Pri-Sanyo Cant live w/o you-Script P3 add - Page 2

wow 👏 mind blowing amazing. Thank you, I don't know how many times to say Thank you. This track is so much better, since the sagars have disappointed us so much. Keep the parts coming. I loved part 1, now I going to read part 2.

hey this is amazing desperately waiting the third part,

good job triv.......
Part 3 jaldi.......

wowwwwwwwwwwwww wonderful dear keep it up your great job and i hope for the best that this thing should really happen in the serial amazing you are just superb yaar 😊

Hey good story..... something new..... don't stop 👏
I would love to see dadi and nana in action.
And Sanyo helping pri 😳.

Originally posted by: Power20

I was watching all the video's and my mood got so melacony that I decided to write something. Bear with me😊 I thought it will help with our depression on how the Sagars are butchering the beautiful love stories. (Damn you Sagars!😡) I will keep editting this post to add the continued story😊

Part I

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It's been 2 long depressing weeks since Prithvi and Sanyo's fight and their breakup. Sanyo is at the Asharam doing nothing😛

A Sainik comes and speaks to Maya Maa. Maya Maa looks happy and walks towards Sanyo. Sanyo glances up.

Maya Maa: Rajkumari Sanyogita. Aapse milne aapki Dadimaa aayi hain.

Sanyo looks worried and happy.

Dadimaa comes in. She chats awhile with Maya Maa and walks towards Sanyo.

Dadimaa opens her arms: Sanyogita?

Sanyo rushes in her arms and cries(as usual): Dadimaa, humme aapki bohot yaad aa rahi thi.

Dadimaa leans back and wipes the tears of Sanyo's face: Toh aapne yaha aane ki zid kyun ki?

Sanyo lowers her lashes(hehehe, reminded me of lashy di lol)

Dadimaa: Chaliye. Hum aapko kahi le jaane aaye hain. .

Sanyogita: Kaha jaa rahe hain hum? Kannauj?

Dadimaa: Nahi Kannauj nahi. Wo sab batane ka waqt nahi hain. Chaliye, kisiki zindagi aur maut ki baat hain.

Sanyo looks tensed but takes leave from Maya maa and leaves with her Dadi and Vaishali.

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After some hours...(because I am not Sagars😆 to show them reaching their destination in 5 minutes)

Sanyo peeks from her palki and freezes. "Palki roko!" She shouts. She runs towards her Dadimaa's palki and demands, "Hum Delhi kya kar rahe hain? Ye toh Delhi ka Mahal hain Dadimaa." She looks near tears (Again. I swear her eyes are fountain)

Dadimaa frowns and climbs out of the palki. "Sanyogita, Humare pitajine hume sandesh bheja tha ki Prithvi bohot buri tarahse zakhmi ho gaya hain kisi hamle mein. Woh aapko behoshi ke haalat mein yaad kar raha hain."

The news silences Sanyo and she looks worried.

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Part II

Sanyogita and Dadimaa enter the Rajmahal. They see Anangpal and Prithvi's friends talking with a very serious expression. The sound of payal warns them of their arrival.

Anangpal smiles gravely, then glances at Sanyo and nods at Arjun, Pundir, Chand and Sanjam pointedly. Pundir nods back and walks towards her. "Chalo," he says simply.

Pundir takes the lead and Sanyogita and the others follow him. They reach Prithvi's bedchamber. Sanyo sits besides Prithvi and touches his hand lightly. "Sanyogita?" He whispers.

"Haan. Hum hain. Apni aakhen kholo Prithvi," Sanyo says, her voice choked with tears.

Prithvi grabs her hand tightly and mutters her name again.

"Prithvi, apni aakhen kholo. Dekho Sanyogita tumhare paas hain," Arjun said. But Prithvi keeps muttering her name desperately, clutching her hand almost painfully.

Sanyogita winces but she uses her other hand to smooth the hair on his forehead lovingly. Prithvi calms due to her touch on his forehead but her hand is still clutched tightly in his. It was almost as if he were afraid she would vanish if he didn't hold her tight enough.

Pundir, Sanjam, Arjun and Chand exchange glances and watch as Sanyogita keeps stroking his head and reassuring him that she was with him.

An hour passes. "Pani...." Prithvi mutters. Sanyogita tries to free her hand from his grip but is unsuccessful. Desperately, she glances about but his friends had left the room almost half an hour ago after observing that Prithvi wasn't inclined on letting Sangita go anywhere.

"Pani....." He groans again. "Prithvi..." She says brokenly removing her hand from his grip forcefully. She gets up and walks towards the table with the jar of water and pours some in the glass.

"Sanyogita...Sanyogita...." Prithvi's hand was seeking hers on the bed desperately. "Sanyogita..Sanyogita.." His whispers were turning into shouts.

"Shhh..hum yahi hain. Lo, thoda pani pi lo." She pulls him slightly forward to brace him on the pillows behind him. Stroking his forehead she watched him sip the water.

Calm once again, Prithvi falls in a fitful sleep.

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Makes me feel a bit better😊

Really u are suparb. If sagars have heart like u we don't have to be depressed so much. It makes me also feel better. Plz keep writing such beautiful script which cheer me up.

Thank You all for your kind words and encouragements 😃 Added Part 3!

awwwwwww triv i luv u so sara much 😳
jus luved ur script plz continue 😳

triv aapni kahani sagar ko bhej do 😉 .......
uff kam se kam yeh misunderstanding to khatam hua 😛 ......
waitng for the next part 😃

Originally posted by: angel4lyf

this is excellent plz continue

ur too good. keep it up.