FF Some Random Story Part 3 26/sep - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
I can try and post a long one but then it becomes tideous to read...so I try to keep the short and then move on along the tv show...anyways thanks for reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Great FF there .. I hope u continue ... Really fun to read it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
This is good!!! Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Part 3

They had got delayed by a two days. Neither of them talked about the incident, V had walked out giving her his coat. He had also got her stuff. Things were going not so bad... they had called a truce for abhi sake... just when she had thought life was not too bad... Raj showed up...

This had caused a row with vikrant while she blurting out the truth bout their marriage heard by Raj... it was a fiasco... some joke by god...As she walked out of Raj's room she was disappointed with him. He knew her well or atleast she thought he knew her well... but alas he had just used Divya and followed her here to create more tension in her life...

Its very hard for others to understand her...Raj should have know ... How can she leave her son...and walk away with him...She was so shocked when he had suggested that they run away...far away from everything...it took her a few minutes to come out of her shock...

She had scolded Raj... "How can you forget I am abhi mother...I will not desert him ... He is my life now... What you are suggesting can never happen... You are a little too late...if you really want to do something for me just move on and marry Divya...please dont ruin all 4 lifes...I beg of you rajji..."

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Raj stared blankly as he knew now that Sarita will not come with him...When she made a commitment she would stick to it no matter what...She had been his wife for 10 yrs loved him as he was her husband ...tolerated his abusive family...and sold herself for himself and his family's respect... He never has appreciated her when she was with him...and now she can never be his... He never did anything for her...wiping his tears...Now he will do as she told him...he will marry divya...

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Vikrant slumped on the sofa...She would just run away with Raj...What can he do...cannot always guard her... What a mess he had made...He just wanted something permanent in abhi life and he screwed up...He got married to a woman who loved somebody else... what did he think... it was bound to happen...What was he going to tell abhi... God the shame that follows in all the papers that his wife ran away with her lover...

He stood up at the thought...clenching his teeth...: I am Vikrant suryavanshi... I will not let everything be ruined...I will fix this... but first he would have to make sure abhi is okay...and explain to him where his mother was...then a few phone calls would bring her back...this time he will tie her in such way that there was no escapge

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He walked into her room...there she was talking to his son as if nothing happened and packing her bag...oh so she was going to run away later tonight when abhi sleeps...too bad he already knew her plan... He saw her straightened her posture ...oh she was aware of his presence...but choose to totally ignore him...He could feel his anger brewing... why does she always push him to the brink...She has no idea who she is dealing with...

He was waiting for abhi to sleep...

He comes behind her and softly asks : Packing hogayee tumari (are you done with the packing)

Sarita by now knew all the signals ... Vikrant was angry...very angry... she didnot know why... She wanted to make sure that they had packed everything as there were leaving tomorrow. She was now doing her packing and was going to offer help for his...

Sarita shrugged : Haan abhi kar rahi hoon ( I am still working on it)

Vikrant thinks Besharmi ki haadh hoti hai( heights of being shameless) she is not even going to pretend... he clenched his fist...

Sarita: Do you want me to help you with something...indicating him to leave if he has nothing else to say

Vikrant : How can you do this to Abhi ?

Sarita think - well she is almost done most of the packing today so she will have all the time for abhi tomorrow...and that is the reason she did it. : I did it for abhi... so that there are no problems tomorrow...

Vikrant : What! you are leaving and you think it is for abhi good... How dare you... my poor child

Sarita: Wait a minute... What do you mean I am leaving...I thought we are all leaving tomorrow... then she gets angry thinking he is sending her away...
"Dont you dare to think that you can separate me from abhi... How can you even think of that... He is my child and I will see how you will separate him from me... You cannot decide everything in his life...you might be his father but abhi is not alone anymore His mother is there with him and always there...

Vikrant looked confused...He opened his mouth and closed it... What the hell was she talking about... Does that mean she is not going with Raj... but why...Wht in the world was going on...is she lying...she did look genuinely mad at him for separating her from abhi


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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
loved it..end was superb..poor vikrant got so confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
loved it superb plz update soon
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Superb and fantastic, it was.
i loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hey buddy... just readed part 1 n 2.. both r written superbly...u r really having a command over d characters... both parts r nice.. now gng to read part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Part -3 ahaaannn amazing update budddyy.. loved it... finally sarita ne raj ko jawab diya...tooo guddd.. ufff ye vikrant ka gussa... hey waiting for d next update.. cntinue soon n plzz next tym thoda lamba wala uppii dena..

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