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mehraan

@mehraan

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Yup dear..u certainly did make me blush by ur comments waise well written!😳😃 A Big hug to u 2 buddy!😳😉😆

thanku dear..ur the only 1 tat mkes me feel so gud😆😆 n naughty

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iqra11

@iqra11

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mehraan
accordg 2 me sanyo will see him bathg n then will walk away coming back wid a bowl...inside she has prepared uptan 4 mr PRC ...she gives 2 prc n tells him ' tumhara rang bahut jal gaya hai...lo besan haldi sandal aur doodh ka uptan lagalo...yeh sab tumhara rang nikharange aur tum se achi khusboo ayegi... din raat jungle mei pare rehte ho...isliye tumhari kya halat hogayi hai???deodarant lagane ki zaroorat nahi hai.🤣 sandal se achi khusboo ayegi🤣
she smiles n walks away!

o wow, this is so hilarious di, i loved the part deodorant lagane ki zaroorat nahi

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iqra11

@iqra11

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: mehraan
FF😆😆😆 ACTUALLY I HAD TIS THOUGHT MAYBE 8 TO 9 MNTHS BACK WEN I ALWAYS WANTED PRC 2 MEET SANYO IN SME OTHER WAY AFTER THE LEAP...THE DIFF SITUATIONS N MY DREAM SWAYMVAR! N ATTIMES I STILL THINK 2 WRITE BT AGAIN IM A BUSY LADY DEAR N I HARDLY CME OL N THEN IT REQUIRES A LOT OF WORK...2 STRT WID THOUGHTS N PENNING ETC ETC N IM IMPATIENT ON THE OTHER HAND😆 4GET IT ...IM HAPPY DISCUSSING N COMMENTG...U ALL GO AHEAD N IF U NED ANY ANY ROMANTIC INPUTS IN UR FF... I WILL BE SURE 2 HELP U...WAISE TELL ME WAT DID U LIKE IN TIS SCENE???I NED 2 KNO UR THOUGHTS ON IT!COMMENT SWEETY!

di one question is sanyo wid prc in the pool in the 2nd paragraph

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kalyani

@anasrashid_fan

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

yup shona............sanyo is with prc in the pool.........how romantic na!!!

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Megha

@meghaparti

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Yup kalyani it would have been more romantic agar serial mein bhi aisa hota!😆 & Is it raelly mehr that by my comments u start feeling gud & naughty!😳😉😆

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iqra11

@iqra11

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

At night PRC is in the pool splashing water to himself. He is only TOPLESS; he has a black embroidered with gold shalwar on him, but is unseen as his bottom half is in the water.

Prithvi : sanyo, kaha ho tum, zara towel dena

Sanyo is standing infront of the mirror, is wearing a blue lahenga. She takes off her dupatta off her head, and rests the duppata on her shoulder and then one by one takes off her jewellery. She can hear Prithvi asking for the towel so she heads towards the cupboard that is near the bedroom door. She takes the towel out and then orders the sainiks to go and rest as they will be tired. Sanyo closes the door and walks straight to the bathroom.
Sanyo : Prithvi, hum towel lekh kar agaye.
Prithvi : tum bi kamaal karthi ho, aise kaise le lu, andar aake do mujhe

Sanyo : likin prithvi...

Prithvi : jaldi karo,

Sanyo comes in and closes her eyes and asks Prithvi where he wants the towel putting. Prithvi who is turned around in the pool turns to Sanyo and looks at her. He is stunned at her beauty without jewellery and thinks how much more beauty has she yet to be revealed. Prithvi is smiling at his lovely Sanyo and continues...

Prithvi : sanyo, ankhe kholo?

Sanyo: nahi, hum aisa nahi kar sakte, hume paap lag jaye ga, jaldi se apna towel lo aur hum jaane do.

Sanyo who is inside the bathroom, near the bathroom door jus stands there with her eyes closed, as someone puts their arms around her waist from back, she feels someone breathing on her neck and slowly their lips touching her bear neck. She opens her eyes and looks in the pool, as Prithvi is nowhere to be seen. She turns around an sees Prithvi standing behind her topless. She is astonished at Prithvi's behaviour and starts to quiver.

Prithvi looks at Sanyo romantically and for quite while they hav an eyelock. They stop looking at each other when Sanyo hears her bedroom door knock. Prithvi who is lost in Sanyo's beauty does not say anything and jus looks at her reactions and thinks to himself kya abhi kisi ko ana zaroori tha?

Sanyo looking at the bathroom door.

Sanyo : prithvi , koi bedroom ke door par hai...lo apna towel lo.......aur hum ja rahe hai

Sanyo pushes prithvi to a side and makes her way to the bathroom door. Sanyo opens the door wen prithvi comes and closes it. He holds Sanyos hand and does not allow her to move.

Sanyo : prithvi, ye kya hai, koi darwaze par hai

Prithvi : tho..

Sanyo : tho ka kya matlab hai....

Prithvi pulls Sanyo's hand to himself and brings her closer to himself.

Prithvi : sanyo, kitni baar tumhe mujhe batana pare ga, ke tumhare har sawal ka jawab nahi hotha?

Sanyo looks at Prithvi and then at the pool when she thinks to herself, that she has to teach prithvi a lesson for not answering her question. Prithvi has his arms around Sanyo's waist and gradually brings his face closer to hers wen Sanyo screams.

Sanyo : prithvi... prithvi...wo dekho... waha saanp/snake hai

Prithvi : yaha kaha se saanp agaya, tum bi na

Sanyo : waha

Prithvi to assure Sanyo goes towards the pool and not aware stands at the edge of it

Prithvi ; yaha tho kuch bhi nahi

Sanyo : prithvi .... wo dekho tumhara peeche...zara sambhal ke

Prithvi turns around and due to the slippery floor, he falls into the pool

Sanyo burst out laughing and continues...dekha, humara pyara bigra raees, akir tum pani mein ghir hi gaye

Prithvi gets his hands and pushes his hair back.

Prithvi : acha, tho ye sab tumne purposely kiya

Sanyo who is laughing and not able to reply nods her head.

Prithvi : acha, bahot hogaya, raat bahot hogaye, mujhe mera towel

Sanyo comes closer to the pool to give the towel to prc wen prc tells her to come closer as he can not get it. As Sanyo comes closer to the pool Prithvi pulls Sanyos arm, and sanyo falls in to the pool

Sanyo : prithvi, ye kaisa mazaak hai, ab hum tumse bilkul baat nahi karege,

Prithvi lifts Sanyo in his arms and tells her that today he will not let her go.

THATS IT, I CAN'T WRITE MORE, IF SOMEONE WANTS TO CONTINUE, THEY ARE MORE THAN WELCOME

HOPE U ENJOY READING IT AND SORRY FOR THE LONG DELAY

LOVE U ALL

Edited by letsrockshona - 16 years ago

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Megha

@meghaparti

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Well Shona dear very nicely written buddy.... yes pls. do continue...but in limits! 😳😉😆

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

di one question is sanyo wid prc in the pool in the 2nd paragraph

are shona...ye kaisa sawaal hai...tats the mst imp part of my scene...tats wat i hve written SPLASH... shes unable 2 resist him n willingly gives her hand 2 him n in the sec para she is the pool wid him!😆

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Yup kalyani it would have been more romantic agar serial mein bhi aisa hota!😆 & Is it raelly mehr that by my comments u start feeling gud & naughty!😳😉😆

ya ur presence makes me feel naughty n full of masti😆😆😆