Baatein kuch ankahi si pt 9 on page 17 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Wonderful part.

it's just too good.
loved the scene between prithvi and sanyogita and their conversation.they are too good.
post next part soon dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc yaar..
prithvi to lajwaab hai..hehe..sanyogita ka 2 ghante tak wait kiya..waah..
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Posted: 15 years ago
heeeyyy babby
mein ne read kiya
its was awesome sweetie
loved all the scenes between prc and sanyo....they were adorable....kya style hai prithvi ki...mein tho uss pe fida hogaye
u described sanyo so sweetly and very differently...loved the description
well written...loved the ice cream scene.....and the dupatta part...it was superb
overall....a lovely and a fabulous update
jaldi se next part post kar do plzzzzz
wanna see prc proposing sanyo...gona be great na
anyways wonderful work bbzzz
jaldi continue karo na
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

nyc yaar..

prithvi to lajwaab hai..hehe..sanyogita ka 2 ghante tak wait kiya..waah..

aap bhi na
pati dev kis ka hai lolzz.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i hv read 1st time n really njoyed it its really gud dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
maria
update the next part yaar
we all are waiting eaGERLY
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for sharing dear...its lovely sweetie!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
maria dear, post the next part dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

maria dear, post the next part dear.

ok di i will post it kal 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 9:😉

Prithvi and sanyogita reached home and before prithvi tells sanyogita to open the door she was out of the car and just saw her running toward inside ,he knew she was really happy bc she got the job and he gave her the treat I mean the icecream treat remember friendsJ but he didn't told her that was the job getting treat because her self respect wouldn't let her have a small fun after having so much pain in her life. Prithvi moves these thoughts and goes inside and at the door he stops he saw sanyogita hugging his mom and bhabi and excitedingly telling them that she got the job of main advicer of the office and everyone gets happy seeing her smiling specially her bhua and guess who friends?:) kamlavti brings some sweet from kitchen and gives to sanyogita and sanyogita give sweets to everyone and saw pritha standing near the kitchen wall she goes to her and tell that she got the job and gives sweets to her ,pritha not happily take the small piece of sweet from sanyogita hands and congrates her and goes into the room and close the door and throws the sweet from the window in nager because she is only prtending to be nice with her in real she hates her because she think that she is just using her family 4 her progress L she is just thinking like everyone in the world have thought but some things are nt like what we think about them,

Sanyogita starting going to office .everything was new to her .every relation and place infact the city was new to her but she tried to be like a member and she was becoming a member in every place , one day sanyogita came from the office in evening she was really tired as she enters the house she saw kids playing in lawn bhua sitting with prithvi ,sanjam bhaya , pritha and pooja bhabi in lawn discussing some thing ,they all were looking really happy like there was some occasion .she moves inside and goes there and says "namatay "

"agayi beta tum ayo baito"says says kamalavti and pooja bhabi moves from her seat to give place to sit 4 sanyogita and goes and sit on the side of sanjam chair

Sanyogita says "thanks bhabi"

"har baat par thanks maat kayo karo mujar itna thanks hazam nahi hoga "says pooja smilinglyJ

Everyone smiles at pooja comment and sanyogita too

"arre sanyogita chalo party ki preparations kartay hian "says pooja

"party kis cheez ki "says sanyogita confusingly

"arre aj mmmy aur dad ki shadi ki 25 anniversary hai "says pooja

"anniversary par"says sanyogita as she saw pritha looking down and every one getting serious .mean while sapna (sanjam daughter )comes in prithvi lap and start showing her drawing ,prithvi looking at the drawing but listening to them

"tumhey pata nahi kiya pritha ne tumhey kal batay nahi kiya raat mein jab who tea lay kar ayi thi tumaray pass"says pooja

Sanogita once looks at pritha and gets what was happening and makes a sad face and says "arre nahi bhabi pritha ne batay tha mujay par mein office kay chakar mein bhool gayi "mean while prithvi looks at sanyogita and then pritha and then gets back with sapna again on the other side sanyogita to her bhua "sorry bhua mein bhul gayi kab se soch rahi thi kiya bhol rahi hoon ap ka gift hi yaad nahi raha mujay congratulation on 25th annniversay "

"koi baat nahi beta yeh anniversary ka chakkar to in bachon ney dala hai warna mein kahan yeh party warty karti hoon aur jot um nay abhi wish kiya thaw hi hi anmol hai liyay gift ka kiya is liyay ab koi udass chehra nahi chalo haso jaldi say meray gift mujay mil jay tumari ik muskan mein meray bhaya ki pyari si muskan "says kamlvati

Sanyogita smiles and huggs her bhua and kamlavati tells her to go and change the dress and gets fresh and she will brings some tea 4 her and sanyogita moves from there and goes into her room and goes into bathroom and changes her clothes and comes into room and look out side from the window and saw pritha standing in middle and everyone standing infront of her and she gets that everyone is scolding her 4 nt telling sanyogita ,

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"yeh kiya tareeqa hai pritha "says sanjam

"matlab bhaya "says pritha

"matlab yeh pritha humney tumhey pehlay bhi samjaya tha kay who hamari ghar ki member hai ab aur jab pooja ney tumhey kaha tha sanyogita ko batany ka to kyun nahi kaha tumney usay"says sanjam in anger

"meinay is liyay nahi batay kay who is ghar ki member nahi guest sirf guest "says pritha

"who beti hai mera samji bilkul tumari tarha "says kamlavti who is naraz from her daughter

"beti kaisi beti maa jis ko ap kal khayal 14 saal se nayi tha aur ik din who acahnak ajati hia apkay pass apna haq mangany kaisa haq maa yeh to sirf uska matlab hai aur apna matlba pura honay par who phir chali jayi gi ap ko chor kar phir se ik naya dukk day gi apko maa"say pritha as she tell everyone what she thinks about her

"koi maytlab nahi hai uska matlab mera tha mein apnay bhai ki nishnai apnay pass rakna chati thi isliyay rka usy meinay "says kamlavti

"par maa"says pritha

"daiko pritha tumnay galti ki hai usay is tarha anniversary ki baat na bata kar yeh to uski achayi hia kay usny yeh keh diya kay tumney usay batay nai hai to kitna apman hota tumara sab kay samnay aur hamar bhi sirf tumary bina baat kay gussay ko lay kar"says pooja

"janti hoon meinay galati ki hai bhabi par ik ajanbi se kaisi umeed akr usay apany banay uar phir humein chor kar chali gayi to "says pritha

"ik chance to usay who aisi nahi jaisay tum soch rahi ho who bohat pyari hai aur tum sey bohat pyar karti hai bas ik baar tum us par trust karo who nahi thoray gi tumaray trust ko aur tum usar sorry bolo gi apnay jhoot kay liaya because she is hurt from ur side "say sanjam

"ji "say pritha as she belives her family

(scene back to normal line):

she goes inside and start preparation 4 party and sanyogita joins her in and they all enjoyed the simple party with family members only , in nighte sanyogita is siiting in her room when she hears a knock on her door

"come in its open"says sanyogita

Pritha comes in with a small rose in her hand and sanyogita gets up from the bed and says "arre pritha ayo na baito "and pritha close the door and sits near sanyogita on bed and there is a long silence between them m to break the silence sanyogita speaks"kiya hua pritha kuch kam tha kiya mujse"

"I am sorry sanyogita ji I lied to u and u didn't let anyone know , u didn't said anything I am soory I was wrong about u can u give one more chance to start a new relation with u can u?"says pritha

"its ok pritha tum bhi galat nahi mein bhi yahi kuch karti agar tumari jaga hoti aur mein kisi baat ka bura nahi mana "says sanyogita with a sweet smile

"sachi sanyogita ji thanks "says pritha

"sachi par ik baat tumari mujay buri lagi hai "say sanyogita with a little sadness

"kiya baat "says pritha 😕

"yeh sanyogita ji kaun hai tum ujay di keh sakti ho ya sanyogita bhi chalay ga "says sanyogita smilingly

"ok mein di kayun gi tik hai di"says pritha

"yeh hui na meri behan wali baat "says sanyogita and they both share a hug and pritha give the rose she got 4 her and says goodnight to her and they both doze to sleep

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This Is it 4 nw friends hope u all like it and thanks 4 waiting , do leave ur comments I love them 😊😊😊

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