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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi shumi , i just start to read ur ff... i finish part one, n its really good . i like it...soon i'll read next parts n do my comments in deatail.....thanks n tc....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sknra

Hi shumi , hi sknra...πŸ˜ƒ...nice to see a new reader πŸ˜›...welcome to my ff thread dear πŸ€—i just start to read ur ff... i finish part one, n its really good . i like it...thanks for liking it. i am sure you will like the other parts too...πŸ˜ƒsoon i'll read next parts take your time πŸ˜ƒn do my comments in deatail...awaiting for your sweet comments...πŸ˜›.😍....thanks u r welcome πŸ˜ƒ n tc..U 2πŸ˜ƒ..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Shumi... Just Awesome!!! You create magic with your writing.πŸ‘.. Part 55 was a delight to read, it was a light and hilarious chapter .. kriya scenes were cute! But what a twist in Part 56! Mindblowing ! Wonder if Angad really lost his memory😲.. I don't trust this man at all πŸ˜‰ but loved prats for her sarcastic reply to a dazed Angad..." We are friends" ! It was So Funny!πŸ˜† I feel for Chandu And Arushi... being victims in a such a traumatic situation is terrible !! I don't understand why people can do such awful things and i strongly condemned these attacks...they are heartless! Glad Kriya came to rescue their friends .... Hope Arushi will Yes to Chandu in the next part ! Poor girl ! πŸ˜† she was too shocked to react when krish and Chandu were teasing her! Great Scene Shumi! β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by shefads - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update shumi..................n this sudden twist...............but it will bring arushi n chandu together............πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
kriya scenes were awesome......loved them..............especially krish's concern when he washed pratz face......it was so sweet..........πŸ˜›
ur the BEST.....undoubtedly............⭐️
lub u lots........πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,πŸ€—
im back agn!!!!!!!
jz sneaked out from studies.....πŸ˜‰nan enna pandrath?romba bore adikuthu.so jz logged in n saw ur update!!!!!haila!!!!!im soooooooooo happy........hru di,hw r ur kids?i felt lyk giving an MUAAAAAAAAAAAHHH to your profile picture.....its ur daughter na?
hmmmm.....let me start my essayπŸ˜‰
chap 55 was sooooo sweeeeeeeet n cute!!!i lubd the fact that u started from the spot where u stopped chap 54...i doubted that whether u'll skip the part n go to next chap....but u r always unpredictable.....i jz lubd the way the emotions changed from sad to naughtiness.....
🀣🀣🀣🀣Krishna took her to washroom n Pratigya thot it was to somewhere else..🀣🀣too desperate..even excited than me🀣🀣......i lubd the last scene....Krishna's way of thankingπŸ˜‰πŸ€£reminding me about THODA SA PYAAR......told u na,ur ffs r always close to my heart......i sometyms forget that these are merely stories.....
bt i hv 1lly one complaint....chap 55 was tooooo short!!!!!!kaa karein?cnt control......bt neways....it was wonderfully delivered......di,u r proving again n again that u r the best!!!!!i always feel the real KriYa while reading the ff!!!Kudos!!!!
Chap 56...........hmmm....it was a gr8 shock for me!!!!!!at first,i thot they are going to Office.....WAAHHH!!!!!!My sweet Angad is back......🀣🀣lost his memory....😭....i was expecting a sorry from him!!!!its ok.there is still tym na?
i actually thot it was Chandu who was on wheel chair....but thank god he is safe... with ArushiπŸ˜‰i think Krishna is determined to pull the CONFESSION from Arushi.......it seems so...is it so?otherwise Krishna wont blame Arushi n scold her lyk this......imagination going wild....πŸ˜‰
ok ok ok.......let me stop here.....ha,before i stop......my friend wil kill me if i didnt convey this to u.....
MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!for the Diwali treat!!!!!!!!!as she dont have computer in her home,i messaged the complete chapter to her........nw im going to message 2 chaps to her......
here i goooooooooooooo...........πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
n also a gr8 MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH from me also.........
n ha,thnk u 4 wishing me all the best....but i messed up my first exam coz i got severe fever n body ache......neways hope other exams goes well.pray for me di.......
tc di
lud u loads
azi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

Shumi... Just Awesome!!! You create magic with your writing.πŸ‘.thanks dearπŸ˜ƒ. Part 55 was a delight to read, it was a light and hilarious chapter .. kriya scenes were cute! thanks again πŸ˜ƒBut what a twist in Part 56! Mindblowing ! Wonder if Angad really lost his memory😲.. I don't trust this man at all πŸ˜‰ but loved prats for her sarcastic reply to a dazed Angad..." We are friends" ! It was So Funny!πŸ˜† ...yep...angad lost his memory...that is the only way to remove angad from kriya's lifeπŸ˜†. i don't want to kill him as the CV did in the serial. I feel for Chandu And Arushi... being victims in a such a traumatic situation is terrible !! I don't understand why people can do such awful things and i strongly condemned these attacks...they are heartless! ..exactly....i wrote that part just to show some social issues insteads of always writting kriya romance ...as i wrote about blind school in my previous FFπŸ˜ƒ Glad Kriya came to rescue their friends ....true friendship...that too two two friends na!πŸ˜ƒ Hope Arushi will Yes to Chandu in the next part ! Poor girl ! πŸ˜† hope so...πŸ˜‰she was too shocked to react when krish and Chandu were teasing her! ...it is all to instinct arushi for her confession..Great Scene Shumi! β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ˜›

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Posted: 14 years ago
Avatarla paiyana? cute kid! how old is he?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

Avatarla paiyana? cute kid! how old is he?

🀣 ..she is my daughter...🀣...next time i will try to update both son and daughter together so that you don't have any confussion...🀣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi shumi, Nice update. loved it. as usual awesome. waiting for the update soon. Belated happy birthday. hope u had a nice birthday. I think that is the reason no updates for couple of days. waiting for the update

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