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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

Shumi Ji, It was a very cute and romantic chapter😳. thanks shehnaz 😃. great to see Krish being naughty and mischievious again..yep...soon he will be on action...😃.it's good to see him back to normal😆..exactly 😃.my favourite scene is when Prats found her earring, dupatta and cd which was kept safely as a sweet memory! yaar do you remember long befor u said ' u don't want him to give her ear ring back...' hope you liked the way he kept it as his sweet memory And loved Krish for his brillant idea to record their conversation 😉....that is cuz i want see his first confesstion..when they are in love.😃 i get a feeling Shakti is interested in Rolli....no wonder he is getting worried over a simple cold😉...good guess...😉but the real headache is Sumitra Devi!😡 she is the typical tyranic mother😡And jealous too!..exactly...she is money minded lady, she hates middle class people..same like in the serial... imagine her surprise when she will get to know Prat is a not a nurse😲 and on top of that she is rich! 😆 ...this one they will come to know later....as of now even krishna things that pratigya is from middle class family...only rolli knows her states...hope Prat is strong enough to endure any obstacles! hope so....but soon she is going to face tough time ....Please Shumi Ji update as soon as you can!...sure 😃.do we get to see the Sax Fam.. in the next part???? not now...you can see sax family again when pratigya forced to leave singh's house And Where is Nitin?😉 ...he is going to be back soon...i am sure you will love him! Till then BYE! TA TA 😃⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 in every up date you encourage with lots of stars and claps....thank u so much and this is....😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice chapter.. LOVING IT

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Shumi di... Hw r u??? Sry, I m late.... Once again di, fab chap.... Loved it, oh loved d way K had kept P's belonging - like his only treasure.... Di, m a bit busy nowadays, so sry for short comments..... Ok di bye lub u... Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I edited my post on PG 48. Updt soon Di.
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PART-21

next day it was saturday.around 1 pm.shakti and pratigya got ready to visit rolli.shakti came to krishna's room to call pratigya while krishna was reading a book.

shakti:'hi baba!😊... pratigya are you ready?😛.....'as soon as krishna saw shakti he chuckled.

shakti:'kya hua...?😕'

krishna:'pratigya😃.....is there any party in rolli's house?😆' he did not answered shakti.

pratigya:'nahi tho...😕'she was confused with his question.
krishna:'kisi ko thayk thay hi muchay laga you people are going for a party...😆'he try to hide his laugh behind the book.
pratigya turned back and looked at shakti.she under stood that he is teasing shakti's get up. he was looking 5 years younger than his age.shakti's face turned red.

shakti:'krishna!😡.....mai nahi jaane wala...'

krishna:'teek hai. maat jao...😆'he laughed.

shakti:'pratigya iss kay baatho mai maat awo...chalo ,better we will go from here...😳'with out showing his face, without waiting for pratigya he walked out fast.

pratigya:'mai jal thi se ajawoon ge.aap apna ghayal rakna.kuch bhi chahi yeh tho chandu kaka ya amma se pooch lay na...😃'
krishna:'don't worry.i will take care of my self.for the past so many days you too did not go out at all...have fun...😃😉'he winked at her.
pratigya:' keep this cell phone beside you...if you get bored call me...bye...😊...'she gave the cell to him and tried to turn in hurry , but she could not. along with the cell he hold her hand too.
pratigya:'kya chahi yeh?...😊'
krishna:'kya chahi yeh!Angry i don't want this rukha sukha bye...'he said with a long face.
pratigya:😳...'she understood what he wants and tried to kiss on his fore head.
krishna:' nahi nahiAngry...i don't want this bachon waala kiss...Angry'he moved his head and avoid her kiss.
pratigya:😆😳
krishna:'yahaan par...😛' he showed his pouted lips.
pratigya:'😲 ...that is too much...haan!Angry...'
krishna:'atleast yahaan...😛'he showed his cheek.
pratigya:😳..aap bhi na!...teek hai aankhen band karo...😊'
krishna:'aankhen band kyun?Angry...'he refused.
pratigya:'behass maat karo...muchay thayr horahi hai shakti bhai is waiting down...'she was in hurry.
krishna:'fine...i will close only one eye....😉'he close one eye, and the other eye on the side which she was about to kiss, kept wide open.
pratigya:'aap bahut chalaak ho...😳'she quickly bend down towards his face and give a short peck on his stubble cheek.
krishna:😲😳😛
pratigya:'😳...bye...😛'before he could come out of her magic she took her hand bag and ran away.
after a 30 minutes drive shakti and pratigya reached kabhir dhanraj's house.
dhanraj villa!

even though krishna and pratigya visited that house few times to attend parties, for shakti it was his first time.they were received by the servant.khabir was out with his young wife.

pratigya:'rolli..se millna hai...😊'

servant:'wo unn kay kamre mai hai...😊'he said obligingly.

pratigya:'mai jaa kay mill le thi hun...😊'she left shakti in the hall and went to rolli's room.rolli was searching her cloth from her ward rob.

pratigya:'hi rolli...😊'

rolli:'pratigya tum!😛...what a surprise!...come come ..come inside...😃'

pratigya:'tum nahi aaye iss leyeh mai chali aaye...😊'

rolli:'that is so sweet of you pratigya...😛' both of them sat in a couch.
pratigya looked around .it made her remained the day when pratigya made delay in ironing krishna's coat and he came in with vest and shouted at her for leaving him half naked in the party...that thought brought a smile on her face.

rolli:'what is up?...looking so happy...😉'

pratigya:'kuch nahi...tum teek tho ho na?...'

rolli:'what is wrong with me ? i am perfectly alright...😃'

pratigya:'you said that you have cold...'

rolli:'it was just a cold.wo tho aata jaata raha tha hai...'😊

rolli:'actually i was getting ready for a shopping.achcha hua tum agaye.come with me...😊'

pratigya:'shopping?😲....nahi muchay jaana hai...'

rolli:'tho kya?...i will drop you...'

pratigya:'no,i came with shakti....'

rolli:'kya? shakti kay saat...?😲😛'she was surprised with her answer.

rolli:'where is he?😛'

pratigya:'waiting in the hall...😊'

rolli:'waiting in the hall!!.😲....are you serious...?'

pratigya:'haan😕...'

rolli:'you should have told me earlier...poor man so much time he is sitting alone in the hall.come lets go...'she did not even wait for pratigya to follow.

rolli:'shakti...tummm!!!!!😲...'as soon as he saw rolli he stood up.immediately he realized his involuntary action and sat down.

shakti:'wo...pratigya was missing you for the past two days and she requested me to take her to visit you....'he looked at pratigya with a weird and guilty smile.
pratigya:😲....she was listening to him with her mouth open.she could not refuse because it is her turn now.once when rolli told sumitra that shakti asked rolli to bring a nurse for krishna, shakti did not refuse.

rolli told her servant to serve juice for them.

pratigya:'rahay ne dho...no formalities...😊' she said formality words.while shakti did not show any objection.
rolli:'tum ruko...mai lathi hun...'she sopped the servant and rushed to the kitchen and came back with juice.
shakti:'thanks...😛😛'even before she offer he took one.
pratigya:😲...'
rolli:'pratigya....you too have...'
pratigya:'it is ok...i don't feel like...'she did not take.

rolli:'shakti i want to take pratigya for shopping...'

pratigya:'no no ..i want to go back with shakti bhai.....'she refused.

shakti:'if it is ok, i can take you for shopping and drop you back...😊'

rolli:'double ok😃...just a minute i will be back...😛'she walked fast to her room to take her hand bag.pratigya looked at shakti and wondered at his strange behaviour.
pratigya:😲

rolli told shakti to take him to a fancy shop.she did lot of purchase.each and every thing she showed shakti to get his suggestion.they completely forgot that pratigya is also with them.she was standing behind them as a extra fitting .from there rolli went to a sari shop and selected some saris.along with them pratigya too did few purchase.
it was almost 2pm.

rolli:'i am feeling hungry.let us go to a hotel and have some thing.....😃'they did not ask pratigya.pratigya followed them without saying any thing.

in the hotel shakti and rolli saw the menu and ordered the food.

shakti:'pratigya...tum kyun chup chaap ho?...😊'

'thank god! ab tho mere baare mai yaad aaya...'she thank god in her mind.
'kuch bolne diya tho na bolun ge....'she said to herself.

rolli:'kuch kaha tum ne?...'
pratigya:'kuch nahi...😊'she took the menu card and told the waiter to pack dry fruits halwa.

shakti:'packing kyun...?😕'

rolli:'chandu kaka kay leyeh😆...omg!..what a stupid question you are asking ? it is obviously for krishna...😃'she explained.

pratigya didnot acknowledge their talk.she acted as if she was busy eating.
soon after the food,

pratigya:'it is getting late we have to go...'she hurried them , she was worried about krishna.she tried to call him but he did not answered.

rolli:'pratigya...i know you are worrying about krishna.you are worrying as if you left him in the jungle...his amma is there to take care..'she teased her.

after dropping back rolli they reached home by 3pm.she staright away went to krishna's room and found him in sound sleep.she don't want to disturb him. without disturbing him she went to her room.she too was tired.she took a nap,fresh up herself and then went to krishna's room.it was around 6pm then.he was waiting for her.

pratigya:'sorry...i was bit late...'she entered with an excuse.

pratigya:' not bit late...big late...Angry😊'

pratigya:'i know i know...i am sorry...omg...you know what happened today...'she started with a big question and helped him to lean on the bed and sit.
krishna:'what happend?😕😊'

pratigya:'shakti bhai told rolli that i forced him to take to rolli's house...😲...i never expected this...i was like...what!😲'
krishna:😆
pratigya:' when rolli offered juice...he did not refuse for formality...he took it from her and drank as if he never drank juice before...😲'

krishna:🤣.....then?....'

pratigya:'then what?shakti bhaiya voluntarily came forward to take us for shopping...😲'

krishna:🤣

pratigya:'aap ko hassi arahi hai?😒...during shopping they forgot about me.they did not remember that i am with them...they were like on their date!😲'

krishna:🤣
pratigya:'aapas mai dono discuss karleyeh...bas went into a hotel...😲'

krishna:🤣
pratigya:'thank god atleast they remembered to ordered food for me....😲'
krishna:🤣

pratigya:'hasso maatAngry...i was in such an embarrassed position...'
krishna:'pratigya😃....pyaar kab? kaise? kissise ? hota...pata hi nahi chalta...😊'
pratigya:'kya!😲 are you serious?😲...'
krishna:' it is such a delicate feeling which conquers you...it becomes almost impossible to get out of it...wait and watch...😉😛'
pratifya:'muchay tho kuch samaj nahi araha hai😕...wait a minute...😊' she remembered some thing and left him to bring the sweet.

pratigya:'have some sweet ....😊...you like dry fruit halwa isn't it?😃.'she sat beside him ,opened the box , took little from it and fed him.
look at the dry fruit halwa! yum!😛
krishna:😛...while he was enjoying and eating , a small piece of sweet stuck beside his lower lip.she wiped his lower lip softly with her fingers.

krishna:😃... took little from the box and fed pratigya.while she was eating he looked at her with deep affection in his eyes, he leaned forward and moved her front hair gently by his fingers and caressed her cheek.
pratigya:😳 😃...kya baat hai...😛'she understood him from his touch.

krishna:'before my accident i thought that i was in love with you.but now i realize that tumare bena muchay jenahi nahi hai...😭'he leaned more forward and hugged her with tears.she acknowledged his love and passion by gently moving her fingers back side of his neck... up in to his silky hairs and kissed on his shoulder.her fingers and lips spoke tons to him, by soothing and comforting him.
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

I edited my post on PG 48. Updt soon Di.

updated dear😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

*edited* Oieee Shumi dii... Wat an AMAZING Part!!! Krishu started with his naughtiness again.. back to square one lol D CD part was Wowiee.. thanks 😃Sumthng Cooking Between Rolli & Shakti. yep😉 Uff.. Amma is so irritating. yep...😊Just like Devika Sabharwal.😲 😲 😲 ......how do you know?😲....actually it was Devika Sabharwal character i changed it in to amma...😊....have you ever seen kasturi serial...?😊 RoKa!!!!! uff😛....what a couple they are...ever green...😍...three years before the serial ended....still the forum is active and their fans too...😃

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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*edited* Me again first, Even for the part 20 I was first...Shuuummmiii di... OMG Fabulous Chap.. Rolli-Shakti (ShaRo) were so busy dat they forgot abt Pratigya.. SO SAD. My Krishu as Usual Berry Naughty.. But Kya Kare I like his Badmaashi.. But 1 thing I did nt like at the end of the part... Romance start karne se pehle hi khatam kar diya... U knw na dat Im hungry for such type of scenes... OK OK. Updt next part jaldi se.
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sun7shine

Hi Shumi di... Hw r u??? good good good 😃 how r u dear ? 😃Sry, I m late...no worry😃. Once again di, fab chap.... Loved it, thanks 😃oh loved d way K had kept P's belonging - like his only treasure...thanks for liking it 😃. Di, m a bit busy nowadays, so sry for short comments..... no problem at all..😃.Ok di bye bye 😃lub u..lub u 2😃.... Update soon up dated 😃

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