My first update!-26th january(pls read!)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi ppl!.....ok tis is my first update n i hope i dun make n e mistake!

agar kuch galti hogayi tho plsssss batana!😃....here we go!:

Episode starts wid Sanyo getting stunned by seeing those 2 guards!....Then...from behind.....Prithvi starts laughing n He is dressed in a shawl wid mud on his face!...with a stick in his hand!(probably he must be acting as a mad person!)........he says:Mujhe bhuk lagi hain!....iss sunsaan jungle main....kya mein tumhe maroo(sanyo)....ya phir tum dono ko!???(2 guards!)........then he says-daro mat.....mein tumhe pyaar se marroonga!😆.......the guards run away!😆....then he turns 2 sanyo n says-Tum dargayi???.......Sayo says-iska matlab hain ki tum bhi dargaye the!

Then from sumwhere in the forest......That IMP guard n that scary guy(scared face guy)........find sanyo n prithvi n run behind them!......Sanyo n prithvi are running.....n prithvi throws away his shawl revealing his blue dress!😳............Sanyo gets tensed n asks him(while running).....''Hum is tara kyun bhag rahe hain?ye log kaun hain!?''.....Prihtvi says-tumhare sawaal ke jawaab main badme dunga!...is wakt tum zara tez daudne mein dyaan do!😆......meanwhile the guards r trying their best 2 catch them both!......but sanyo falls down on he ground......n prithvi picks her up!(as in helped her in getting up!).......they run......n run.....n run.......but then sanyo says-Surya bus!....hum ab aur nahin daud saktein!..........so they go n hide in a nearby bush - tree.........meamwhile guards r searching for then in the same area......n sanyo starts talkin.....she askes prithvi-''sach sach batao!....kaun ho tum!??😕......aur ye sab log tumhe kyun marna chahte hain!????''.....tum yahaan kyun aaye ho!??😕.........prithvi says-Nandidni.....main iss yatra main ek khaas maksat se aaya hun!....aur ye log mujhe uus maksat mein kaamyaab hona nahin chahate!..........

But sanyo keeps asking him all that.......meanwhile guards r still searchin for them!.......Scar face man says-wo yahin kahin hain!.....aas paas........IMP guard says-jo koi bhi uus ki laash mere samne lake rakhega....use bhimdev bada inaam denge!....Prithvi gets puzzled n says(2 himself).-Maharaj bhimdev yahaan!??😕.............Sanyo says-ye bhimdev kaun hain!??....Prothvi gets bugged n says-Nandini tum itne sawaal kyun puchti ho??😆..............he tells sanyo 2 stay here n he'll be rite back........Sanyo says-tum hume yahaan akele chod kar jaoge!????....agar unlog ne humhe maar daala tho!???😭..........Prithvi gets angry(emotinally angry) n says-chup nandini,aur dubaara aisa na kehna!.............agar tumhe kisine bhi haat lagaya.....to mein uski jaan le lunga!😡..............Prithvi goes.....but sanyo follows him!!!!!!!.......when sanyo was following prithvi one of the guards sees her!..........

But prithvi cums hanging down from the banyan tree sanyo was under.....n kills the guard by cracking his neck!😃........Prithvi cums down n says 2 sanyo-maine tumse kahhan tha naa!....ke may hilna!.....then prithvi takes the dead guard's sword n moves with sanyo further......n hide in the same place.....again prithvi goes sumwhere leaving sanyo alone ther....but sanyo says-abhum nahin hilenge!😃.......meanwhile 2 of the alive guards see the dead guard n wonder wat happened 2 him......while prithvi is up on the banyan tree.....sharping the sword n shaping a piece of wood........sanyo creeps in from behind..........n the guards c her!😭...........They say-hey ladki idar aa!......sanyo moves towards them but.......prithvi kills them with the wood like thing he shaped!...........n they die!....that makes 3 dead guards!

Prithvi cums down n says 2 sanyo-acha hoga agar tum mere saat raho!....sanyo says-mein kabse yahin kena chahti thi!.......n they move forward!........meanwhile the guards keep searchin for them n they cum 2 noe that 3 of their guards are dead!😃...........IMP guard says he will find them out!.......meanwhile......sanyo n prithvi r running........n sanyo duppata gets stuck in the twigs!😆.........prithvi gets frustrated about it but then it untangles.........prthvi looks behind n sees........the IMP guard standing behind them!😭..........he puts his sword around prc's neck n says-ab tumhara khel khatam!..............but tyen prithvi starts fightin wid him n...takes away his sword......then prc says wat his guru tols him about fighting wid sword n stuff..........but IMP guard says-kya tumhare guru ne ye nahin bataya ke apni sabse badi kanjori apne saat nahin laate!😕..........then prc sees that sanyo is captured by 2 guards!.........IMP guars says-talwaar phek do.....aur marne ke liye tayaar ho jao!........but prithvi sees that there r 2 stones under his feet......so he goes down 2 keep the sword but he instead....piks up the stones n hits the 2 guards wid it!.........

N then prithvi defeats IMP guard n kills him!😃..............scar face man cums up ther n sees IMP guard's dead body n laughs!....scar face man says that prc n sanyo have gone 2-Satlaapur gaon!......he has an evil plot in his mind!..........meanwhile sanyo n prc reach there...sanyo starts wis the question sagain n protvhi says he'' tell her everything wen thw rite time cums!.......they move forward n see a gathering.....n they cum 2 noe sum play is about 2 start!.......a guy cums n requests them 2 be the-ram:sita jodi!........n they accpet it!........prc n sanyo r dressed up respectively!.....n the play begins!....😉but b4 that!....scar face man says.......put petrol on the hut for sanyo n prc.....wen they cum 2 stay in there.......well burn the hut!

The play begins wid several princes'coming 4ward 2 pick up the bow)cuz huever piks up the bow will marry sita!).......so all try but of curce.........only one suceeds!.......Prithvi!(ram)......so they get artifically married n everything😡..............n they change in2 their normal clothes!......n they prepare 1 move 4ward....but the scra face man asks them 2 stay wid them for a day........n prc n sanyo accept their gesture!.........as soon as they get in......2 guards cum from behind 2 meet scar face man!.......he orders them that-jaise ye dono so jaye,bahar se darwaza band karlena aur.....iss jhopdi mein aag laga dena!....main maharaj bhimdev ko prcd ki lash lake dunga!!!😃

Ok guyz!.....this was my BIG!update hope u liked it!😳

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camella thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey really nice update!! 👏 👏 ...even though i saw the episode.. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
Nice update Joey 😃 .and change dat petrol thing...it is kerosene.Dere wz noo.... petrol in dose days 😆 and I really wonder coz even kerosene is a by-product of peroleum 😕 .n e wayz realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooood update 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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not even kerosene!!its "mom" rite..mom means wax!!so it's wax..neways chuck it..i bet everybody understood tht it was a thing tht wud cause fire!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yup it was wax..nt kerosene or petrol...but gr8 update and a very detailed one. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
Very good update. You have described each event very nicely. Hope to see more such updates from you.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
ok...I'll correct myself not kerosene but wax 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey joey nicely written.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!.............thnx everyone! 😊 ......i put a lot of hard work in it!.....n mehanat ka phal meetha hota hain! 😳 ......n e ways hope u all liked it! 😃 .......n yes it is supposed 2 be wax but i really dun noe how does 'wax' create a fire!?? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wax catches fire dear.The same thing wz done in Mahabarat to the Pandavas

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