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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Part 6

Prithvi : kya, chamki...chamki jo sanyogita ke saath thi.....

Prithvi was shocked to hear that it was chamki, sanyo's best friend

Arjun : likin ye bhi tho ho sakta hai ke chamki ke koi majburi ho, mujhe tho yaqeen nahi hotha

Sanjham : chamki aisa nahi kar sakti

Sanjham loved chamki, however he never told her, as his friends were aware of his feelings for Chamki, they did not say anything further and stayed quite to wait for Sanjham's response. As Sanjham was heartbroken he took the payal off Prithvi and walked out of the tent.

Pundir: sanjham, meri baat tho suno

Arjun : jaane do usse Pundir, kuch waqt akela hoga, tho teek hojaye ga

Pundir : ye sari larki ek jaisi hothi hai, patha nahi apna aap ko kya samjhti hai....sab ka dil thor kar inhe sakoon tho miltha hi nahi

As there was silent in the tent Prithvi turned around to Jwala. Jwala was lost in her thoughts.

Prithvi : jwala...kya soch rahi ho

Jwala : yahi ke mein ne ye naam kahi suna hai

Prithvi : saaf saaf kaho ke baat kya hai

Jwala was lost in her thoughts as prithvi continuously asked her. Everyone in the tent was standing and did not know wat to say.

Jwala turned around to Prithvi and told him that nothing can happen.

Arjun : jwala, baat kya hai

Jwala : tum nahi jaante arjun ye naam, chamki, sanyogita....mera matlab kannauj ki rajkumari, ye Udaipur ki rajkumari, udaipur ka rajkumar, chamki, aur sultan, ab kuch nahi ho sakta, sab kuch barbaad hojaye ga. Koi nahi bache ga, ye payal aur samy aur sultania. Ye bahot hi hathernak ....

Jwala coniued mumbling to herself. Prithvi was in shock to wat he was hearing, his sanyogita's name, the girl he loved the most, his beloved. He sat down on the bed lost in her deep thoughts. Prithvi walked out of the tent leaving all behind. As jwala stopped him.........

Jwala : prithvi, kaha ja rahe ho

Prithvi walked off leaving a unanswered Jwala behind.

Jwala : Prithvi .....

Arjun : Jwala....jaaane do Prithvi ko....usse thore waqt akela rehne dho

Jwala : likin baat kya hai

Outside the tent Prithvi went and sat in the place where he could see the magnificent moon. The atmosphere was windy. He was sitting at the side of the river. Splish, splash went the water, revolving in small circles, as Prithvi watched. He looked up, up the moon, as he did for the past years. Thinking to himself why he never expressed his feelings to Sanyogita, what stopped him, why did Sanyogita jus consider him as a friend and not more than friend, and after all why she left him all alone to confront the world. As he was facing towards the moon with his eyes closed, he felt as someone put his hand on his shoulder. Prithvi opened his eyes to see Arjun besides him.

Arjun : kya baat hai Prithvi..... itne saal guzr gaye aur hum dhono dosto ko saath sit karne a mauka hi nahi mila.

Prithvi showed a small smile to Arjun and put his hand on Arjun's shoulder.

Arjun looked at the river and spoke to Prithvi

Arjun: Pyaar karthe ho uss se...

Prithvi stayed quiet as he knew what his friend was talking about. He always recommended Prithvi to tell Sanyo that he loves her more than himself and cannot stay without her..But Prithvi never did.

Prithvi : ab ye sab baat karne ka kya faida hai

As Arjun was about to assure Prithvi, someone spoke from the back.

WO TUMHARI HAI BETA..... SIRF TUMHARI.....kal bhi tumharii thi....aaj bhi tumhari hai,....aur hamesha tumhari hi rahi gi....wo aeygi,....jaha tumne 4 saal uss ka intezaar kar liya.... waha tum kuch der aur intezaar karlo....mein bhavishiyani bathathi hu, aur tumhari tumhe batha hi di.....is baar usse jaane math dena...apne pyaar ka izhaar zaroor karna...haan apne pyaar ko pana thora mushkil ho ga....likin tum tho prithviraj chauhan ho....jo prithviraj chauhan ne sab ka dil jeet liya itni kam umar mein...wo ek rajkumari ka dil nahi jeet sakta. WO TUMHARI HAI...AUR USS PE TUMHARA HI HAQ HAI

Both friends were amazed to what they heard.

Arjun : dekha prithvi...sanyogita sirf tumhari hai...himat math harna dost.

As Arjun assured Prithvi Sikander came and told Prithvi that he heard from the villagers that Pundir and Jwala, have caught a thief with the gold murthi who does not seem to belong from Hindustan. Hearing this Prithvi and arjun got up and went with him. Hoping that Pundir and Jwala are fine.

In the village all the villagers are shouting maro maro, usse maro, and all are heading towards the sultans man. The sultans man is standing outside the temple. Pundir and Jwala are standing and are trying to stop the villagers to come to the sultans aadmi. Seeing this Prithvi shouts...ye kya ho raha hai

One of the villager continues..Maharaj aap nahi jaante iss aadmi ne shree mandir ki murthi churay thi, puchiye iss se, wo sone ki murthi jo maharaj someshwar ne iss goa ke liye banvai thi.

Hearing this Prithvi's anger increases and walks towards the man. Prithvi was standing infront of the man. The man had the gold murthi in his hands with a letter in his hand.

Prithvi : kaun ho tum?

The sultans man : aap ko sultan aur sultania ki taraf se salaam...mein kadar khan hu...sultan ka haas aadmi...ye murthi mere dosto ne shree mandir se churay thi....iss rakhiye...aur ye chiti/letter...sultan aur sultania...aur unki has dost se aap ke liye....ijazat ho...hum ja rahe hai

Pundir : kya lagta hai tumhe...tumhe hum sab aise hi jaane de ge

Kadar Khan started to laugh...kya lagta hai tumhe...mein yaha koi shauk se nahi aya....mera rasta chor do

Prithvi : akir sultan hai kaun, aur cowards jaise Hindustan par hamla kar kyu raha hai...

Kadar Khan : bare bare...hindustani humse dar gaye hai...aur tum

Prithvi : mein prithviraj chauhan hu...ek sacha rajput jo kisi se nahi dhartha...apni mauth se bhi nahi

Kadar Khan : acha...prithviraj chauhan....jitne gao tum bacha sakte ho bachao..

As he is laughing he gets on his horse and is about to ride off, when Sikander stops him.

Prithvi : sikander, jaane do usse..kaha tak jaye ga... prithviraj chauhan ki nazro se bach kar thori na jaye ga


The mysterious night passes, leaving prithvi's mission more complicated and very hard to resolve. Reading the letter, he plans to move ahead and go to the other village closeby to see if everything is alright.

The next morning Prithvi wakes up and offers his prayers jus like his father did, keeping in mind what his father taught him.

Prithvi and his friends get dressed and are ready to leave, when the mahamantri of the village comes to Prithvi.

Mahamantri : humme acha lage ga ke aap agar sone ki murthi shree mandir mein rakhe, jaise maharaj someshwar ne kiya tha.

Hearing this Prithvi does not refuse and keeps the murthi in the temple, as all the villagers shout Maharaj Prithviraj chauhan ki jai!!!

He goes and meets Jwala and tells her that he is leaving. Prithvi's friends are outside waiting for him.

Prithvi and Jwala are alone and are inside Jwala's home.

Prithvi : tho mein ja raha hu

Jwala : saath chalu

Prithvi smiles at her and tells her that she is a girl, and a girl would not look good going with him to fulfil his mission.

Jwala : acha tho ye baath hai.....buliye math maharaj hum aap se kam nahi

Prithvi is facing down and Jwala continues....kya baath hai

Prithvi lets out a great sigh and says ...kuch nahi....acha mein ja raha hu

Jwala : apna hiyal rakna

Prithvi gets on his horse and rides off along with his friends.


As per as Sultan and sultania's and their special friends plan, Prithvi is going to the village that will be next attacked.

"acha, tho prithvi yaha akir aa hi raha hai"

"Chalo acha hai, dekhte hai ke akir prithvraj chauhan akir hai kya cheez"

Both the men laugh out loud, when the sultan's special friend reminds them...

"magar ye math bhulna, ke prithvi aur uske dosto ko koi injury nahi pochana."


Prithvi and his friends are few miles away from the village where they get attacked by the sultans aadmi. Prithvi and his friends fight bravely with the men.

CLING, CLANG, the swords hit with each other trying to defend their opponents. THASH, CLASH makes the sound of the sword hitting against each other. Prithvi is fighting tremendously with his opponent when someone comes and pushes Pundir down. Prithvi runs to Pundir and sees that his friend is about to get strike into his stomach with the sword when he brings his sword and swings the attackers sword away. All Prithvi's friends are on the ground and are unable to get up due to the energy they have wasted in futile. The sultans aadmi start laughing at Prithvi who is all alone ready to fight. They are all about to stab Prithvi when two swords come and clash with the sultan's men's sword saving Prithvi.


As all the sultans men are on the floor dead, only one is saved who is hard to defeat. Prithvi realises that the two people who saved him are 2 girls. Prithvi jumps in the fight and defeats the one and only attacker.

The attacker has a green turban on covering its face with a brown cloth.

The 2 girls who have masked their faces with a black cloth take off their black clothes.

Arjun and the rest get up and stand besides Prithvi.

Arjun : Payal....tum yaha...aur jwala...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho??????????

Payal who is in tears walks towards the sultan's special friend and starts talking.....

Payal : ye tum kya kar rahi ho...aur kyu...tumhe ye sab kar ke mile ga kya

Prithvi : Rajkumari Payal...kya aap isse jaanti hai????

Jwala : prithvi tum nahi jaante ye hai kaun...

Jwala stands besides the unmasked special friend and takes off her cloth that has covered her face.

Behind the mask everyone see a pretty girl, with big brown eyes. Her brown hair tied back in a long plait.

Payal : chamki..

Chamki : kya baat hai, chamki ko kaise pachana...waise achi talwar bazi kar leti ho

Payal : chamki, mujhe patha hai tum sanyogita

Chamki raises her arm indicating Payal that she does not want to hear anything.

Chamki : kuch nahi suna mujhe....

Prithvi : chamki...tumne ye sab kyu kiya

Chamki : kyu Maharaj, agar tum Hindustani sab ka dil dhuka sakte ho....sab ko dard aur takleef de sakte ho...tho ye uss ke saamne tho kuch nahi hai...

Payal : meri baat suno chamki, mujhe patha hai uss raat ka dard tumhe aaj bhi hai

Chamki : kis dard ki baat kar rahi ho tum...5 saal pehle wala dard,...ya phir wo dard jo sanyo ne mujhe diya...ya phir wo dard jo ek maa par hai, jo ek zinda laash ban gaye hai aur apni beti ke lotne ka intezaar kar rahi hai...wo dard jo ek beta apne hi desh ke hilaaf hagaya hai...wo dard jo ek dost ne apne dost ko diya hai

Payal: chamki, iss mein...

As Payal is about to say something; Chamki who is standing at the edge of the cliff top jumps down.

Payal : chhaaammmmmmmkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


Payal who is sitting at the side of the cliff top is crying. Jwala runs to Payal.

Jwala : payal...apne aap ko sambhalo

Jwala turns around and does not see Prithvi and his friends, she wonders where they ave gone.

Payal : Jwala, mein ...mein ne iss mein kya kiya,...us raat ke haadse ke baad...sanyogita kaha ho tum, kyun apni didi ko chor kar chali gaye ho,

At that moment of time Prithvi and his friends appear and look down the cliff top.

Arjun : sikander... iss clif top ke niche tho pani hai, aur mein ne dekha ke chamki pani me jab jump kiya, tho kinari ke uss par sultan ke aadmi kare huwe the.

Sikander : iss ka matlab hai chamki bach gaye

Prithvi walks to Payal and gets her up. Prithvi always considered Payal as his small sister and gave her love like he did to Pratha.

Prithvi : Payal...chamki ko kuch nahi huwa

Payal : bhaiya....

Payal hugged Prithvi, prithvi hugged payal back as payal was crying, she continuously sed why sanyo left her all alone and it's not her fault.


Jwala came upto Prithvi and told him that Payal and her will be wid him till their mission does not get completed.

Payal broke from Prithvi's hug and sed :haan, bhaiya....hum aap ke saath rahe ge

Prithvi did not want to refuse her so he agreed

Sanjham : payal, tum tho jaanti hogi ke sultan kaun hai

Payal : haan. ...likin ye sachai aap ko koi aur bathai ga

Chand and Pundir: kaun??????????

Prithvi looked at Payal and asked her to tell but she refused and told her that someone else knows the truth better than her.

At that time they heard a girl shouting....."bachao, arre....koi hai....meri dost pani mein hai"

Sikander came running and told them that a girl is in the water and she can not swim

The girl shouted "arre Sanyogita, mein aa rahi hu"

Prithvi: Sanyogita!!!!!!!!!!!

He looked down from the cliff top and saw a girl seeking for help and another girl in the water

"SANYOGITA", prithvi shouted. He ran to the other girl, his heart beating fast,

"Arre, bhai saab meri dost pani mein haii"

He turned around and jumped in the water. Prithvi swam fastly hoping it was his Sanyogita. He grabbed hold of her, put his arms around her and lifted her up in his arms, holding her tightly.

Everyone gathered at the side of the river standing near the other girl.

Payal : sanyogita

She turned around and looked at the other girl.."kya ye rajkumari sanyogita"

"Arre..haan ye princess hai"

Payal : princess, meri behen..sanyogita

wow shona.Wonderful👏.Iye chamki kaya kar rehi hain😲.Payal and jwala are so brave👏😊.I like them very much😊.Tumne sanyogita ka entry to dikhaya lekin phir se ek suspense banake chora hain.iye suspense kab khulega.I'm dying😊.Pls post next update soon.Aur sanyo ka entry puri taraha se dikhao.
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Posted: 16 years ago

this part is for especially raki as raki wanted to read sanyo's entry


Part 7-

Prithvi was in the river trying to get hold of Sanyogita; he lifted her up in his arms and held her tightly, and walked towards the land where everyone was standing.

The girl who was with Sanyogita started to shout at the other side of the river....Rupali...arre yaha aao. Sanyogita yaha hai

Arjun : prithvi, sambhal ke

Prithvi holding Sanyo came on the land with so much difficulty due to the wet clothes. He got on the land and put Sanyo down on the ground. Sanyo's eyes were closed. As prithvi put her down Payal sat near Sanyo holding Sanyo's hand and rubbing them. With her hands she removed Sanyo strands of hair from her face to see her young sister's beautiful and innocent face. She had the royal looks that made her stand out and look like a unique princess sleeping. Prithvi was amazed to see her beauty as she was well known for her beauty and charisma in Kannauj. He kept his eyes fixed on Sanyo's face. Sanyo was wearing a pink dress with silver embroidery.

The girl who shouted for help moved everyone to a side and sat near Sanyo...."arre, sanyogita, princess..ankhe kholo...rupali....arre princess ankhe kholo"

Payal : sanyogita, ankhe kholo

Rupali came running to Sanyogita and sat near her

Rupali: tum tho khush hona Sammy.....kya zaroorat thi...

Sammy : tum chup karo

Rupali : isse utao

Sammy : princess, please open ur eyes

Sanjham : ye kis zubaan mein rajkumari sanyogita se baat kar rahe hai

Pundir : mujhe kya patha

Sikander : prithvi wo green leafs kaha se laye, jo rajkumari sanyogita ko hosh me laye ge

As everyone were worried about Sanyogita not opening her eyes were deciding to bring the green leaves to make Sanyo wake up or not.

Jwala : ab kya kare....

Everyone was looking at Prithvi and then Sanyo.

Payal : sanyogita...bhagwan ke waaste ankhe kholo, dekho didi yaha hai, ek baar sanyo ankhe kholo, tum agaye ho, sab kuch teek hojaye ga

Rupali : kya aap sanyogita ko jaanti hai?

Payal : yeh meri behen hai

Rupal and Sammy learnt that Payal is Sanyo's sister; they told everyone how the three of them landed here.

Rupali : ye sab kuch Sammy ki waja se huwa

Sammy : chup karo, sanyo ke saath aia ho tho mein soch hi nahi sakti

Pundir : dekha ye saari...

Arjun : ye saari larki ek jaisi hothi hai, ye kehna chate the tum

Jwala noticed that Prithvi just looked at Sanyo with so much love and affection and did not say anything.

Sikander : tum sab chup karo ge.

Everyone stood quietly looking at Sanyo who did not move at all, as someone came close by in green clothes and put green leaves towards Sanyo's nose to make her sniff it and make her wake up. Sanyo sniffed the leaves and gradually started to move. Due to the coldness of the water her hands started to tremble and all her body shiver. All were shocked to see that the person who made Sanyo come to conscious was no other than her best friend Chamki.

Sanjham : chamki, tum yaha se jao

Jwala : chamki!!!!!!!

Chamki did not bother what anyone said and looked at Sanyo with tears in her eyes. She took the locket off that was around her neck and put it in Sanyo's hand; indicating Chamki and Sanyo's friendship.

Sanyo felt the locket and held it in her hand and gradually opened her eyes. As she opened her eyes she called out for Chamki's name. As chamki knew that Sanyo is alright she got up and stood with the rest of the sultan's people, she then got on the horse and then rode off. Everyone was surprised to see Sanyo's blue eyes, and were thinking how much more beautiful she can get. Prithvi was stunned to see her prettiness.

Sanyo : chamki...chamki... chamki kaha hai?

She looked at Sammy and then Rupali. She got up with the help up Payal.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

this part is for especially raki as raki wanted to read sanyo's entry


Part 7-

Prithvi was in the river trying to get hold of Sanyogita; he lifted her up in his arms and held her tightly, and walked towards the land where everyone was standing.

The girl who was with Sanyogita started to shout at the other side of the river....Rupali...arre yaha aao. Sanyogita yaha hai

Arjun : prithvi, sambhal ke

Prithvi holding Sanyo came on the land with so much difficulty due to the wet clothes. He got on the land and put Sanyo down on the ground. Sanyo's eyes were closed. As prithvi put her down Payal sat near Sanyo holding Sanyo's hand and rubbing them. With her hands she removed Sanyo strands of hair from her face to see her young sister's beautiful and innocent face. She had the royal looks that made her stand out and look like a unique princess sleeping. Prithvi was amazed to see her beauty as she was well known for her beauty and charisma in Kannauj. He kept his eyes fixed on Sanyo's face. Sanyo was wearing a pink dress with silver embroidery.

The girl who shouted for help moved everyone to a side and sat near Sanyo...."arre, sanyogita, princess..ankhe kholo...rupali....arre princess ankhe kholo"

Payal : sanyogita, ankhe kholo

Rupali came running to Sanyogita and sat near her

Rupali: tum tho khush hona Sammy.....kya zaroorat thi...

Sammy : tum chup karo

Rupali : isse utao

Sammy : princess, please open ur eyes

Sanjham : ye kis zubaan mein rajkumari sanyogita se baat kar rahe hai

Pundir : mujhe kya patha

Sikander : prithvi wo green leafs kaha se laye, jo rajkumari sanyogita ko hosh me laye ge

As everyone were worried about Sanyogita not opening her eyes were deciding to bring the green leaves to make Sanyo wake up or not.

Jwala : ab kya kare....

Everyone was looking at Prithvi and then Sanyo.

Payal : sanyogita...bhagwan ke waaste ankhe kholo, dekho didi yaha hai, ek baar sanyo ankhe kholo, tum agaye ho, sab kuch teek hojaye ga

Rupali : kya aap sanyogita ko jaanti hai?

Payal : yeh meri behen hai

Rupal and Sammy learnt that Payal is Sanyo's sister; they told everyone how the three of them landed here.

Rupali : ye sab kuch Sammy ki waja se huwa

Sammy : chup karo, sanyo ke saath aia ho tho mein soch hi nahi sakti

Pundir : dekha ye saari...

Arjun : ye saari larki ek jaisi hothi hai, ye kehna chate the tum

Jwala noticed that Prithvi just looked at Sanyo with so much love and affection and did not say anything.

Sikander : tum sab chup karo ge.

Everyone stood quietly looking at Sanyo who did not move at all, as someone came close by in green clothes and put green leaves towards Sanyo's nose to make her sniff it and make her wake up. Sanyo sniffed the leaves and gradually started to move. Due to the coldness of the water her hands started to tremble and all her body shiver. All were shocked to see that the person who made Sanyo come to conscious was no other than her best friend Chamki.

Sanjham : chamki, tum yaha se jao

Jwala : chamki!!!!!!!

Chamki did not bother what anyone said and looked at Sanyo with tears in her eyes. She took the locket off that was around her neck and put it in Sanyo's hand; indicating Chamki and Sanyo's friendship.

Sanyo felt the locket and held it in her hand and gradually opened her eyes. As she opened her eyes she called out for Chamki's name. As chamki knew that Sanyo is alright she got up and stood with the rest of the sultan's people, she then got on the horse and then rode off. Everyone was surprised to see Sanyo's blue eyes, and were thinking how much more beautiful she can get. Prithvi was stunned to see her prettiness.

Sanyo : chamki...chamki... chamki kaha hai?

She looked at Sammy and then Rupali. She got up with the help up Payal.

Thanks u shona for this wonderful update,Sanyo's entry,and u written this part specially for me.lots of love,hugs🤗 and kissed for u shona.
U wrote this pary very well👏.I'll give u lots of hug dear.
Prc is our and specaially sanyo's hero.He save sanyo and he looks sanyo's beauty😳.ohoh...😳.Iye chamki ko main samajhte samajhte pagal ho jaungi😕.Pundir ka Girls se kaya problem hain😆.Oh shona very good.I'm waiting for this very eagerly and u wrote this part thank u.
Now, waiting for next part.Post next part soon dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Part 6

Prithvi : kya, chamki...chamki jo sanyogita ke saath thi.....

Prithvi was shocked to hear that it was chamki, sanyo's best friend

Arjun : likin ye bhi tho ho sakta hai ke chamki ke koi majburi ho, mujhe tho yaqeen nahi hotha

Sanjham : chamki aisa nahi kar sakti

Sanjham loved chamki, however he never told her, as his friends were aware of his feelings for Chamki, they did not say anything further and stayed quite to wait for Sanjham's response. As Sanjham was heartbroken he took the payal off Prithvi and walked out of the tent.

Pundir: sanjham, meri baat tho suno

Arjun : jaane do usse Pundir, kuch waqt akela hoga, tho teek hojaye ga

Pundir : ye sari larki ek jaisi hothi hai, patha nahi apna aap ko kya samjhti hai....sab ka dil thor kar inhe sakoon tho miltha hi nahi

As there was silent in the tent Prithvi turned around to Jwala. Jwala was lost in her thoughts.

Prithvi : jwala...kya soch rahi ho

Jwala : yahi ke mein ne ye naam kahi suna hai

Prithvi : saaf saaf kaho ke baat kya hai

Jwala was lost in her thoughts as prithvi continuously asked her. Everyone in the tent was standing and did not know wat to say.

Jwala turned around to Prithvi and told him that nothing can happen.

Arjun : jwala, baat kya hai

Jwala : tum nahi jaante arjun ye naam, chamki, sanyogita....mera matlab kannauj ki rajkumari, ye Udaipur ki rajkumari, udaipur ka rajkumar, chamki, aur sultan, ab kuch nahi ho sakta, sab kuch barbaad hojaye ga. Koi nahi bache ga, ye payal aur samy aur sultania. Ye bahot hi hathernak ....

Jwala coniued mumbling to herself. Prithvi was in shock to wat he was hearing, his sanyogita's name, the girl he loved the most, his beloved. He sat down on the bed lost in her deep thoughts. Prithvi walked out of the tent leaving all behind. As jwala stopped him.........

Jwala : prithvi, kaha ja rahe ho

Prithvi walked off leaving a unanswered Jwala behind.

Jwala : Prithvi .....

Arjun : Jwala....jaaane do Prithvi ko....usse thore waqt akela rehne dho

Jwala : likin baat kya hai

Outside the tent Prithvi went and sat in the place where he could see the magnificent moon. The atmosphere was windy. He was sitting at the side of the river. Splish, splash went the water, revolving in small circles, as Prithvi watched. He looked up, up the moon, as he did for the past years. Thinking to himself why he never expressed his feelings to Sanyogita, what stopped him, why did Sanyogita jus consider him as a friend and not more than friend, and after all why she left him all alone to confront the world. As he was facing towards the moon with his eyes closed, he felt as someone put his hand on his shoulder. Prithvi opened his eyes to see Arjun besides him.

Arjun : kya baat hai Prithvi..... itne saal guzr gaye aur hum dhono dosto ko saath sit karne a mauka hi nahi mila.

Prithvi showed a small smile to Arjun and put his hand on Arjun's shoulder.

Arjun looked at the river and spoke to Prithvi

Arjun: Pyaar karthe ho uss se...

Prithvi stayed quiet as he knew what his friend was talking about. He always recommended Prithvi to tell Sanyo that he loves her more than himself and cannot stay without her..But Prithvi never did.

Prithvi : ab ye sab baat karne ka kya faida hai

As Arjun was about to assure Prithvi, someone spoke from the back.

WO TUMHARI HAI BETA..... SIRF TUMHARI.....kal bhi tumharii thi....aaj bhi tumhari hai,....aur hamesha tumhari hi rahi gi....wo aeygi,....jaha tumne 4 saal uss ka intezaar kar liya.... waha tum kuch der aur intezaar karlo....mein bhavishiyani bathathi hu, aur tumhari tumhe batha hi di.....is baar usse jaane math dena...apne pyaar ka izhaar zaroor karna...haan apne pyaar ko pana thora mushkil ho ga....likin tum tho prithviraj chauhan ho....jo prithviraj chauhan ne sab ka dil jeet liya itni kam umar mein...wo ek rajkumari ka dil nahi jeet sakta. WO TUMHARI HAI...AUR USS PE TUMHARA HI HAQ HAI

Both friends were amazed to what they heard.

Arjun : dekha prithvi...sanyogita sirf tumhari hai...himat math harna dost.

As Arjun assured Prithvi Sikander came and told Prithvi that he heard from the villagers that Pundir and Jwala, have caught a thief with the gold murthi who does not seem to belong from Hindustan. Hearing this Prithvi and arjun got up and went with him. Hoping that Pundir and Jwala are fine.

In the village all the villagers are shouting maro maro, usse maro, and all are heading towards the sultans man. The sultans man is standing outside the temple. Pundir and Jwala are standing and are trying to stop the villagers to come to the sultans aadmi. Seeing this Prithvi shouts...ye kya ho raha hai

One of the villager continues..Maharaj aap nahi jaante iss aadmi ne shree mandir ki murthi churay thi, puchiye iss se, wo sone ki murthi jo maharaj someshwar ne iss goa ke liye banvai thi.

Hearing this Prithvi's anger increases and walks towards the man. Prithvi was standing infront of the man. The man had the gold murthi in his hands with a letter in his hand.

Prithvi : kaun ho tum?

The sultans man : aap ko sultan aur sultania ki taraf se salaam...mein kadar khan hu...sultan ka haas aadmi...ye murthi mere dosto ne shree mandir se churay thi....iss rakhiye...aur ye chiti/letter...sultan aur sultania...aur unki has dost se aap ke liye....ijazat ho...hum ja rahe hai

Pundir : kya lagta hai tumhe...tumhe hum sab aise hi jaane de ge

Kadar Khan started to laugh...kya lagta hai tumhe...mein yaha koi shauk se nahi aya....mera rasta chor do

Prithvi : akir sultan hai kaun, aur cowards jaise Hindustan par hamla kar kyu raha hai...

Kadar Khan : bare bare...hindustani humse dar gaye hai...aur tum

Prithvi : mein prithviraj chauhan hu...ek sacha rajput jo kisi se nahi dhartha...apni mauth se bhi nahi

Kadar Khan : acha...prithviraj chauhan....jitne gao tum bacha sakte ho bachao..

As he is laughing he gets on his horse and is about to ride off, when Sikander stops him.

Prithvi : sikander, jaane do usse..kaha tak jaye ga... prithviraj chauhan ki nazro se bach kar thori na jaye ga


The mysterious night passes, leaving prithvi's mission more complicated and very hard to resolve. Reading the letter, he plans to move ahead and go to the other village closeby to see if everything is alright.

The next morning Prithvi wakes up and offers his prayers jus like his father did, keeping in mind what his father taught him.

Prithvi and his friends get dressed and are ready to leave, when the mahamantri of the village comes to Prithvi.

Mahamantri : humme acha lage ga ke aap agar sone ki murthi shree mandir mein rakhe, jaise maharaj someshwar ne kiya tha.

Hearing this Prithvi does not refuse and keeps the murthi in the temple, as all the villagers shout Maharaj Prithviraj chauhan ki jai!!!

He goes and meets Jwala and tells her that he is leaving. Prithvi's friends are outside waiting for him.

Prithvi and Jwala are alone and are inside Jwala's home.

Prithvi : tho mein ja raha hu

Jwala : saath chalu

Prithvi smiles at her and tells her that she is a girl, and a girl would not look good going with him to fulfil his mission.

Jwala : acha tho ye baath hai.....buliye math maharaj hum aap se kam nahi

Prithvi is facing down and Jwala continues....kya baath hai

Prithvi lets out a great sigh and says ...kuch nahi....acha mein ja raha hu

Jwala : apna hiyal rakna

Prithvi gets on his horse and rides off along with his friends.


As per as Sultan and sultania's and their special friends plan, Prithvi is going to the village that will be next attacked.

"acha, tho prithvi yaha akir aa hi raha hai"

"Chalo acha hai, dekhte hai ke akir prithvraj chauhan akir hai kya cheez"

Both the men laugh out loud, when the sultan's special friend reminds them...

"magar ye math bhulna, ke prithvi aur uske dosto ko koi injury nahi pochana."


Prithvi and his friends are few miles away from the village where they get attacked by the sultans aadmi. Prithvi and his friends fight bravely with the men.

CLING, CLANG, the swords hit with each other trying to defend their opponents. THASH, CLASH makes the sound of the sword hitting against each other. Prithvi is fighting tremendously with his opponent when someone comes and pushes Pundir down. Prithvi runs to Pundir and sees that his friend is about to get strike into his stomach with the sword when he brings his sword and swings the attackers sword away. All Prithvi's friends are on the ground and are unable to get up due to the energy they have wasted in futile. The sultans aadmi start laughing at Prithvi who is all alone ready to fight. They are all about to stab Prithvi when two swords come and clash with the sultan's men's sword saving Prithvi.


As all the sultans men are on the floor dead, only one is saved who is hard to defeat. Prithvi realises that the two people who saved him are 2 girls. Prithvi jumps in the fight and defeats the one and only attacker.

The attacker has a green turban on covering its face with a brown cloth.

The 2 girls who have masked their faces with a black cloth take off their black clothes.

Arjun and the rest get up and stand besides Prithvi.

Arjun : Payal....tum yaha...aur jwala...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho??????????

Payal who is in tears walks towards the sultan's special friend and starts talking.....

Payal : ye tum kya kar rahi ho...aur kyu...tumhe ye sab kar ke mile ga kya

Prithvi : Rajkumari Payal...kya aap isse jaanti hai????

Jwala : prithvi tum nahi jaante ye hai kaun...

Jwala stands besides the unmasked special friend and takes off her cloth that has covered her face.

Behind the mask everyone see a pretty girl, with big brown eyes. Her brown hair tied back in a long plait.

Payal : chamki..

Chamki : kya baat hai, chamki ko kaise pachana...waise achi talwar bazi kar leti ho

Payal : chamki, mujhe patha hai tum sanyogita

Chamki raises her arm indicating Payal that she does not want to hear anything.

Chamki : kuch nahi suna mujhe....

Prithvi : chamki...tumne ye sab kyu kiya

Chamki : kyu Maharaj, agar tum Hindustani sab ka dil dhuka sakte ho....sab ko dard aur takleef de sakte ho...tho ye uss ke saamne tho kuch nahi hai...

Payal : meri baat suno chamki, mujhe patha hai uss raat ka dard tumhe aaj bhi hai

Chamki : kis dard ki baat kar rahi ho tum...5 saal pehle wala dard,...ya phir wo dard jo sanyo ne mujhe diya...ya phir wo dard jo ek maa par hai, jo ek zinda laash ban gaye hai aur apni beti ke lotne ka intezaar kar rahi hai...wo dard jo ek beta apne hi desh ke hilaaf hagaya hai...wo dard jo ek dost ne apne dost ko diya hai

Payal: chamki, iss mein...

As Payal is about to say something; Chamki who is standing at the edge of the cliff top jumps down.

Payal : chhaaammmmmmmkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


Payal who is sitting at the side of the cliff top is crying. Jwala runs to Payal.

Jwala : payal...apne aap ko sambhalo

Jwala turns around and does not see Prithvi and his friends, she wonders where they ave gone.

Payal : Jwala, mein ...mein ne iss mein kya kiya,...us raat ke haadse ke baad...sanyogita kaha ho tum, kyun apni didi ko chor kar chali gaye ho,

At that moment of time Prithvi and his friends appear and look down the cliff top.

Arjun : sikander... iss clif top ke niche tho pani hai, aur mein ne dekha ke chamki pani me jab jump kiya, tho kinari ke uss par sultan ke aadmi kare huwe the.

Sikander : iss ka matlab hai chamki bach gaye

Prithvi walks to Payal and gets her up. Prithvi always considered Payal as his small sister and gave her love like he did to Pratha.

Prithvi : Payal...chamki ko kuch nahi huwa

Payal : bhaiya....

Payal hugged Prithvi, prithvi hugged payal back as payal was crying, she continuously sed why sanyo left her all alone and it's not her fault.


Jwala came upto Prithvi and told him that Payal and her will be wid him till their mission does not get completed.

Payal broke from Prithvi's hug and sed :haan, bhaiya....hum aap ke saath rahe ge

Prithvi did not want to refuse her so he agreed

Sanjham : payal, tum tho jaanti hogi ke sultan kaun hai

Payal : haan. ...likin ye sachai aap ko koi aur bathai ga

Chand and Pundir: kaun??????????

Prithvi looked at Payal and asked her to tell but she refused and told her that someone else knows the truth better than her.

At that time they heard a girl shouting....."bachao, arre....koi hai....meri dost pani mein hai"

Sikander came running and told them that a girl is in the water and she can not swim

The girl shouted "arre Sanyogita, mein aa rahi hu"

Prithvi: Sanyogita!!!!!!!!!!!

He looked down from the cliff top and saw a girl seeking for help and another girl in the water

"SANYOGITA", prithvi shouted. He ran to the other girl, his heart beating fast,

"Arre, bhai saab meri dost pani mein haii"

He turned around and jumped in the water. Prithvi swam fastly hoping it was his Sanyogita. He grabbed hold of her, put his arms around her and lifted her up in his arms, holding her tightly.

Everyone gathered at the side of the river standing near the other girl.

Payal : sanyogita

She turned around and looked at the other girl.."kya ye rajkumari sanyogita"

"Arre..haan ye princess hai"

Payal : princess, meri behen..sanyogita

wow shona dear............superb update👏👏n thanks 4 sanyo's entry.............must say ur story's concept is really very interesting👏👏well done.
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wow superb update dear shona👏hugs n kisses 4 u darling😳😳😆...........well done👏
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wow superb update dear shona di👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

wow shona.Wonderful👏.Iye chamki kaya kar rehi hain😲.Payal and jwala are so brave👏😊.I like them very much😊.Tumne sanyogita ka entry to dikhaya lekin phir se ek suspense banake chora hain.iye suspense kab khulega.I'm dying😊.Pls post next update soon.Aur sanyo ka entry puri taraha se dikhao.

thanks soo much raki for ur lovely comments, tumne hume khush kardiya hai
as u were eagerly waiting for sanyogita's entry, i wrote the next part especially for u
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Originally posted by: rumela711926

wow superb update dear shona di👏

thanks rumi ji
luv u loadzzzz
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Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Thanks u shona for this wonderful update,Sanyo's entry,and u written this part specially for me.lots of love,hugs🤗 and kissed for u shona.
U wrote this pary very well👏.I'll give u lots of hug dear.
Prc is our and specaially sanyo's hero.He save sanyo and he looks sanyo's beauty😳.ohoh...😳.Iye chamki ko main samajhte samajhte pagal ho jaungi😕.Pundir ka Girls se kaya problem hain😆.Oh shona very good.I'm waiting for this very eagerly and u wrote this part thank u.
Now, waiting for next part.Post next part soon dear.

thanks raki..luv u loadzzz......as i left part 6 as a suspense u sed that i always leave my updates at a suspense so i decided to write this part especially for u
Pundir ko tho tum jaanti ho, jab dekho girls se problem hothi hai, but no problem payal will sort him out
aur rahi baat chamki ki she hates sanyo for leaving her and she loves her as sanyo is her best friend
thanks for ur lovely comments
luv u loads
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Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

wow superb update dear shona👏hugs n kisses 4 u darling😳😳😆...........well done👏

thanks kali di, was a pleasure reading ur lovely comments
hugs and kisses, and loadz of love to u
thanks for taking ur time out to read my update

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