Discuss no. 12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: mehraan

are shona...ye kaisa sawaal hai...tats the mst imp part of my scene...tats wat i hve written SPLASH... shes unable 2 resist him n willingly gives her hand 2 him n in the sec para she is the pool wid him!😆

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

At night PRC is in the pool splashing water to himself. He is only TOPLESS; he has a black embroidered with gold shalwar on him, but is unseen as his bottom half is in the water.

Prithvi : sanyo, kaha ho tum, zara towel dena

Sanyo is standing infront of the mirror, is wearing a blue lahenga. She takes off her dupatta off her head, and rests the duppata on her shoulder and then one by one takes off her jewellery. She can hear Prithvi asking for the towel so she heads towards the cupboard that is near the bedroom door. She takes the towel out and then orders the sainiks to go and rest as they will be tired. Sanyo closes the door and walks straight to the bathroom.
Sanyo : Prithvi, hum towel lekh kar agaye.
Prithvi : tum bi kamaal karthi ho, aise kaise le lu, andar aake do mujhe

Sanyo : likin prithvi...

Prithvi : jaldi karo,

Sanyo comes in and closes her eyes and asks Prithvi where he wants the towel putting. Prithvi who is turned around in the pool turns to Sanyo and looks at her. He is stunned at her beauty without jewellery and thinks how much more beauty has she yet to be revealed. Prithvi is smiling at his lovely Sanyo and continues...

Prithvi : sanyo, ankhe kholo?

Sanyo: nahi, hum aisa nahi kar sakte, hume paap lag jaye ga, jaldi se apna towel lo aur hum jaane do.

Sanyo who is inside the bathroom, near the bathroom door jus stands there with her eyes closed, as someone puts their arms around her waist from back, she feels someone breathing on her neck and slowly their lips touching her bear neck. She opens her eyes and looks in the pool, as Prithvi is nowhere to be seen. She turns around an sees Prithvi standing behind her topless. She is astonished at Prithvi's behaviour and starts to quiver.

SHALL I CONTINUE

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

o wow shona.........its really romantic😳.........plz continue dear........arre yaar PRC sanyo ka pati hain😆😆...........PRC ko topless dekhne se use paap kaise lag sakta hain😆😆😉..........yeh Sanyo bhi na...........bahut sharmati hain😳😳😆

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Acha..now this is news to me mehr my presence makes u feel naughty & full of masti 😳😉😆& shona darling update karoo...write more buddy me still waiting to read!😆

Originally posted by: meghaparti

nahi nahi mehr dear..mein kuch aur suna nahi chahati hoon..joh aur jitna tumne kaha kafi hai sweetie..i undersand!😆

Originally posted by: meghaparti

mehrrrrr tum bhi nah....😳😆

Originally posted by: mehraan

ok tat comment i did was 4 fun sake bt im goin write smethg real...if tat scene happened ..how it wud b??pls megha dnt cme wid ur graphical stick........pls bear wid me all!

the scene is prc in water n sanyo walks up in the poolroom(dunno wat room it is called)...

as prc stud in the water eyeying sanyo who was helplessly trying to cast her glances elsewhere vich his eyes held her captive 4 so long ...she breathed hardly n was trying 2 walk away from the poolroom.....wen prc stops sanyo by asking her not 2 leave ...sanyos reddened n turned around 2 c prc splashing water 2 himself ...he smiled n stretched his hand outwards 4 sanyo 2 hold it.......she luked at his hand ,his bare wet arm tat stretched 2wards her.......... she shivered at the thought of being in the water wid him........ was captured under his spell as she cudnt move from his glare ,the handsome smile n holded his hand.....splash.....

Wat tuk u so long 2 come in the room...i hve been waiting tat u will turn now n then bt u didnt cme.......

sanyo was surprissed 2 hear tis frm prc...she luked up 2 him...bt her eyes diverted 2 the tiny trinklets of water tat sweeped his chest n his wet hair vich made his moist face mre charismatic..... he luked mre dangerous than ever., making her aware of his alluring masculanity....... she gulped as she saw the tiny droplets gliding through his neck ........ sensing the troubles tat was breaking her inside she closed her eyes fearing tat she wud reveal her utmost innermost desires ........ prc felt a lightening as 2 wat she had done.......how cud she luk so innocent yet so vulnerable??he whispered sanyogita.... open ur eyes...i wud want 2 c myself in those lovely eyes.......sanyo didnt move bt pressed her closed eyes tighter as her heart skipped up faster n faster...... she shuddered inside not tat the water was cold bt his closeness, his bareless image disturbed her.....tensed her senses...... prc softly caressed her right cheek wid his numb thumb n whispered pls sanyogita open ur eyes....

ok rumi itna romantic kafi hai!!bas....chalo i wrote wat i felt!