to knw how Yash wud fall for her and hpe he falls for her first in this FF😆

Originally posted by: elanpremi

yuor updates never failed to touch deep within my heart. very nice dear👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

It's so nice, so touchy. Your words and writing style was awesome, it touch the heart. Keep it up and update soon.

@ coolsahela: Thank you!😳

Originally posted by: errrm

Aww :)) I'm most honoured to be your IF bestie :D

I have read your update, and I found it really very, very beautiful and moving. I will comment in detail later.. but very well done!! :D

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Edit: I'm back! Sorry, I was doing other stuff at the same time, and I didn't want to write a rushed comment.

Hands down, the best part of your writing is the way you weave magic with your descriptions! I probably have said this before, but I don't think the point can be over-emphasised.. I'll say it again and again. Your writing is so evocative, I truly feel like I can see everything before me as I read. And I relish every word, because I can see the amount of effort and thought you have put into creating the world of your FF, and I just can't help but slow down to take it all in.

I'm really happy I create such a feeling for you. When I write, I really do as much as I can to see it, taste it, feel it, and be there. So I'm irked that this update was messed up when I lost those paragraphs. I had only posted to keep me from getting to distracted, and dismayed, so to know that you like it, is in itself bittersweet since I keep thinking of that loss😭.

This comment sounds lame, so I'll just refer to specific bits of your story now, to make the comment seem eloquent and boost its cool quotient.. hehe. The description of the rose was lovely (see, what I said about my comment being lame.. lol). The symbolism of life that you pour into it, the veins imagery, wow! I wonder where you make these connections from! When I read any one of your metaphors, it seems so apt, and yet it's not some run-of-the-mill cliche done to death. It's really refreshing!

To be honest, even I don't know. I just thank God everyday that he gave me the gift. I'm really grateful that my metaphors and symbols are not done to death at all😕😆

And my favouritest favourite bit - the way she and her son bond over the rose. You really do mould yourself into your character as you write, don't you? I get the feeling you've got a brilliant actress or cinematographer/director in you somewhere. There's no way you could make it so realistic otherwise, without having actually lived through what you write.

Never attempted acting. Ironically, I can neither stand to be spotlighted nor stand to portray my emotions on my face. I guess that makes writing the easiest outlet to express things that are usually supressed😆. If I'm not there when I'm writing, then I don't like writing at all. For a while, I had grown annoyed with school because they gave all these annoying topics which just did not inspire my emotional side🤢. So I actually grew to hate language. Thank God that phase is over😆. I will consider directing though, who knows😎.

Which also makes me realise now.. the hands down best part of your writing is not the descriptions after all.. it's the way you link everything, all the descriptions and images, into a coherent whole. It takes the reader by surprise, because what one would think is just a rose given to a person to cheer her up, takes on a role that is so much more important. It's like what you did with the mangalsutra in the last update - you imbibe life into "things" and make them tell the tale.

The way I see it, I don't like to waste words, or details in a story. To everything its purpose. So a rose, will never be just a rose😆😆😆

And story-wise, I just love where this is going! Yash is such a darling. I love how he is, like the Yash of the show, helpful and reassuring to the point of going out of his way to take up responsibilities that were never his to begin with. I love how he understands Arti's "broken words," even her silences. And I love how he tries to protect her from pain, giving her the rose but only after having removed its thorns. It is small gestures like this, or like his just reaching for her hands as they rest over her stomach.. that make the unnamed, unspoken relationship they share so beautiful.

You noticed , that was one I put there specially for you to see😃. Note, that rose shall return sometime in the not too distant future. For what, whom, and why is the question even I have not answered😆😆

And in the Prashant portion, you so poignantly describe Arti's memories of him, that it all seems real and utterly heart-breaking. I felt like I was (re)living it with her. Very powerful writing!

Brilliant update! I can't wait for more! You said a few hours. Is that, like, errm, now? :D

@ Borna: LOL!! Definitely not a regular image to keep in mind. I also agree about the writers on this forum. I cannot stay away. Everyday I search for FFs to read on this forum. Strange for me, since on my other forums I would avoid them like a plague.🤢 But with writers like Sam, Anu, and Sumaiya, how am I to resist the call of those amazing stories. Do you know "One Chipped Cup" is still stuck in my head? I had tears in my eyes at its end. It's writings like those which keep me coming back for more. Writings that suck my heart and soul into the characters and their world. Making me love and hate and pain. All without needing to go out there and experience it myself😆😆.