ViSa Pyaar Impossible? yaa Possible? fanfic Part 8 pg 10 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
better than the serial itself.. pls continue! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awesome. I love every bit of it. Please do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

As they return Vikrant straight away goes into guest room and Sarita into her bedroom

Sarita to herself: Aaj raat kya hua akaro kay saath

switch to Vikrant: kuch nahi howa barsaat ka mausam tha bas

Switch to Sarita: haan exactly barsaat ka mausam tha aur kuch nahi leekan

Switch to Vikrant: Kahin pyaar na ho jaye

Both change then look for a towel they come out of their rooms

Vikrant & Sarita: SANJAY

they both look at each other with irratation Sarita begins to walk towards him

Vikrant: oh god kahin she isnt coming to me is she I should go other side haan thats better

Vikrant begins to walk also

Sarita: Akaroo yaha tou nahi aa raha oh god no just keep walking Sarita

As they keep walking Sarita looks down and accidently bumps into Vikrant and is about to fall but Vikrant grabs her quickly, another eye locking moment happens as she grips his kurta tightly then Sanjay enters

Sanjay Sir Madam towel

Vikrant lets go of Sarita who falls to the floor and grabs the towel

Sarita: ouuuchh

Vikrant: oh shit sorry sorry

Sarita: bhar mein gaye aapke sorry ouchhh

Vikrant: dekho maine sorry kaha ok

Sarita: tou bhara mahaan kaam nahi kiya aapne ouchh my back

Sarita grabs towel and walks off in pain holding her back Vikrant smiles and chuckles to himself

Vikrant: pagal larki

Sanjay: uh everything ok sir

Vikrant realises Sanjay still there and clears his throat and becomes serious

Vikrant: haan sab kuch teek hai sono tum kal nashta banao gaye ok, Sarita ko Araam karne doo dont wake her

Sanjay: ji sir

Vikrant walks off with a smile on his face

Next day we see the time being 1 PM and Sarita still asleep till suddenly she wakes up and her eyes widen looking at the clock she grabs a sari and changes into this

[IMG]https://i.imgur.com/QA2GJnV.jpg[/IMG]

she makes her way downstairs and its totally silent no one around

Sarita: Sanjay Sanjay

Sanjay comes through

Sarita: Abhi, Vikrant where are they?

Sanjay: Abhi has gone to school Vikrant sir office

Sarita: oh god nashta why didnt u wake me

Sanjay: I sorted everything as per sir's instructions

Sarita frowns: instructions matalab

Sanjay: sir said not to wake you as you hurt your back last night and u were to rest

Sarita: arrey wah akaroo ne acha kaam kiya she says under her breathe

Sanjay: kya madam

Sarita smiles: kuch nahi tum jao hmm

Sanjay nods

then the doorbell goes Sarita goes to answer it and its Raj

Sarita: tum yaha kya kare rahe ho

Raj: tumse milne

Sarita turns her back

Sarita: yaha se chale jao Raj

Divya: arrey thats not fair

Sarita is baffled on seeing Divya

Sarita: tum yaha?

Divya: haan

goes to hug sarita who is still in shock seeing Diyva

Divya: Raj ne mujhe set phir dekha aur sab ke saamne propose kiya romantic or what?

Sarita forces a smile: very

Raj is looking to see any reaction but fails

Divya: yeh lo hamare engagement ka invite

Sarita: thanx

Divya: chalo Raj hum chalte

Raj: haan chalo

as Divya and Raj leave Vikrant enters stopping half way he looks back but doesnt get glimpse who it was and carries on walking into the house with Roses in hand

to be continued

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
beautifl updt.. :)
so mr suryavanshi roses pe aa gaye directly..sahi..!!

thx for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
wow amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
very nice part... Continue soon... Thanks for the PM.
Edited by capriya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Love it ...Vikrant with roses ...
Hope Vikrant doesn't loose his temper ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Love it... Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akdu toh gaya kaamse...😉
Nice Update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8

As Vikrant enters with roses in hand he notices Sarita sitting down looking upset he gives a faint smile and hides the roses behind his back

Vikrant: Sarita

Sarita still in a daze

Vikrant clears his throat Sarita looks up

Sarita: aap aur yaha

Vikrant: ji hum aur yaha he says in a cheeky manner

Sarita gets up: um abhi aye aapke kay liye paani

Vikrant: ek min

Sarita: ji

Vikrant unhides the roses he brought, Sarita forgets her worries and smiles

Sarita: yeh aapne

Vikrant: uh haan wo abhi na usne

Vikrant using abhi as an excuse Sarita knows that much about her Aakru already

Sarita smiling: um abhi se kaho thanks

Vikrant: bol gaye

Sarita: kya

Vikrant: -Apno ko thanks nahin kehte

Sarita shyly walks away when suddenly she stops her sari is tugged she turns around and this time its none other than aakru ji

Sarita: Mr SuryaVanshi koi aajaye ga

Vikrant: acha kaun?

Sarita: choriye

Vikrant lets go and goes towards her shes looking down smiling

Vikrant whispers in ear: roses tou lekar jao

Sarita grabs the roses and goes away with smile on her face and Vikrant gives a dreamy smile and sigh and sits down whilest Sarita returns with water and he drinks it all in one gulp looking at Sarita whilest the doors swing open

Abhi: mama daddy

Sarita and Vikrant frown

Sarita: abhi tum ghar iss waqt sab teek hai na

Abhi realises he home too early when suddenly he sneezes

Vikrant: oh god he has a cold

Vikrant holds abhi's hand and takes him upstairs to his room

Vikrant: ok look mister I know your lying tumhe koi bemari nahi hai so tell me why u home early?

Abhi: I missed you and mama

Vikrant: abhi beta u cant keep missing school you know its important na

Abhi: I know papa but

Vikrant: no buts tommrow you are going back ok?

Abhi: yes papa, by the way papa why are you home early

Vikrant: uh kuch kaam tha chalo change your clothes

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