Ek khubsuraat saam baas tum or hum FF

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ek khubsuraat saam baas tum or hum FF

Pyara sa Bandhan

Prithvi

Anas Rashid



Sanyogita


Sheetal Dabholkar

A girl is sitting on a crescent bench, on a cold winter night. She crosses her arms, as the cold wind prickles her skin.

Just then, a black Cadillac pulls up beside her, the car slams open in style, and a guy comes out wearing a cool white leather jacket and faded blue jeans, his eyes sparkle at the sight of the girl. He stares in awe at her beauty, the peach white ankle length dress fits her so perfectly, and the crystal earrings in her ears sparkle in the dark night.

The girl turns her face away indicating her bad mood.

The guy bends down and touches her face lightly and looks into her eyes

Guy: Sanyogita, tum naraaz ho?

Sanyogita: aur nahi toh kya, ithni der kyu kardi tumne Prithvi, batha hai kitni der se tumhara intezaar karahi thi

Prithvi: tumhe toh batha hai na, ki office mai bohoth saara kam tha, isiliye, par ayinda essi galti nahi hogi, I promise

Saying this, he holds his ears cutely

Sanyogita smiles at the mere sight and hugs him.

Prithvi then stands up and'.carries Sanyogita to the car, opens the door and slides Sanyogita in

Then Prithvi too gets inside and starts the car and he drives for about half an hour.

Sanyogita..excited and curious: off ho, bathao na, hum kaha jaare hai?

Prithvi winks at her: keep guessing

A little while later, Prithvi stops in front of Palace Hotel. Palace Hotel stands like a salute in this dark night, lights glitter around the windows.

Prithvi gets out and goes to Sanyogita's side and opens the door for her like a perfect gentleman.

Prithvi then goes behind Sanyogita and blindfolds her.

Sanyogita: arre Prithvi yeh tum kya karahe ho?

Prithvi: Aree meri junglii billi chalo toh sahi

Saying this, Prithvi leads Sanyogita into Palace Hotel, once inside; Prithvi unfolds the blindfold from her eyes.

Sanyogita looks around in amazement.

The walls are decorated with red and white heart shaped balloons, a carpet of red rose petals lie on the white linoleum floor, long candles are lit alongside every wall, and the titanic song is playing in the back ground.

Sanyogita so happy: yeh'yeh sab mere liye

Prithvi comes up behind her and hugs her from behind: aur nahi toh kya'usse Ghori keliye?

Prithvi then leads her to the centre, where a round table is set with a black forest cake, with strawberries and cream. Prithvi holds Sanyogita's hand and they both cut the cake together.

Prithvi and Sanyogita: to our six month anniversary

Prithvi then kneels down and looks at Sanyogita and Sanyogita looks down at him, and they lock eyes, the intensity rises, then Prithvi and Sanyogita dance to the titanic song

Okay The End

Love

Rumela aka Urs Rumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i like this ff rumi , very nice and sweet 😛 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow, what an update dear⭐️.It's superb update.Wait for the next part dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: urooj101

i like this ff rumi , very nice and sweet 😛 😃

thankuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wow, what an update dear⭐️.It's superb update.Wait for the next part dear.

thankuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh iska koi or part neahi this is d end this is a short story yaar will write one more ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

reallyt nice part dear 😉

thankuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rumela711926

thankuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

your welcome jaan rumela 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey rumi
very nice ff
so sweet .... well written huni
plzz post the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey rumi

very nice ff
so sweet .... well written huni
plzz post the next part

thankuu so much this is d end will post d second small story later
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice ff rumela dear. i like it very much.

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