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Posted: 13 years ago
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WRITTEN UPDATE - EPISODE #1

Story opens with Lucknow station... 2 rickshaws stop and 4 girls get down... go into station...Girls arguing with coolie... Pratigya gives extra money to him... train arrives... Pratigya's face not seen... she climbs into compartment... slowly P's face is shown at the window... opp lady tells her hubby what a cute girl... P spots her friends and calls out to them...
Angad and his two sidekicks climb into same train.. train starts... they are looking for a "good" place to sit... spot the girls and squeeze in between them... one poor girls squeezed in between and getting harrassed.. P speaks up and tells them.. either you boys leave or we will... Angad and his friends get up and shifts to the aisle seats.. two ppl already sitting there get up and leave quietly..
Angad and his friends listening to the girls convo and taunting them... one girl asks P whether she will study further... P says don't know ... as my family decides... its a big thing they let me come this far to study... the girls asks what kind of boy you would like to get married to ...
P answers... someone who will respect my parents... gets alongwith everyone and earns enough to take care of his family...
P's family introduced... all excited that P's coming back.. Prof call P and she says that will be arriving in two hours... Arushi wants to speak... but Adarsh pulls her hair for interrupting Prof... Dadi scolds Arushi... Prof leaves for station to receive P...
P gives off her jeans and T shirts to her friends... says I cannot wear these at home.. Dadi will throw a fit... she bends down to keep the bag.. her dupatta falls off her shoulder.. boys passing lewd comments... Opp couple looking annoyed.. they start antakshari game and ask the girls to join... girls sing songs... Angad butts in and sings "choli ke peeche kya hai" song.. all upset...
Story opens with Lucknow station... 2 rickshaws stop and 4 girls get down... go into station...Girls arguing with coolie... Pratigya gives extra money to him... train arrives... Pratigya's face not seen... she climbs into compartment... slowly P's face is shown at the window... opp lady tells her hubby what a cute girl... P spots her friends and calls out to them...
Angad and his two sidekicks climb into same train.. train starts... they are looking for a "good" place to sit... spot the girls and squeeze in between them... one poor girls squeezed in between and getting harrassed.. P speaks up and tells them.. either you boys leave or we will... Angad and his friends get up and shifts to the aisle seats.. two ppl already sitting there get up and leave quietly..
Angad and his friends listening to the girls convo and taunting them... one girl asks P whether she will study further... P says don't know ... as my family decides... its a big thing they let me come this far to study... the girls asks what kind of boy you would like to get married to ...
P answers... someone who will respect my parents... gets alongwith everyone and earns enough to take care of his family...
P's family introduced... all excited that P's coming back.. Prof call P and she says that will be arriving in two hours... Arushi wants to speak... but Adarsh pulls her hair for interrupting Prof... Dadi scolds Arushi... Prof leaves for station to receive P...
P gives off her jeans and T shirts to her friends... says I cannot wear these at home.. Dadi will throw a fit... she bends down to keep the bag.. her dupatta falls off her shoulder.. boys passing lewd comments... Opp couple looking annoyed.. they start antakshari game and ask the girls to join... girls sing songs... Angad butts in and sings "choli ke peeche kya hai" song.. all upset...
Story opens with Lucknow station... 2 rickshaws stop and 4 girls get down... go into station...Girls arguing with coolie... Pratigya gives extra money to him... train arrives... Pratigya's face not seen... she climbs into compartment... slowly P's face is shown at the window... opp lady tells her hubby what a cute girl... P spots her friends and calls out to them...
Angad and his two sidekicks climb into same train.. train starts... they are looking for a "good" place to sit... spot the girls and squeeze in between them... one poor girls squeezed in between and getting harrassed.. P speaks up and tells them.. either you boys leave or we will... Angad and his friends get up and shifts to the aisle seats.. two ppl already sitting there get up and leave quietly..
Angad and his friends listening to the girls convo and taunting them... one girl asks P whether she will study further... P says don't know ... as my family decides... its a big thing they let me come this far to study... the girls asks what kind of boy you would like to get married to ...
P answers... someone who will respect my parents... gets alongwith everyone and earns enough to take care of his family...
P's family introduced... all excited that P's coming back.. Prof call P and she says that will be arriving in two hours... Arushi wants to speak... but Adarsh pulls her hair for interrupting Prof... Dadi scolds Arushi... Prof leaves for station to receive P...
P gives off her jeans and T shirts to her friends... says I cannot wear these at home.. Dadi will throw a fit... she bends down to keep the bag.. her dupatta falls off her shoulder.. boys passing lewd comments... Opp couple looking annoyed.. they start antakshari game and ask the girls to join... girls sing songs... Angad butts in and sings "choli ke peeche kya hai" song.. all upset...
Story opens with Lucknow station... 2 rickshaws stop and 4 girls get down... go into station...Girls arguing with coolie... Pratigya gives extra money to him... train arrives... Pratigya's face not seen... she climbs into compartment... slowly P's face is shown at the window... opp lady tells her hubby what a cute girl... P spots her friends and calls out to them...
Angad and his two sidekicks climb into same train.. train starts... they are looking for a "good" place to sit... spot the girls and squeeze in between them... one poor girls squeezed in between and getting harrassed.. P speaks up and tells them.. either you boys leave or we will... Angad and his friends get up and shifts to the aisle seats.. two ppl already sitting there get up and leave quietly..
Angad and his friends listening to the girls convo and taunting them... one girl asks P whether she will study further... P says don't know ... as my family decides... its a big thing they let me come this far to study... the girls asks what kind of boy you would like to get married to ...
P answers... someone who will respect my parents... gets alongwith everyone and earns enough to take care of his family...
P's family introduced... all excited that P's coming back.. Prof call P and she says that will be arriving in two hours... Arushi wants to speak... but Adarsh pulls her hair for interrupting Prof... Dadi scolds Arushi... Prof leaves for station to receive P...
P gives off her jeans and T shirts to her friends... says I cannot wear these at home.. Dadi will throw a fit... she bends down to keep the bag.. her dupatta falls off her shoulder.. boys passing lewd comments... Opp couple looking annoyed.. they start antakshari game and ask the girls to join... girls sing songs... Angad butts in and sings "choli ke peeche kya hai" song.. all upset...
P goes to the loo... Angad follows her.. blocked her way when she comes out of the loo... P stares at him then finally ducks under his arm and goes to her seat.. Angad follows.. Angad's friends block her path... they surround her.. P scared, looks in tears... one of the boys push her.. she falls forward and Angad holds her by the waist... P angry.. yells at Angad and slaps him... Angad super angry..
all the ppl in the compartment staring ... the man sitting opp the girls comes to her rescue, but the goons attack him too... total ruckus...
Angad and his friends beat up the man.. his wife crying.. train is halted at some station... P spots cops on the platform and calls out to them for help... cops enter and asks whats going on... Angad and his friends scared to see the police.. police catch them and haul them out of the train.. they go protesting that they are innocent... P looks relieved...
Train reaches Allahabad... Prof greets P... the man helps P and praises her saying that it was gr8 they way she slapped that goon... P perturbed.. Prof curious.. asks what happened.. P says that those goons were harassing too much.. Prof says no need to confront them.. just move away and avoid such ppl... P says forget it lets go... Prof says lets wait for those boys to go away... finally they leave... unknown to P and Prof, Angad and his friends have spotted them and watching them... Angad glaring at P in hatred...
no precap..
Edited by a_uma - 13 years ago

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hussainramso thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
we're fricken off our rockers!!!

here's to us !! 👍🏼

🤗 that's for you for leading the way
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That Meanie will never allow me to be ahead of her

Thankoo Dii... Berry phast 😳
Edited by --Kabe-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very good and I should be back to update from next week if u still want me to..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sheena-

Very good and I should be back to update from next week if u still want me to..

Absolutely... 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sheena-

Very good and I should be back to update from next week if u still want me to..

What do you think... Can escape from us that easily... never ... 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Kabe--

What do you think... Can escape from us that easily... never ... 😈


Backdoor exit is always an option...😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sheena-


Backdoor exit is always an option...😈

Only this kind options can escape you.. otherwise you know 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the update Uma🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meanreds

we're fricken off our rockers!!!


here's to us !! 👍🏼

🤗 that's for you for leading the way

🤣
@ Uma - thanks for WU 👍🏼

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