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While writing possible romantic situations for ViSa (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivaah-ek-nayi-umeed/3761268/what-all-do-we-want-for-visa-situation-suggestions) -- many members had suggested writing FF... I have never done this before... So please go through my attempt at FF-- pardon my gammatical errors if any-- my hindi is a bit bad- as my mother tongue is not hindi... Read along:

❤️Thode se Achche- FF❤️


Vikrant organises a party for his friends for they had been pestering him to throw a party after his marriage.
The room is brightly lit. Vikrant his having a drink with a few of his friends. they ask him where Sarita is. Then everyone look up and see Sarita climbing down the stairs. She's dressed in a beautiful

black saree- a bit transparent and wearing a gorgeous diamond set. She looks beautiful. Vikrant can't look away.
Sarita comes near Vikrant and he still keeps staring at her. One of his friends tease him saying, "Khud hi dekhte rahoge ya hum se bhi milaoge"?
Vikrant realises what he's been doing and introduces Sarita to his friends.
And then, a voice from Vikrant's behind says- "Aur mujh se nahi milaoge"?
Vikrant and Sarita turn back. Vikrant is glad but Sarita is shocked...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vikrant introduces the friend, Abhay, to Sarita-- and Abhay says - "Hum pehle bhi mil chuke hain"...
Vikrant is a bit curious and turns to look at Sarita. Sarita is not looking at him but looks at the ground and fidgets.
Abhay says to Vikrant that they had met during Sheila's wedding-engagement function.
Sarita excuses herself and leaves. Vikrant eyes her suspiciously and thinks- what could she be hiding?
Abhay says, "You are very lucky Vikrant. You have got yourself a beautiful wife". Vikrant smiles and thanks him. he says, "Enjoy the party".. and leaves still thinking about Sarita's sudden behavioral

change.

Vandana notices all of this from a distance and smiles to herself.

Once Vikrant leaves, Vandana approaches Abhay and greets him. Abhay greets her too.
Vandana notices that Abhay's eyes are constantly following Sarita's movements.
She asks him- "Are you regretting your decision"? Abhay is shocked and surprised. "Kya matlab hai aapka"? he asks Vandana.
Vandana smiles and replies, "Tumhari nazrein chahe Vikrant ko dhoka de sakhti hai, par mujhe nahin... Tumhare paas ek mauka tha Sarita ko paane ka... Lekhin tum ne tumhare bevkhoofi ke karan

usey kho dia... Aur Sarita ko jane dia... Lekhin ab lagta hai- ki tumhe apne karni par pachtava hai... Am I right"?
Abhay is shocked! He mumbles.. "Aisa kuch nahin..."
Vandana says, "Lekhin abhi bhi kuch nahin bigda..."
Abhay looks at Vandana, enquiringly- and Vandana continues, "Vikrant Sarita ko Abhi k mumma bana kar laya hai is ghar mein. Apni patni nahin... tum samajh rahe ho na..." Abhay smiles cunningly and looks at Sarita. Vandana smiles victoriously.

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Edited by samyuktaa - 11 years ago
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Sarita is nervous. She glances over and sees that
Abhay is staing at her. She tries not to look at him but she is scared.
Vikrant notices that Abhay and Sarita are staring at each other. He tries to ignore but their awkward behaviour and the knowledge of the fact that they already know each other compels him to be

suspicious of Sarita. Just when he was about to leave and ask Sarita about how she knows Abhay- Vandana comes there.

"I know what you are thinking", says Vandana
Vikrant doesn't answer.
Vandana says, "Tum Sarita and Abhay ke bare mein soch rahe ho na..."?
Vikrant stares at Vandana. Vandana smiles and continues, "Bura mat maanna beta- lekhin aisi bahut si baatein hai jo tum apni nayi biwi ke baare mein nahin jaante..."
Vikrant: Jo bhi kuch kehna hai- saaf saaf kahiye...
Vandana: Tum soch rahe ho ki Sarita aur Abhay ek doosre ko kaise jante hain? hai na?
Vikrant stares at Vandana. Vandana says, "Woh dono Sheila aur Rohan ke Engagement party mein mile. Aur tumhare Sarita ke zindagi main aane se pehle- Sarita ke Rajji aur us ke parivaar ne

Sarita ka Punar Vivaah Abhay ke saat karwane wale the..."
Vikrant is shocked hearing this. But he was also surprised that why this piece of information was hurting him so much...
Vandana was thoroughly enjoying bitching about Sarita. She continued, "Sab kuch almost tai ho chuki thi.. Sarita ne apni manzoori bhi de di thi... Lekhin akhri second mein- Rajji ne Sagai hone se rok di..."
Something poisonous was brewing inside Vikrant. That explained it all- Sarita's nervousnous and Abhay's reaction upon seeing Sarita... As he was watching, Abhay had moved towards Sarita and they were conversing something. Vikrant was not able to hear what they were speaking- but whatever that was- it was intimate...

"Sarita ji"- Abhay called out.
Sarita stopped but did not look at Abhay.
"Main aap se maafi mangna chahta hum", said Abhay..
Sarita: Uski koi zaroorat nahi. Jo kuch bhi hua- maine use bhula diya hai. Aur ab meri shaadi Vikrant ji se ho chuki hai.
Sarita tries to leave but Abhay holds her hand.
Abhay: Nahi Sarita ji. Jab tak aap nahin kahengi ki aap ne mujhe maaf kar dia- main aapka haat nahin chodunga...
Sarita: yeh kya kar rahe hain aap... chodiye mujhe...
Abhay: Pehle boliye ki aap ne mujhe maaf kiya...
Sarita: haan... chodiye... maaf kiya maine aap ko.. chodiye...
Abhay leaves Sarita's hand. Sarita leaves- but Abhay again speaks- "Waise mujhe ek aur baat pata chali hai... aap ke bare main..."
Sarita moves- but Abhay lands in front of her- smiles wickedly and says "... aap ki shaadi Vikrant se toh ho gayi- lekhin aap abhi bhi uski biwi nahin ban payi..."
Sarita looks at him angrily..
Abhay smiles and contunues : Galti ho gayi thi mujhse. Mujhe tabhi haan karni chahiye thi... Aur mein aap ko itna pyaar karta... itna pyaar karta...
Sarita leaves- feeling disgusted... She goes to her room and locks it from inside... And cries...

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Someone knocks at the door... Sarita says "Go away".. Someone knocks again.. Sarita opens the door angrily and finds Vikrant.
Vikrant: Kya hua Sarita? Lovers' quarrel?
Sarita: Kya..? aap...?
Vikrant: C'mon Sarita. kam se kam mujhse toh yeh bholepan ka natak mat karo... Mujhe Vandana mom ne tumhare aur Abhay ke bare mein sab kuch bata dia hai..
Sarita: Kya? Aap woh sab jante hue bhi mujh par shaq kar rahe hain..?
Vikrant: Kyun? Tumhen bura laga... (He holds her tight by her waist- his other hand holding her chin)- tumhari yeh hansi- yeh aansoon- sab natak... Pehle toh mujhe laga- ki Raj hi tumhara pyaar hai... Ab Abhay..? Aur kitne ahiq hain tumhare...? Tumhe pata hai- tumhari jaisi auraton ko kya kehte hain...?
Sarita: BAS... BAS... BAHUT HO GAYA AAPKA BAKWAAS... aap jaanna chahte hain na- mere aur Abhay ke beech mein kya rishta tha? Toh suniye... Haan.. Yeh baat sach hai ki mere aur unke beech

rishta hone wala tha... lekhin aap jante hain woh rishta kyun toota?
Vikrant is staring at Sarita. He is both angry and curious...
Sarita: Rajji ne isliye us rishte ko tod-di- kyunki... (Sarita is unable to speak...)..kyunki--- Abhay mera Virginity test karwana chahta tha...
Sarita breaks down-- she kneels on the floor and weeps- her hands are over her face- covering it...
Vikrant is speechless... he is shocked and disgusted... He doesn't know whom to believe... He leaves the room-- very confused...

Vikrant is drinking heavily... He keeps thinking about the intimacy between Abhay and Sarita... Vandana's words and Sarita's confession keep occupying his thoughts... just then he hears Abhay talking

to a friend...

Abhay:
... waise lagta nahi hai Sarita ko dekh ke- ki uski pehli shaadi ko hue das saal hua hai nahin... kash maine us waqt woh virginity test wali bevkoofi na ki hoti- toh aaj Sarita meri hoti aur yeh

meri party hoti... Bechaari Sarita- Das saal pati ke pyaar keliye tadapti rahi.. aur ab punar vivaah ke baad bhi- pati ka sukh naseeb nahi hui usey...
Abhay's friend: arre... tumhe kaise pata..?
Abhay: Pata chal jaata hai bhai... Par agar woh meri biwi hoti na... toh main usey...
Vikrant breaks the glass in his hand... Abhay realises that Vikrant had heard everything he's said... Vikrant holds Abhay's collar--- "Sarita meri patni hai... aur koi us ke baare main kuch bhi kahe-

mein usey bardaash nahi karunga..."
Vikrant beats Abhay black and blue...
Hearing all the commotion Sarita rushes to the party to see Vikrant about to beat Abhay with a broken glass bottle...
She begs him to stop...
All the guests leave and Abhay runs away.
Vandana realises that it would not be a good moment to speak to Vikrant and leaves too.

(Continued...)
Edited by samyuktaa - 11 years ago
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Vikrant is so drunk- that he's not able to walk properly. Sarita puts one of his hands over her shoulder and helps him reach his room... Vikrant keeps looking at Sarita with tears in his eyes...
When they reach the room- Vikrant sits on the sofa... Sarita leavs- when Vikrant holds her hand and makes her sit next to him... Sarita is not looking at him.
Vikrant: Sarita mujhe dekho...
Sarita doesn't look up..
Vikrant lifts her chin up... She is crying.. Vikrant wipes her tears...
Vikrant: I am sorry... Mujhe...
Sarita begins to sob and hugs Vikrant tightly... Vikrant is initially confused- but then hugs her back...
After a while- Vikrant and Sarita break apart.
Vikrant: Sarita... main aaj tumhe kuch promise karta hoon... Aaj ke baad- main tum pe kabhi bhi shaq nahin karoonga...
Sarita looks at Vikrant- she was both smiling and crying at the same time... Vikrant wipes away her tears... They hug once again...

The next morning...

Sarita is drying her hair with a towel... She sees Vikrant sleeping on the bed through the mirror... Vikrant's promise to her- about not doubting her flashes through her mind.. She smiles at the sleeping

Vikrant thinking, "Itne bhi bure nahin hai mr Khadoos... thode se achche hain... "
Vikrant wakes up- and looks at Sarita looking at him... He smiles too...

"Shayad isi ko kehte hain- Punar Vivaah- Ek nayi umeed..."

❤️ "Yeh dil hai... Yeh Dil hai...❤️

❤️❤️❤️ THE END❤️❤️❤️❤️

Please let know if you liked it... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was amazing! Please continue this...please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing . please continue !!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was beautiful!!!! We have such amazing writers among us, would love to see you write more... and if you didn't mention it we wouldn't have been able to guess that it was your first time writing a FF!!! Looking forward to more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was beautiful FF...simplly awesome. You're an amazing writer...should write more often. Loved reading your story.

Please do continue the FF and update the next part ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely dear... Visa is running all over our minds bt the cvs have no clue of their potential...

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