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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: leothebest9

Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai! ๐Ÿ˜Š Lo tum sab kaa intezaar khatm.............Here's the next part and I hope u not only like but love this one.................. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Sanyo runs all the way to the temple............
There Prithv is standing all alone and is remembering last night after bidding Sanyo goodnight he left for his room and on reaching he sat on his bed remembering how beautiful she loked in the Moonlight................. ๐Ÿ˜ณ


He smiles.............(Yeh kya tum sab bhismile karne lage!) ๐Ÿ˜Š

He then remembers that he had got up and went to take out that gold box encarved with beautiful jewels and he sat on the bed..............he opened the box and taking out the earring he had remembered the incident............And then we come to the present........
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Prithvi thinks out loud---------Sanyogita tum tad bhi meri zindagi thi aur aaj bhi tum meri zindagi ho............Main tumse khud se bhi zyaada pyaar karta hoon..............Itne saal baad intezaar ke baad jab tum abb mili ho toh phir se ek baar door jaa rahi ho..................(Prithvi's voice trails off and he is sad)


Sanyo is standing right behind him and is listening to all this..................She comes and puts down her head on Prithvi's shoulder ๐Ÿ˜ณ and says-----------Door toh woh hote hain jo saath naa ho............aur humaari toh har saans.............har dhadkan...........har din.............har raat ka hissa ho Prithvi..........Toh phir hum tumse door kahan hue? ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Prithvi looks back at her, surprised first, and the he says lovingly-----------Theek kaha tumne Sanyogita.............Aaj kal bahot badi--badi baatein karne lagi ho jangli Billi! And he smiles............. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Sanyo replies putting up her earring--------Aaj kal tum bhi toh poorani cheezein yaad karne lage ho Bigde shezade! ๐Ÿ˜†

And they both start laughing ๐Ÿ˜† ..................forgetting all the troubles.............all the uncertainities in their minds regarding their future...........all the sorrows.............all the lambi judaai coming soo in their lives.................. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Kaisa laga? ๐Ÿ˜Š





๐Ÿ‘ no words ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
thanks for the lovely update ๐Ÿ˜ณ very nice ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Keep up the good work... ๐Ÿ˜Š Would expect the next part sooon in the following week will wait axiously ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Silver Screen

megha didi disha was the one who started commenting on my beautiful teeth. she was crying so i gave her a nice suggestion and then she started teasing me.how can i sit back ๐Ÿ˜†

didi se kya puchti hai himmat hai toh khud solve kar.....sugli u r really very mean.....๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
awesomedisha & Silver Screen Pls, stop fighting ๐Ÿ˜ƒ & Enjoy the Fanfic ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: meghaparti

awesomedisha & Silver Screen Pls, stop fighting ๐Ÿ˜ƒ & Enjoy the Fanfic ๐Ÿ˜†

i am not fighting. i am just having fun. i dont know why disha is getting angry๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† and ofcourse i enjoyed the fanfic๐Ÿ‘

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Silver Screen

i am not fighting. i am just having fun. i dont know why disha is getting angry๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† and ofcourse i enjoyed the fanfic๐Ÿ‘

patli gali se katli....dekh li teri yaari

aur dekhi teri dildari

maine toh ki thi frndship

par na chori tune insult karne ki bari....๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: awesomedisha

patli gali se katli....dekh li teri yaari

aur dekhi teri dildari

maine toh ki thi frndship

par na chori tune insult karne ki bari....๐Ÿ˜†

wow u r a poetess. nice poem. and hello i am your friend so i wont fight. lets be friends again๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
i m already ur frnd yaar...par kabhi kabhi mazak mai larai kar leti hun don't get worried i m like tht only..... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† thx.... i compose poems,stories and essays.....both in eng and hindi.....thts my time pass and u can say hobby also.... ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: awesomedisha

i m already ur frnd yaar...par kabhi kabhi mazak mai larai kar leti hun don't get worried i m like tht only..... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† thx.... i compose poems,stories and essays.....both in eng and hindi.....thts my time pass and u can say hobby also.... ๐Ÿ˜†

i know i was joking too๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
pls update soon leothebest. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜Š

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