ArYa ff = her world

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hi!!!!!!

Prologue

She was walking , finally doing what she had been contemplating since days , dreading the moment she would walk away. Away from the house which she had made her home, from her child who was her everything and from the man she most respected and worshipped and lately loved.

But it wasn't like she had a choice, she was never given a choice. The person who she thought she had loved and now the person she hated the most. He was the reason that she was walking alone on this lonely road with a trolley suitcase , the destination unknown to her.she didn't know where she would go from here on , where her destiny lay.

She then turned one last time to look at the house that had been her home for 1 year and where her world lay sleeping peacefully.

She knew he would try to find her, he would get angry on her in his frustration of not finding her. He knew he would take good care of their children, he wouldn't let them miss her. They would be happy together she assured herself, but she wouldn't.

She turned again going towards what she knew was her new life without her life that she had left behind.


so guys tell me how do you like it and tell me if i should continue or not...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept

pls continue and add me to ur pm list😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will you keep us hanging or shall i turn you into a 😆😆😆

do it!!! do it!!! do it!!! please, please, please 😃😃😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start. Please continue soon!
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Chapter 1

It was a bright day with slight clouds forming on the sky , it looked like it would rain but who knew when the weather would change, it was damn unpredictable . just like her handsome husband who lay sleeping on their bed in their room opposite to the poolside. She had just come out after soaking In the cold water for good 30 minutes. She was just thinking back at last night's event when she heard vidhi bhabhi calling her for preparing the breakfast. She first thought of waking the kummbkaran that was sleeping in bed snoring away, not that he would ever believe her if she told him so….

She went beside his bedside and did something on the side table, grinning secretly as she ran out of the room towards the kitchen, all the while a big smile lurking on her face. She finally formed a serious expression with a small smile on her face as she entered the kitchen. She said her good mornings to all the ladies of her house and started to make her part of the breakfast. She knew just now any minute there would be a dhamaka, it would serve him right for fighting with her.

Artii had just completed putting everything on the dining table and was going back to the kitchen when she heard a loud noise ringing in the whole house and heard her husband shout out loud , his voice almost the same pitch as the ring.

Everyone in the house got startled at the noise and rushed to yash's room from where they had heard the noise coming.

After entering in the room of yash syndhiya whom they had known as their serious , reserved and most of all cleanliness freak person , they were above shocked to see his bed covered with the quilt and any cushions and pillows down on the floor while he himself was sitting on the bed his face one of utter shock and surprise and at last embaressed as he saw all his family members looking at him as if he were a lunatic. Just when he thought he couldn't get more embaressed the bane of his existence- his wife came through the door, her face full of shock and her eyes full of excitement,amusement and mischief which only he could see.

"aree yashjee, kya hua, aap aise kyun baithe hai aur iss room ka kya halat ki hai aapne…."

Exclaimed a arti naughtily and when yash thought she would continue further, he glared daggers at her so at last she showed him her tongue secretly for ending her fun so quickly..

And breathed a small "spoil sport" , which was heard by pratik, vidhi bhabhi and yash himself who was now on the verge of hysterics due to his crazy wife.

Pratik finally understood what might have happened and told his innocent vidhi bhabhi the same.

Here artii and yash were glaring false daggers of anger each other.

Mr and mrs syndhya looked at yash confused out of their minds about what happened actually. Papa syndhya finally asked, not able to control his confusion…

"Yash bte ye sab kya ho raha hai, yaha shor kyun ho raha that aur bahu sahi keh rahi hai apne is room ki kya halat ki hai aur tum mangli bahu ko ghoor kyun rahe ho"

Hearing this yash started to mumble something whereas artii's expression turned from fake anger to her "I'm -so -innocent " face, her eyes full of smugness.

"Wo kuch nahi papa …wo…wo alarm clock that wahi baj raha tha,… bas thodi zor se baj gaya…."

"Aisa kaun sa alarm clock hai jo itne zor se bajta hai, yash tum bhi na, chalo jaldi se tayyar ho jao office jana hai na…"exclaimed a irritated mr. syndhiya.

"ji papa…", mumbled yash .

"thik hai jaldi karo aur breakfast ke liye aa jao"

" aur arpita bahu room ko thik kar do aur yash ko ready hone mein help kardo, jane kya ho gaya hai yash ko aaj kal.."

Hearing this all the colour fro artii syndhia's face went away and yash then became smug.

Artii knew if she stayed here alone with her dear hubby then she will be gone for.

"par papa wo bacho ko tayyar…."

"chinta mat karo bacho ko vidhi bahu tayyar kar degi… tum yash ke saath raho…"

Then mr and mrs syndhiya walked away and that left pratik and vidhi to look and the pair and laugh on their expense.

Precap: artii – dekhiye yashji aap aisa nahi kar sakte , aap bahut ache hain na, aap apni choti si biwi ke saath aisa karenge kya….

Yash – ha ha choti vo bhi meri biwi


please comment...

love ya...

vishruta😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it!! Keep updating!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃 oh, oh, oh!!! i like this naughty but nice Aarti😆 yallah, you better prepare the next update😃😆😃
Edited by villager00 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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where's the rest of this?! lol
can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start. Please continue soon
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HERE'S THE AWAITED PART...

Chapter 2

As pratik and vidhi went away laughing ….

Artii started to talk to herself…

"kaha phas gayi , kisne bola that ye sab karne ke liye, shanti se kitchen mein jaake nasha nahi bana sakti thi, par nahi artii syndha ka ego to itna bada hai ki agar koi prank nahi karegi to paet kahan bharta hai, gadhi kahin ki, abb bhugto …. Aaj to yashjee mujhe kacha hi chaba jayenge….hai ram!!!!

She was so engrossed in talking to herself that she didn't feel her husband carring her towards the bathroom till she felt the marble on her feet and water running.

Yash looked at his wife talking to herself and took the opportunity to carry her to the bathroom and putting her on the marble floor and sneakily started the water.

Just as artii realized that she was in the bathroom with her husband who had carried her here she looked up instantly to see yashji with the bucket holding above his head and in the motion of throwing it on someone and that person was assuredly her only.

Artii – dekhiye yashjii aap aisa nahi kar sakte, aap mere ache pati hai na, aap apni chotisi biwi par aisa atyachar nahi kar sakte….

Yash – meri biwi wo bhi choti, nahi nahii wo to bilkul choti balki bahot badi hai. Wo mere kaan ke paas alarm laga deti hai jiska volume full hota hai aur main jahan mera haath rakhta hoon usne wahin saare cusions rakh diye taaki wo saab mere haath se neeche gir jaye kyun, artiji, sahi kaha na maine.

Artii – yashji agar apne abhi mere uppar pani pheka to dekhiyega main kya karungi, main aapko bahut pareshan karungi aur main mummiji ko apke bachelors party wali baat bhi bata dungi, yashji maine abhi nahaya hai, yashji…..

Yash after thinking sometime thought of something and smiled sneakily which was unseen by artii who was contemplating her next move. He slowly put the bucket down which startled her then what he said next would be the one line that scared her more than the cockroaches did, which was her biggest fear.

"thik hai aaj choda tumhe yash syndhiya ne, par tumhari punishment abhi baaki hai, samjhi."

"Thik hai jao , mere kapde nikal dena aur kahi jaana mat hum saath mein breakfast karenge, alright…"

"ji sir…"

"nautanki"

"budhau"

"bachi"

"uggh akdoo, abb agge mat bolna, mere paas apke liye aur adjectives nahi hai.."

Then making a cute face she went away…

"pag…." He couldn't continue as he heard his wife's voice coming…

"yashjii bas…."

"jab dekho tab apni manmani karte rehte hai, pata nahi palak aur payal inkhe kaise jhelte the pehle, bechare mere nanhe-munne bache…"

Continued artii as she took out all the things that yashji required, suddenly there was a huge thud and she knew her devils had woken up and as if to prove her there came a loud "mumma" from 3 mouths that was louder then the alarm clock that had made everyone in the house alert not that it had woken her 3 children eventhough their room was adjacent to her own room. Her 3 kumbkaran wouldn't wake up before 8:30 even if there were a party going on in their own room.

She was startled when she felt 3 pairs of hands on her waist, she picked up each one of them and kissed them on their head, nose & cheeks and then they went and started jumping on her and yashji bed. She wasn't shocked in the least , this was their regular routine.

Suddenly palak shouted at which artii felt her heart thud as she ran towards palak…

Artii – are palak beta kya hua? Aapko lagi to nahi na, aap bhi na kya karto ho, gir jaoge to kya hota abhi….

Continued a confused and fearful artii looking all over palak when ansh and payal started laughing loudly at which palak grinned preetly. Palak loved it when artii's focus was solely on her, she felt like her mothers favourite like her princess, the most stubborn one of the 3 and secretly artii's favourite though ansh was her own, she treated all of them equally not that ansh minded he was his fathers favourite. He sometimes felt that his mother had become too girly.

Palak – muma aaj papa ka room itna ganda kyun hai, woh to hamesha apna room thik karte hai na aur app hamara room thik karti hai phir bhi hamara room to isse saaf hai.

Palak maybe her mothers princess but was a cleanliness freak like her father not that she would clean her room after all she was THE PRINCESS.

Suddenly artii heard a coughing sound and turned to see her husband leaning on the bathroom door watching the 4 of them with the expression that said i-know-what-ur-talking-about.

Precap: payal – mumma breakfast mein kya hai?

Artii – jala hue bangan aur prwal ki sabzi ….


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