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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

great start....thanks 😃..krishna is a bad boy in it..bt me like it🤣...behoodi babu😆...saw another ff of trs which i have never seen before..which one?😕.will read it in one go soon..let me know wether u like it?😛...update soon n PM me too sure 😃




Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Hi Shumi! Congrats on your new ff and for introducing Krishna as a tough character... imposing, arrogant, spoiled brat with power! but as a krishna fan i don't mind😆😆😆😉 in fact it will be a challenge for our heroine! I am looking forward to see how Krish will overcome his flaws! but hope he won't stoop that low! Thank God he's not a boring character! Shumi, You are a versatile writer and it is the diversity which makes the story brillant! Eagerly awaiting part 2!
Edited by shefads - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

shumii diii ..neww ff ..wowwwwwww

i read itt ..it wsa awesumeeeee . thanks surbhi 😃..krishnaaaaaa is a bad boyyyyy ...angryy arroganttttttt ........but still i lubb himmmmmmmm ....lol...then when u r going to hate him?😉...........
poor pratigyaaa ........was tryingg to help rolli .....so true😊...and krishna made her go out of the clubb but i m suree krishnaaa will lubb herr laterrrrr wait and watch😉
nicee ff ....THANKS again dear😃
updatee soon haan ji 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: KriYa_life


WelCome Back Shumi Di....thank you dear😃

Thank you for starting another FF...it is all my pleasure😃




I just love your ff... thanks dear...it was a great compliment to my ff😃

Jaldi se next part likhbo... pls..haan ji😊

I love the Arrogant, Angry Krishna...i am sure you will keep loving him in y ff😊

Lubb you again...thank u dear😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: shefads

Hi Shumi!...hi shehnaz😃. due to some problems could not read the first chap but very soon i'll comment... no worries!

hope every thing is fine with you now😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: shefads

Hi Shumi! hi shehnaz glad to see you back so soon...🤗Congrats on your new ff and for introducing Krishna as a tough character.. THANKS 😃. imposing, arrogant, spoiled brat with power! but as a krishna fan i don't mind😆😆😆😉...wahi tho 😆 in fact it will be a challenge for our heroine! challenge for me too to potrate him as a good and bad together I am looking forward to see how Krish will overcome his flaws! wait and watch ...😃but hope he won't stoop that low! hope i will satisfy your expectations...Thank God he's not a boring character! lol 😆...he will never be...Shumi, You are a versatile writer and it is the diversity which makes the story brillant! aw...i am impressed ....thank you so much 😃Eagerly awaiting part 2! going to update today...inshallah 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.............
Me here,me here.......😆😆
ISHQ HUA ISHQ HUA......aapke ff se ISHQ HUA....!!!!!😳😳😳
u knw my comment before i write it here.....i PMed u na?😉😆......neways,first one to read.....but sorry...may be last one to comment......me liking this Krishna nw itself......😳(gonna start my BP from the first chap itself......😉😆)i mean he is totally different from all ur ffs..whoho!!!!!!!!spoilt,arrogant,angry Krishna!!!!!!!😳😳
i really felt bad for Pratigya....n that Rolli..😡...y didnt she tell him that prats is her friend?Poor Prats....
anger sparking between KriYa in the beginning itself....im eager to read wen this spark of anger change to spark of lub.....
but wat im rlllly looking forward is the HM to Kerala...after all its my place na?n u told me hw long it is....😉😳.....impatiently waiting for the nxt update.........wen r u gng to update?jaidi jaldi!!!!!!
NB:my "LIKE" button is not working!!!😡.....cudnt press like to ur update.....one min..y shud i click the LIKE button?coz i dont LIKE it......i jz LUUUUUUBD it!!!!!
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lub u loads
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART -2
rolli came out of the club following pratigya.

rolli:'pratigyaaa...sorry...😕' she groaned, her words were not clear.she was drunk .her steps were unsteady and she was struggling to stand straight.

pratigya:'rolli!😲...tum ne sharab pee ?!😔...god!...'she hold arm tightly to make her stand properly. rolli's physical condition made pratigya to forgot about herself and krishna singh's insult.she wiped her tears, holding rolli in one hand she waved her other hand and she stopped an pass by auto.
pratigya:' chalo ander...😡'she pushed rolli in to the auto , she too got in and sat beside her.

pratigya:'bhai saab ...YMCA women's hostel chalo...'
YMCA working women's hostel!

when they reached the hostel they were late .the mess was closed.pratigya took rolli straight to their room.rolli went tumbling and fall on her bed without control.

it was a big room with two separate foam beds and decorative pillows,matching bed spreads and blankets. two separate study tables ,a mini fridge, with attach bath room and no kitchen.a flat screen PC, small AC and a wide window with transparent screen between their bed is the plus pint of their room.
look at their room!
in one side there was a big table were they had basic things like coffee maker,water filter,water heater,small micro oven,bread toaster and few china clay utensils.the room was a complete mess up.because of exams they don't care to clean up.
after helping rolli to lie on her bed properly pratigya opened the fridge took the long life milk , heated it in an electronic heater and poured it in two big mugs.

pratigya:'rolli...utto...😊'she wake her up. as she was not sleeping she got up and sat on the bed with her legs cross folded.

pratigya:'rolli...have this milk😊...and then go to bed...'with out saying any thing rolli drank the milk and went to bed.

pratigya changed in to her night dress,opened her pony and set her hair free,removed all accessories kept aside and went to sleep but she could not sleep immediately.her mind was constantly thinking about the club incident ...just like that in no time how she was thrown out like garbage! before she could realize the things she was out of the club.she took a deep breath.when the incident flashed in her mind her eyes automatically filled with tears.

' it was my mistake😭...i should not have gone in to that club.going and standing beside a dancing couple and disturbing them is really indecent. by the way who was that man with rolli😕?what relation rolli has with him?😕'she tried to pictured his face in her mind , she did not looked at him properly in that dim light ...she was bothered more about rolli than the man with rolli.with so many thoughts she went to sleep.

next day when they woke up it was very late.11pm.

after taking bath pratigya woke up rolli.by the time rolli fresh up pratigya cleaned the room little bit.

again they missed the morning mess.pratigya took the bread from the fridge and toasted it in the toaster,spread jam and butter over that.

pratigya:'chalo...have your breakfast...😊'both of them sat on the bed and started eating.while eating rolli went and brought two apples from the fridge to have along with the breakfast.

rolli:'pratigya... i am really sorry for the yesterday's incident...😔'she sincerely regretted.

pratigya:' chod na yaar ..raat gaye tho baat gaye...😃'she smiled at her.
rolli:😊...she gave a guilty smile.

pratigya:'waise... who is that man😕? i have never seen him with you before...😒'
rolli:'omg!...don't you know about him?😲...uffff....he is the most available bachelor in delhi now...😛 😍'

pratigya:'oh i see? i never knew...🥱'she don't care to know his name even.

rolli:......because you neither go to this type of places nor rich people parties...'

pratigya:'do you have any relation with him???😕😊

rolli:'🤣 .....joke of the year...''her unexpected question cracked rolli.
pratigya:

rolli:'😛...it would be my pleasure if at all i have any relation with him 😍.wo kisi bhi ladki se pat tha nahi hai...'

pratigya:'tho fir...! 😕...yesterday you were dancing with him!......Confused'she was confused.

rolli:'so what...?😊 it is the statues of rich people, like having boy and girl friends ,drinks, going to club, partying etc etc...waise bhi he is my father's business competitor.i use to meet him in parties...😃'
pratigya:'oh!...🥱' she did not interrupt.rolli continued while eating apple.

rolli:'he is a young, angry,man with full of attitude.but you can not brand him as spoiled brat.he knows his limitation.he knows where and when to stop the thinks.right there he does with out any hesitation.girls say he is a man of self control... i don't know what he thinks about the girls😕....but i have never heard a girl who impressed him to the extant that she can get into his bed room.'
pratigya:'😊
rolli:'you know...he is one of the top ten business men in delhi...😃'

pratigya:'interesting...😊'she went and brought orange juice from the fridge for both of them.

rolli:'more over that was his own club.he visits frequently...don't mind his words.he is like that...'she tried to convince her.
pratigya:😊 after giving a ok smile she went and sat on the computer in search of jobs.

rolli:'pratigya... when you will be going to your home town?😊...'

pratigya:'last one month i stayed there during my revision holidays.now i have to get a job.after that only i can think about that...😊'she replied while checking her mails.

pratigya:'wow😛...i have received a call letter for an interview tomorrow...😃'she jumped out of her chair.

rolli:'that was fantastic😃... at what time?😊...'she was happy for her.

pratigya:'10am...😛'she said while taking the print out of the call letter.

next day 9 am, pratigya got ready for the interview.rolli was still sleeping.pratigya knows that today also she is going to miss the mess.she quickly made the bread egg sandwich for rolli and kept it on the table.

she wore a light brown high neck, short sleeve salwar with white chiffon dupatta.as usual tied her hair as a single pony tail...flowing on her back straight silky, big silver ear ring,both the hands full of white silver bangles.she took her certificates file in one hand and hung a long strap black leather hand bag on her shoulder.

pratigya:'rolli..i am leaving...😊'

rolli:'teek hai...all the best...👍🏼'with out opening her eyes she wished her and showed her thumbs up.

by 9.45 am she reached the office by public transport. after getting down from the bus she took the call letter and cross checked the name and the address.
sajjan singh enterprises !
headquarters of ' sajjan singh enterprises'. she raised her head and look at the big multistory building with a smile.'wow😛...my first job is going to be in this office!'she was excited. with the same excitement she went in to the office building and showed her call letter in the reception.the receptionist verified her letter and told her to sit along with the other candidates.when her turn came the peon called her name and let her go inside the interview room.she did a quick and short prayer to get this job before entering the room.

pratigya: 'excuse me...😊' she said while entering the room.

the person sitting behind a big table with a lap top in front of him was looking in to her resume.when he heard her voice he raised his head and looked at her.he was non other than krishna singh!

krishna:'oh!...you!😕...youuuu...😕...i have seen you some where😕 ...wait a minute...let me think...😕'he tried to refresh his mind .pratigya stood still and looked at him.he was decently fair with thick eye brows.well sketched lips,sharp short nose,brown twinkling eyes,dimple cheeks,every thing well arranged with in round face with strong jaws.he is around 26 years.
he was wearing a pure white full sleeve shirt folded up to his wrist.two cute very small white gold earrings just touching is ear lobs showed him more handsome.with multiple white platinum finger rings , a platinum bracelet in his right hand and a rolex watch in his left hand.every part of him showed his richness.with in fraction of a minute she captured his figure in her mind and tried to match it with the club man doubtfully. by that time he brought back his memory.

krishna:'yaaa😃...i got it...day before yesterday in the club...😡'he said in his husky and sexy voice.
pratigya:.......😔...club incidence brought sad shade on her face.

krishna:'waise... thaykne mai seeti saati gharelu lagti ho...par club mai ghumti phirti ho!... haan?😈...'he scanned her with his brown twinkling eyes from top to bottom and laughed sarcastically.he intentionally did not tell her to take her seat.

pratigya:... she was standing in front of him at a distance of 0.015hectometer ( 1.5 meter😆)

krishna:'pratigya...sucksana😆...22 years...masters in math..awaiting for the result...😈'he looked in to his macbook air laptop and read her profile with a criticise.

pratigya:.... she did not move from her place.

krishna:'wow ...work experience...nil😆...zero.. 😆...umm...par i hope you have lot of experience in staring at dancing couples....😉 😈'he gave a teasing look and continued...
pratigya:....
krishna:'...here after take your boy friend along with you when ever you go to the club...so that atleast other couples can enjoy their dance with out your disturbance...😈' he smirked. before he could continue she turned towards the door to walk out.

krishna:'hello😊...miss pratigya sucksana😆...i think you forgot that you came her to attend the interview...'he called her for interview.
pratigya:'...i do remember SIR...but ...i am no more interested in your job...'she said quietly without showing her anger and disappointment.

krishna:'what????😲😡.....'he clenched his jaws in anger.so far nobody said to him that they are not interested in working with 'sajjan singh enterprises ' it is such a well reputed public limited company.people were dieing to get in to this company.

'this girl😡...with no previous work experience....dare to say not interested in my reputed company...😡'krishna was fumming with anger

krishna:'miss sucksana😡....do you know about our company?...'before he could continue she interrupted..

pratigya:'i don't care to...😡... and i don't like to work with characterless people like you ...' she stepped towards the exit door.
krishna:'characterless!😡....' he got up from his executive chair with erupted anger.
krishna:'😡...obviously you have no clause...do you have manners at least?...😡'
pratigya:' obviously i do...do you need to have some?😊 ...i know that you are running short of it...😉'
krishna:'😡
pratigya:'... by the way clause doesn't come with look and dress...clause lies in character...clause lies in ones altruistic and authenticity, genuineness and simplicity.... not in arrogance and attitude...😛'she nailed him with her harsh advise along with a sweet smile on her cute lips.

krishna:'damn it...😡 😡 😡 teaching ME!!!!!😡'he bang the table top with his fist which left the table vibrate.his face turned red with anger.
pratigya:😊...without caring his reaction she pushed the room door and walked out cooly.
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiii di😆🤗

Again im the first to post🤣
Awesome chapter hun😃😃👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Oh my........ Im seeing stars😆😆😆
Loved it........hahaha krish is the ultimate bad boy here😊.......... hah prat shut his gob......😆😆😆
Awesome answers to a pathetic and arrogant person😆😆Next time he will know how to approach a person😆
Update soon........... jaldi jaldi😆😆
Keep it up👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by aleena1 - 14 years ago

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