Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24

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The Witch

@carisma2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: shefads
Hats off to you for this mindblowing part Carisma! and Sorry for this late reply... too busy these days ..to be honest i would personally prefer a normal story as i am a die hard romantic!😉 also it would suit the story so well... but whatever decision you make will always turn out Awesome... so all the best!😃 Please update soon!👍🏼

Thanks a lot yaar glad you enjoyed it, did u read all the 4 parts?

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Filza.

@Filza.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

very nice! ⭐️ loved it..

i like the way you write, it definitely leaves an impact on readers.. i loved how you described Krishna's feelings, it touched my heart.. 😳

i personally would like to see a normal story, a love story, romantic one and realistic.. just a suggestion, but am sure however you go about it you will surely do a great job.

looking forward to the next part!

Edited by Filza.T - 14 years ago

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shahbara

@shahbara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: carisma2
Thanks a lot yaar glad you enjoyed it, did u read all the 4 parts?

It was a delight to read all the 4 parts.... very well written dear👏 am waiting eagerly for the next one! update soon!

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The Witch

@carisma2

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Filza.T
very nice! ⭐️ loved it..
i like the way you write, it definitely leaves an impact on readers.. i loved how you described Krishna's feelings, it touched my heart.. 😳

i personally would like to see a normal story, a love story, romantic one and realistic.. just a suggestion, but am sure however you go about it you will surely do a great job.

looking forward to the next part!

Thanks a lot yaar - Glad u are enjoying it and your feedback is appreciated.