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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS: COMEBACK

Kisse nazar ko tera intezar aaj bhi hai

Kahan ho tum ka ye dil bekarar aaj bhi hai

Aarti went inside the hospital.She opened the door of the room and looked at the person who was lying on the bed.She controlled her tears and sat on the chair next to his bed.

Aarti(Trying to smile):Happy Birthday! I'm sorry maine aap ko late wish kiya na.Mujhe 12 baje wish karna chahiye tha per woh Payal,Palak ar Ansh ko sola rahe thi tu khud bhi so gaye.Ab maine sorry kar liya hai tu aap bhi mujhe sorry bolein kyuki aap ne bhi mujhe Happy birthday nahi bola.Yaad hai hum dono ke aik hi din birthday hote hai...Chalein uthein na Pleaseee.Six months se aap iss bed pe latte hua hain ab tu uth jayein na.

She could not control herself and brust out in tears.She remembered the day of their first anniversary.

FLASHBACK:(STARTED)

Aarti was getting ready because yash told her on mobile that he would take her to dinner.Aarti decided to wear red and black colour saree because yash loved those colours.

Aarti(Thinking):Aarti tujhe aaj yash ko apne feelings ka bare main batana hi hoga.Woh ansh aur tumhara kitna khayal karte hain.Pata nahi woh kaisa react karein ge per mujhe ye risk aaj lena hi hoga...

Suddenly Pratik entered in the room.She looked at him.He was panicked.Aarti's heart started to beat fastly.She felt like something bad had happened.

Aarti:Kya hua Pratik?

Pratik:Woh bhabhi bhaiyya ka accident ho gaya hai.Humain hospital jana hoga.

They went to hospital.She was praying in her heart.Doctor told them that yash was in coma.

FLASHBACK(ENDED)

Aarti put her head on Yash's shoulder while tears were flowing from her eyes.

Aarti:Pleaseee ab tu uth jayein.Sab ghar wale aap ko bohat miss karte hain.Payal,Palak aur Ansh aap ka bare main roz pochte hain.Main inse aur jhooth nahi bol sakte.Main thak gayein hoon Yash.Mujhe aapke zarurat hai...Main aapse bohat pyaar karte hoon..

Yash(In a low voice):Main bhi tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon Aarti.

Aarti thought she was dreaming.She raised her head and looked at Yash who was smiling at her.

Aarti:Yash aap...Aap sach main uth gaye..

Yash(smiled):Haan tumhi itna rote dekh kar mujhe sach main uthna par gaya...Waise mujhe hosh pehle ka aaya hua tha per main tumhara intezar kar raha tha kyuki mujhe pata tha ka tum aaj tu zarur hi aao ge.

Aarti(Angrily):Tu aap itne dar se chup chap mujhe rota dekh rahe tha...

Yash:Haan per humasha hasane ka liye...(Held her hands and looked at her eyes lovingly)Aarti maine tumse shadi iss liye ke thi kyuki mere betiyon ko maa ke zarurat thi.Per pata nahi kaise ahista ahista tum mere bhi zarurat ban gaye.Mujhe pata hi na chala kab main tumse pyaar karne laga.

Aarti(Blushed and looked down):Maine bhi shadi sirf Ansh ka liye ke thi.Per Ansh ka dil ka saath saath kab aap ne mere dil main bhi ghar kar liye mujhe bhi pata nahi chala.Main humare first anniversary per ye baat aap ko batana chahte thi per iss din aap ka accident ho gaya.

Yash:Main bhi isse din tumse apne dil ke baat karna chahta tha per khair...Ab agi..

Aarti was blushing when Yash started to come close to her.Suddenly someone came inside.

Pratik:Oppss sorry!! ...Wah jee wah kya progress hai bhaiyya.Aap coma se nikal bhi aaye aur romance bhi start kar diya (Yash glared at him)...Maine ghar pe phone kar ke sab ko bata diya hai.Main kuch forms ko fill kar ke aata hoon phir hum aap ko ghar le jayein ge.Aaj tu triple celebration ho ge 2 birthdays ke aur 3rd aap ka theek hone ke...Acha aap main forms fill kar ke aata hoon.

Yash remembered something.

Yash:I'm sorry aarti maine tumhi birthday wish nahi ke...Happy birthday Aarti...I'm sorry mere pas abhi tumhi dena ka liye kuch nahi hai.

Aarti(Smiled):Mere liye aap hi kafi hain.

Yash hugged her.Aarti closed her eyes in peace.Now she didnot have to get worried about anything because she knew that he would be there for her always.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gud one dear!!!!😊 Plzz do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww that was cute! The confession scene was so sweet and heartfelt :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fati!!!u KILLED it!!!especially Prateek's dialogue...lol..
Write an epilogue na...please..I've sumthin better..write a FF:-)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great👏👏👏👏👏👏
please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful...i kno this is an OS but i got to try...plz continue...i wnat to know the three musketeers reaction to papa coming home...and of course aarti playing nurse maid 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful part dear
i want u to continue dis please
and pm me whenever u do that

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