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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

twoo chapterdd shumi dii ..sorry for replyingg lateeeee...............

mindblwingg chapterssss ...........omggg krishnaaa in vestt .......how hott he would be lookinggg .........

i m happy that pratigya didnt resign this timeee ..so now she'll be in his officee ..thats niceeee ...plss give some kriya scenes ......

thanks for updatingg reegularlyy

update soonnn

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: aleena1
Shuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmiiiiiii di 😆 🤗
aleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenaaaaaaaaaaa my sweetyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🤗
Oh no.... The chains broken..... Wanted to be the first to post 😔 ouch! no worry...better luck next time😃

Anyway awesome chapter Hun 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ THANKS ji😃

Hmm so krish is the new boss...... Hmmm can't wait for work romance to begin......you can see them romancing soon😳

Update soon Hun keep it up haan ...haan😃
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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani
twoo chapterdd shumi dii . yep..😃.sorry for replyingg lateeeee.....no worry............
mindblwingg chapterssss ...........omggg krishnaaa in vestt .......how hott he would be lookinggg .........lol😛😳

i m happy that pratigya didnt resign this timeee ..so now she'll be in his officee ..thats niceeee ...plss give some kriya scenes ......lot of kriya scenes are awaiting for you dear😛

thanks for updatingg reegularlyy u r belcome😃

update soonnn sure😃

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Sun7shine

@Sun7shine

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Hi di! Read all the four chapters, sry for being late..... All chapters are simply awesome. I too had started a fanfic a few days back but i know i won't b able to reach the level u r at... Once again di, rocking chaps.... Looking forward to ur next chapters....

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

PART-5

rolli was right.neither shakti nor krishna reqularly attended that branch office.krishna started coming to office twice in a week just for two to three hours.some times hardly for an hour.

branch office:

pratigya was standing in krishna's cabin.

krishna:'miss.saxena... these two files are from our head office.review these files and note down the discrepancy if any.should be done with in an hour' he said looking in to his rolex.

pratigya:'i will...😊'she took the files and went to her seat.

those files are the refund files claimed by two different customers.she checked the files,noted down her remarks in the stick notes and back to his cabin.krishna was standing near the cabinet searching some documents

pratigya:' sir...' he looked at his rolex and noticed that she was back with in 45 min...15 min before time.

krishna:'😊...is every thing is fine miss.saxena...?' while asking he signed with his left hand to take her seat.

pratigya:'i have noted down few discrepancies...'she sat in the guest chair and kept the files on the table and continued.

pratigya:'sir...all invoices of mr.roichand are fake...'she opened roichand's file.

krishna:'what???😲'he left the cabinet and came to her seat to look in to the file.

pratigya:'the another customer mr.jain....his documents and calculation does not tally with our original document' pratigya opened the page and showed the errors.

krishna:

is it?...' he was standing behind her chair.he hold her chair from back and causally leaned front to look in to the file kept on the table.pratigya did not expect that.the distance between them was negligible.his chest was close to her head... almost touching it.she felt uncomfortable and nervous .all of a sudden tiny hairs near her back rose and stood straight.

on the other hand krishna's breath caught in his throat.her feminine fragrance kindled his hidden emotions.pratigya tried to push the chair back to get up but could not as because he was holding it.

she slightly turned and raised her head to look at him.for her surprise he was looking down at her!....her eyes got locked with his eyes.he deeply looked in to hers.they were electrifying and exhilarating...felt as if her sight was more powerful than ultra violet... both of their feelings had the same wave length.

'her beauty is not just in her face,it is her personality,innocence, frankness,brilliancy and her boldness'at once the thought ran in his mind.

pratigya:'excuse me...'she distracted him and try to get up from her seat.

krishna:'i think we have to reject their claim...😊'he was back to action and behaved normally suppressing his inner feelings.

their claim was approximately rupees 5 lakh (500 thousand).she saved that amount to the company with in 45 min. he was astonished.

krishna:'umm...brilliant work!...i am impressed...😃'he said with a 1000 watt smile.pratigya did not acknowledge either his appreciation or his eye catching smile.

krishna:'i should agree you are a talented young lady.if you want i can transfer you to my head office with a hike in salary....😃'he tried to tempt her.

pratigya:' it is ok... i am fine here...😒'

krishna:'if you work in the head office you will get more experience, have more chances to work with me😛....you can meet me more frequently than this office...😛'said with the naughtiest look in his eyes.

pratigya:😡...she walked out of his room neglecting his offer.

krishna:

hostal room night 7 pm.

pratigya was folding her cloths.rolli was sitting on the bed and pealing an orange.

rolli:'i have a news for you...guess what?...😊'

pratigya:'what is that? good news or bad news...?😕'

rolli:'that i don't know😕...you have to say whether it is good or bad...'

pratigya:'oh...come on..enough of suspense...😕'she left folding the cloths...came and sat beside rolli on the bed.

rolli:'do you remember ....last week i went to Auxilium secondary school for math teacher interview...'

pratigya:'yeah...do you got selected?😛...'

rolli:'good guess...😊'

pratigya:'wow...it is certainly good news rolli...🤗'she hugged rolli.

rolli:...you know i hate teaching...

pratigya:' rolli...it is better for you to go out and do some thing...i wish you will have good time with the children...😊'

rolli:'tough time too...🤣...'

next day rolli got ready along with pratigya for her first day of teaching carrier.

she wore a plain light yellow cotton saree.matching blouse.she combed her hair up and put a clip on it.with a simple make up she was looking gorgeous.

pratigya first time seeing rolli wearing saree.

pratigya:'not bad...i am impressed...😉'she said in krishna's tone tilting her head to one side .

rolli:'omg😲...pratigya!!!

...you are unbelievable...😆'the way pratigya tried to imitated krishna made her laugh.

pratigya:😳😉

in the club around 5pm.

krishna:'why in yesterday's account there is a debit of twenty thousand rupees?' he was sitting in the manager's room and checking the accounts.

manager:'koi rayeez ghar ka ladka aur uss kay dostone nasha mai thod phod kardiyeh...'

krishna:'...rayeez hoga uss kay baap kay gharmai...

, bar mai nahi...debit the amount to his account...

'he closed the ledger and got up from the seat.

manager:'ji saab...'

anitha:' hi...dude...😛 ' when krishna came out of the manager's room one of his hi hello friend blocked his way.

krishna:'hi...😊'

anitha:'shall we dance ?😛😃' she extended her hand and took him to the dance floor.

anitha:'man....you are the hottest 😛😳'she always had a crush on him.while he was shaking legs with her she took advantage and tried to seduce him.sliding her hands on his shoulders, she moved more close and tried to stick on him.krishna understood her intention...while dancing he gently pulled back his steps to avoid sticking with her.

anitha:'krishhhh...you are irresistible man.....😛' she tried to raised on her toes to kiss him. before her lips could reach his lips...

krishna:'excuse me...manager😊...'he left her half way and went in search of the manager.

anitha:' ...damn it...

'she was pissed off.

'what happened?😊...'another guy came and joined with her in whom she has no interest.

anitha:'nothing...this krish is thinking too much of him self...😡'she said looking at krishna fuming with anger.

guy:'obviously...every one knew about his attitude...😃...'

anitha:'..today i will teach a lesson to him and to his so called attitude😡'

guy:' 😆...honey( modified version of ani...😆)...he is a blue whale...impossible to catch with a fishing rod...😃'

anitha:'wait and watch

...'

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Natasha., zubi622, ninita, roshna1020, shalinikanagu, b2011, swtgrl92, sweet_bhanki, pheonix1, shefads, zash_LubUKriYa, HamiSky,

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Sun7shine
Hi di! hi sun...😃 🤗 nice to see u on my ff thread 😃Read all the four chapters, sry for being late....i am glad that you read my ff...don't mind being late...😃. All chapters are simply awesome. thank u 😃I too had started a fanfic a few days back oh i see! but i know i won't b able to reach the level u r at..don't say that...every one has their own talent...all the ff writers doing great job.sab ekse bad kar ek hai.....😃..if i find time i will try to read your ff...😃 Once again di, rocking chaps.... thanks again...😃Looking forward to ur next chapters....just now updated...

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa
Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiii.........🤗 🤗
hi azi...🤗whoah!!!!!!!finished my internals today....good job azi...👏.n jz entered the forum..OMG!!!!!!!wat i have got here is ur 2 chaps to read!!!!!...yep...updating almost daily😃

btw...read both chaps...good😊

chap 3 was...........hmm...ROCKING!!!!!😉😆.....actually i was imagining the last scene in my mind...😉(u r giving me continuous chances to start my BP...😆) hahaha...control beta control...😃ufff!!!finally Prats agreed to change her Behenji attire....krishna impressed by prats na?yep😉😳*sniffs around*whether any sortt of smell is coming?lub is blossoming...😉 true😃

Perfect convo b/w KriYa......😆😆😆😆....thanks...😃aarambame modhalaa...😆😆...modhal la wara kaadal thaan pa strong ka erukkum...😉first slipping from high heels n then ironing his coat...😆.they have a long way to go....agn,last scene.uff!!!!.......wanna see something lyk that in real....😉 heeee...break beta put break...😆

n wat to say abt chap 4?🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.....

it was rllllllly very very interesting!!!!!!!! THANKS 😃

oh hoo....K offered drink to P,though indirectly.😉.cute na...?😛.LOL!!!wen i was reading K saying,"for the FIRST tym some one rejected my offer".....i was lyk....kaa bey,everything has a FIRST tym,evn to get impressed by someone...😉 exactly...😆

seems lyk Pratigya is secretly drooling over Krishna....yep...she started doing so...😛😆..truly speaking,sight adikkiraala?😆 hehehe...😆

n krishna is not behind tooo.....not wasting any chance........😆 true true true😆

umm hmm...so K is P's new boss...got the prey inside his trap na?😆..hahaha...wait and watch😆..so more fight(i prefer.....u knw wat)is on the way na...heeeeeeeee i know behoodi...😳.eager to read hw the real story unfolds.....puriyalaya? purinchidichi purinchidichi nalla purinchidichi 😆 i need more.....jaldi update karbo na...........updated dear😃

n this is esp for chap 3..... thanks😃

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AW I LUB U 😃my MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH to ur kids.!!!!!!!! THANK U😃

lub u loaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaads me 22222222222😃

azikutty

catch you later azi...till then have this...

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago

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Sun7shine

@Sun7shine

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Hi dii, once again.... Yuppie I m d first one to reply.... Ah loved the chap. Wonderfully done... Let's c wt Ani does and how krishna reacts..... Waiting eagerly for next update.... And Di U r a star

Edited by Sun7shine - 14 years ago