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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanniya

hey guys can u telme ....wen dis all happin....koteshwar yatra 😕

hi dear we are just imagining this alls happin on there koteshwar yatra, just to add fun😉

well here the story goes on

Pri and his frens r really furious towards this baddmag ladki sanyo.😡

Pri- Bas bahot hogaya is ladki ko to sabak sikhana hi paraga. Iska karan Kanah bhi hath sa nikle gaya.

They changed there clothes and were back on track with there mission tracking the suspects which they considered as bhimdev guptchar.

Mean while Sanyo and her frens were having laugh of there life.🤣 Chamki acting the way they were itching themselves like they gone mad. 🤡

Sanyo: Aray hamari payal lagta hai kahi gir gayi.

Chanki: Kahi pare(tree) ka pas to nahi varna usa pata chal jaya ga ka ya sab humna kiya hai.

Sanyo: to kya hum usa darta hai. Acha hai pata chal gaya hoga to. ab pata chalaga us bigra rahis ko ki kisa pala para uska. Kabhi bhol ka bhi hum sa panga nahi laga ab.

Chamki: panga to door ki baat hai ab to vo bhul ka bhi tumha dekhaga nahi.

Vashali: bachara sochta hoga kis afat sa usna dushmani morli.

This all conversation was taking place while they were on there way to fetch water.

Pri and his frens were getting all the information needed for there suspects. But were still waiting to get the real parcha from the pundit baba at night. The task was gonna be done by pundir and chandar.

Arjun: us ladki 😡ko hum itni chaldi nahi choranga.😡 Usko sabak to sikhana hi paraga.

Pri- rehana do uska mooh nahi lagana ki jaroorat. Vasa bhi usa koi kaam vam to hai nahi bas logo ko tang karna ata hai.

Sanjam: Aray asa kasa chorda. Badla to langa hi. Unko unki naani nahi yaad dilayi to mera naam bhi sanjam nahi.

Arjun: acha to kya rakha ya bhi batado

Sanjam: tumbhi na arjun kuch socho kya kara. Unhona huma bahot sataya hai.

Pri- tum log nahi manoga. Jo karna hai karo mujha mat is ka bich ma dalo. Ma abhi ata hu.

He follows Kanha

Arjun: Chalo yaaro ab inko sabak sikayi data hai. Hum sa takar lana ki himat nahi karangi agasa.

They all go near where sanyo and her frens were busy chatting while on there way to fetch water.

Sanjam: nishana to milgaya par var kisa kara.

Arjun: shashtre to dhondana hi paranga.

Pundir: bat to tum asa kar raha ho jasa madana jang pa ladna ja raha ho. Vo Raj Kumari Chamki hai uski dost yaad rahai.

Sanjam: to kya humara pas Prithvi hai.

Sanjam takes a band and aim on sanyo's matki

Arjun: Ya kya kar raha ho.

Prithvi coming from behind not realising whats going on. :Kya kar raha ho tum log yaha.

Sanjam: dekhta jao. Ab ayaga maja.😈

Bulls eye sanyo's matki blasted on her head.😆😉

pls continue as u wish😊

Edited by castrafa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: castrafa

hi dear we are just imagining this alls happin on there koteshwar yatra, just to add fun😉

well here the story goes on

Pri and his frens r really furious towards this baddmag ladki sanyo.😡

Pri- Bas bahot hogaya is ladki ko to sabak sikhana hi paraga. Iska karan Kanah bhi hath sa nikle gaya.

They changed there clothes and were back on track with there mission tracking the suspects which they considered as bhimdev guptchar.

Mean while Sanyo and her frens were having laugh of there life.🤣 Chamki acting the way they were itching themselves like they gone mad. 🤡

Sanyo: Aray hamari payal lagta hai kahi gir gayi.

Chanki: Kahi pare(tree) ka pas to nahi varna usa pata chal jaya ga ka ya sab humna kiya hai.

Sanyo: to kya hum usa darta hai. Acha hai pata chal gaya hoga to. ab pata chalaga us bigra rahis ko ki kisa pala para uska. Kabhi bhol ka bhi hum sa panga nahi laga ab.

Chamki: panga to door ki baat hai ab to vo bhul ka bhi tumha dekhaga nahi.

Vashali: bachara sochta hoga kis afat sa usna dushmani morli.

This all conversation was taking place while they were on there way to fetch water.

Pri and his frens were getting all the information needed for there suspects. But were still waiting to get the real parcha from the pundit baba at night. The task was gonna be done by pundir and chandar.

Arjun: us ladki 😡ko hum itni chaldi nahi choranga.😡 Usko sabak to sikhana hi paraga.

Pri- rehana do uska mooh nahi lagana ki jaroorat. Vasa bhi usa koi kaam vam to hai nahi bas logo ko tang karna ata hai.

Sanjam: Aray asa kasa chorda. Badla to langa hi. Unko unki naani nahi yaad dilayi to mera naam bhi sanjam nahi.

Arjun: acha to kya rakha ya bhi batado

Sanjam: tumbhi na arjun kuch socho kya kara. Unhona huma bahot sataya hai.

Pri- tum log nahi manoga. Jo karna hai karo mujha mat is ka bich ma dalo. Ma abhi ata hu.

He follows Kanha

Arjun: Chalo yaaro ab inko sabak sikayi data hai. Hum sa takar lana ki himat nahi karangi agasa.

They all go near where sanyo and her frens were busy chatting while on the way to fetch water.

Sanjam: nishana to milgaya par var kisa kara.

Arjun: shashtre to dhondana hi paranga.

Pundir: bat to tum asa kar raha ho jasa madana jang pa ladna ja raha ho. Vo Raj Kumari Chamki hai uski dost yaad rahai.

Sanjam: to kya humara pas Prithvi hai.

Sanjam takes a band and aim on sanyo's matki

Arjun: Ya kya kar raha ho.

Prithvi coming from behind not realising whats going on. :Kya kar raha ho tum log yaha.

Sanjam: dekhta jao. Ab ayaga maja.😈

Bulls eye sanyo's matki blasted on her head.😆😉

pls continue as u wish😊

the matki hits sanyo who collapses and faints

all her friends try to revive her..they use water..smelling salts..different herbs..everything..nothing works

everyone is extremely worried..even prithvi and his friends..prithvi feels responsible for sanyo's condition and cannot sleep all night..he goes to sanyo's tambu..and gently takes her hand in his...

suddenly sanyo feels a magical burst of life inside her..and sits up!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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and prc aur sanyo ek dusre ke dekhne lagte haiand prc says"mujhe maaf kar do ye sab meri wajhe se hua tumhe to pata he hai mere dost har nahi mante tum thik to ho"
sanyo says"mein thik hu pata nahi kya hogaya tha humme hum tumse kun lad rahe the humme bhi maaf kar do"
prc then says "jao hum tumhe maaf karte hai aaj se ye ladai khatam "and moves his hand out and says "humse dosti karogi"
and at that moment when sanyo is raising her hand to say yes prc ko koi bhar se chekne ki awaj ati hai and he runs outside and while running he hits sanyo's face and bechari sanyo dekhti hi rehjati hai aur prithvi ke peche jati hai usse galiyan dene ke liye aur dekhti hai ki
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sanyo sees prithvi running after someone. She feels there is some trouble. While she turns back she realises prithvi left his sword behind in her tambu. Sanyo gets the sword and follows prithvi's foot step to trace him down. But instead gets lost on her way.

Prithvi still chasing the guy comes across the whole gang. Its too late by now he realises his sword is missing..
Someone hits him from behind and he falls.
The whole gang moves off leaving prithvi behind unconscious.


On the other side prithvi's frens realises prithvi is missing. They think he is dam angry with arjun for what he did to sayogita. So arjun & Sanjam decide to go and apologies to sanyo. They reach but instead goes to the wrong tambu. Tambu of Chamki. Chamki wakes up.
Chamki: tum log ab kya huma bhi marna aya ho. Hamari dost ko itni buri taraha mar ka abhi bhi tumhara badala pura nahi hua.
Sanjam: Dekhiya hum maffi magna aya hai. Hum bahot sharminda hai jo humsa hua.
Arjun: hum to bas majak kar raha tha mujha kya pata tha ki usa itni jor sa lag jayagi.
Chamki cools down seeing there regretful faces.
Chamki: acha koi baat nahi humna bhi to majak hi kiya tha. Vasa ab bahot raat hogayi hai. App sab jao abhi subha milanga.
She gives them a sweet smile and moves off to sanyo's tambu to check how she is doing. Arjun and Sanjam also follow to check on sanyo. They all r shocked to c sanyo's missing.
Sanjam: Surya bhi nahi hai tambu mai aur nandini bhi.
Arjun: kahi koi musibat to nahi hai.
Chamki: humari dost ko agar kuch hogaya na to……………..she breaks down and cry
Sanjam: Dekho usa kuch nahi hoga. Hum hai na. Hum usa dhondana jata hai. Aur vasa bhi mujha lagta hai surya uska saath hai tum phikar mat karo. Vo tumhari dost ko kuch nahi hona dega.
They all set out to search for them.

Sanyo lost out finds prithvi unconscious and panics. She revives him up almost crying. Prithvi gains conscious and remembers what happened. He just missed them again. Dam
He sees sanyo was almost gonna cry
Sanyo just bursted out crying.😭 This made prithvi more unease. He can tolerate any thing but crying was a new stuff for him. He hated it and especially more if it was her. He didn't know why but yes his heart ❤️skipped a beat when he saw tears in her eye.
Pri: shukriya . Tum thik ho na. dekho mujh sa vo thapad galti sa lag gaya tha. Mujha maaf kardo
Sanyo: (sobbing) nahi hum ……tum thik…
he realised she was crying caus of him😍
Pri: ma sahi hu. Mujha kuch nahi hua. Dekho
Sanyo: tumhara sir sa khon nikle raha hai
She was new to this where as prithvi was tough one.
Pri: ya to kuch bhi nahi dekho
Sanyo: hum bahot dar gaya tha Surya. AGar tumha kuch ho jata to. To hum….
Prithvi just couldn't make it but there was something in her that made him happy to c that she cared for him. But strange as well 😳
Prithvi: kuch nahi hua na to ab rona band karo. Aur chala isa pahala ki hum shar(lion) ka bhojan bana is jungle pa.
Sanyo smiles and nodes.
Sanyo: par humna rasta khoo diya hai. Ab vapis kasa jayanga.
Prithvi: hum pa chor do. Huma pata hai.
He smiles at her innocence.
Sanyo: vo kaun tha.
Pri: kaun
Sanyo: jiska tum peecha kar raha tha. Jinhona tumpa humla kiya
Pri: vo pata nahi chala.

He realised how dangerous the situation could have been if they saw her here. She coluld have. Just to think that fumed him and he bursted out on her.
Prithvi: Tum yaha ayi kyon. (angrily)
Sanyo: tumhara picha…
Prithvi: tum apna apko samjh ti kya ho jo jaha karo gi. Tum kya kar sakti thi ha, agar vo log tumha dekh lata to. Ek matki tootna sa tumhari ya halat hai to unsa kya hota. Tum apna apko samjhti kya ho jab jaha kuch bhi karliya.
He was almost screaming at her not realising and the funny thing was he didn't get why the hell was he angry on her.
Sanyo: Bas humara bara ma aur kuch na kehna. Ek to hum tummhari madat karna aya aur upar sa tum huma dat raha ho. Tum sach ma ek bigra rahis ho. Hum apna apko nahi tum apna apko kahi ka rajkumar samjhta ho. Hum to sift tumahri talwar dena araha tha ki tumha shayad iski jaroorat ho. Par nahi hum to sach ma hi befkuf hai ki tum jasa ladka ki madat karna agaya.
At that time all the frens reached there at the spot and found them screaming on each other.
Prithvi was speechless.He was sorry for screaming on her but too late she was fuming with 😡anger
Sanyo to chamki: chalo chamki chala yaha sa. Tum sahi kehti thi ya sara ladka asan phara mosh hota hai.
Coninue as u wish
…… 😉
Edited by castrafa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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koi hai 😊
some one pls comtinue 😭
hey all u creative people pls scribble in ur imagination
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no ones bothered to continue 😭
kaha ho app sab log pls continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sanjam and arjun cheks prc if he is right and asks him
arjun:ye ladki tumhe kaha mile, ek to phele hi wo admi hamre hath se nikal gaya aur ye nayi musibat
sanjam:wa arjun tum to pheli bar sahi keh rahe ho
prc:tum dono ladna band karoge(thinks for a while and then says) pundir aur chand kaha hai
sanjam:wo dono pandit ke paas kuch pata karne gaye hai ki hum kitne din aur yaha rahege aur kaun kaun se sayon jayege
prc: thik hai to hum apne tamboo me chalte hai phir age ki yogna banege rat bahot hogayi hai humme sona chahiye kam ke liye tayaar rehna chahiye
arjun: tum thik keh rahe ho vese bhi mujhe bhuk lagrahi hai
prc and sanjam together: arjun tum phir suru
meanwhile in tamboo of sanyo
sanyo is crying and all consoling her and surali comes in tumhe kitni bar kaha hai tum rat ko akele mat jaya karo agar maharaj ko pata chal jata to kya halat hoti hamari tumhe pata hai and then sees sayo crying and asks her what happened
and sanyo tells her the story
surali: dekh liya ki hum kyu yaha ane se mana kar rahe the ab hum kal subbe hote hi vapas kannuj ke liye niklege

surya ke tamboo me
all are sitting and thinking and suddenly a arrow flyies in from nowhere and on it a letter is hanged
usme likha hai
"tumhe bahut jaldi ho rahi hai na humse milne ki
abhi bhi sambhal jayo aur vapas laut jao abhi der nahi hue
isse phele hum tumhare sathi aur bakki yatriyon ko kuch kare khas kar us nandini ko vapas laut jao"
prc reads it and all are in state of shock



pls pls do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice pls. someone continue Creative heads pls. wake up 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so now i will continue......prithvi is all shocked in hearing tis....he knew perfectly well tht these people were dangerous...n they cud anytin to anyone.....it was upto him now to save all thses people.....sometin had to be done..n tht too fast
on de other side
sanyo was constatly cryin at de fact tht how mean can people be.....chamki was tryin to say sometin nice to sanyo but it wasnt workin...
sanyo" humhe kuch nahi sunna chamki.....maya maa sahi kehte hai ...bahar kee duniye mehal kee duniye see bohat alag hai..yaha ke log kitne bure hai...ab iss suriye ko hee dekh lo....mai toh sirf uski chinta kar rahe thi..oisialiye uske peeche gayi....oh bhi koi aur vajah se nahi...sirf isiliye kyunki voh apne talwar bhul gaya tha...par nahi.....uske voh nahi dekhai diye....shukriya kehne kai badle mein..hume hee daant ne laga....."
chamki: koi baat nahi sanyo....hum kal vapas jaa rahe hai naa.....aap tumhe koi pareshan nahi karega"
n chamki leaves de tent to make prepartions to leave for tom.....
on de way she bumps into suriya........
chamki: tumhe kya beena dekh kar chalne kee bimari hai!?!?!"
prithvi just made a face at her...he suddenly noticed tht people in sanyo tent were all movin from here to there...carryin things from one place to another
pri:yeh tum log ke tambo mein halchal kyu hai"
chamki:"tumhari vajah se"
pri:"kya!?!?!?"
chamki:" aur nahi toh kya....tumne nandini ko kitna jor see daanti...bechari kee halat dekhee tumne...isiliye hum sab kal vapas jah rahe......"
coreectly at tht time sanyo comes out of de tent n sees pri n chamki talkin
sanyo: chamki tum phalto loga ke saath baat kar ke apna vaakt kyu barbad kar rahi ho..."
prithvi wanted to say someitn back but he didnt ...
pri:kya tum vapas jaa rahi ho....???
sanyo: tumhe koi parak padta hai
pri: withour thinkin he blurted out ...haa!!!!.....only then he realised wht he had said nnnn went like...mera matlab hai..tum aise kaise jaa saktee ho"
sanyo:tum hote kau hoo rokne vale....mein jab chahu voh kar sakti huu....."
pri: dekho tum nahi jaa sakti.....baat samjh ne kee koshish karo..tumhari jaan ko ghatra ho sakta hai...."
sanyo: mere jaan ko joh hone huye....tumhe kya pharak padta hai.....chinta toh unhi ko hoti hai ..jiske ke paas dil ho.....jo tumhare paas nahi hai"
sanyo says tis n goes back to her tambu..wid chamki
pri: hey bhgawan...kya ladki hai.....ab mujhe hee kuch karna hoga........"

continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Very sweet.....Pls. someoneone continue 😉

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