Tutata Tara ~~ Luv Story Part III - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thx sash... 😉
thx saanu i'll do it soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow. that was a cute n short story 👏 👏 👏 ..
but i want the next part to be really long 😳
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hey thx laks....i'll right it soon 😛
u hv read first two parts 😃
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yup... initially i got a little confused.. i was thinking.. u r writing after prithvi-sanyo breakup.. n the breakup is just like what sagars have shown...
but later on understood.... u have creating the first meeting also from ur imagination 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yup...i'm
well itz an idea came in bhuvi's mind to write story of Tutata Tara...like on dialouge whch srk said in kuch kuch on tutata tara....so acc. to dat
i tried to write it 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice imagination 😉 pls. continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very Nice Ishu 👏 ...just read all the three parts 😳 ....continue soon n Good luck on your Project 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thx kavita
will post next part soon 😛
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Pls. post the next part, still waiting 😉
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Originally posted by: Innocent Ishita

Hey Guys I really didn't get time to write much this time

as i'm busy with coll Project😡

So writing Few Part

Srry

Recap:Arjun n frndz play trick prithvi confused how tht Kangan of Sanyo came with him

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Prithvi going behind sanyo

"Aarti meri baat to suno, Maine tumhara koi kangan nahi liya hai" said Prithvi very eagerly

Sanyo stops n look back to Prithvi

"Achha to vo mandir me gira tha vo to koi pathar tha naa" Said Sanyo angrily n start walking

"Haan vo kangan hi tha, lekin vo mere paas kaha se aaya mujhe nahi pata" Said Prithvi trying to console Sanyo

Here Pritvi's frndz were following them by hiding behind trees

They stop at one place

"Tumhe kya lagata hai kya Prithvi kabhi jaan paayega ki ye sab humne kiya hai" Said chand with frightening voice

"Shhhh…!!" Said Arjun putting his hand on chand's mouth "Aise to vo kabhi nahi jaan payega lekin agar tum iss tarah jor jor se bolte rahe to vo sach mein sab jaan jaayega" Said Arjun

"Haan aur nahi to kya pata nahi iski ye aadat kab jaayegi" Said Pundir

"Iski ye aadat nikaalne ka ek hi tarika hai" Said Arjun looking at chand

"Kya" ask Sanjam by questioning through his hand towards Arjun

"Iski Shaadi Kar de" Said Arjun

All giggle together except Chand

"Dekho agar tum aisi baate karoge to main prithvi ko jaake sab bataa doonga ki ye Kangan tum logo ne churaya tha" Said chand angrily

"Chup raho" Said Pundir invery slow voice

"Kyun chup rahoon main use ye bataa kar rahoonga" said Chand in very loud voice

"Use to vaisehi pata chal chukaa hai" Said Pundir again in slow voice

"Kaisi baat kar rahe ho pundir use kaise pata chalega" Said Arjun ignoring pundir's statement

"Kunki vo humaare peche khada hai" Said Pundir making sad face

All turns Back Prithvi n Sanyo standing there

All Shocked n look downwards

"Achha to ye tum sab ka kam tha" Said Sanyo looking towards all

"Vo hum.." Said chand

"Chup raho tum sab sharam nahi ati tumhe aisa karte hue, Kya jaroorat thi ye sab karne ki, bechari Aarti ka wqat barbaad kiya tumne" Said Prithvi very angrily

"Bechaari" Said all together by giggling

Sanyo looked at Prithvi quickly

"Mera matlab hain ki" Said Prithvi he's confused n didn't getting what to say

"Dekho agar tumne ohir se aisa majhaak kiya to dekhana" Siad Sanyo pointing towards all

"Prithvi Prithvi"

Some one is Calling Prithvi

Prithvi looked towards his rooms door, Itz Prithvi's mom

"Bete tum ab tak taiyaar nahi hue" said Kamalvati

"Taiyar" ask Prithvi with question mark face "Kyun hum kahi jaa rahe hai kya maa"

"Haan Bete, Humne tumhe bataaya tha naa ki hume Daulatpoor Jaana hai" said kamalavati smiling

"Daulatpoor kyun?" ask Prithvi

"Bete tum itani jaldi bhool gaye, Iss baar Mahashivratri Mahotsav Daulatpoor main hai" Said kamlavati " Ab jaao jaake taiyar ho jao hume kuch der me hi nikalana hai" By saying this kamalavati leaves

Prithvi remember all dayz of Last Mahashivratri Mahotsav were he n sanyo meet first time

End of Part Three

Srry Again

Hope u like it

I$hu😛


Hi Ishu finally today, I read this third part of your story...enjoyed it very much specially the scene when prithvi sanyo got to know about that trick...lolz how innocently Prithvi was saying ki mujhe nahi pata ki ye kahan se meray paas aagaya...when I read your story I am watching new prc with rajat and mughda...its very very well written now I am going to start reading the fourth part.

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