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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Ha main janti hoon shona , intezar ki phal meetha hota hain.
par tumhara ff ka part 6+7 parne ke baad to, mein intezar nehi kar sakti.


agla post abhi bhi tayar ho raha hai
well tell wat do u want to see in my fanfic love trialngle of prc and sanyo and jwala,
friendship of sanyo and chamki
relation of payal and sanyo
love of payal and pundir
chand and rupali ka love
sanjham and chamki ka love
vikram entering wid indravati
jaichand telling sanyo to come home
jwala dying
ya phir sultan aur sultania aur un ka haas dost
Edited by letsrockshona - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona


agla post abhi bhi tayar ho raha hai
well tell wat do u want to see in my fanfic love trialngle of prc and sanyo and jwala,
friendship of sanyo and chamki
relation of payal and sanyo
love of payal and pundir
chand and rupali ka love
sanjham and chamki ka love
vikram entering wid indravati
jaichand telling sanyo to come home
jwala dying
ya phir sultan aur sultania aur un ka haas dost

Pm u shona.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Part 4
In the court room Maharaj Anangpal, Sikander and Prithvi's freinds are awaiting for Prithvi. Prithvi comes in....
Maharaj Anangpal : Prithvi, bahot hi buri habar hai, jaichand bhi yaha nahi hai, isliye ye kaam tumhe hi karna pare ga, delhi ke south district ke bahar mein bahot hi bari problem agaye hai, waha ek mandir mein bhagwan ki murthi kisi sultan ke aadmi ne mandir ki murthi chura li hai, wo murthi sone ki bani hai aur waha ke log us mandir ko bahot hi manthe hai. Hum udaipur ki madat tho le hi nahi sakte kyun ke udaipur ke maharaj .....delhi, ajmer ya kannauj ka saath kabhi nahi de ge aur agar jaichand ko patha chala ke humne udaipur ki madat li tho wo naraaz hojaye ga.

Prithvi who is standing away from his nana walks to him and says.... aap fikar math kijiye... aap delhi ka hiyaal rakhiye aur mein dekhta hu ke ye sultan akir hai kaun!!!

Prithvi, his frends and sikander made a plan in which way they will find out who is behind all this and in which way they will get the gold idol back. One of the dasi's come and inform Prithvi that before he goes he will have to meet Rajmata Kamalavati. Prithvi goes to his mothers bedroom whilst his frends go and do the preparations to leave the palace.

Since Rajmata Roospundari stayed in ajmer with her sister more often, she used to stay in kamalavati's chamber as kamalavati was very alone since her husband died.
Kamalavati was waiting for Prithvi and was looking for Roospundari's tablets wen prithvi walked in....
Prithvi with a broad smile walked towards his mother as his mother was searching for something in the cupboard

Kamalavati : arre prithvi, acha huwa ke tum yaha agaye... apna hiyaal rakhna, aur jaldi wapas ana.... hum tumhara intazaar karege

kamalavati had her back turned towards prithvi, she turned around with a small box in her hand.
Prithvi was amazed at her mothers behavior, thinking what she was doing with roospundari's box in her hand

Prithvi : arre maa, ye kya kar rahi hai aap..?
Kamalavati : mujhe kuch dekhna hai...
Prithvi : maa, ye kis ka hai

Maharaj Anangpal walks in the bedroom and is smiling at Kamalavati's behavior, he comes and stands near prithvi

Anangpal : bilkul nahi badli kamalvati, aaj bhi apni didi ki cheeze khushi se dekh rahi hai

Kamalavti : arre pita ji, aap nahi jaante, is dabhe mein aisa kuch hai jis ko didi dekh kar udaas hojathi hai, hume sirf dekhna hai ke wo kya hai

Prithvi : maa, is box ko chabi chahiya, aap wo kaha se laye gi

in an urge arjun walks in and continues ,.... : prithvi, saari tayari hogaye jaane ke liye ...ab sirf tumhara intezaar hai .....chale

Prithvi turns around and takes blessings from his nana and his mother who has tears in his eyes.

The next morning, the sun is shining upon Prithvi and his horse. Prithvi who is very tired is moving on as he as to save many peoples trust keeping in mind what his nana told him. Whilst they are moving on they see beyond some people who do not look like hindustani .....fighting with two more people. These people are fighting bravely back wen their turbans come off and are shown to be some girls.

Prithvi gets off his horse and takes his sword out to help those innocent looking girls, Prithvi's frends too get off their horses and go ahead to follow him, as prithvi is fighting with the strengh of his talwar he swings his oppenents talwar down. Prithvi goes to that man and asks him about his where abouts, however as the man is about to die he jus says sultan salamat rahe. Hearing this prithvi is shocked and turns to save Sanjham. One of the man push arjun on the ground and runaway with the rest of his companions.

Prithvi and his frends walk towards the girls.

Arjun : aap larkiya ko sharam nahi aathi, akele yaha kar kya rahi hai, agar aap ko kuch hojatha tho??????
humara shukr kijiye ke humne aap ko bacha liya warna aaj aap dono siday upar chali jati.

The girls are amazed at what arjun says. One girl replies...acha, tho tune hume bachaya, khud ki shakal dekhi kisi chor se kam nahi dekhte
Pundir interupts by saying ... oooo larki, kya kaha tumne... hum kya....... tum larkiya ek jaisi ho, insaan farmosh

Sikander who is looking at Pundir interrupts by saying: arre pundir, tum bi naa, behen ji... agar aap dono hume ijazat de tho kya aap hume batha sakte hai ke yaha se shree mandir kitna door hai

The girls look at each other and then tell them that they will take them to the shree mandir as they live in that village where the mandir is located. Whilst walking Sikander asks the girls whom they were getting attacked by, as the girls tell him everything about sultan and his people etc etc. Prithvi who gets very angry says he is eagerly waiting to meet the sultan. The girls tell him how there village got attacked by sultans goons and how they were fighting with these men to get the gold idol.

the girls stop and tell prithvi and his frends that they have reached the village. As the girls are about to leave they thank prithvi and his frends for saving their lives.

As the girls are heading towards their village, an old lady comes and informs them that jwala is fighting with some sultans people and she needs help. Prithvi and his frends run to the place where the fight is taking place as prithvi saves jwala and takes the gold idol. all the villagers have gathered around prithvi and the man whilst jwala is on the other side of the man to make it impossible for him to runaway or take soma action,

Prithvi gets the man on the floor and asks the man who sultan is? and what they want? The man proudly asks prithvi who he is, whilst prithvi reveals hs identity as the king of delhi and aajmer. As the man is about to get up and attack one of the boys of the villages sikander slices him in down with the sword.
The villagers cheer shouting prithvi's name. Jwala out of amazement shouts prithvi's name and walks towards him, she looks at him as prithvi recognizes the first girl whom he fought with and how she overcame the problems of her village using her braveness and her talwar bazi skills.

Jwala: Arre, arjun, chand, pudir, sanjam aur prthi kaise ho tum log
Prithvi : hum sab teek hai tum kaisi ho, waise bilkul nahi badli
Jwala who is smiling to prithvi, asks him how he has been for the last few years. He then asks him and his friends to come to her house for todays dinner. Prithvi is about to refuse when jwala continues

Jwala: kuch nai suna hume maharaj, aaj aap ko humare ghar ana hi paray ga, phir chale jana teek hai, likin kanha kane ke baad

Prithvi smiles at Jwala and agrees to go with her

thanks for the update shona nicely done sweetie..Jwala is back!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Recap: Prithvi and his freinds have reached the village where shree mandir was located. when they reach with the 2 girls they saved on the way, they find out an girl is fighting with sultans men and is in need of help. Prithvi goes there and confronts sultans men. He stabs one of them as the other 2 runaway. The girl who fights braverly with the goons is none other than Jwala. The first girl who fought with prithvi wen he was young. Jwala loved Prithvi but never expressed her love for him to him as she was waiting for the right time. Jwala pleads prithvi and his freinds to come to her house for todays evenings dinner. also the villagers are aware that maharaj prithviraj chauhan has come to their village

Part 5
Prithvi and his friends are in jwala's house and are talking to her father about the incident that occured just now in the village. From jwala's father they find out that the gold idol is missing from the shree temple.
Jwala's father : Maharaj Prithviraj, aap ko nahi patha ke jab se yaha ki shree mandir se ye murthi gayab huwi hai, yaha ke log us mandir par nahi mante hai, aur us mandir mein koi pray bhi nahi karne jata
Arjun : aap fikar math kijiye baba, prithvi agaya hai, ab sab kuch teek hojaye ga
Sikander : tho....kya aap jante hai ke yeh sultan akir hai kaun?
Jwala's father : maaf karna, hum bilkul nahi patha.... likin ha jo sultan ke aadmi abhi bhag kar gaye hai....mein yakeen se ke sakta hu, ke murthi unhi ke paas hai.....us murthi ko hasil karne mein jwala aur un dono larkiya ne bahot hi koshish ki likin har bar ki tarah
Jwala's father just stayed queit looking at prithvi.
Prithvi who was lost in deep thoughts regarding sultan and his men was interupted by Jwala.
Jwala : prithvi kanha tayar hai
Prithvi : nahi....hum kanha nahi ka sakte, jis maqsad ke liye mein yaha aya hu, mujhe us maqsad ko pura karna pare gha
Jwala : likin prithvi..... humne tumhare liye kanha banaya hai....humare liye tumhe kanha hi pare gha...warna hum tumse baat nahi karege....soch lo
Prithvi sighed and finally agreed. His freinds and jwala's father went to wash their hands and into the other tent where the food was ready. Prithvi and Jwala were alone in the tent.
Jwala : kya baat hai prithvi... kya soch rahe ho, akir baath kya hai
Prithvi looked at Jwala and continued .... kya tum jaanti ho ke ye sultan aur uske aadmi hai kaun? mera matlab jin logu se tum lari, unka kuch patha
Jwala moved to a side near the door and sed.haan...wo. prithvi, tumhe patha hai, waha 3 log the jin ke saath hum lar rahe the, aur jab tum yaha a rahe the, aur jin larkiyo ko tumne bachaya...unnu ne mujhe abhi bataya ke unhe ye payal mili thi jab wo unke saath talwarbazi kar rahi thi. Un 3 logo mein se ek admi tha jo tumhe kuch nahi bathaya, aur dusro dho jo bhage wo..
At that time prithvi's freinds reached there to eat. Prithvi asked Jwala to show that payal which was found by those girls he saved.
Prithvi looked at his freinds was awaiting for Jwala to come wid da payal. Jwala came and showed the payal. Prithvi then continued........................ iss se saaf zahir hotha hai, ke do log jo bach gaye..... un mein se ek larki hai.....aur wo hain kaun or kyu hindustan ke hilaf hokar sultan ka saath de rahi hai...ye ab mujhe patha lagana pare ga
Sanjham who walked in the tent so the payal and sed : likin ye payal tho.....yaad aya ye payal chamki ki hai, mein ne usse gift mein di thi, usse koteshwar yatra par.... 5 saal pehle ki ye baath hai

Thanks for the update Buddy sweetie..Chami returns wow!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

Part 6

Prithvi : kya, chamki...chamki jo sanyogita ke saath thi.....

Prithvi was shocked to hear that it was chamki, sanyo's best friend

Arjun : likin ye bhi tho ho sakta hai ke chamki ke koi majburi ho, mujhe tho yaqeen nahi hotha

Sanjham : chamki aisa nahi kar sakti

Sanjham loved chamki, however he never told her, as his friends were aware of his feelings for Chamki, they did not say anything further and stayed quite to wait for Sanjham's response. As Sanjham was heartbroken he took the payal off Prithvi and walked out of the tent.

Pundir: sanjham, meri baat tho suno

Arjun : jaane do usse Pundir, kuch waqt akela hoga, tho teek hojaye ga

Pundir : ye sari larki ek jaisi hothi hai, patha nahi apna aap ko kya samjhti hai....sab ka dil thor kar inhe sakoon tho miltha hi nahi

As there was silent in the tent Prithvi turned around to Jwala. Jwala was lost in her thoughts.

Prithvi : jwala...kya soch rahi ho

Jwala : yahi ke mein ne ye naam kahi suna hai

Prithvi : saaf saaf kaho ke baat kya hai

Jwala was lost in her thoughts as prithvi continuously asked her. Everyone in the tent was standing and did not know wat to say.

Jwala turned around to Prithvi and told him that nothing can happen.

Arjun : jwala, baat kya hai

Jwala : tum nahi jaante arjun ye naam, chamki, sanyogita....mera matlab kannauj ki rajkumari, ye Udaipur ki rajkumari, udaipur ka rajkumar, chamki, aur sultan, ab kuch nahi ho sakta, sab kuch barbaad hojaye ga. Koi nahi bache ga, ye payal aur samy aur sultania. Ye bahot hi hathernak ....

Jwala coniued mumbling to herself. Prithvi was in shock to wat he was hearing, his sanyogita's name, the girl he loved the most, his beloved. He sat down on the bed lost in her deep thoughts. Prithvi walked out of the tent leaving all behind. As jwala stopped him.........

Jwala : prithvi, kaha ja rahe ho

Prithvi walked off leaving a unanswered Jwala behind.

Jwala : Prithvi .....

Arjun : Jwala....jaaane do Prithvi ko....usse thore waqt akela rehne dho

Jwala : likin baat kya hai

Outside the tent Prithvi went and sat in the place where he could see the magnificent moon. The atmosphere was windy. He was sitting at the side of the river. Splish, splash went the water, revolving in small circles, as Prithvi watched. He looked up, up the moon, as he did for the past years. Thinking to himself why he never expressed his feelings to Sanyogita, what stopped him, why did Sanyogita jus consider him as a friend and not more than friend, and after all why she left him all alone to confront the world. As he was facing towards the moon with his eyes closed, he felt as someone put his hand on his shoulder. Prithvi opened his eyes to see Arjun besides him.

Arjun : kya baat hai Prithvi..... itne saal guzr gaye aur hum dhono dosto ko saath sit karne a mauka hi nahi mila.

Prithvi showed a small smile to Arjun and put his hand on Arjun's shoulder.

Arjun looked at the river and spoke to Prithvi

Arjun: Pyaar karthe ho uss se...

Prithvi stayed quiet as he knew what his friend was talking about. He always recommended Prithvi to tell Sanyo that he loves her more than himself and cannot stay without her..But Prithvi never did.

Prithvi : ab ye sab baat karne ka kya faida hai

As Arjun was about to assure Prithvi, someone spoke from the back.

WO TUMHARI HAI BETA..... SIRF TUMHARI.....kal bhi tumharii thi....aaj bhi tumhari hai,....aur hamesha tumhari hi rahi gi....wo aeygi,....jaha tumne 4 saal uss ka intezaar kar liya.... waha tum kuch der aur intezaar karlo....mein bhavishiyani bathathi hu, aur tumhari tumhe batha hi di.....is baar usse jaane math dena...apne pyaar ka izhaar zaroor karna...haan apne pyaar ko pana thora mushkil ho ga....likin tum tho prithviraj chauhan ho....jo prithviraj chauhan ne sab ka dil jeet liya itni kam umar mein...wo ek rajkumari ka dil nahi jeet sakta. WO TUMHARI HAI...AUR USS PE TUMHARA HI HAQ HAI

Both friends were amazed to what they heard.

Arjun : dekha prithvi...sanyogita sirf tumhari hai...himat math harna dost.

As Arjun assured Prithvi Sikander came and told Prithvi that he heard from the villagers that Pundir and Jwala, have caught a thief with the gold murthi who does not seem to belong from Hindustan. Hearing this Prithvi and arjun got up and went with him. Hoping that Pundir and Jwala are fine.

In the village all the villagers are shouting maro maro, usse maro, and all are heading towards the sultans man. The sultans man is standing outside the temple. Pundir and Jwala are standing and are trying to stop the villagers to come to the sultans aadmi. Seeing this Prithvi shouts...ye kya ho raha hai

One of the villager continues..Maharaj aap nahi jaante iss aadmi ne shree mandir ki murthi churay thi, puchiye iss se, wo sone ki murthi jo maharaj someshwar ne iss goa ke liye banvai thi.

Hearing this Prithvi's anger increases and walks towards the man. Prithvi was standing infront of the man. The man had the gold murthi in his hands with a letter in his hand.

Prithvi : kaun ho tum?

The sultans man : aap ko sultan aur sultania ki taraf se salaam...mein kadar khan hu...sultan ka haas aadmi...ye murthi mere dosto ne shree mandir se churay thi....iss rakhiye...aur ye chiti/letter...sultan aur sultania...aur unki has dost se aap ke liye....ijazat ho...hum ja rahe hai

Pundir : kya lagta hai tumhe...tumhe hum sab aise hi jaane de ge

Kadar Khan started to laugh...kya lagta hai tumhe...mein yaha koi shauk se nahi aya....mera rasta chor do

Prithvi : akir sultan hai kaun, aur cowards jaise Hindustan par hamla kar kyu raha hai...

Kadar Khan : bare bare...hindustani humse dar gaye hai...aur tum

Prithvi : mein prithviraj chauhan hu...ek sacha rajput jo kisi se nahi dhartha...apni mauth se bhi nahi

Kadar Khan : acha...prithviraj chauhan....jitne gao tum bacha sakte ho bachao..

As he is laughing he gets on his horse and is about to ride off, when Sikander stops him.

Prithvi : sikander, jaane do usse..kaha tak jaye ga... prithviraj chauhan ki nazro se bach kar thori na jaye ga


The mysterious night passes, leaving prithvi's mission more complicated and very hard to resolve. Reading the letter, he plans to move ahead and go to the other village closeby to see if everything is alright.

The next morning Prithvi wakes up and offers his prayers jus like his father did, keeping in mind what his father taught him.

Prithvi and his friends get dressed and are ready to leave, when the mahamantri of the village comes to Prithvi.

Mahamantri : humme acha lage ga ke aap agar sone ki murthi shree mandir mein rakhe, jaise maharaj someshwar ne kiya tha.

Hearing this Prithvi does not refuse and keeps the murthi in the temple, as all the villagers shout Maharaj Prithviraj chauhan ki jai!!!

He goes and meets Jwala and tells her that he is leaving. Prithvi's friends are outside waiting for him.

Prithvi and Jwala are alone and are inside Jwala's home.

Prithvi : tho mein ja raha hu

Jwala : saath chalu

Prithvi smiles at her and tells her that she is a girl, and a girl would not look good going with him to fulfil his mission.

Jwala : acha tho ye baath hai.....buliye math maharaj hum aap se kam nahi

Prithvi is facing down and Jwala continues....kya baath hai

Prithvi lets out a great sigh and says ...kuch nahi....acha mein ja raha hu

Jwala : apna hiyal rakna

Prithvi gets on his horse and rides off along with his friends.


As per as Sultan and sultania's and their special friends plan, Prithvi is going to the village that will be next attacked.

"acha, tho prithvi yaha akir aa hi raha hai"

"Chalo acha hai, dekhte hai ke akir prithvraj chauhan akir hai kya cheez"

Both the men laugh out loud, when the sultan's special friend reminds them...

"magar ye math bhulna, ke prithvi aur uske dosto ko koi injury nahi pochana."


Prithvi and his friends are few miles away from the village where they get attacked by the sultans aadmi. Prithvi and his friends fight bravely with the men.

CLING, CLANG, the swords hit with each other trying to defend their opponents. THASH, CLASH makes the sound of the sword hitting against each other. Prithvi is fighting tremendously with his opponent when someone comes and pushes Pundir down. Prithvi runs to Pundir and sees that his friend is about to get strike into his stomach with the sword when he brings his sword and swings the attackers sword away. All Prithvi's friends are on the ground and are unable to get up due to the energy they have wasted in futile. The sultans aadmi start laughing at Prithvi who is all alone ready to fight. They are all about to stab Prithvi when two swords come and clash with the sultan's men's sword saving Prithvi.


As all the sultans men are on the floor dead, only one is saved who is hard to defeat. Prithvi realises that the two people who saved him are 2 girls. Prithvi jumps in the fight and defeats the one and only attacker.

The attacker has a green turban on covering its face with a brown cloth.

The 2 girls who have masked their faces with a black cloth take off their black clothes.

Arjun and the rest get up and stand besides Prithvi.

Arjun : Payal....tum yaha...aur jwala...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho??????????

Payal who is in tears walks towards the sultan's special friend and starts talking.....

Payal : ye tum kya kar rahi ho...aur kyu...tumhe ye sab kar ke mile ga kya

Prithvi : Rajkumari Payal...kya aap isse jaanti hai????

Jwala : prithvi tum nahi jaante ye hai kaun...

Jwala stands besides the unmasked special friend and takes off her cloth that has covered her face.

Behind the mask everyone see a pretty girl, with big brown eyes. Her brown hair tied back in a long plait.

Payal : chamki..

Chamki : kya baat hai, chamki ko kaise pachana...waise achi talwar bazi kar leti ho

Payal : chamki, mujhe patha hai tum sanyogita

Chamki raises her arm indicating Payal that she does not want to hear anything.

Chamki : kuch nahi suna mujhe....

Prithvi : chamki...tumne ye sab kyu kiya

Chamki : kyu Maharaj, agar tum Hindustani sab ka dil dhuka sakte ho....sab ko dard aur takleef de sakte ho...tho ye uss ke saamne tho kuch nahi hai...

Payal : meri baat suno chamki, mujhe patha hai uss raat ka dard tumhe aaj bhi hai

Chamki : kis dard ki baat kar rahi ho tum...5 saal pehle wala dard,...ya phir wo dard jo sanyo ne mujhe diya...ya phir wo dard jo ek maa par hai, jo ek zinda laash ban gaye hai aur apni beti ke lotne ka intezaar kar rahi hai...wo dard jo ek beta apne hi desh ke hilaaf hagaya hai...wo dard jo ek dost ne apne dost ko diya hai

Payal: chamki, iss mein...

As Payal is about to say something; Chamki who is standing at the edge of the cliff top jumps down.

Payal : chhaaammmmmmmkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


Payal who is sitting at the side of the cliff top is crying. Jwala runs to Payal.

Jwala : payal...apne aap ko sambhalo

Jwala turns around and does not see Prithvi and his friends, she wonders where they ave gone.

Payal : Jwala, mein ...mein ne iss mein kya kiya,...us raat ke haadse ke baad...sanyogita kaha ho tum, kyun apni didi ko chor kar chali gaye ho,

At that moment of time Prithvi and his friends appear and look down the cliff top.

Arjun : sikander... iss clif top ke niche tho pani hai, aur mein ne dekha ke chamki pani me jab jump kiya, tho kinari ke uss par sultan ke aadmi kare huwe the.

Sikander : iss ka matlab hai chamki bach gaye

Prithvi walks to Payal and gets her up. Prithvi always considered Payal as his small sister and gave her love like he did to Pratha.

Prithvi : Payal...chamki ko kuch nahi huwa

Payal : bhaiya....

Payal hugged Prithvi, prithvi hugged payal back as payal was crying, she continuously sed why sanyo left her all alone and it's not her fault.


Jwala came upto Prithvi and told him that Payal and her will be wid him till their mission does not get completed.

Payal broke from Prithvi's hug and sed :haan, bhaiya....hum aap ke saath rahe ge

Prithvi did not want to refuse her so he agreed

Sanjham : payal, tum tho jaanti hogi ke sultan kaun hai

Payal : haan. ...likin ye sachai aap ko koi aur bathai ga

Chand and Pundir: kaun??????????

Prithvi looked at Payal and asked her to tell but she refused and told her that someone else knows the truth better than her.

At that time they heard a girl shouting....."bachao, arre....koi hai....meri dost pani mein hai"

Sikander came running and told them that a girl is in the water and she can not swim

The girl shouted "arre Sanyogita, mein aa rahi hu"

Prithvi: Sanyogita!!!!!!!!!!!

He looked down from the cliff top and saw a girl seeking for help and another girl in the water

"SANYOGITA", prithvi shouted. He ran to the other girl, his heart beating fast,

"Arre, bhai saab meri dost pani mein haii"

He turned around and jumped in the water. Prithvi swam fastly hoping it was his Sanyogita. He grabbed hold of her, put his arms around her and lifted her up in his arms, holding her tightly.

Everyone gathered at the side of the river standing near the other girl.

Payal : sanyogita

She turned around and looked at the other girl.."kya ye rajkumari sanyogita"

"Arre..haan ye princess hai"

Payal : princess, meri behen..sanyogita

Thanks for the lovely update sweetie..good job once again..I liked Payal & PRC's bonding in this!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

this part is for especially raki as raki wanted to read sanyo's entry


Part 7-

Prithvi was in the river trying to get hold of Sanyogita; he lifted her up in his arms and held her tightly, and walked towards the land where everyone was standing.

The girl who was with Sanyogita started to shout at the other side of the river....Rupali...arre yaha aao. Sanyogita yaha hai

Arjun : prithvi, sambhal ke

Prithvi holding Sanyo came on the land with so much difficulty due to the wet clothes. He got on the land and put Sanyo down on the ground. Sanyo's eyes were closed. As prithvi put her down Payal sat near Sanyo holding Sanyo's hand and rubbing them. With her hands she removed Sanyo strands of hair from her face to see her young sister's beautiful and innocent face. She had the royal looks that made her stand out and look like a unique princess sleeping. Prithvi was amazed to see her beauty as she was well known for her beauty and charisma in Kannauj. He kept his eyes fixed on Sanyo's face. Sanyo was wearing a pink dress with silver embroidery.

The girl who shouted for help moved everyone to a side and sat near Sanyo...."arre, sanyogita, princess..ankhe kholo...rupali....arre princess ankhe kholo"

Payal : sanyogita, ankhe kholo

Rupali came running to Sanyogita and sat near her

Rupali: tum tho khush hona Sammy.....kya zaroorat thi...

Sammy : tum chup karo

Rupali : isse utao

Sammy : princess, please open ur eyes

Sanjham : ye kis zubaan mein rajkumari sanyogita se baat kar rahe hai

Pundir : mujhe kya patha

Sikander : prithvi wo green leafs kaha se laye, jo rajkumari sanyogita ko hosh me laye ge

As everyone were worried about Sanyogita not opening her eyes were deciding to bring the green leaves to make Sanyo wake up or not.

Jwala : ab kya kare....

Everyone was looking at Prithvi and then Sanyo.

Payal : sanyogita...bhagwan ke waaste ankhe kholo, dekho didi yaha hai, ek baar sanyo ankhe kholo, tum agaye ho, sab kuch teek hojaye ga

Rupali : kya aap sanyogita ko jaanti hai?

Payal : yeh meri behen hai

Rupal and Sammy learnt that Payal is Sanyo's sister; they told everyone how the three of them landed here.

Rupali : ye sab kuch Sammy ki waja se huwa

Sammy : chup karo, sanyo ke saath aia ho tho mein soch hi nahi sakti

Pundir : dekha ye saari...

Arjun : ye saari larki ek jaisi hothi hai, ye kehna chate the tum

Jwala noticed that Prithvi just looked at Sanyo with so much love and affection and did not say anything.

Sikander : tum sab chup karo ge.

Everyone stood quietly looking at Sanyo who did not move at all, as someone came close by in green clothes and put green leaves towards Sanyo's nose to make her sniff it and make her wake up. Sanyo sniffed the leaves and gradually started to move. Due to the coldness of the water her hands started to tremble and all her body shiver. All were shocked to see that the person who made Sanyo come to conscious was no other than her best friend Chamki.

Sanjham : chamki, tum yaha se jao

Jwala : chamki!!!!!!!

Chamki did not bother what anyone said and looked at Sanyo with tears in her eyes. She took the locket off that was around her neck and put it in Sanyo's hand; indicating Chamki and Sanyo's friendship.

Sanyo felt the locket and held it in her hand and gradually opened her eyes. As she opened her eyes she called out for Chamki's name. As chamki knew that Sanyo is alright she got up and stood with the rest of the sultan's people, she then got on the horse and then rode off. Everyone was surprised to see Sanyo's blue eyes, and were thinking how much more beautiful she can get. Prithvi was stunned to see her prettiness.

Sanyo : chamki...chamki... chamki kaha hai?

She looked at Sammy and then Rupali. She got up with the help up Payal.

Thanks for the lovely Update Buddy..hmm Sanyo's blue eyes mein PRC Ghum ho jaye ga abbb!⭐️
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megha di
thanks for commenting
love u loads
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wonderful update shona,read the last 2 part, absolutely gud.....loved the way u hve presented ur stry..its really unique!keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
Shona when u post the next part dear.I'm waiting..
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Yes shona dear when is the next part coming!😆

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