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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nyc romantic update dear
pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😍😍...Ashu dear dat was lovely👏...plz update jaldi😛😉
m waitin😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ashuuu...woww...its super romantic...n even P is in full mood todayyy!awww...awesome...plsss continue...yeh bhi kauno poochne waali baat hai ka...ki continue karein ki nai!awesome...i lubbd it!pls update sooon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That's just great beta 😃 😳 update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beta ab jaldi update karbo yaar😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Part 2

Later that day, Krishna at his restaurant was all smiling and he was lost thinking about the kiss and how Pratigya was in full mood in the morning. There was a customer standing in the counter waiting to pay his bill but Krishna did not listen him call. He kept day dreaming. Chandu took the money and settled his bill. He shaked Krishna and asked him what had happened to him and where his concentration is. Krishna smiled…started to describe the morning scene but stopped in the middle and shouted at him to go and work….

Krishna: hamesha muft mein picture dekhne ki aadat tumhari gayi nai na abhi tak….

Chandu stood there scratching his head and went off smiling. That was when a courier boy came delivering the courier….Krishna wondered as to who will send him letter.

Pratigya finished off her kitchen work and returned to her room….she was arranging the wardrobe when her eyes fell on their photo… she took it in her hand and kept admiring him….she thought to herself," pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya hai hume hum apne aap ko sambhal hi nahi paaye…. Par pata hai Krishna (caressing his image on the photo) roz tumhaara kaam pe jaane ke baad hum tumhe kitna miss karte hai… jab tum nahi hote ho na to ek ek pal ek yug jaisa lagtaa hai…haan lekin jab tum paas hote ho to 24 gante bhi aise chutki mein chali jaati hai…… lekin hum tumhe ye sab kabhi nahi bataa sakthe…(smiling) agar bataate to tum saara din bas ghar par rukh jaate"

She was talking to herself and she heard dadi calling her… she went to the hall.

Dadi asked her to massage her legs as it was aching … Pratigya, the ever dutiful bahu, masagged her…..While dadi shared some gyaan with her. Dadi said her that she always solves others problems, helps them and is so attached to her famly… but dadi asked her to even concentrate on Krishna….. she told her to pay him attention more because he needs her more of her time…if she doesn't attend him then there can be many chances of Krishna searching for himself someone outside….it seemed to have made an effect on Pratigya.

Dadi: tum baba ke saath zyaada waqt bitayaa karo… bechara aaj kal bahut hi mehnat karta hai…. oo par dhyan do….

Pratigya: par dadi Krishna aisa kuch nahi kar saktha…. Wo hume dhoka nahi de saktha…

Dadi; hum bhi jaante ki baba aisa kabo nai karega… baaki aaj kal ki laundiyan par wishwaas nai kar sakthe….

Pratigya was left thinking when Krishna entered calling out her name. SS had too arrived…..

Pratigya: tum iss waqt ghar pe??

Krishna: arre babu yaar… humari restaurant pe ek chitti aayi hai… ee liye usse padne khatir aaye….

Pratigya: achcha… laao

On reading the letter, Pratigya was so happy that she was about to hug him…Krishna on seeing her forwarding to hug him quickly stretched out his arms…but Pratigya stopped as it was hall and all were present…. SS asked what the matter was and why she is so happy reading the letter….

Pratigya: bauji… (With ecstasy in her tone) Krishna ke restaurant ko poore desh mein sab se behtareen restaurant chuna gaya hai…. do din baad usse Shimla jaana hai award lene….

Everyone was so happy and dadi shouted piyasi to get some sweet. SS was so happy that he had tears in his eyes and hugged him. He appreciated him saying that he has done it. SS praised Pratigya for making him sucha a honest, hard working man. Krishna took the blessings of dadi and hugged her. Dadi praised him too. Pratigya had already gone inside their room. She touched his name written on the letter again and again. Tears fell on the letter. She could not explain how happy she was.

SS asked him to take Pratigya along with him as she needs to be by his side when he gets the award. Krishna was all the more happy and his mind had already started planning their 3rd honeymoon. He called up Chandu and gave him the news… chandu was on top. Krishna asked him to book two flight tickets to Shimla for tomorrow morning. Krishna was more happy that he would get time to spend time with his wife alone for four days (award one day... 2 days before and one day after)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ashu, itz juz awesome n love... Wow Baba's restaurent chosen 4 award... Love it completly, such a happy n awesome update...😛
Edited by Veena.S - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks all for the comments to the previous part.. hope you guys enjoy this part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ashu awesome ekdum lallantop update👏👏




Edited by vikram0669 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_arja

thanks all for the comments to the previous part.. hope you guys enjoy this part😊

Ashu, change the title yaar, with update n pg no...😊

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