Discuss no. 12 - Page 5

Originally posted by: urooj101

agree with u dear megha😳 wah wah

Originally posted by: mehraan

ok tat comment i did was 4 fun sake bt im goin write smethg real...if tat scene happened ..how it wud b??pls megha dnt cme wid ur graphical stick........pls bear wid me all!

the scene is prc in water n sanyo walks up in the poolroom(dunno wat room it is called)...

as prc stud in the water eyeying sanyo who was helplessly trying to cast her glances elsewhere vich his eyes held her captive 4 so long ...she breathed hardly n was trying 2 walk away from the poolroom.....wen prc stops sanyo by asking her not 2 leave ...sanyos reddened n turned around 2 c prc splashing water 2 himself ...he smiled n stretched his hand outwards 4 sanyo 2 hold it.......she luked at his hand ,his bare wet arm tat stretched 2wards her.......... she shivered at the thought of being in the water wid him........ was captured under his spell as she cudnt move from his glare ,the handsome smile n holded his hand.....splash.....

Wat tuk u so long 2 come in the room...i hve been waiting tat u will turn now n then bt u didnt cme.......

sanyo was surprissed 2 hear tis frm prc...she luked up 2 him...bt her eyes diverted 2 the tiny trinklets of water tat sweeped his chest n his wet hair vich made his moist face mre charismatic..... he luked mre dangerous than ever., making her aware of his alluring masculanity....... she gulped as she saw the tiny droplets gliding through his neck ........ sensing the troubles tat was breaking her inside she closed her eyes fearing tat she wud reveal her utmost innermost desires ........ prc felt a lightening as 2 wat she had done.......how cud she luk so innocent yet so vulnerable??he whispered sanyogita.... open ur eyes...i wud want 2 c myself in those lovely eyes.......sanyo didnt move bt pressed her closed eyes tighter as her heart skipped up faster n faster...... she shuddered inside not tat the water was cold bt his closeness, his bareless image disturbed her.....tensed her senses...... prc softly caressed her right cheek wid his numb thumb n whispered pls sanyogita open ur eyes....

ok rumi itna romantic kafi hai!!bas....chalo i wrote wat i felt!

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Mehr mein itni bhi buri nahi hoon ki tumhe graphical dande se maroon !😳😆 waise very well written buddy!😉😆 Ohh u made me blush mehr by writing all this 😆

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Mehr mein itni bhi buri nahi hoon ki tumhe graphical dande se maroon !😳😆 waise very well written buddy!😉😆 Ohh u made me blush mehr by writing all this 😆

Originally posted by: urooj101

yaar rumi 😳 saari bataain sab ke samne kaise leekhoon 😉 😆

Originally posted by: mehraan

ok tat comment i did was 4 fun sake bt im goin write smethg real...if tat scene happened ..how it wud b??pls megha dnt cme wid ur graphical stick........pls bear wid me all!

the scene is prc in water n sanyo walks up in the poolroom(dunno wat room it is called)...

as prc stud in the water eyeying sanyo who was helplessly trying to cast her glances elsewhere vich his eyes held her captive 4 so long ...she breathed hardly n was trying 2 walk away from the poolroom.....wen prc stops sanyo by asking her not 2 leave ...sanyos reddened n turned around 2 c prc splashing water 2 himself ...he smiled n stretched his hand outwards 4 sanyo 2 hold it.......she luked at his hand ,his bare wet arm tat stretched 2wards her.......... she shivered at the thought of being in the water wid him........ was captured under his spell as she cudnt move from his glare ,the handsome smile n holded his hand.....splash.....

Wat tuk u so long 2 come in the room...i hve been waiting tat u will turn now n then bt u didnt cme.......

sanyo was surprissed 2 hear tis frm prc...she luked up 2 him...bt her eyes diverted 2 the tiny trinklets of water tat sweeped his chest n his wet hair vich made his moist face mre charismatic..... he luked mre dangerous than ever., making her aware of his alluring masculanity....... she gulped as she saw the tiny droplets gliding through his neck ........ sensing the troubles tat was breaking her inside she closed her eyes fearing tat she wud reveal her utmost innermost desires ........ prc felt a lightening as 2 wat she had done.......how cud she luk so innocent yet so vulnerable??he whispered sanyogita.... open ur eyes...i wud want 2 c myself in those lovely eyes.......sanyo didnt move bt pressed her closed eyes tighter as her heart skipped up faster n faster...... she shuddered inside not tat the water was cold bt his closeness, his bareless image disturbed her.....tensed her senses...... prc softly caressed her right cheek wid his numb thumb n whispered pls sanyogita open ur eyes....

ok rumi itna romantic kafi hai!!bas....chalo i wrote wat i felt!

Originally posted by: mirchy

☺️....U shld start an ff diiii😳...Som1z bein romantic!!!!😉😳☺️....Cool diii!😃🤗
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Originally posted by: mehraan

OMG pehli baar megha rani tumne muje itna khush kiya i want 2 hug u yaar😳...u made my day by sayg tis tat u blushed...i was waitg 4 ur precious comments...i was thinkg how my viewbbe wud react...chalo acha hai u felt smethg aftr readg tis!!😳 blushng says it all!