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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan

yup munyr...if they only interacated wid their fans...thy wud hve known wat we all wanted....our ideas hve put straight on top...i wudnt tell them 2 commit the blunder of showg the sec koteshwar yatra...sanyo wud hve been complete different post leap...n so much mre wud hve been conveyed...shucks 2 sagars!

Yeah mehr agreed dear..would have had a lot of changes if we all were to put forward PRC & Sanyo luv story!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen



Yes Sure Mehr i will do the designing, megha can be the script writter and you can be the director - but who would be the big boss of us allπŸ˜†

Hmmmm Well yeh toh sochna padega sandy ! Gud Question....who will be the Big B here!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry Gals to have kept u waiting for the next Update but I was very busy with Holi Yesterday.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ But I would certainly put up the Next Update by Tonight & that's a promise!πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
o no problem megha di, take ur time
anyways
HAPPY HOLI
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Sorry Gals to have kept u waiting for the next Update but I was very busy with Holi Yesterday.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ But I would certainly put up the Next Update by Tonight & that's a promise!πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

no problem dear..we will wait...btw belated happy holi 2 u n ur fmly...sorry 4 wishs so late..actually gettg disc mst of the time
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan

no problem dear..we will wait...btw belated happy holi 2 u n ur fmly...sorry 4 wishs so late..actually gettg disc mst of the time

Ohhh Thank u Mehr darling & Wish u & also all ur family members a Very Hapy & Prosperous Holi Sweetie & the Update will be up by tonight!πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok First of all I am Extremely Sorry for a Delayed Update....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒI know this update is not that interseting but I promise the Next Part will give u all the Ingrediants that u like to read in my storyline....πŸ˜³πŸ˜†Gals below is the Next Part of the Future Track Story....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ So Enjoy reading it !πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Recap:
Sanyo gives birth to 2 Twin kids...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ One gal & the other a boy.....The news spreads like a fire in the whole mehel that Maharani has given birth to a rajkuwar & rajkumari......πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘ Chand & Pundir come to PRC & give him thsi good news....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ PRC opens up his eyes in exictement & looks at Pundir & Chand & then at god's idol & thanks him by joining his hands infront of god ....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ He then leaves for Sanyo's roomπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Next Part:
PRC in a hurry reaching Sanyo room dashes into pholl ki thali which dasi's are carrying but without even bothering he moves quickly towards Sanyo & his room.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ While in Sanyo's room Nayantara Jaichand Kamlavati all are in Sanyo's room waiting for their turn to pick up the kids in their arms...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ they all are very happy & exicted to see the kids....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Sanyo manages to sit up on her bed & she lovingly picks up both of them one by one.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ & kisses them together on their foreheads & starts crying with a broad smile...when PRC enters their room....πŸ˜ƒHe is very Happy to see Sanyo & kids alright...πŸ˜­πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ He walks towards the bed with tears rolling down his eyes....πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo sees PRC & she 2 has lots of tears rolling down her eyes...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo shows PRC both their kids...who are busy sleeping in their mother's arms....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† with a sweet & cute smile on their faces.....πŸ˜† PRC hugs Sanyo along with his kids....πŸ˜ƒ He then takes both the kids in his arms & then asks Sanyo to forgive her but Sanyo stops PRC from further saying anything by putting her hand on his mouth....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ When Kamlavati asks PRC ki ab sirf tum hi bachho par apna pyaar nyochawar karoogaye yah hum sab ko bhi mauka doga PRC..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† To this Jaichand Nayantara & Sanyo all start smiling at PRC....πŸ˜ƒ PRC 2 smiles back at them ..& gives teh kids to Kamlavati...😳Then she orders Pundir to celebrate as a rajkuwar & rajkumari ave arrived in delhi & she has become a dadi....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘ Jaichand & Nayantara 2 pick both the kids in their hands & give them blessings & luv....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ After a While all leave Sanyo & PRC alone with the kids in the room & move towards their respective rooms....πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo keeps looking at her kids & the way they are smiling & sleeping...πŸ˜ƒ She takes kajal from her eyes & puts a kala tikka on both kids saying bhagwan aap dono ko buri nazar se bachaye!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† PRC keeps adoring her princess & 2 new kids on the block πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Here Chand is coming towards PRC's room & so is Karnataki to give them bhadaai on the kids arrival..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† When both of them bump into each other....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Karnataki has a few rose petals in her hands to put in the kids palna as her jesture of her happiness on their arrival in Delhi....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† She looses her balance & falls in Chand's arms & all the rose petals fall on Chand..😳😳😳 Chand keeps holding her in his arms & keeps looking into her deep black eyes!πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Karnataki too gets lost in Chand's arms when Pundir says...ahhhhhh & tries coughing to bring both of them back to this world..Karnatki & Chand leave each other & look at a smiling Pundir...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† They both feel very awkward when Karnataki smiles shy's & runs away from that place...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Pundir comes near a Shy Chand & says...lagta hai tumhari toh nikal padi..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Chand gets agitated by this & says kya kya kaha tumne ...rukooo choodoonga nahi mein tumhe.....& they both run towards PRC's room to give bhadaai to Sanyo & they both dash into PRC .....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Pundir tells PRC ki mujhe Chand se bachoo woh mujhe mar daalega....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† At this Sanyo questions him..kyun aisa kya kar diya tumne....πŸ˜ƒ At this Pundir tells Sanyo ki humare Kavi Raj ko pyaar ho gaya hai...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo looks at Chand with a naughty smile & says sach mein....πŸ˜† Chand sharma jaata hai aur kehta aisa kuch nahi hai bhabi yeh Pundir toh bas aise hi.....πŸ˜† PRC then 2 teases Chand says kaun hai woh khush naseeb...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Chand tells PRC koi nahi hai PRC yeh Pundir bas aise hi mujhe pareshaan kar raha hai...πŸ˜† PRC 2 smiles naughtily at Chand when Sanyo asks Chand kahi woh Karnataki toh nahi..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Pundir & PRC are shocked & Chand has his mouth wide open....πŸ˜† Chand then very sweetly asks aapko kaise pata chala bhabhi!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†When Sanyo says kyun bachuuu pakad liya nah ..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† tum toh keh rahe that aisa kuch nahi toh abbb ab kya hua!πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Chand smiles....πŸ˜ƒ PRC comes toward Chand & says lagta ab humme hi kuch karna hoga humare dost ke liye kyun Maharani...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo says ji Maharaj sahi kaha aapne ab hume hi kuch karna hoga humare iss chote devarji ke liye..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Chand blushes & leaves the room....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Meanwhile the Maha Mantri comes to PRC & Sanyo room & tells Pundir that the preparations for the kids arrival are all complete & this sandesh has come for Maharaj from Chittorgh....πŸ˜ƒ PRC takes the sandesh reads it..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ He gets very exicted reading the sandesh as it has news of Pratha giving birth to a male child 1 day ago & Samar Singh & Pratha's arrival to Delhi on the celebration Sanyo & PRC's kids after 3 days...πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo asks PRC what's the matter & PRC comes & hugs Sanyo...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ He tells her about Pratha delivering a baby boy & they joining them in the celebration .... Sanyo smiles & tells PRC that Samar & Pratha's kid is also like their child so she wants the naming ceremony of all 3 kids to be done together....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ PRC agrees & tells Pundir to prepare for the grand swagat of Pratha, Samar & their Child.....πŸ˜ƒ PRC then asks Pundir to give this good news to Kamlavati but he tells her not to tell Kamlavati that Pratha is coming & let it be a suprise for her.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Pundir leaves....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ In the meanwhile in the yatra at night ...Arjun since morning has been looking for Maya but he is unable to find her as he wanted to apologise to her for burning the food...πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Then he sees a lady standing near their tamboo dressed up like Maya ..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† He goes & hugs her from the back...& apologises for his irresponsible behaviour....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† When the lady manages to break free from Arjun's arms & turns around Arjun gets the shock of his life πŸ˜† He realises that it is not maya & he takes a few steps back to another shock of his....Maya sees all this standing slightly behind....that lady..that lady leaves from their....πŸ˜­πŸ˜³πŸ˜† leaving a scared Arjun.....πŸ˜† Maya all angry & geared up πŸ˜† picks up a lathi & gazes at Arjun with red eyes....πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Arjun begins to run from her & she says..acha ab meri gair hazaari mein tum dooshari aurtoon par dore dal rahe ho...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Abhi batati hoon mein tumhe....πŸ˜† Whereas Arjun tries explaining her while running that he thought that it is Maya....πŸ˜³πŸ˜† But Maya in mood manages to give Arjun a few blows with her hands & bamboo stick in her hand....πŸ˜† leaving the place in anger & tears.... with a swollen up Arjun from all sides!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Arjun tries getting up saying oooiiii maaa aaaayeee maa kaha phas gaya mein bhagwannnnnnnπŸ˜† In Delhi Kannauj & Chittorgh local people are all busy celebrting the arrival of all 3 kids!πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ PRC & Sanyo see the Delhi celebrtion through their window with both the kids in their hands ..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ PRC puts his arms around his princessπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ...Sanyo looks at his prince charming & smiles at him!πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒWhen Surya & Mehak enter their room & disturb the couple saying Chachi kya hum aander aa sakte hai.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo turns & looks at the kids & nods her head in yes..πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo then goes & puts the kids down in the palna..both the kids are awake now & are playing with each other & smiling .....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜† Sanyo then sits on bed & makes both Surya & Mehak sit besides her & aks them..kya tum dono neh khana kaya ..πŸ˜ƒ PRC keeps staring at them..πŸ˜† Both kids burst out in tears & start crying & they both apologise to Sanyo & blame themselves for whatever happened ....😭 PRC is taken aback by their behaviour & feels sorry for the way he behaved with the kids..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ He walks up to Mehak & Surya & wipes their tears..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Both Mehak & Surya apologise to PRC as well...πŸ˜ƒ PRC then says koi baat nahi kabhi kabhi mujh se bhi galati ho jaati hai..& smiles at both the kids...πŸ˜ƒ Then Surya & Mehak take Shivji's bracelets out of their hands & puts them in both the new twins hands Telling PRC & Sanyo ki yeh bole nath ji ka aashirwad hai..yeh humare Chote Bhai aur Behen ki raksha karega....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ PRC smiles & has tears in his eyes seeing both kids gesture & he hugs both Mehak & Surya for the 1st time from the bottom of his heart!πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo 2 has tears in her eyes seeing the kids gesture & beginning of a true Friendship bond between Mehak Surya & PRC !πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Precap:
Pratha Samar & their Child arriving in Delhi to Kamlavati's suprise...πŸ˜† Pratha & Samar blessing PRC & Sanyo's Twins.....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Pratha's Child stops crying in Sanyo's arms....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Ghori return!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† PRC & Sanyo deciding on their kids name in their bedroom & sharing lots of luvy duby moments together!πŸ˜† Ghori eyeing PRC & Sanyo new born kids!πŸ˜†Naming Ceremony of the Twins & Samar & Pratha's son...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Celebrations..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo busy with the Kids...PRC agitated by Sanyo not giving her enough attention & time....PRC & Sanyo having a Big time FightπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Sanyo leaving PRC in Delhi & going to Kannauj in anger....πŸ˜­πŸ˜³πŸ˜† PRC's Bhediya giving PRC the news of ghori returning & eyeing his Children & Sanyo....😑😭 PRC doing everything in the world that is possible to manofy Sanyo in Kannauj....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†Sanyo throwing PRC out of her bedroom in anger!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†PRC getting injured while saving Sanyo as she is attacked by Ghori & his men in the shiv mandir!πŸ‘
Gals Pls. donot continue as I have still a lot of story telling left..Well the Next Update will be on coming Tuesday 17th March '09 by 1:30 AM mid-night !πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by meghaparti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh megha i m in love with this story wah at last u answe my qus so pratha give bith to baby boy cool and chand to beshra shrma gaya hehe now only pundir is left uski bhi shaddi karwa do and i love ur precap bas dont bring ghori rest is perfect
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shruti11

oh megha i m in love with this story wah at last u answe my qus so pratha give bith to baby boy cool and chand to beshra shrma gaya hehe now only pundir is left uski bhi shaddi karwa do and i love ur precap bas dont bring ghori rest is perfect

Well Thank u shruti dear....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ Well Ghori is mirch masala in my story line I cannot ignore him completely..πŸ˜³πŸ˜† Well he helps me bonding PRC & Sanyo again in the next part so I brought him in u see.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† Well u will need to wait for the next update then u will understand what I really mean!πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† hmm Pundir ki shaadi mein abhi waqt hai so I guess u will have to wait...πŸ˜ƒ 1st let me put Chand's naiyaa paar then Pundir's Turn!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
Megha Di i love your story - it is much more interesting than what the Sagars are showing at the moment.
Aare you sure you don't want to swap jobs and become a writer full timeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜†

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