OS Amarprem - Chapter 15

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dhakarn

@dhakarn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Shyamu2
Yeh kya? 😕
K intentions don't look good ... hostage?
Poor P!! Trouble all around her.
Boy does she need to work on him.

Very descriptive, well written.

Oh and post shower... I'd like to be water droplet
😳

Thanks...😃

What's the fun if both r goody goody 😉

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868037

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: dhakarn

Thanks...😃
What's the fun if both r goody goody 😉

I agree .
K definitely is no goody goody... to say the least...lol
P maybe a goody goody but not perfect, she's got her share of issues ... maybe they can help each other out.
I hope you get to finish your story before the new guys show up... it's edgy and engrossing. You're a very talented writer.

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dhakarn

@dhakarn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Shyamu2

I agree .
K definitely is no goody goody... to say the least...lol
P maybe a goody goody but not perfect, she's got her share of issues ... maybe they can help each other out.
I hope you get to finish your story before the new guys show up... it's edgy and engrossing. You're a very talented writer.

Thanks again...

Why would we have to leave the forum if new members come? 😲 one thing my story will take a long time to finish...😆

2nd, MKAP 2 still has all the other main characters ... so its not like a whole new show...

I think we can co-exist here if we all behave according to the forum rules ...

n if there will be a new forum for MKAP 2 , n this forum is shut down(hope it doesn't happen) , then I will continue my OS on that forum... its about kriya , na... n also I will be viewing MKAP 2 , so they can't kick me out 😆

Edited by dhakarn - 13 years ago

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Vikram Dewangan

@DareDevil_VickY

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

superb update dhanya now the destination is near waiting for next update pls update fast

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: dhakarn

Kab tak? 😳

jab tak hai jaan

okk here i am with ma viewsss😉😉

lbbd the description f k's wetty look u gave😳😳

nd this p's father,😡,btw is shymu playing that role,,😳??hard to imagine🤓

now cming to this twist,,,

kidnapping😕 or lbb at frst sight😳cnfused,.

.ok vtever it will be😳 i knw it will be the best jab we met moment 😳😳 give chandu another wrk,,😆😆kriya shud be alone😉😉nd yes pls add the heat frm both sides😉😉 in this frst meeting☺️

Edited by teenss - 13 years ago

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babithaj

@babithaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hmm so Krishna gonna kidnap Pratigya ... Gud one Dhans.. plzzz make the next update very soon very soon... Muahs... Very well written, enjoyed i...🤗

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868037

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: dhakarn

Thanks again...
Why would we have to leave the forum if new members come? 😲 one thing my story will take a long time to finish...😆
2nd, MKAP 2 still has all the other main characters ... so its not like a whole new show...
I think we can co-exist here if we all behave according to the forum rules ...
n if there will be a new forum for MKAP 2 , n this forum is shut down(hope it doesn't happen), then I will continue my OS on that forum... its about kriya , na... n also I will be viewing MKAP 2 , so they can't kick me out 😆

I don't have a clue what's going on with forum issues... I just go along with what I read.

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Latha.I

@Latha.I

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wow nice update...just loving it...👍🏼

trying to keep my mind open for any twists...like the way just it's going...

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dhakarn

@dhakarn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: babithaj
Hmm so Krishna gonna kidnap Pratigya ... Gud one Dhans.. plzzz make the next update very soon very soon... Muahs... Very well written, enjoyed i...🤗

Thanks... soon 😃