OS: Just KriYa updt part 3 @ pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

omggg...dis is d best ashuuu...awesome...da way u made a situation for kriya to be together...awesome...wowww a 3rd hollimoon!me on cloud nine...n pls...no samra wid dem...plsss...update sooon ashu,..sooonn!



nechu dear...
kaa samjhayio humka CVs?? kauno bachche ko hollimoon par saath lekar jaata hai ka??
u call it a hollimoon and then say no Samar wid dem😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW ashu great yaar i just loved it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3


Pratigya carefully keeps the invite in the bed side draw that is when Krishna comes in and lifts her. He circles with her in his arms…. Pratigya keeps shouting asking him to leave her down but Krishna refuses saying he is so happy and he will not let her go. Pratigya insists…..Krishna mumbles and leaves her down when she hugs him tightly congratulating…. Krishna had already taken full use of the opportunity made the hug tighter. Pratigya loosened herself from his hug, kissed his forehead and both his cheeks very desperately.

Pratigya (taking his face in her palms): aaj hum bahut khush hai Krishna…. Aise hi dekhna chah rahe the hum tumhe… tum aaj sabit kar dikhaaye… sach mein hume bahu garv hai tum par… (tears peeping out from her eyes)

Krishna (had tears): ee sab tumhare wajah se hua hai babu..hum to goondai kiye pher rahe the… jab se tum humri zindagi mein aayi ho sab kuch badal gaya… jis din tumko pehli baar dekhe uss din se humri zindagi poora ulta hoyigawa…. Joun log humse darte the wahi aaj humri izzat karte hai…. ye naam, izzat, aadar sab tumhari wajah se mila hai yaar humka…. (kissing her palms) sach mein hum bahu khush kismati hai….

Pratigya: iss mein humara kuch nahi hai Krishna… tum sach dil se mehnat kiye ho bas uski phal mila hai aaj tumhe… tum bahut achche ho Krishna….

Krishna (wanted to change the mood now): waise tumka pata hai aaj kaise sab kuch achcha hua??

Pratigya: kaise??

Krishna: aaj ka din meethe se shuru hua hai…. ye liye sab achcha hua…

Pratigya: meetha (confused… but realized that what he meant. She blushed)

Krishna: to hum ka keh rahe the ki roz aise hi meethe se shuru karte hai din to poora din shubh hoyiga….

Pratigya: dhattt… (hitting on his chest…..she moved towards the closet)

Krishna (pulling her towards him): kahan chal diye beta…humri baat khatam nahi hui hai…

He slowly bent down and caressed her lips…was about to kiss when Chandu called him… Krishna got irritated…..he shouted at Chandu for calling at the wrong time. Chandu asked him sorry and informed that he has booked the tickets for tomorrow morning's flight. Krishna was so happy… Pratigya asked him the matter

Krishna: dekho babu jaldi jaldi saamaan pack karna oo kahe ki kal subah ki flight hai…

Pratigya: par Krishna award function to do din baad hai… kaafi hai agar hum parso nikhale to….

Krishna: kahe ek din mein ka hone waala hai… hum chahthe hai ki hum tumhare saath akele kuch waqt bitaaye…

Pratigya: wo sab to teek hai lekin Samar…

Krishna: Samar ki dekh baal ke liye yahan log hai… tum bas ab humri chinta karo…

Pratigya: par ye sab achcha nahi lagtaa….

Krishna: hum samajh gaye… tum humare saath Shimla aana hi nahi chahthi…..kauno baat nahi hum akele chale jaayenge…. Tum hum se na pyaar hi nahi karti ho ab… ab tumka na humse zyaada bahut saare cheezen zaroori hoyigawa hai… (turning away his face)

Pratigya (tensed): nahi aisi baat nahi hai… (turning his face towards her).. yahan dekho.. humari taraf.. hum kab kahe ki hume tumhaare saath nahi aana hai.. tum hume nahi bhulaate na to bhi hum aa jaate… wahan Shimla wo bhi aise award parties bahut saari ladkiyan aati hai…. agar koi ladki humaare pati par fida ho gayi to.. iss liye.. hum to zaroor aayenge…

Krishna: achcha to tum humre saath humri rakhwali karne aa rahi ho… bas iss liye ki koi ladki hum par fida na ho jaaye…. Tumko humre oopar vishwas hi nahi…

Pratigya: aisa nahi hai Krishna…. Bahut vishwaas hai baaki in ladkiyon par nahi..

Krishna: jaayi do…

Pratigya (smiled… putting her hands around his neck): hum bhi tumhaare saath akela kuch din rehna chahthe hai…. ab khush

Krishna (wide grin): ee hui na baat…. Ab tum jaldi se pack karo hum restaurant jaake baaki kaam bas khatam kar ke aayi jaate hai… (catching her jaws in between his thumb and index…he placed a quick feather like kiss on her lips and went)

Pratigya stood there smiling as he moved.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Superb..aur ka khe tumka..keep rocking waiting for next updatewa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soo lubbly, so Kriya goin 2 shimla...😛... Right time par koi na koi disturb kartha hai...😡😆... Han shimla mein ye sab nay chalega ashuwa... "don disturb" tag phone par n door par bhi lagana...😉😆... Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so so so lallantop update hahaha kriya going to Shimla for honeymoon na coz kriya's first honeymoon venue was also Shimla which spoil by madamji so u planning for successful honeymoon😳 😳 then keep it up👍🏼 N write more n more romantic scenes☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful...kriya going to shimla.😍.wow gr8...keep updating...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wow kriya going to shimla waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
thanks for all the comments🤗...
i am not CVs so u guys can be relaxed.. tabhi OS ka naam bhi jus KriYa rakha hai😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_arja

thanks for all the comments🤗...
i am not CVs so u guys can be relaxed.. tabhi OS ka naam bhi jus KriYa rakha hai😉

Ashu FF update kab...😔😆

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