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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: lashy

i so agree with what power has written here.. he will not say dhoka.. (well maybe the sagars may incorporate that word.. but personally i wouldnt be happy if he said that)

however the rest of it sounds too good like the episode just happening.. 👏 i just dont know what to say....

the way the rain falls.. and mixes with the tears flowing from her eyes..

the way she stands shocked and doesnt react even when prithvi is hit on the head by the sainiks just goes to show how much of a shock she is in

all the echoes.. the friends.. the sainiks and disturbances and how these two remain staring at each other.. i wish the sagars show something like this on friday..awwww i shouldnt have read your script.. now i would not be happy if they show anything lacklustre.. and your script is really lustrous.. 😳

hey thanks lashy and all

i m glad thatu all liked it.

..... to wait till friday is a lnog way so i thought of writing it myself. I usually do such things when scene is going on and no sound..... then i speak up the dialogues of actors..... 😆😆😆

And someone mentioned before no rain in PRC (tough its there during sabdh bedi) so i thought this is the best situation to show rain. sara nakap pani se utar gaya. I hope sagars will show something better then this though...

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ppiyu

For those who can't wait till friday..... have a look.....
From what we ve learned from indya.com pri and sanyo are going to seperate..... so according to that my prediction for this friday.....

Prithvi is about to kill jaichand when sanyo comes and holds his hands.

Prithvi: "Nandini....."(They will stand in the same position. Camera will move around them.)
sanyo: (looking at him shocked) "Prithvi....."
Prithvi: "nandini..... tum yaha???" (he will stare at her)
sanyo: "tum??? nahi ...nahi.....(will release him and step back... .) "nahi" (she will look at her father) {wind will blow}

Sanyo: (shouting) "yeh kya kar rahe the tum????? inhe mar dalna chahate the tum???"
Prithvi: "Haa (breathing heavily)..... yeh hamara aapas ka mamla hai... sinhasan ki yeh ladai mujhe aaj khatm karni hi hai nandini....... hat jaooo" Again raises his sword forcefully.
sanyo: "nahi ...... (going near jaicahnd) inhe marne se pehle tumhe hume marna hoga....."(looking at pri)
Prithvi: (stepping back)"nandini....." (loaded with lots of questions)

{flashback: sanyo will remember her father crying..... humara itna bada apmaan pehle kabhi nahi hua..... Prithvi ne sabke samne hamara aapmaan kiya}

Sanyo: (looking at pri with anger and shouts) "humne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha prithvi ke tum aaisa karoge...singhasan ke lalach mein tum itna gir sakte ho...... Tumhari itni himmat ke tumne inpe haath uthaya???(as loudly as she could) chale jao yaha se"..... (pri will stare at her).

sanyo: (bends towards jaichand..... crying) "pitajiiii..... uthiye pitajiii..... pitaji". she shakes him.
Then all camera flashess on pri's face. he's shocked like anything. He will bring down his raised sword...

Prithvi: "kya kaha tumne??? (with slow pitch) he will drop his sword..... He will go towards her and again in low voice ... "kya kaha tumne??? pitaji....." He will look towards unconscious jaichand.

sanyo: (getting up and face to face with him..... lightening will strike between them) crying "ha.. ha... yeh hamare pitaji hai.....(again bijli) suna tumne ..... yeh hamare pitaji hai ....... hum... hum rajkumari sanyogita hai. Hum kannoj ke maharaja jaichand ki beti sanyogeeta hai....." this will get echoed 2-3 times
(Hum kannoj ke maharaja jaichand ki beti sanyogeeta hai
Hum kannoj ke maharaja jaichand ki beti sanyogeeta hai).
Camera flashess on pri's and sanyo's face. tofhan aayega....... and it will start raining.....
They both are soaked due to rain..... looking at each other..... with anger and shock, water flowing through their faces.....

{Flashback:
He will remember their conversation during last day of koteshwar yatra
Pri: "yeh toh batao tumhara naam aasli hai ya woh bhi ek jhoth hai" sanyo: "woh bhi ek joth hai" pri: "toh tumhara aasli naam kya hai" sanyo: "Surya humne kaha na..... sahi waqt aane par hum tumhe apne bare mein sab sach batayenge ..... jis tarah tumne hume aapna sach bataya.
He will remember her words at pushkar..... "waqt aane par hum khud tumhare paas aake tumhare sare sawalon ka jawab denge"
In geetapur when she was about to tell "hum kann....."
Sayali's words: "sach jankar tum dono ek dusre se juda ho jaoge....."
}
again lightening.....

sanyo: "delhi ke singhasan ke liye tumhari talwar pehle hum pe chalegi prithvi phir inpe..... maro..... uthao haath prithvi. Ek rajput ki tarah pichese waar nahi karte naa tum..... toh ruke kyun ho uthao haath"

Prithvi will start moving towards her not knowing what he is doing and she will move back..... sayali's words will echo..... "sach toh tum jaan kar hi rahoge..... honi ko koi nahi tal sakta".

{flashback: In ajmer when he hold talwar on jaichand and told his nana "aap hamara faisala hi janna chahate the naa..... toh suniye..... delhi ke singhasan par ab me hi baithunga" Again sayali's words..... "tumhara yeh faisala tumhe isse dur le jayege" }

Prithvi holds her arms tight by both hands. His eyes full of rage and water. Prithvi: "Yeh tumhare pitaji hai.... Tum rajkumari sanyogita ho......(flashes of camera) tumne itna bada sach chupaya mujhse..... itna bada dhoka diya mujhe.....(both are breathing heavily) "
prithvi: "kyun??? (angrily and loudly on her face...... shaking her) kyunnnn". Its raining heavily.

sanyo: (he is still holding her)"kyunki Hum tumse dur nahi jana chahate the..... kyunki hum tumhe khona nahi chahate the, tumhari nafarat humse bardash nahi hoti."

Prithvi will remember her words "agar tumhe hamare bare me sab kuch sach pata chal gaya toh tum hamse nafarat karoge"

Sanyo: (trying to release herself) "par ab nahi (crying), nahi ..... tum ek kayar ho.....pitaji thik keh rahe hai..... tum delhi ke sighasan ke layak hi nahi. ek kayar ki tarah Pith piche waar kiya tume prithvi."

Prithvi: (releasing her and stepping back) "kayar (shouting)..... pucho jaichand se kisne kayarta dikahi (pointing towards him) yeh toh mujhe kab ke maar chuke hote......Inhi ki tarah tumne bhi mujhe dhoka diya nandini. (Sad music plays..... looking at her ..... tears rolling through his cheeks). (again going towards her) Mere jasbadon se khela hai tumne. Tumhare pitaji ki tarah tum bhi ek dhoke baaj ho (stressing word dhokebaaj)......

Sanyo: "bas(shouting like anything)..... bas....hum ek aur sabdh humare pitaji ke khilaf nahi sunenge..... achha hua tumhe hamara sach pata chal gaya prithvi..... iss ladai me hum tumhare liye pitaji ka saath nahi chodenge..... (iss ladai me hum tumhare liye pitaji ka saath nahi chodenge.....) ...ab chale jao yaha se..... chale jao humare zindagi se..... (she will cry like hell) (thunderr)

He will remember his father's sentences..... "ek raja ko sabse pehle apne rajya aur praja ke bare me sochna chahiye" And Chander saying "Tumhe sirf tumhara kartavya karna hai"

Prithvi: "Thik hai..(silently looking at sanyo) Cahla jaunga..... ab dobara nahi aaunga....." (thunderr) (echo:Cahla jaunga..... ab dobara nahi aaunga.....)

Its still raining.....Background song...... kasam pyaar ki yeh sanam..... kabhi naa juda honge hum.

sanyo will look at him thunder shocked..... she will remember his promise {flashback: sanyo: toh wada karo tum hamara bharosa kabhi nahi todoge. Pri: "mar kar bhi nahi (holding her hand)"}

Prithvi's friends will come there.
Arjun,sanjam: "Prithvi.... prithvi..."
They will be shocked to see nandini there.
Pundir: Nandini??
Prithvi: nandini nahi.....(shouting and crying) kannoj ki Rajkumari sanyogita hai yeh.....
Camera flashes on all of them.

Till then jaichand's sainik will come and they will attack prithvi.....
Arjun: prithvi bacho..
Pri will get hurt on head.....
All together: Prithvi..... (taking their talwar)
Fight will start among sainiks and his fnds,,,,,sanyo just won't move or react.....
Pri will get up somehow (his forehead sheded in blood) n fight forcefully.....

Nani and vaishali will come. Vaishali will run towards sanyo.....
Vaishali: rajkumari sanyogita..... (she will shake her). Sanyo still in shock.

Prithvi: (holding a sainik) "keh dena apne raja se .....delhi par me hi raj karunga..... aur agli baar samne se war karna".

nani: "jaichand....." (she will go towards him)..... (she will look at prithvi..... shocked and calls) "prithvi....". Emotional music will start.

Prithvi looks at nani, releases that soldier and starts moving stambling..... his friends will follow him.
{sanyo's dialogues will echo in his head: is ladai me hum tumhare liye pitaji ka saath nahi chodenge....ab chale jao yaha se..... chale jao humare zindagi se"}
After few distance.....he will turn back and look at sanyo..... Background song...... kasam pyaar ki yeh sanam..... kabhi naa juda honge hum. (again he will remember her smile,her laughter) she is still there where she was..... tears rolling down her cheeks..... he will rub his rolling tears and will go away.😭


So in this way jaichand won't know anything about pri and sanyo.....
bcoz acc to history as soon as he learns about their love affair he arranges swayamvar. And swayamvar is far away for now.

I think this will be the last time when he will call her by the name "Nandini" (I actually love the way he calls 'nandini').....This will b the end of cute innocent love story from prithvi's side. From nandini's side cute innocent love story ended when she got to know surya = Prithvi. Her love became more mature since then but our Prithvi was always innocent. Now no more..... 😭

anyways..... this was the script from my side.

👏very good piyu...i think it will also happen this way. btw jaichand knew abt sanyo-prc and thats why he organized a swayamvar for her and didnt invite prc. only i guess he will come to know abt their chakkar much later.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome script 👏 👏 but just wait for 2 more day
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

hey Kai_Hiwatari, i hope too that they stay till the swayamwar, otherwise this whole luv story wld appear so incomplete.

i am sure the misunderstanding will be there for not more that 2-3 epi. Otherwise hamari sanyo hai na, as soon as her anger cools down she will be back with her prithvi, prithvi jap and keeping manats and running away from her mahal for god knows what reason and our hero pri will be at the right place at the right time to stop her from falling down. 😛 😛 😛


yeah!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Power20

I agree with most of the things posted in the script 😛 BUT, I don't think PRC will use the word "DHOKA" I think he will say "Tumne mujhse itni badi baat chupae?" If you all remember, Sanyo kept hinting PRC that she was someone who he will hate. Seriously, since Prithvi is so smart, he should have worked it out himself but I guess he was too busy with his maksats.

Also, PRC won't be angry. He will be upset, betrayed, confused but not angry coz Sanyo had given him hints about her identity(Tum hamse nafrat karoge and stuff) I think he will understand her point of view, since he is so understanding 😃
Waaaaaaahhhhh! When will Friday come!

Yes he will understand her....... but here she will take jaichand's side whom prithvi hates. so he will be angry on her. Also whatever she saw in front of her eyes she will blame prithvi for all and call him dhoke baaj or something. Even this will get him angry towards her. All misunderstandings actually.😭

After some time ..... when he will give time to himself then may be he will realize sanyo did all this bcoz she don't want to loose him. also sanyo will come to know the truth (how hopeless her father is?) when she will find his ring or by ovearing jaimal. Then even she will go towards him syaing sorry and all.

After few episodes they will understand each other and their loves story will be back on track (which has to).😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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u KNOWW...Yes,when I was thinking bout 'PRC'..I thought..THE ONLY REASON;THAT JAIMAL IS HELPING HIS NEPHEW,MAHARAJ JAICHAND..IS TO ASCEND THE THRONE OF KANNAUJ...What IFF..ONE FINE DAYY...When he realisess that he won'ttt be able too..He decides to KILL...SANYO?? Maybe,cuz he knows that Jaichand lovess her madly(she being HIS ONLY CHILD..ATLEAST,in the serial 😃 )OR...Cuz he wants to get to PRC..& COMES TO KNOW ABOUT THEIR LOVE STORY?? Soo..To get to Prithvi...Jaimal decides to KILL Sanyo? Isn't this a possibility??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ppiyu

For those who can't wait till friday..... have a look.....
From what we ve learned from indya.com pri and sanyo are going to seperate..... so according to that my prediction for this friday.....

Prithvi is about to kill jaichand when sanyo comes and holds his hands.

Prithvi: "Nandini....."(They will stand in the same position. Camera will move around them.)
sanyo: (looking at him shocked) "Prithvi....."
Prithvi: "nandini..... tum yaha???" (he will stare at her)
sanyo: "tum??? nahi ...nahi.....(will release him and step back... .) "nahi" (she will look at her father) {wind will blow}

Sanyo: (shouting) "yeh kya kar rahe the tum????? inhe mar dalna chahate the tum???"
Prithvi: "Haa (breathing heavily)..... yeh hamara aapas ka mamla hai... sinhasan ki yeh ladai mujhe aaj khatm karni hi hai nandini....... hat jaooo" Again raises his sword forcefully.
sanyo: "nahi ...... (going near jaicahnd) inhe marne se pehle tumhe hume marna hoga....."(looking at pri)
Prithvi: (stepping back)"nandini....." (loaded with lots of questions)

{flashback: sanyo will remember her father crying..... humara itna bada apmaan pehle kabhi nahi hua..... Prithvi ne sabke samne hamara aapmaan kiya}

Sanyo: (looking at pri with anger and shouts) "humne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha prithvi ke tum aaisa karoge...singhasan ke lalach mein tum itna gir sakte ho...... Tumhari itni himmat ke tumne inpe haath uthaya???(as loudly as she could) chale jao yaha se"..... (pri will stare at her).

sanyo: (bends towards jaichand..... crying) "pitajiiii..... uthiye pitajiii..... pitaji". she shakes him.
Then all camera flashess on pri's face. he's shocked like anything. He will bring down his raised sword...

Prithvi: "kya kaha tumne??? (with slow pitch) he will drop his sword..... He will go towards her and again in low voice ... "kya kaha tumne??? pitaji....." He will look towards unconscious jaichand.

sanyo: (getting up and face to face with him..... lightening will strike between them) crying "ha.. ha... yeh hamare pitaji hai.....(again bijli) suna tumne ..... yeh hamare pitaji hai ....... hum... hum rajkumari sanyogita hai. Hum kannoj ke maharaja jaichand ki beti sanyogeeta hai....." this will get echoed 2-3 times
(Hum kannoj ke maharaja jaichand ki beti sanyogeeta hai
Hum kannoj ke maharaja jaichand ki beti sanyogeeta hai).
Camera flashess on pri's and sanyo's face. tofhan aayega....... and it will start raining.....
They both are soaked due to rain..... looking at each other..... with anger and shock, water flowing through their faces.....

{Flashback:
He will remember their conversation during last day of koteshwar yatra
Pri: "yeh toh batao tumhara naam aasli hai ya woh bhi ek jhoth hai" sanyo: "woh bhi ek joth hai" pri: "toh tumhara aasli naam kya hai" sanyo: "Surya humne kaha na..... sahi waqt aane par hum tumhe apne bare mein sab sach batayenge ..... jis tarah tumne hume aapna sach bataya.
He will remember her words at pushkar..... "waqt aane par hum khud tumhare paas aake tumhare sare sawalon ka jawab denge"
In geetapur when she was about to tell "hum kann....."
Sayali's words: "sach jankar tum dono ek dusre se juda ho jaoge....."
}
again lightening.....

sanyo: "delhi ke singhasan ke liye tumhari talwar pehle hum pe chalegi prithvi phir inpe..... maro..... uthao haath prithvi. Ek rajput ki tarah pichese waar nahi karte naa tum..... toh ruke kyun ho uthao haath"

Prithvi will start moving towards her not knowing what he is doing and she will move back..... sayali's words will echo..... "sach toh tum jaan kar hi rahoge..... honi ko koi nahi tal sakta".

{flashback: In ajmer when he hold talwar on jaichand and told his nana "aap hamara faisala hi janna chahate the naa..... toh suniye..... delhi ke singhasan par ab me hi baithunga" Again sayali's words..... "tumhara yeh faisala tumhe isse dur le jayege" }

Prithvi holds her arms tight by both hands. His eyes full of rage and water. Prithvi: "Yeh tumhare pitaji hai.... Tum rajkumari sanyogita ho......(flashes of camera) tumne itna bada sach chupaya mujhse..... itna bada dhoka diya mujhe.....(both are breathing heavily) "
prithvi: "kyun??? (angrily and loudly on her face...... shaking her) kyunnnn". Its raining heavily.

sanyo: (he is still holding her)"kyunki Hum tumse dur nahi jana chahate the..... kyunki hum tumhe khona nahi chahate the, tumhari nafarat humse bardash nahi hoti."

Prithvi will remember her words "agar tumhe hamare bare me sab kuch sach pata chal gaya toh tum hamse nafarat karoge"

Sanyo: (trying to release herself) "par ab nahi (crying), nahi ..... tum ek kayar ho.....pitaji thik keh rahe hai..... tum delhi ke sighasan ke layak hi nahi. ek kayar ki tarah Pith piche waar kiya tume prithvi."

Prithvi: (releasing her and stepping back) "kayar (shouting)..... pucho jaichand se kisne kayarta dikahi (pointing towards him) yeh toh mujhe kab ke maar chuke hote......Inhi ki tarah tumne bhi mujhe dhoka diya nandini. (Sad music plays..... looking at her ..... tears rolling through his cheeks). (again going towards her) Mere jasbadon se khela hai tumne. Tumhare pitaji ki tarah tum bhi ek dhoke baaj ho (stressing word dhokebaaj)......

Sanyo: "bas(shouting like anything)..... bas....hum ek aur sabdh humare pitaji ke khilaf nahi sunenge..... achha hua tumhe hamara sach pata chal gaya prithvi..... iss ladai me hum tumhare liye pitaji ka saath nahi chodenge..... (iss ladai me hum tumhare liye pitaji ka saath nahi chodenge.....) ...ab chale jao yaha se..... chale jao humare zindagi se..... (she will cry like hell) (thunderr)

He will remember his father's sentences..... "ek raja ko sabse pehle apne rajya aur praja ke bare me sochna chahiye" And Chander saying "Tumhe sirf tumhara kartavya karna hai"

Prithvi: "Thik hai..(silently looking at sanyo) Cahla jaunga..... ab dobara nahi aaunga....." (thunderr) (echo:Cahla jaunga..... ab dobara nahi aaunga.....)

Its still raining.....Background song...... kasam pyaar ki yeh sanam..... kabhi naa juda honge hum.

sanyo will look at him thunder shocked..... she will remember his promise {flashback: sanyo: toh wada karo tum hamara bharosa kabhi nahi todoge. Pri: "mar kar bhi nahi (holding her hand)"}

Prithvi's friends will come there.
Arjun,sanjam: "Prithvi.... prithvi..."
They will be shocked to see nandini there.
Pundir: Nandini??
Prithvi: nandini nahi.....(shouting and crying) kannoj ki Rajkumari sanyogita hai yeh.....
Camera flashes on all of them.

Till then jaichand's sainik will come and they will attack prithvi.....
Arjun: prithvi bacho..
Pri will get hurt on head.....
All together: Prithvi..... (taking their talwar)
Fight will start among sainiks and his fnds,,,,,sanyo just won't move or react.....
Pri will get up somehow (his forehead sheded in blood) n fight forcefully.....

Nani and vaishali will come. Vaishali will run towards sanyo.....
Vaishali: rajkumari sanyogita..... (she will shake her). Sanyo still in shock.

Prithvi: (holding a sainik) "keh dena apne raja se .....delhi par me hi raj karunga..... aur agli baar samne se war karna".

nani: "jaichand....." (she will go towards him)..... (she will look at prithvi..... shocked and calls) "prithvi....". Emotional music will start.

Prithvi looks at nani, releases that soldier and starts moving stambling..... his friends will follow him.
{sanyo's dialogues will echo in his head: is ladai me hum tumhare liye pitaji ka saath nahi chodenge....ab chale jao yaha se..... chale jao humare zindagi se"}
After few distance.....he will turn back and look at sanyo..... Background song...... kasam pyaar ki yeh sanam..... kabhi naa juda honge hum. (again he will remember her smile,her laughter) she is still there where she was..... tears rolling down her cheeks..... he will rub his rolling tears and will go away.😭


So in this way jaichand won't know anything about pri and sanyo.....
bcoz acc to history as soon as he learns about their love affair he arranges swayamvar. And swayamvar is far away for now.

I think this will be the last time when he will call her by the name "Nandini" (I actually love the way he calls 'nandini').....This will b the end of cute innocent love story from prithvi's side. From nandini's side cute innocent love story ended when she got to know surya = Prithvi. Her love became more mature since then but our Prithvi was always innocent. Now no more..... 😭

anyways..... this was the script from my side.

seems we hve gt a new scrip writer

Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: lime ice

u KNOWW...Yes,when I was thinking bout 'PRC'..I thought..THE ONLY REASON;THAT JAIMAL IS HELPING HIS NEPHEW,MAHARAJ JAICHAND..IS TO ASCEND THE THRONE OF KANNAUJ...What IFF..ONE FINE DAYY...When he realisess that he won'ttt be able too..He decides to KILL...SANYO?? Maybe,cuz he knows that Jaichand lovess her madly(she being HIS ONLY CHILD..ATLEAST,in the serial 😃 )OR...Cuz he wants to get to PRC..& COMES TO KNOW ABOUT THEIR LOVE STORY?? Soo..To get to Prithvi...Jaimal decides to KILL Sanyo? Isn't this a possibility??

hey tuhina y do u want to kill that innocent angel yaar..that chcha is one devil headed person..he was the reason for the rift i think 🤔...he was the one who fueled Jaichand with hatred towards someshwar saying he (somes) was responsible for his dad's death😡

Feel like pulling him with his pony tail & giving him 100 lashes😡

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Posted: 18 years ago
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what a sad episode.i am gonna weap now 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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U know what in whole PRC i haven't seen tears rolling down rajat's cheeks. (not when jwala died, when someshwar died)
So I actually want to see him crying like anything. 😉

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