Prithvi and Sanyogita in this century part 1

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Thanks alot guys....for your support............welllllllll I am sorry for the delay....and yup some of them said to continue with the names..Prithvi and Sanyo....I am very glad that you gave your suggestions for me...but what I think is if I use the same names...you people will get either Rajat and Mugdha pair or Anas and Sheetal pair on your mind...I dont want that....
This is completely a fresh story and a new story...so please imagine everything..................hope you guys understand me....and yes here goes my story....please bare with me.
Prithviraj Chauhan in this century....Jindagii Ke Pannone Se Part 1
hitya did her MBBS in Tamilnadu. She is basically a south indian,hailed from a very traditional brahmin family.Hers is a joint family. So she knew very well the responsibilities and duties. She had spent her childhood under lovely care of their grandparents,uncles and aunts and brothers. She was a girl child in the family. So all of their family members love her alot.....ek baat mein kahe tho o sab kii ladli thi. Her grandparents have 5 male children and 3 female children. 3 women got married and they are well settled in their life. 5 of male children are married and all are living together happily. Their family business is going well and they have enough money. As they stay in a village....Sahitya's grandfather is head and he used to solve the village problems....they are very rich enough that they always help people financially....all give respect to this family....Sahitya's father is the last child. All were happy...and one day grandmother died. There was lot of depression in the family...all the daughter in laws also felt very bad as she always loved them as her daughters....after 2 years she died to last male child namely Krishna,Sahitya was born. So all of them taught that once again their mother born. So all love and respect Sahitya alot....even Sahitya lived upto their expectations...She is a very good daughter for every parent look for,She is a responsible family member.....even her bade papa's and badi maa's respect her and call her maaji....as they all believe that theri mother in law was born. All the brothers of her,love her and they listen to her words,her confusions,her troubles and everything and they help her. This was her happy family. Generation of sahitya is well educated i.e. her brothers and herself. She got medicine seat in Tamilnadu and completed her degree and house surgoen there. Now she went for Mumbai for M.D. Her one of brother has a gud frnd in Mumbai..when she decided to go to Mumbai for higher studies,they all decided to keep her in his frnds house......but in Mumbai his frnd is not living but his grandparents are living. Sahitya's brother talked to them and now everything is settled and she is going to stay there........She moved to Mumbai....the city of dreams.....
Pranay......a very famous and young and handsome tv actor. He is very talented...within short period he had made his mark in Indian Telivision industry......Just it took 3 years for him to won great awards in tv industry...he is a hardworking man and he had a gang which was unbeatable in the tv industry......Pranay basically a good fellow but because of his stardom,popularity and circumstances he became proud and he got a strong feeling that where ever he and his frnds go,there will a great welcome for them and there was none who can beet them. His family is a short family consists of his mother and father...though they were happy for their son they always worried about his behaviour. Pranay's life is with is friends...aka his gang who are also very popular and successfull actors of tv. His gang......1) Pranay 2) Vamsee 3)Shashank 4) Arshit 5)Madhuri 6) Indu 7) Pallavi
Pranay and Madhuri is a very wellknown and successfull pair on onscreen.Their onscreen chemistry was very pretty and good. Somehow Madhuri loves Pranay. Pranay is unaware of this. He is very close to her and they r best friends. Madhuri with fear never revealed her love to him.
Sahitya,girl who is ..very Innocent,Traditional,,Intelligent,Naughty,and very very very good girl........
Pranay's gang signed a new project with Varma Productions....they are going to launch a youthful story on tv...so they signed with all these 7 members. They are searching for a good collage so that they can shoot in that. Varma productions consists of three main people. Shailaja Varma,Shree Varma and Srikanth Varma. In industry,they are known Varma cube. They always launch good stories.....This production itself gave big break to all these 7 members. So they love this produciton. Srikanth Varma is head n he love Pranay gang very much.
Srikanth Varma's best friend is Emmanuel who is principal of "Angles of God" collage. This is a big collage which has all UG courses and MBBS and it offers MD courses and PG courses. This collage is run by Christian missionaries....and heads of this collage,like principal,vp,correspondent etc are called as fathers. This is very strict collage. Srikanth Varma asked Emmanuel father for collage for shooting. He gave permission for him to shoot in summer holidays for 2 months....

Varmas need collage for one month so management agrreed and said that they can shoot in summer holidays...............

Sahitys is doing her MD in that collage

Sahitya is very intelligent student.er ...she secured 1st in her department and she is very active in all activities and she is pet of Fathers.....though she is very naughty and make many mischevious thigs....they like her...even her lecterures..............though she belongs to department of Cardiology she has a big gang in collage ...from different departments.........their details are..............

1.Sahitya
2.Rahul.....from the department of Physics..(Sahitya's best friend)
3.Meena from English department

4. Radha from Chemistry department
5. Gareema from Electronics department
6.Vikram from Maths department
7.Vasistha from Neurology department
8.Vedavyass from Biotechnology department
9. Pavan from Microbiology department
10.Siddhu from Pharmacology department
All these 10 members in Heroin's gang are very good friends in collage and though they are from different departments...they eat food together in lunch time....they do all masti.Among all of them Rahul and Sahitya are very best friends.There was a student committe in the collage. The committee members are selected by Collage administration and they look after student activities and all collage programmes. Sahitya is Chairman of collage committe and Rahul is secretary and Radha is coordinator.
Sahitya completed her 1st year there and now she is entering in final year. After exams,collage authorities planned to go to Kaleshwar town near mumbai as it has historical significance. It is a developing town. So many tourists visit there.When Varmas came to ask the collage for shooting,principal father offered them to come with them to trip.Vikram agreed.Along with Vikram cube,pranays gang,Sahitya's gang and 20 degree students accompained with 5 lecturers are going to Kaleshwar city in bus.It takes 1 day in bus......they will start from the collage in collage bus......................Pranay's gang.........

.......all of them are good friends......but they are proud.They feel themselves as celebrities.....and always make fun of othrs. Pricipal said Vikrams team to come to collage,7.00 am with luggage......degree students other PG students are noticed to come to collage are 11.00 am and Rahul and Sahitya are told to come to collage by 7.00 am to collage, That day is Sunday.At11.00 am in the bus in the bus to the Kaleshwar town

As Sahitya belongs to south indian, she never saw any hindi serials..so she does not know about Pranay gang and Vikrams team.Morning Vikram and Pranay gang....arrive to the collage sharply at 7.00 am sharply.Pricipal welcomed them and he shows a where they deposited all their luggage which was brought by some naukars......and from there Principal took them to another room when they can sit......it is very good room,Large windows are closed and AC is on.....at 7.20 Rahul arrived in that room and he was overjoyed to look at Pranay's gang and he goes to them and he says....."arrey,Pranay.... aap......Vow mein abhi nind mein hoon kya......I am really happy to see you suddely.....I am suprised to see you people here.......are you the Vikram'steam which is coming with us.........Vow.....Praany...Autograph please......Madhuri ...I like your action alot.You are my favourite actor ho....autograph please.........".in this way he takes autographs from everyone....mean while.....

"Rahul bhayya....Rahul Bhayya..."Ramu called
"Arrey Ramu....haan bolo"Rahul said
"Bhayya Pricipal father ne aapko,Mothi aur Meenakshi jii ko bularahe ho apn room pe"
"theeke hum aarahe hain...tum jao..."
"jee bhayya"

"Sailaja mam and Srikanth sir please come with me..."Rahul said.
all two move.

Rahul was murmering in himself.......
"Ye Sahitya kaha gayi..ab tak to aajana chahiye......ye ladkii bhi naa.......😡pphone bhi nahin utharahin hain......ab mein Principal se kya kahoon..."

Ramu is attender in the collage.....

they left to the pricipal room.......in the room where Pranay and gand is now staying.......(conference room)

In conference room...Ramu once again comes.....and he sees that Rahul was not there,,,,and so he starts leaving.Suddenly....

"hey Ramu....."called Indu
Jiii..."Ramu said
"Mujhe ek glass paani leke aao"
"jii..."

he goes and he brings a glass of water...

"lijiye" he gives water to Indu...but somehows he looses hold of glass n water falls on Indu's dress......

"maaf kijiye mujhe galti hogaya.." said Ramu
"galti.....sirf galti nahin....bahut badi galti hogayi tumse..." said Madhuri
"jii...mujhe maaj kijiye" Ramu says
"tumhe pata hain e dress kitna mehanga hain.....tumhara ek month ka salary hain e......aur tum is par paani....." saing this...Indu slaps Ramu..
"arrey Indu ab chodo bhi....maafi bhi maang raha hainna....bichara"..says Arshit...and asks Ramu to leave the room

Arshit is good.He hates his friends behaviour.He tried to change them alot but in vain.He never speaks anything as he loves his all friends....)

"Mujhe maaj kiijiye.....😭"

Ramu goes off with a sad face........

Sree Vikram who watches this all,turns towards them and says........"tum log istarah behave nahin karna chahiye......ek na ek din tum logon ko muf thod javaab milegii..."

they all didnot pay attention to his words....as they know that he cant do anything beyond that.Sree Vikram,many times warned them about their behaviour but they didnot changet it....he wexed up with them.....he once tried to tell this to Srikanth but in vain.

Always Sree Vikram wished that one should come to give them a good answer...............

In Principal room meeting is going on between Pricipal and Rahul,,Sailaja and Srikanth.

In conference hall...
Pranay and gang are talking to each other......and Sree is sitting in chair....before them...all of them are facing the board...and thinking deeply...and he got disracted because of the sound of door which was opened....by someone.....

( just imagine a collage room.....it has three vertical rows.Each row consists 30 chairs.......all of them are facing board..... team are seated in last row......to one extreme end......)

The door of conference hall was opened......one girl.....who is wearing red and white cotton salwar.....came inside with a mobile in her hand.Her dress is very simple,Cotton one,,Red short top,white patiala model pant,with white dupatta which she wored ....shows clearly that she is very traditional....she covered her chest with dupatta.....one hand has red bangles.....12 in number.....clinging and making beautiful sound....in the other wrist she has a watch.......and in right hand she handles a beautiful mobile which is red and black combination........her anklets are very think making very little sound........and she has bindi on her forehead....which is in medium size and red in colour....and underit...we can see kumkum.....placed........and her hair is short....which was tied by a band.......her neck contains a simple gold chain with a locket of heart shape....a small gold chain....She is very pretty.....simple,pleasant and adorable.........

Entering into the room....she saw...Pranay......and the gang.....Pranay and gang were used to people who always see them and ask them for auto or photographs.......so he even expected her to do the same...not only him...but everyone...when she looked at them..............since they face it everyday and everymoment.

but that girl looked at them casually and then to Sree and then to other side as if she is searching for someone......she immediately picked up the phone and called someone.........

"Arrey,ye Rahul phone kyuun nahin utharaha....Mein kya karoon ab..."she again tried to call Rahul.

Suddenly...she turned back on hearing

"Khushi...tum....good morning...😛"
"Good Morning Ramu Bhayya....😊"
"abhi aaye ho kya..."
"Haan bhayya......vaise bhi.....Vikram's aur uski team tho yahin aane waale the naa.......aagaye kya....?".....her voice changed slightly.....it showed some irritation...she continued.....
"Uss Vikrams team ko bhi.....aaj hiin aana tha......pehle hum sab ne Monday ko jaane ke liye tair kiya bhayya....lekin Vikrams team kii vaja see sunday ko prepone hogayee....sunday ko bhii jaldi utkkar aana pada......mujhe naa bahut neend aarahin hain..ye Pricipal father bhi naa..."she said everything waving her hands and with full expressions........

Sree Vikram is impressed with Khushi.....very much.....he is thinking....kitni sundar hain e ladkii....aankhon mein masti aur bholi sii surat....aur to aur bacchon kii taraf Principal par gusaa....and her eyes....very big....n the way she rotated her eyes...and hands.....he guessed that she is a classical dancer.

"Khushi....dheere se baat karo...jo log is room mein baithein hain vahin Vikram's team hain...."Ramu said it slowly.........but audiable to all😃(I mean he said in a less tone than that of Khushi...)


"Kya!!!!!!!!!!"Panicked Khushi....."peheli bolna chahiye tha naa bhayyaa..."she jumped over him with words......
"mujhe kehna kaa muaka degii...tab naaaaaa....theeke mein chalta hoon..mein yaha se gusarrahatha aur tumhe dekha.isliye andar aaya tha...."he said and left the room......

after Ramu left...Khushi slowly turned and directly looked at Sree Vikram.....she felt that she should be responsible to him as he is elder there....so she went there....and said...."Uncle.....I am sorry,,,,mujhe pata nahin kii aap hiin Vikram's team hain.....I am reallly sorry uncle..."
"Its okkk beta.....tumhara naam...khushi hain???" asked Sree........................she was about to answer but....inturrepted by..

"Kya.....tum hume....Vikrams team ko nahin jaanti.....mujhe nahin jaanti....?"asked Madhuri.

Sorry,mein sach mein aap logon ko nahin janti...I am really sorry once again..."said Khushi...

Khushi was about to move.....

"hey you........"Pranay calls...."hmmm...khushi...right????get me a glass of water...."
Khushi see him and with out answering she moves......
"kya tumhe sunaai nehi derahin hain....."says Pranay
"Oh tumse glass paani poochraha hain..."says Indu
jaao aur lekar aao"says Madhuri.
Khushi says quitely and camly.."get it by your self"
"Logon se kis tarah pesh aana chahiye....tum pehle sikho.."says Pranay
"aur tum............tum logon se madad kaise maangte hain...ye sikho.."says Khushi...and leaves...........

"Meine kahaa naa...tum logonse......koi to hoga jo tum logon ko muh tod javaab dega..."said Sree seeing them.....he seems to be enjoying the scene and he appreciated the way khushi answered them......she did not indulged herself in any argument.....indeed she just make them shut with two sentences.........he thinks

Pranay was shocked....it was for the first time in his life time to hear something like that............even in their home he never faced that...neither in sets.......no one scolded him....not even his parents....he was really very angry on Khushi........he thinks....how a simple girl can do that with him....................Madhuri who is very close to Pranay.sees that and says....."dekho us ladkii ko....itna himmat....o hume nahin pehchantii .....aur to aur uskii ghamand ko dekho.........."

all are angry on Khushi........

End of Part 1

Sorry,i know that this is big....please bear with my story.....Please give your suggestions,feedbacks,comments,compliments....if you got bored please let me know.......I will be waiting for your replies......

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great update,but what is the name of the female lead?
is it Shahitya or khushi?
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dear kudiya i will comment soon...
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Hai Guys...........I am really very glad to see all your responses. Thanks for giving so many suggestions and sorry for the delay.
well so many said why dont I use names Prithvi and Sanyogita. Let me tell you guys that this is completely a new story...if i use those names,you will get either Rajat-Mugdha or Anas-Sheetal on your mind.I dont want that. So I am using different words. Hope you will like this story. I already gave this story to some of my frnds on IF...they said to post.I made some alterations and posting here.
Sahitya.....she is a girl hailed from a very traditional joint family in south. Her family belongs to a village. Her dadaji is village head and family has a very good reputation in many villages. She is laadli of the ghar. Her dadaji has total 5 children. Out of them 2 are daughters and they are well setteled with their families..and other 3 sons are also married and all are staying together with their parents. Last sons daughter is Sahitya. Other 2 sons of dadaji has 2 sons each. Though Sahitya is very samll in the family all give her respect as she was born after the death of dadiji. Dadaji the head of the family,is very strict in matters of worships,cultures and traditions. But he always encourage girl education. Inorder to be an example he sent Sahitya to Banglore for MBBS course. Sahitya completed her MBBS and house surgoen and now she got a seat in Mumbai collage. Her family agreed and she is staying in her bhayya's friend ghar with that fellows grandparents.
Sahitya...ek aisi ladki hain jo bahut mastii karti rehti...lekin hamesha apne jimmedari khoob nibhati hain. She did every duty of hers and always helped everyone. She is very intelligent and beautiful. She is very traditional and her bestfriend is her dadaji. She respects old people.
Pranay.... Pranay is very famous actor in tv industry. He is very attractive,handsome and charming. He is actually cool. His family is a very small consists of his mother,father,sister and he....Mother is housewife. By proffession she is a doctor but as Pranay's father belongs to army,she left her proffession to take care of their children. Pranay's father is very strict.He always want his son to join in miltary. But as his son took a different career and becaue of his carenot behaviour...there is a gap between Pranay and his father. Sister is doing her degree and she loves her brother alot. Even Pranay loves his parents and sister very much.
Pranay...he got his first break with Vikrams production. He did with about 7 new actors in that serial. That way all 8 of them became very close friends and they always respect and have love to Vikram productions. Pranay is a care not guy. Though he is hardworking,in his work......he always feel himself as a great person and he wants attention from everyone.He gives a lot of importance to his friends in his life. His friends are...Madhuri,Indu,Shashank,Vicky,Gareema,Vaidehi,Krishna......8 of them are very close to each other and all are very good actors and made their marks in tv industry. Best onscreen pair was Pranay and Madhuri. During the course of action,Madhuri loved Pranay but never revealed her love to him. She cant bear Pranay paying attention to other girls.Shashank is very good boy in that gang. All others are little arrogant and have showbizz feeling. They like to be celebrities. Though he dont love the way his friends behave,he was always with them as he love them alot.
Vikrams Production is very well established production in tv industry. They always present very good stories on tv which show different emotions,feelings.3 main heads of this produciton are Shailaja,Shree and Srikanth. Now recently they signed with pranay and his friends a new project which is based of collage life. So they need a very big and good collage for shooting, Principal of "Angles Of God" collage is friend of Srikanth. So he asked to hire the collage for shooting. Principal agreed and he made agreement to use the collage during summer holidays.Collage..."Angles of God" is a very big collage which offers UG and PG courses in many subjects. Other than these,it offers MBBS,MD courses. This is a collage run by christian missionaries and heads of these collages are called as Fathers..(Hope you people understood). Sahitya is doing her MD in this collage.Its a big collage all the campuses of UG,PG,MBBS,MD r within same compound wall...there are libraries labs,play grounds for different games. Everywhere you can see greenary in that collage. In this collage there is a Student committe which will take care of all student activities.Members of the committe are selected by Principal.
Chairman of student committe is Sahitya,secretary is Rahul and coordinator is Radha. This collage takes students to different places everyyears. Students are selected by their allround performance in collage. After exams,this time they are going to Kaleshwar place which has historical importance. When the discussion on this trip was going on,Srikanth went to principal to ask for collage,so Principal father asked them to join the trip.(I will call as Vikram team .... pranay and his friends and three heads of production.). Vikram team agreed.Sahitya is chairman of student committe and she is first in her department. She has a big gang in the collage...and they are...

1.Sahitya...from department of cardiology
2.Rahul.....from the department of Physics

3.Sudha....from English department
4.Radha....from Maths department
5.Sarvan...from Chemistry
6.Vikram....from Chemistry
7.Surya....from Statistics
8.Sangeth...from Commerce
9.Ram...from Arts
10.Kishore...from Maths.....

All these members in Sahitya's gang are very good friends in collage and though they are from different departments...they eat food together in lunch time....they do all masti.Among all of them Rahul and Sahitya are very best friends.With 20 UG students,10 PG students(sahitya's gang) and 5 lectures and Vikrams team is going to place Kaleshwar in bus.It takes 1 day in bus

Father Pricipal said Vikram's team ....to come to collage at morning 7.00 am with their luggage......degree students other PG students are informed to come to collage are 11.00 am and Rahul and Sahitya are told to come at 7.00 am to the collage...on Sunday.....as they are going to start...at 11.00 am in the bus in the bus to the Kaleshwar ..............

Pranay and his gang is very famous. They have a great fan following. As Sahitya is from south india,she never saw hindi serials and so she dont know neither pranay and others nor about Vikrams productions......she heard from Principal father that Vikram's team is going to come with them to the village.........thats it.

Suday morning...Vikram's team....arrive to the collage sharply at 7.00 am .Pricipal welcomed them and he shows a where they deposited all their luggage which was brought by some naukars......and from there Principal took them to another room when they can sit......it is very good room,Large windows are closed and AC is on.....at 7.20 Rahul arrived in that room and he was overjoyed to look at Pranay's gang and he goes to them and he says....."arrey,Pranay....Madhuri...Indu.........Sailaja mam,Sree sir..Srikanth sir aap ......Vow mein abhi nind mein hoon kya......I am really happy to see you suddely.....I am suprised to see you people here.......are you the Sagars team which is coming with us.........Vow.....Praany...Autograph please......Madhuri...I like your action alot.You are my favourite actor ho....autograph please.........".in this way he takes autographs from everyone....mean while.....

"Rahul bhayya....Rahul Bhayya..."Ramu called
"Arrey Ramu....haan bolo"Rahul said
"Bhayya Pricipal father ne aapko,Sailajaji aur Srikanth jii ko bularahe ho apne room pe"
"theeke hum aarahe hain...tum jao..."
"jee bhayya"

"Srikanth sir and Sailaja mam please aap log chaliya." Rahul said.
all three move....

Rahul is murmuring something in himself....
"Ye Sahitya kaha gayi...ab tak to aajana chahiye......ye ladkii bhi naa.......pphone bhi nahin utharahin hain......ab mein Principal se kya kahoon..."

Ramu is attender in the collage.....

they left to the pricipal room.......in the room where Pranay and gand is now staying.......(is Seminar hall..)

In Seminar hall......Ramu once again comes.....and he sees that Rahul was not there,,,,and so he starts leaving.Suddenly....

"hey Ramu....."called Indu
Jiii..."Ramu said
"Mujhe ek glass paani leke aao"
"jii..."

he goes and he brings a glass of water...

"Jii lijiya....."

He is about to give but somehow glass falls down and water falls on Indu's dress...She became very angry...
"Mujhe maaf kijiya.Mujhse galti hogaya" says Ramu
"kya?tumse galti hui...nahin tumhe bahut badi galti hua. Tumhe pata hain is dress kitna mehanga hain" Shouths Indu
"tumhari ek maheena ki kamaye hain" says Madhuri.
"mujhe maaf kijiye..." pleads Ramu...
With anger,Indu was about to slap Ramu but was stopped by Sashan
"ab chodo bhii usko....tum jaao yahaa se....aur dubara aisa mat karna..."said Sashank.He is very good and soft.He hates his friends behaviour.He tried to change them alot but in vain.He never speaks anything as he loves his all friends...

"Mujhe maaj kiijiye.....😭"

Ramu goes off with a sad face........

Shree who watches this all, turns towards them and says........"tum log istarah behave nahin karna chahiye......ek na ek din tum logon ko muf thod javaab milegii..."

they all didnot pay attention to his words....as they know that he cant do anything beyond that.

In Principal room meeting is going on between Pricipal and Rahul,,Sailaja and Srikanth

In Seminar hall.....Pranay and gang are talking to each other......and Shree is sitting in chair....before them...all of them are facing the board...and reading a book...and he got disracted because of the sound of door which was opened....by someone.....

( just imagine a collage room.....it has three vertical rows.Each row consists 30 chairs.......all of them are facing board.....Vikrams team are seated in last row......to one extreme end......)

The door of Seminar hall was opened......one girl.....who is wearing red and white cotton salwar.....came inside with a mobile in her hand.Her dress is very simple,Cotton one,,Red short top,white patiala model pant,with white dupatta which she wored ....shows clearly that she is very traditional....she covered her chest with dupatta.....one hand has red bangles.....12 in number.....clinging and making beautiful sound....in the other wrist she has a watch.......and in right hand she handles a beautiful mobile which is red and black combination........her anklets are very think making very little sound........and she has bindi on her forehead....which is in medium size and red in colour....and underit...we can see kumkum.....placed........and her hair is short....which was tied by a band.......her neck contains a simple gold chain with a locket of heart shape....a small gold chain....She is very pretty.....simple,pleasant and adorable.........

Entering into the room....she saw...Pranay......and the gang.....Shree, thought that she is really very beautiful......

Pranay and gang were used to people who always see them and ask them for auto or photographs.......so he even expected her to do the same...not only him...but everyone...when she looked at them..............since they face it everyday and everymoment.

but that girl looked at them casually and then to Shree and then to other side as if she is searching for someone......she immediately picked up the phone and called someone.........

"Arrey,ye Rahul phone kyuun nahin utharaha....Mein kya karoon ab..."she again tried to call Rahul.

Suddenly...she turned back on hearing

"Khushi...tum....good morning..."
"Good Morning Ramu Bhayya...."
"abhi aaye ho kya..."
"Haan bhayya......vaise bhi.....Vikram's team to yahin aane waale the naa.......aagaye kya....?".....her voice changed slightly.....it showed some irritation...she continued.....
"Uss Vikram's team ko bhi.....aaj hiin aana tha......pehle hum sab ne Monday ko jaane ke liye tair kiya bhayya....lekin Vikram's team kii vaja see sunday ko prepone hogayee....sunday ko bhii jaldi utkkar aana pada......mujhe naa bahut neend aarahin hain..ye Pricipal father bhi naa..."she said everything waving her hands and with full expressions........

Shree is impressed with Khushi.....very much.....he is thinking....kitni sundar hain e ladkii....aankhon mein masti aur bholi sii surat....aur to aur bacchon kii taraf Principal par gusaa....and her eyes....very big....n the way she rotated her eyes...and hands.....he guessed that she is a classical dancer.

"Khushi....dheere se baat karo...jo log is room mein baithein hain vahin Vikram's team hain...." Ramu said it slowly.........but audiable to all(I mean he said in a less tone than that of Khushi...)
"Kya!!!!!!!!!!"Panicked Khushi....."peheli bolna chahiye tha naa bhayyaa..."she jumped over him with words......
"mujhe kehna kaa muaka degii...tab naaaaaa....theeke mein chalta hoon..mein yaha se gusarrahatha aur tumhe dekha.isliye andar aaya tha...."he said and left the room......

after Ramu left...Khushi slowly turned and directly looked at Shree.....she felt that she should be responsible to him as he is elder there....so she went there....and said...."Uncle.....I am sorry,,,,mujhe pata nahin kii aap hiin Vikram's team hain.....I am reallly sorry uncle..."
"Its okkk beta.....tumhara naam...khushi hain???"

"Kya.....tum hume....Vikram's team ko nahin jaanti.....mujhe nahin jaanti....?"asked Madhuri
"sorry..lekin sach mein aap logon ko mein nahin jaanti...I am really sorry once again..."said Khushi...

Khushi was about to move.....

"hey you........"Pranay calls...."hmmm...khushi...right????get me a glass of water...."
Khushi see him and with out answering she moves......


"kya tumhe sunaai nehi derahin hain....."says Pranay

"Oh tumse glass paani poochraha hain..."says Indu
"jaao aur lekar aao"says Madhuri

Khushi says quitely and camly....."get it by your self"

"Logon se kis tarah pesh aana chahiye....tum pehle sikho.."says Pranay

"aur tum............tum logon se madad kaise maangte hain...ye sikho.."says Khushi...and leaves...........

"Meine kahaa naa...tum logonse......koi to hoga jo tum logon ko muh tod javaab dega..."said Shree seeing them.....he seems to be enjoying the scene and he appreciated the way khushi answered them......she did not indulged herself in any argument.....indeed she just make them shut with two sentences.........he thinks

Pranay was shocked....it was for the first time in his life time to hear something like that............even in their home he never faced that...neither in sets.......no one scolded him....not even his parents....he was really very angry on Khushi........he thinks....how a simple girl can do that with him....................Madhuri who is very close to Pranay...sees that and says....."dekho us ladkii ko....itna himmat....o hume nahin pehchantii .....aur to aur uskii ghamand ko dekho.........."

all are angry on Khushi........

End of part 1....hope you guys liked it......
Please give your suggestions.compliments,comments and please do give suggestions....Thanks for bearing with me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hai Guys....here is the second part of the story
Recap....
Degree and PG and Vikram's team are going to Kaleshwar ......Pranay and gang see Khushi...and they all are very angry on her.

Part 2

In Pricipal room.....

"sab kuch theek hain Srikanth.....tum phikar mat karo...buses are ready and in that place...many cottages are there....for all 48 members 48 small rooms are avialable.Each room is very good....with a bed,bathroom,,two cupbords with a mirror and a table and chair....." says Pricipal to three of them(rahul,Mothi,Meenakshi)

"par surroundings ka kya Principal..???"asks Meenakshi....
"dont worry about that....surroundings are very nice and pleasant.Full of trees and cool air..since there are many farms near your cottages and even from those cottages everything is near n also food is nice....."says Princial
"Food.....haan food ke baare mein poochnaa hiin bhool gayii...kya Veg hain naa???"asks Sailaja...
"haan complete Veg hain aur to aur bahut accha hain"

Sailaja and Srikanth are very happy to hear all these....for sometime there was silence.This silence is broke by the words of Principal.

"I think Srikanth,now once you can see the collage so that you will be having a clear picture..."
"jee Pricipal father....mein aur mera team ek baar is collage ko dekhna chaahte hain...so that I can prepare the story according to the campus...."
"Rahul...tum in sabko ek baar collage dikhana..ab time 8.00 am hua....baki students to 10.00 ko aanyege..tab tak in logon ko ek baar poora collage dikhana."says Principal to Rahul in a ordering tome.
"jee father..."says Rahul.

"By the way fahter...."says Srikanth..."who is the incharge of this 15 days trip...?"

"Actually ...with degree students 5 lecturers are coming...and mein is kaam ko sambhalne ke liye teen students ko chuna hain....o teen hiin is camp ko sambhalenge..."says Principal

"kya students.....?"says Sailaja
"Lekin Father ye kya hain.....aap aur lecterures ko bhej sakte hain naa.."says Srikanth

Rahul is seeing from Principal to Srikanth and Sailaja....he has nothing to say.

"Srikanth and Sailaja.....mein jo kuch bhi kiya bahut soch samajke kar rahaa hoon...we have to imbibe the leadership qualities among our students....and that too I have choosen very good students....."says Principal.

"kya o kaun hain...hum jaan sakte....?"asked Srikanth

"sure.....one of the students is sitting beside you.....Rahul..."

They looks towards Rahul....he smiles to them.

"He is Secratary of Student commitee,the other is Radha who is co-ordinator and the main incharge of this trip is Sahitya...who is the chairman of student committee."continues Principal.
"kya ek ladkii hum sabko...mera matlab hain...is trip ko sambhalegii...?"asks Srikanth with a question mark on his face....
"you dont worry....Sahitya is very intelligent and she is capable of managing things...she is collage topper and she can do things even in worse conditions.......Kyuun Rahul???" says Principal looking at all of them....
"haan sir...she is really very good and capable of managing many things and people at a time..."says Rahul to Srikanth

"Mujhpar bharosa rakho ....trip will be successful....enjoy it and dont think too much"says Pricipal to Srikanth.
"Jee father...agar aap kehrahe hain to"
"Rahul inko collage dikhana.."pricipal orders to Rahul and he starts seeing some files which were on the table.........

Three of them come out and they start moving towards Seminar hall(the room where they were sitting).Sailaja and Srikanth are walking behind Rahul and Rahul is looking in the cell.....

"arrey...khushi kii missed calls....(he calls Khushi)hey khushi...tum kaha ho.....tum jaldi Semianar room ko aajaao.Theeke mein rakhtaa hoon..."

all of them reached Seminar hall.......Srikanth said to everyone to come out so that they once can see the collage.....Khushi enters the room once again....(all Pranay gang got irritated to see her)

"Hai Rahul...." says Khushi
"Hai Khushi....chalo in sab ko collage dikhane..."

Khushi smiles at Srikanth and Sailaja and says.....".lets go"

They all move outside........Rahul and Khushi are moving first talking and laughing...Srikanth,Shree and Sailaja r walking aside and Pranay and gang are walking behind Rahul and Khushi.....

"kya ab ye Khushi hume collage dikhayegii..."says Pranay
"dekhnaa hiin padegaa naa"says Sashank

"isko mein choodoongii nahin.....isne hamare saat aisa bartaav kiya...dekho tho..."says Madhuri with angry tone.

"Ye hamare Library hain.....bahut bada and it is really very useful for us...."Khushi shows library to all of them and starts telling....

Shree calls Khushi....and Shree and Khushi are talking to each other........here Rahul is telling to Srikanth and Sailaja........

Shree liked Khushi alot....her way of talking and her simplicity and he thought that she is beautiful and best thing that he found in her is giving a muh tjod javaab to Pranay and gang.Even Sashank like Khushi...though he was in a bit of schok but he liked the way she answered.

"is ladkii ko dekho hamare saamne hamar sir se kistarah baat kar rahin hain"seeing Shree and Khushi says Pundir.
"Mujhe lagtaa hain kii Shree sir ko Khushi badi aachii lagii..."says Sashank

all are in a mood like..."Whattttttttttt"

All of them start moving.....Rahul ad Khushi r showing everything......its a big campus.......Library,Auditorium,Museum,botanical garden,labs and so onnnnnnn.....they reached canteen.....

"Rahul...jaao aur tum mere bacchon ko water packets lakar dena..."orders Srikanth to Rahul

Rahul was embrassed...he was of theri age...how Mothi can just tell him like that.......he also looked Pranay and gang looking at him......he was really embrassed..........with that pain in heart...he was about to move towards the canteen.....

"Rukho Rahul...mein leke aata hoon....."says Khushi who is standing near Prem Sagar....she knows Rahul very well....he is her Best Friend...she understood whats going in and on his mind.......once all of them looked at Khushi.

"hey tum kyuun..?its okk mein laata hoon.."says Rahul...
"Rahul.......vaise bhi mujhe vaha kuch paise dena hain...mein laaongii naa.."saying this she moves towards canteen...

she brings 5 bottles of water and she gives one to first Srikanth and Sailaja...and then 1 to Shree...who is standing in a distance...then she goes to Pranay and gang and she is giving bottles to them....

"hey get a glass of water.."says Pranay
"get it by yourself.."says Indu (remember the incident that took place in Seminar hall)

all of them laugh.......khushi didnot mind any thing and she gave last bottle to Sashank.....and he thanks to her.......Khushi was happy that atleast one of them was good enough.

Shree and Rahul heard them....as they were standing near them....Shree came to know what they tried to do with Khushi but Rahul was in a state of confusion.She moves out there....and now they started walking.....Rahul and khushi are walking side by side....with Prem behind them....its a really a good atmosphere.....full trees...cool breezes kissing once in a while and sounds of birds which make to feel that all of them were in some jungle......

"ye kya hua vaha..."Rahul asks Khushi
"kaha aur kis ke baare mein poooch rahe ho"asks Khushi...she completely forgot what she faced....she never takes such types of thigs to heart....she feels that she is only responsible to some people and if anyone from them scolds her...she feels...unless she dont take them to heart....and always in collage she enjoys the nature...she loves the nature and she always enjoy it....

"vahi jo Pranay aur Madhuri tumse kehrahe the jab tum water derahi thii..."
"O,kuch nahin....bas yuhiin.."
"Sach sach bataaoo"
Khushi tells everything that happened in seminar hall to Rahul...rahul was shocked to know this.....he was about to tell something....suddenly his moblie rings....he goes side and starts talking.....

"Khushi......tum aisa kyuun kiya..?" asks Shree from behind...Khushi stops and looks back at him

"mein ne kya kiya uncle...?"...
"tum kyuun water lene gayee..?"
"Uncle..Rahul is of Pranay's age...and I know what Rahul felt when Mothi uncle said to Rahul...he is very sensitive uncle...he will take everything to heart...I can read his mind...afterall he is my bestfriend..."
"Lekin jo tumhare saath hua...?"
"Uncle,it depends.....mein unlogon ke baathe ko serious mein nahin letii...."

here comes the ground my favourite place......Khushi shouts....she changed the topic as she doesn't want to talk much about that.........

Rahul comes and explains that they have...foot baal ground,ground for criket and ground for volly ball and for hockey..........alll are seeing to the diffrent grounds and were amazed to see that they are very neat and clean.....their mind is disturbed by shouting of some girls.....

"Khushi diiiii....hai..."some girls came near them...
"hai Tanu,,tum log yahan...?"says khushi in very exciting manner...waving hands to them...
"diii hum Kho Kho khel rahe hain..."
"Vow...kho..."she looked at Rahul.......

Rahul understood whats going in Khushi's mind and says....
"No Khushi..."he cried.."you cant go now..."with a conforming tone said Rahul.
"Please Rahul....bas ek game..."saying this she placed her mobile in his hands and she left her chappals there and she ran towards the girls......tieing her dupatta to her waist covering her chest..............everything happened very quickly that Rahul could not tell anything or avoid Khuhi.....Khushi likes that game very much.whenever she has time or free hour in collage she comes and plays......

Khushi is playing very nicely....no one were able to catch her...she is running between the members..tactfully....there were noices....all the team members are talking to each other.....Vikram's team is watching khushi playing and all of them are involved in that game as is it clearly seen by them......

"e ladkii bahut sundar hain naa.."says Shree to Sailaja

all Pranay and gang liisten that......

"haan...bahut acchi....and she is really very fast in her movements...dekho kistarah sabse bach rahin hain...."watching the game comments Sailaja...
"Mein isko hamare agle serial mein chance dena chaha thaa...lekin...(all the Pranay and gang were shocked listening this....but theri hearts became lighter after listening...)usko Madhuri jaisii bade baal nahin hain...mujhe o bhi natural chahiye...."says Shree to Sailaja.....

all of them are watching.....Khushi is running as fast as could ..on girl is approaching towards her....khushi is breathing heavily...she is moving....girl is about to catch Khushi but khushi.moved to other side..........because of that Khushi's clip came into the hands of the girl................and hair came out..............................

all of them were shocked to see that Khushi has a long hair..which is shining black....long and thick...........khushi again startd running......

"Khushi...dadaji ka phone hain"shouted Rahul....
"Kya dadajii...."khushi started coming towards Rahul.....

she came to them..haan phone dena....jab vahan aaya tab usko pataa chala kii Rahul ne jhoot bola to bring her back...........she was breathing heavily......unable to talk.....she made her duptaa like normal and she rubbed her face with her dupatta......and wore slippers and took mobile from Rahul and all started to move....she is about to tie her hair...and suddenly remembered that her band was with that girl........

"diii...one girl came running towards them.."
"tum....tumhari band didi...."saying this she handed the band to Khushi
"thanks..."said Khushi...

they all moved towards seminar hall...suddenly khushi ki mobile rings....she talks and says to Rahul that she will be back within 15 minutes and goes away.......

all of them are reached to seminar hall....and are resting.....all PG students and degree students who are going to come to Kaleshwar enter in seminar hall....seeing Pranay and gang....all of them were suprised and happy.that all came to near them and asking for autographs....there were noise in the room...Pranay and gang who know very well about Srikanth..they all kept quite......as he is very desciplined........

"Quite......."this word spread the silence in the room..for one second all of students became silent........
"take your seats right now...."the same voice shouted...all of them went to their respective places......PG studentts in the middle row of benches....degree students in other extreme end.....5 lecterures are also there with them....all were very shocked and they were in a terrified mood......all were looking with scary looks towards that man who shouted.....that voice was Srikanth..............there was silence for 3 seconds....again the silence broke by the words..........

"aap sab collage kii students hai....behave like that..you are in collage....behave like students and maintain silence.....descipline nahin hain kya....." Srikanth shouted with anger in his face pointing the finger to all of them.....then he sat down.............

after few more minutes.....again the silence broke by.....

"Hai Guys......sab itne chup chaap...kyuun..?"a girl who came inside directly moved towards PG students and talking to them.........

it was none other than...............khushi.

"kya hua...father ne daata hain kya....?theeke yaar ye sab to hote rehte hain.....iskeliye itna chup chaap baithe hoo....?"

all were looking at Khushi with scary looks......

"Ye to gayii..."said to oneanother in Pranay's gang....all are grinning....

"Chup hojaao khushi.....dheere se baat karonaa.."said Radha to Khushi....
"arrey ho kya gaya hain tum logon ko......anyways....ek hot aur khush khabharii sunaaoo....Rahul kii engagement fix hogayyee....trip se lautehinn uskii sagaaii hain...ladkii ka naam hain Pooja....."Khushi said in exciting tone moving rounds....and in a loud voice.......

"kya....all PG students shouted at once...."all were happy.....all were discussing about the marraige....because of which noise increased......among all of them Khushi's voice is prominent.

"Stop the nonsence...."Srikanth shouted....

again silence spread......all of them seated except Khushi....she stood ........and looked at Srikanth...unable to understand what happened to him.........

"tum collage kii student ho yaa nahin...hamesha masti aur mazaak...iske alava bhi kuch to socho....."

all were looking at Srikanth and Khushi....khushi was embrassed after seeing degree people looking at her....all the degree people know her...though they never talked to her....they know her...as khushi always conducts all the meetings....shows and functions in the collage.......they all saw her anchoring..........even the lecterures know her...............

"hamesha masti yaa kuch padhogii kya tum....mere team ko dekho.....tumhare hiin age hain..lekin ab se hiin itna kuch paye hain........"he showed his team with sence of satisfaction and the proud is felt in his words..."atlease pass to hojao exams mein...tumhare parents keliya"he continues......

Khushi watched Pranay and his team...they were giving sarcastic looks to her....she was really very much embrassed.........................there was silence in the room........Srikanth calm down and sat....khushi still stood int the same place................silence broke by....

"Khushii...tumhe Vice Principal sir ne bula rahe hain...."said Rahul coming in
"haan jaa rahin hoon.......ab kya kaam hain yaar..."she said it in a formal tone and she is absolutely fine and smiling....and again started talking to Rahul about Pooja.........

All were shocked to see her....not PG students...as they know her mentality....but Vikram's team and degree team thought that she will cry....but nothing happened......Khushi gave her mobile to Rahul and started moving out....

"ID to pehnke jao...Khushi..."shouted Radha
"haan.....mein to bhooli gayiii...."Khushi.....was searching for her bag..........
"arrey mein to apna ID card bhool gayii....Oh my God...ab mein kya karoon.....?hmmmmmmmmmm...."she stood for sometime thinking.....and then she said.........

"Radha....tum tumhari ID card dedena mujhe...."
"kyuun......"asked Radha
"dena yaar..."

Radha understood whats going on Khushi's mind and said...

"kya!!!!!! tum mere ID card pehenke Vice Principal ke paas jaaoge....risk hain Khushi..."
"Mein hoo naa...dont worry..."Khushi takes her ID card and moves out...............................

"dekho is ladkii kii himmat.....sir ko dokha derahin hain.."said Indu in a big tone so that Srikanth can listen......

They all know that Shree liked the Khushi and so they are trying to make Srikanth hate her.......

"haan humne kabhi bhi Mothi uncle ko dokha nahin diya........"said Pranay...with a convincing tone.............

Srikanth listened all this and got a bad impression on Khushi..........

After sometime Khushi came in........with some files in her hand.....she distributed white papers to all of them....and asked all the people to write their address and phone and mobile numbers......after a few seconds...she collected them and kept in a file............she observed that Pranay and gang are making some comments about her.....he stopped Rahul who was about to say them to shut up....and she also observed that Srikanth is very angry on her.....but she didnot take anything to heart...and she is doing her work with a pleasant smile on her face.................

Afterwards she gave ID cards to all of them...issued by collage committee for 15 days......then she explained the rules and points to remember,about their trip,their accomodation,their schedule.....everything.....................she went and sit in her place.......in the last seat in middle row......

after some time Pricipal and Vice Pricipal came to Seminar hall and Principal started speaking......

"I think by this time you all got your ID cards.....always wear them.....and i think you people came to know about everything regarding this trip.........you are all grownups..so becareful........make this trip a success.....and now let me introduce three people to you...who are going to take charge of this trip...................Rahul....."

Principal calls out Rahul...he comes and stands infront of class....."Rahul the secretary of student committe. he will take charge of degree students."

"Radha....coordinator .....and she will take charge of PG students...." Radha comes there and stands.Principal know about Radha's health.so he gave her an easy job...the charge of her friends........(Radha is very week and has some health problems)

"Now...Sahitya....the Chairman of student committe ...she will take the charge of Sagars team and also she is the incharge of this trip......."

Sahitya walks and stands beside Principal....Vikram's team was shocked to seee Sahitya......she is none other than Khushi............it was her nick name and all her friends call her by her nick name...............

Shree felt happy....and even Sailaja was happy that a woman is going to take charge.......Srikanth felt sorry....as he came to know that Sahitya is collage topper in the collage,she is very good and well mannered and intelligent by the Pricipal....but he scolded her.......

Pranay and gang was very upset....

"ab ye hum par hukum chalayegiii..."said one
"ab hum iskii baat manna haain kya..."said another.....
"aisa kuch nahin hoga....mein kuch karta hoon..."Pranay said this and started thinking....................

Principal ordered degree students and PG students to go to the grounds were buses are there....and to deposit their lagguage...........he said to Sahitya to stay in seminar hall, he also announced that as .he made the students into 20 teams ecah team consiting 2 memberes....he said that each team should collectively move.......they have to sit together in bus.................and they have to visit the places in teams.He sais that he made only such small teams because...if we make big teams.....misunderstandings arise...................he said he will announce the teams near the bus.................

all walked out.......Father asking Sahitya about the arrangements....they are discussing....

"aap phirkar mat rakhiye Father....sab ke addresses aur phone numbers...and schedule and other things...mere paas hain is file mein...aur ek aur file addresses ke....aap lijiye.(she gives the file which was wrriten by all the people....)e file to hamesha mere paas hiin rahegii...I will take care of everything father......"
"I know Sahitya.....God Bless you....and have a nice journey....and becareful....observe everything...and if anything seems to be wrong immediately contact me...."

their conversation is interrupted by......

End of part 2............hope you liked it...please give your suggestions and comments and compliments
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update di...........now my confusion is over!!!!!.........abt. sahitya n khushi!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow kudiya lovely update buddy....I will add your fanfic to the PRC Creative thread!😳😃
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Pls. maintain a single thread for your fanfic...you can change the heading ..I mean whenever you update u can say part 1 updated..part 2 updated etc...As well I am mergeing ur 2nd update with this thread! So pls. continue with ur 3rd update in this thread only!
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Thanks for the update kudiya.lovely as usual dear..good job!⭐️
Note: I am merging this topic with the 1st update....Pls. continue ur 3rd part in this Thread only!

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