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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
ASAK Shumi
how r u dear??
this new FF is exciting!! carry on,...lukign fwd to regular updates!!

sory for relyig late,..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: shumi.

azi chellam i will reply you soon😛jaldi karo na?😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Shumi diiiiiii.........
u strike agn!!!!!!!aur woh bhi itni jaldi 2nd chap update kiya?hurraaaaaaayyyyy!!!!!!!
hru di?fine na?hw r ur kids?
jz read it....jz lubd the part-"MOST AVAILABLE BACHELOR" hmmm.....😉😆....so Rolli is drooling over Krishna na?acha hai...competition is good....😆😆
yaa,agree with Preeti...me too thot that it'll be K's company the moment she told about the call letter....i was expecting some jagda from Prat side....but her sarcastic answers wer fantabulous!!!!!👏👏👏👏..this is wat krishna shud get.....i mean hw arrogant he was?but eventho,i cant complain Krishna completely...(u knwy... 😳)coz acc to him,she stared at them at the club na?but im not supporting his actions after that....k.....nw,coming to Prats....she was brilliant n bold in saying those wonderful lines....!!!!!n i felt sad wen she rejected his job offer...🥺how can they come closer nw?but later felt that it was ryt....there is no need to be with him hu had insulted her to the core....but hw r they gonna meet nw??????jaldi bolo na?im becoming impatient......
n as always it was a dhamakedar update!!!!
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
lub u loads
urs
azi


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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
forgot to say in KLM thread.......
ur Karan Patel is awsome!!!!!!!!i lyk him very much....i didnt see Kasturi,so dont knw about him....he is cute!!!!n that photo was .........waahhhhhhh!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

forgot to say in KLM thread...what?😕....

ur Karan Patel is awsome!!!!!!!! obviously 😛i lyk him very much....yaar you have to see his acting...uff..he is the one who impressed me to this extant that i can write four long ff on him...😛.i didnt see Kasturi,so dont knw about him..omg!😲 i think you should have a glance of him.....he is cute!!!!n that photo was .........waahhhhhhh!!!!! hai na!...😛 if you find time see this two links where karan makes kasturi to confess her love...at the end they hug ...trust me i have never seen such a lovely hug in my life...never ever seen...

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: mushiroxx

shumi........🤗 mushi dear 🤗 nice concept...thanks will try to keep up with the update after monday....coz i have a paper on monday...😔 no worry take ur time 😃

all the best for your paper👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: HamiSky

ASAK Shumi walikum salam hami😃
how r u dear?? alhamdullial😃
this new FF is exciting!! THANKS 😃carry on,..sure 😊.lukign fwd to regular updates!! sure sure 😃

sory for relyig late,..no worry😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

shumii dii ..pehle tohh thankss for updatingg soo qiucklyy ...it is all my pleasure dear 😊..its so muchh interestingg to readd regularr updatesssssss

the updatee was awesumeeeeeeeeeee..........thanks surbhi😃......
lubbed the way u described krishnaaaa ..so hotttt soo handsomeeeeeeeeee ..i formed his pic acc to ur descriptionn .......nicee oneeeee lol good job👍🏼
soo pratigya left teh officee .. yep .butt krishnaa is gonna leave her for insultingg himm .......waitingg to see what he doessssss wait and watch😉
update soon haan ji😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-3

pratigya was back to the hostel by 1.45pm.

as soon as she entered the room she threw the file and her hand bag on the bed with frustration.

rolli:'kya hua?😲.....why are you up set...?😕'she got up from her bed and asked with concerned.

pratigya:'arey yaar...interview board mai wo thah...😡'

rolli:'wo thah!😕...kaun..wo thah...?😕'she raised her left eyebrow.

pratigya:'wahi...wo attitude wala...what is his name...😕?'

rolli:'krishna singh....😛'

pratigya:'whatever...'she said carelessly.

rolli:'tho?...😕'

pratigya:'tho kya...i did not attend the interview...i came back...'
rolli:'but why...?😕'she was confused.

pratigya:'rolli...you know that this is my first interview and i don't have any previous work experience....lot of candidates with high qualification and good work experience were waiting behind me.any way i won't be getting that job...'

rolli:'pratigya...for your first job where ever you go you are going to face this ...'

pratigya:'i know yaar...ufff...😔'she sat on the bed with a sad sigh.
rolli:'forget about it...tu kayhati hai na raat gaye tho baat gage...'
pratigya:'par yeh tho raat nahi hai na?...'

rolli:'😆...achcha chal😊....we will go to mess .it is time for the mess to close...'they went together to have their lunch.

next one week they spend ideally with out any remarkable change. pratigya was hunting for job in full swing but could not get one.

hostel room around 2pm:

pratigya was cleaning and arranging her study table.rolli was making coffee in the coffee maker.

pratigya:'rolli...what is your future plan?😊...you have completed your studies and you don't want to work also...😃'she said with concern

rolli:....😕..

pratigya:'how long you are going to stay here with out studies and with out job haan?😕😒...'she was worried about her.

rolli:'tch!😒....jab thak tum yahaan raho ge thab thak mai bhi yahi rahun ge...😊'

pratigya:'there after...😕'

rolli:'god only knows...'she shook her shoulder.

pratigya:'why don't you go and stay with your dad?....'she insisted her again.

rolli:'come on pratigya...you know that i can't tolerate my step mother for a second...uff i hate her...😡'she brought the coffee in two mugs and offered one to pratigya.both sat on the bed to have coffee.
when they were having coffee rolli's cell rang.

rolli:'hello...😊'

rolli:'yeah mai teek hun...😡'she said without showing her anger and signed to pratigya that it is her dad kabhir dhanraj calling.
pratigya:😃

kabhir:'do you remember today is our wedding anniversary?😛...'

'holy...sh**..😡'....rolli said in her mind and bit her tongue not to show her emotions.

rolli:'oh😡...i am sorry dad...i was busy ...completely forgot about that...'she said a very big lie keeping her anger under low profile.
pratigy:😆...she laughed looking at her.rolli kept her index finger on her lip and told her not to laugh...his dad can find out.

kabhir:'evening we have a party at home😃...please come...'
rolli:😡...'she kept silent

khabir:'bring pratigya also...'he knew that with out her she is not going to come.

rolli:' i will...😡'she switch off the cell.
pratigya:'kya baat hai?... issa kyun gussa kar rahi ho?...'
rolli:'tch!😡...dad's wedding anniversary today with that witch...i hate this day...😡'
pratigya:😆

evening around 6 pm pratigya and rolli were busy in getting ready.
pratigya wore a dark gray jeans over that white sleeveless, pure cotton kurtha.the kurtha was much above her knee, just touching her thighs,its high neck was grandly designed with dark gray silk thread . over that she wore a dark gray plain transparent chiffon dupatta spread across her chest falling on both the shoulders.while she was combing her hair and trying to put a pony....

rolli:'wait...wait...wait...😃' rolli went behind pratigya.

rolli:'leave your hair...don't tie it...😊'

pratigya:'nahi rolli...it will irritate me...' she refused.

rolli:'no...try to get used with open hair...you are no more a school or university student...😡'
pratigya:'please ...rolli...😊' she refused to leave her hair open.

rolli:'just a minute...leave it to me...'she combed her hair neatly , took the scissor and trimmed the bottom part evenly.

pratigya:'omg!...what are you doing?😲...'she try to turn back and look.

rolli:'don't worry ...just i am trimming your split ends...😊'her long straight hair was flowing down till her hip.

rolli:'ether phiro...😊'she told her to turned towards her.
rolli:'god!😛...you look ravishing...just a minute...'from the front side she took two block of hair and cut short it till her ear lob.

pratigya:'please don't......i don't want all those style...'she refused.

rolli:'come on pratigya!...people those who don't look good try to look best with their hair style and make up...but you are a born beauty...little bit of make up will make you stunning...'pratigya knew that she is right.
pratigya:...she tried to do some thing with her hair.
rolli:'don't touch your hair...leave it as it is..next week i will take you to parlor..'

pratigya:'no way...i am not going...😒'

rolli:'we are going...'she forced her to put little make up on her face too.

pratigya slightly applied face foundation and powder to make her face skin flawless ,thin mascara made her eyes more adorable, light brown lipstick with dark lip liner and lip gloss showed her lips more sexy and attractive.

when pratigya was about to wear bunch of silver bangles.....
rolli:'no...no...nope..wait...'she stopped her and made her to wear titan watch with black thin strap on her left hand wrist...kept the right hand plain.
rolli:'remove this dupatta...gives you behanji look...'😡suddenly she pulled out pratigya's dupatta from her shoulder.
pratigya:😲...omg! what the heck you are doing?😡...give my dupatta...i don't like to go out without dupatta...'
rolli:' uff...tu kab sudrogi?😡...fine...but on only one side of her shoulder...'without troubling her further, she hung her long chiffon dupatta elegantly on left shoulder.
pratigya:'😔....
rolli:' see! you look so gorgeous😛...kaash mai ladka hothi...hotha..😉😍'she winked at her.
pratigya:'😡 😆...you too go and get ready...we are getting late...'

rolli quickly wore a short tight sleeveless gown till her thigh.below that she wore thin stockins with no accessories. she quickly brushed up her short hair and make up her face with export cosmetics.both look in different style one is in western another one is in asian.while they were wearing sandals rolli forced her to wear high heels sandal.

pratigya:'rolli😲...i can't walk properly...the heel is too high...😒
rolli:'nothing will happen.wear it.....'she gave the high heels and made her wear forcefully.
pratigya:'nahi rolli...i can not walk fast with this heels...'she explained her difficulty.
rolli:' wofo!😡...try tho karna?...by the way we are not going to walk .dad's driver is coming to pick us...😊'
pratigya:...tu bhi na...😡😊'she tried to act as if she was angry

when they reached the party they were bit late.cake cutting ceremony was already over.rolli hugged her father and said formality wishes.

pratigya:'many many happy returns of the day uncle...😊'

kabhir:'thank you😊...go and enjoy the party...😃'

rolli served cake in a disposable plate and gave it to pratigya along with a plastic spoon.rolli took a wine cup for her.while pratigya was talking to rolli she heard a familiar husky sexy voice near by.she could not control herself.she took a quick turn to find out whose voice it was.at the same time the owner of the voice also turned and looked at pratigya.

krishna:'tum...yahaan!!!!!!😲...'he started with angry tone....as soon as he saw her absolutely glamorous with jeans and sleeveless kurtha...his tongue stuck inside his mouth and he forgot to blink. her open hair with front bang made her look more charming and tempting .he could not stop staring at her.
krishna:'😲 CLASSIC...😛' without his knowledge the word 'classic' spilled from his mouth! pratigya made record of taking the place of first women in krishna's life who captured his attention distinctly.pratigya could not with stand his stare.she lowered her gaze with worry 'god!😲... is he going to insult me again in front of all?😔'her heart beat raised.
krishna:'...umm... not bad😃.....i am impressed...😛'as soon as he was back to his sense he commented gently nodding his head, looking at her new get up with a spark in his eyes which is sufficient enough to burn the whole party.

pratigya got embarrass with his constant look.she turned her face away from him to distract his attention.by that time a small girl running around bumped on her.unexpected pratigya couldn't balanced her self with her high heels.she tripped and fall on krishna.the cake plate she was holding went and stuck to krishna's coat and to the inner full sleeve white shirt.

rolli:'pratigya...😲 are you ok?...😕'rolli came to her help.

pratigya:'i am sorry...'she said to krishna by managing herself to stand properly on her own.

with in micro seconds krishna was back to his attitude and arrogance.he looked down his coat.his brand new white branded coat together with inner white shirt was decorated with brown and white chocolate cake.instantly his face got heated up.

krishna:'what the hell this is??...Angry'he looked in to his coat and screamed.

pratigya:'i am sorry...i am sorry😔...'she said again and again.she got scared of his voice.
krishna:'i hate people who give excuses for their mistakes...Angry'his husky voice sound rude and violent.

rolli:'don't create a scene ...😡....give us the coat we will clean it ...😊'because rolli interfered he cool down little bit.

pratigya:'rolli...it was not my mistake...😒...that small girl run and hit me...i just lost my balance and can't manage with my heels...😭'she bit her lip and swallowed her cry which was about to burst out.

rolli:'i know...i know...no worry...'she supported her.krishna removed his coat and gave it to pratigya.he undone all the buttons of his full sleeve shirt and removed it for washing.inside he was wearing white waist. he stood completely exposing his wide strong shoulder with biceps and triceps muscles.
his build up look made pratigya to go weak on her knees. his small confusing designed cute tattoo on his left arm distracted her and unknowingly the coat slipped down from her hand.
krishna:😲...argh!😡'he became wild to see his expensive white coat lying on the ground without any value.

krishna:'omg...rolliiiiiAngry...where from you brought this creature...😡'
pratigya:😭...she burst in to tears.

rolli:'krishnaaa...Angry...will you please stop insulting her...'
krishna:' insulting!😡... look at the condition of my coat!😡...'

rolli:'go to my room and wash that ...'she picked up the coat, gave it to pratigya and send her away from the angry man.

pratigya went to rolli's room wiping her tears with out others knowledge.she went to washroom and washed the part of the coat and the shirt where the cake was sticking.she came out and plug in the iron box.she spread the coat on the ironing stand and pressed the coat with iron box where it was wet.
while she was ironing her dupatta was frequently slipping from her shoulder and troubled her.she removed her dupatta and kept it aside.when it was done hurriedly she unplugged the iron box ...in hurry forgot to take the dupatta ,took a quick turn and once again bumped on krishna.

krishna:Angry

pratigya:'aa...aap...😲'she never expected him in rolli's room.'omg! 😲 why i always make mistake with him.....'she cursed herself.
krishna:'teek se chalna seeko...Angry'
pratigya:'sorry...'

krishna:'how long you are going to make me stand half naked in the party...Angry'

pratigya:'sorry.... it is done...'she gave it to him.

krishna:'do you know how costly it is..Angry?' he started with huge anger looking at his coat and his huge anger gradually reduced down to zero when his sight moved from coat to pratigya. he saw her without dupatta !unconditionally seductive and sensational!....her chest was going up and down along with her heart beat! her front hair floating on her innocent face and eyes glittering with tears.
pratigya without dupatta!...krishna with waist!...centimeter apart...facing each other... locking their eyes ...she stood speechless!....he walked out speechless!


Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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