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I don't know but somehow my tpic got mixed with two other ones so, I'm posting this separate one with the third part (Coming soon) in the series and I hope u like them all!๐Ÿ˜Š

So I decided to pen down some fictious sequence and would love to share it with u all. I goes like this..............................๐Ÿ˜Š(Hope u will like it)

We begin from where prc tells Sanyo--------Tumne suna maine kya kaha? Sanyo has tears in her eyes but she manages a nod.๐Ÿ˜ญ

Then all four of them leave in a hurry, leaving a shell shcked Sanyo. just then someone puts a hand on her shoulder, taken aback, she turns around, oly to find that it was Vaishali.She says--------Kya hua Rajkumari Sayogita? Maharaj PRC kahan gaye?๐Ÿ˜•

Sanyo doesn't know what to say. Prithvi had asked her to keep things to herself. But how? She just manages to hold back her tears and says something, just when PRC's mom arrives there tooo!

There Prithvi, Arjun, Chand and Pundher r shown riding their horses in full speed.They reach the place wher the Barat was attacked. they r shocked to see the dead baratis all over.๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ

There is fear in their eyes and concern oooms over their faces. Prithvi, well he the most tensed of them all. they go in different directions calling out--------SamarSingh. Prithvi goes near that deep vallle where Samar was shown falling. he has a terribly worried look on his face. He shouts out loudly in despeartion-----------SAMAR SINGH! Once, twice...................four times..................still no response. Prithvi feels disheartened.๐Ÿ˜ญ

He begins to have flashbacks-----------------How his dad was killed right in frnt of his eyes...................how he was going to kill himself................how Pritha stoope him from doing that.....................Then how he was suspicios of foul play behind all the attacks on Samar and had even bewared him.................

Coming to the present....................Prithvi kneels down on the ground helplessly................he has tears in his eyes...................just then all three come there and see Prithvi and Arjun tries to console him but in vain..............๐Ÿ˜ญ

There snayo is confronted and when asked she lies-------------Woh Prithvi .....................aur sab...........................Barat ka swaagat karne gaye hain.........................They all r convinced but the fear of the wrst troubles Sanyo and she is sad and worried...........................

Prithvi says as he sobs-------------Naa main pitaji ko bacha paya naa SamarSingh ko.................Main...............Main jaanta tha kii kisi ki saazish hai..........phir bhi main apni behen kii khushiyon ko nahin bacha paya....................Yeh nahin ho sakta.........................And he shouts again------------SamarSingh..........................๐Ÿ˜ญ

Jus then they hear a faint voice coming from the valley--------------PRITHVI...................๐Ÿ˜•

They all look up taken aback at frst, but soon realise the source of the sound...................it was SamarSingh!They get up and r delighted to find an injured but alive SS down somewhere.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

So they somehow get him out and Prithvi hugs him lovingly and is relieved to see him alive. All of them smile.๐Ÿ˜Š

There Sanyo is a hell lot of woried.................She finds herself in a fix..................unable to share the joy of the other guests....................

She goes upstairs and sees Prithvi kii rah from the balcony......................๐Ÿ˜ณ

Soon she sees prc and all otheres return with SS. She is delighted and goes running downstairs............................Pritha stops her and asks-----------Bhaiya nahin aaye?๐Ÿ˜Š

Sanyo smiles and is so delighted that she hugs Pritha and says-------------Jao tumhara intezaar khatam hua..........................๐Ÿ˜ƒ

If I only write everything toh what will we do oon Friday...................๐Ÿ˜‰

Anyways PLEASE tell how u liked it.๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanx to all of u!I'm so glad that u all appreciated my efforts. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Here's presenting to u another fictious sequence. Hope u like this one too................. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

The wedding tkes place smoothly. Now its Pritha's vidaai time. all r extremely emotional. Pritha takes aashirwaad from her mom, says goodbye to Sanyo, Arjun,Chand and Pubdher and then comes to Prithvi.................. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Prithvi looks at her lovingly and tears well up in his eyes too.............He says-----Jiss tarah tumne humaare mahal kii khushiyon mein chaar chaand lagaye hain vaise hii Chiitod ke aangan ko bhi apni acchayion se saja dena.................He then turns to Samar and continues in a low voice---------Bahot naaz se rakha hai humne Pritha ko..........janata hoon kahne kii zaroorat nahin par..............phir bhi............Meri Behen ko humeshaa khush rakhna................ ๐Ÿ˜›

SS smiles and nods. ๐Ÿ˜Š

And the doli leaves for Chittod, leaving behind a sad yet happy dilli behind......................

Its night and Prithvi is sitting on that same bridge where he was the other day with Pritha. He remembers the small Pritha roaming around the mahel, then he remembers how he used to tell her Nandini's story when she was small, then how the grown up Pritha hugged him few days before her marriage saying-------------Nandini bahot buri hai Bhaiya (I simply loved that scene, it was so sweet)...............and then the vidaai......... ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Prithvi has tears in his eyes by now. The cool night breeze is shown blowing across his face. Someone comes and puts a hand on his shoulder. Its Sanyo. She comes and sits right next to him. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prithvi looks at her sadly, just managing a small grin. sanyo knows what he is feeling, s to help him share his feelings she asks------------Kya hua Prithvi, itne udaas kyun ho?

He says almost instantly pouring his heart out to her--------------Sanyogita aaj maine zindagi mein pehli baar bhot kamzor mehsoos kiya...............aisa laga jaise.........jaise ek baar phir main apnon ko apne hii dushmann se bacha nahin paya...................agar aaj SS ko kuch ho jata toh main apne aap ko zindagi bhar maaf nahin kar pata. ๐Ÿ˜ญ He says almost instantly pouring his heart out to her--------------Sanyogita aaj maine zindagi mein pehli baar bhot kamzor mehsoos kiya...............aisa laga jaise.........jaise ek baar phir main apnon ko apne hii dushmann se bacha nahin paya...................agar aaj SS ko kuch ho jata toh main apne aap ko zindagi bhar maaf nahin kar pata. Pehle pita jii aur abb apni bahen ki khushiyaan, main donon hii bachaane mein naakamyab hota toh..................... ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Sanyo interrupts by saying--------------Aisa nahin hai Prithvi, Tumne uss waqt bhi jo ban pada kiya tha.....................Lekin honi ko kaun taal sakta hai.........Aur abb toh tumhe khushhona chahiye, kyunki Prtha ke roop mein jo parchaai, jo zimedaari tumhaare Pita ji tumpar chod kar gaye the...............usse tumne itni achhi tarah nibhaya...........And she smiles. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Prithvi too smiles back ๐Ÿ˜ณ looking a little reassured and a lot more relaxed. ๐Ÿ˜Š

And then Sanyo leans down her head against Prithvi's shoulder.Tgether they lok up at the moonlit night.
๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Then prithvi says--------------Mujhe Pritha kii bahot yaad aa rahi hai Sanyogta...............Usski hansi se poora mahel goonj uthta tha..............Usski sharartein............uski ๐Ÿ˜Š athkeliyan................usski muskurahat, ๐Ÿ˜Š Usski.................And his voice trails of.
He continues------------Aur kal toh tum bhi waapas chali jaaogi.

Sanyo looks up at her and says teasingly----------- ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Haan woh toh hai, par kitne din ke liye yeh toh aap hii jaante hain Dilli ke maharaj PRC. And she gives one of her those beautiful smile and Prithvi's lips too curl ou in a broad smile. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ They both r blushing. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prithvi embraces her face with his hands and says--------------Fikr mat karye, aapka intezaar bahot hii jald khatm hne wala hai. Rajkumari Sanyogita. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Sanyo's cheeks go red, blushing and PRC too is smiling ๐Ÿ˜›

They both r then shown sitting and talking their way into the night as that Prem Kahaaniyaan song plays in the background. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Batao Kaisa laga yaar? ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its morning. Prithvi is already up and getting ready. He still feels the closeness ๐Ÿ˜› to Sanyo last night and remembers how she had leaned her head over his shoulder. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Arjun, Chand and Pundher (ho r watching this) ๐Ÿ˜† ,Prithvi smile to himself ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š , and look at each other knowingly. ๐Ÿ˜‰ They walk upto him and Chand asks teasingly ๐Ÿ˜‰ --Kya baat hai Prithvi? ๐Ÿ˜Š

Pundher continues--Aaj subah--subah tayar............aur khud se hii muskura rahe ho? ๐Ÿ˜Š

Arjun adds--Iss anjaani khush kaa raaz kya hai? ๐Ÿ˜‰

Prithvi just Smiles sheepishly ๐Ÿ˜Š trying his level best not to blush ๐Ÿ˜ณ but in vain ofcourse ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ,(and why r urall cheeks turning red? ๐Ÿ˜‰Waise imagine kar lo naa). ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prithvi says--Kuh nahin..............bas yun hii........(With that he begins to walk away saying--Mujhe kuch zaroori kaam hai............Main..............Main abhi aata hoon..........And he leaves smiling ๐Ÿ˜Š


After Prithvi has left all three begin to have a hearty laughter. ๐Ÿ˜†

Arjun says completely amused--Zaroor Prithvi Bhabhi ke baare mein soch raha hoga ๐Ÿ˜† (I really like it wen prc's friends call Sanyo,Bhabhi ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜› )

Chand continues--Aur abhi bhi woh Bhabhi se milne hii gaya hoga kyunkii aaj woh Kannuaj waapas laut rahi hain naa. ๐Ÿ˜Š

And they all continue laughing. ๐Ÿ˜†

Kaisa laga? ๐Ÿ˜Š
Jaldi batao. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Tabhi next part post karoongi. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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leothebest9, let me read it first.then i'll reply ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great work leothebest9....... ๐Ÿ˜‰ So cutee....๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณJaldhi se next part post karo I am waiting
๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow yaar mujhe bohot accha laga... ๐Ÿ‘ thanx...... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx yaar! ๐Ÿ˜Š I'm so glad u liked it and haan Arshit, waiting for ur reply. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

And here's the next part dear--------------- ๐Ÿ˜Š

Prithvi is walking along the corridor. A servant comes and he asks himโ€”Kya Sawaari tayaar hai? The man answerโ€”Jii Maharaj Rajkumari Sanyogita ko hodne ke liye sawaari taiyaar hai. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Prithvi nods and moves ahead. He reaches Sanyo's room. ๐Ÿ˜›

There Sanyo is getting ready after bath and her hair r still wet. ๐Ÿ˜ณ She is not wearing any heavy jwellery and has put on simple make up and is dressed in white and is looking Extremely beautiful. ๐Ÿ˜›


Prithvi walks in without knocking and is mesmerized by a gorgeous Sanyo standing in front of the mirror combing her hair. ๐Ÿ˜ณ He comes and stands behind her and as Sanyo turns around water droplets from her hair wet Prithvi's face. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

He opens his eyes and sees an apologizing look on Sanyo's face , but when he smiles ๐Ÿ˜Š she too begins to laugh. ๐Ÿ˜†

Prithvi saysโ€”Bahot hassi aa rahi hai Rajkumari Sanyogita? ๐Ÿ˜‰

She stops laughing and says pretending to be seriousโ€”Achcha aur kya hum jaan sakte hain kii Maharaj PRC bina darwaza khatkhataye , itni subah humaare kamre mein kya kar rahe hain? ๐Ÿ˜†

Prithvi doesn't answer but takes a step closer to her and embracig her face saysโ€”Bas yahi dekhna chahta hoon kii koi itni saadgi mein bhi khoobsoorat kaise lag sakta hai. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sanyo sharma jaati hai aur aankhein jhuka leti hai. ๐Ÿ˜›


They both then smile at each other and in the background plays the songโ€”Prem Kahaniyaanโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Kaisa laga? ๐Ÿ˜Š

Aur haan next part kal yaa parson bhejoongi alright! ๐Ÿ˜Š




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Posted: 17 years ago
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very good i hope this thing go in sagar head . very good ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this one's also lovely..... ๐Ÿ˜ณ i hope hame aise scenes actually dekhne mile.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ thanx..... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok i will also make story


now jaichand have have slap and tell sanyogita she can not out of her room or mahal . and prc will be worried of arjun that he did not come back so he will go to find him and Ghori will make attack form other side ( as he said in 29 march) . prc will go to find arjun and he will get some thing of him and he get worried of him and think that some thing have happen to arjun . he will start searching arjun but prc will not get him . and sanyogita will think i want to meet prc and she go to meet prc again & make fool to jaichnad .jaichnad will think sanyogita is in her room . but sanyogita will be with prc . sanyogita will make fool jaichand for some days but after he will come to now and he will get angry .

next after some time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great work leothebest9 ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Kal kab ayega... ๐Ÿ˜‰ I want toknow aage kya hoga ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

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