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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laks76

Hi Shumi, yep πŸ˜ƒwhat happened? nothing special πŸ˜†no updates after diwali. heee... i know you all need time to digest dewali treat that is why πŸ˜‰are u o.k.? absolutely ok...alhamdulillah πŸ˜ƒ loved yr updates. THANKS πŸ˜ƒwas waiting for your update.oh! i am sorry i could not update after seeing nowadays pratigya drama i have lost interest in it.don't talk about pratigya serila...the day aman entered the show ...it lost it charm....girrrrrrrrrr 😑i thought yr FF is more interesting than that.aw....that was the best compliment to my FF .THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH DEAR πŸ˜ƒ i hate the shakti and aarushi track which they trying to come up with. me too....girrrr 😑i don;t like shakti marrying aarushi. i wish it should not take place....girrrr but what to do? it is serial. but it is shaping in a ugly way....girrrr but we get used to things so much. it is difficult.exactly πŸ˜ƒ hope to see yr update soon.will try to update soon .

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

Updates slow ayduchu? wat hapnd?heeeeeeee...my husband is back home...i became busy πŸ˜†

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Posted: 14 years ago
oru maasam odi poyuducha? time is flying..
anywasy ok i understand.. ;-) :-)))))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part update soon waitin for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mushirox

shumi..............that was superb piece of writing..........πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

thanks πŸ˜ƒu made each emotion so slear, so pure as if it was coming straight from kriya's heart.............i love ur writing skills............πŸ˜› thanks for all your heart touching appreciations.πŸ˜ƒ
the whole romance scene was just WOW..........☺️☺️☺️ aw...thanks againπŸ˜ƒ
n after that the way pratz said to krish that she wanted all that .............for her guts........πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
finally kriya confessed their true feelings in full consciousness..........in so happy...........πŸ˜ƒ
ur brilliant,marvellous, fabulous, out-standing.........ur the BEST..........πŸ‘πŸΌ...thanks again mushi...i lub uπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

kya diwali treat thi...me like it 🀣...looks you enjoyed throughlyπŸ˜†

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khushboo16

nice part update thanks khushboo πŸ˜ƒsoon waitin for the next part try to update today inshallah 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

oru maasam odi poyuducha? time is flying..exactly...infact it is more than one month...he went for 5 weeks...😊
anywasy ok i understand.. ;-) :-)))))))...heeeeeeπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART-55

the blackberry from krishna's pocket rang continuously and separated kriya from their hug.

krishna:'ek minute...😊'
he let her go with passionate kiss on her fore head to attend the call.

krishna:'haan maa bolo...😊' it was naina calling.

naina:'pratigya teek tho hai na????πŸ˜•' she was very much worried.

krishna:' maa....aap bhi kamaal kar thi ho?😊 this is my phone!...you called me!!...but you are asking about pratigya not me!!!...πŸ˜†'he laughed looking at pratigya.she stood wiping her dry tears from her cheek.

naina:'thu bhi na!😑 just tell me is she fine?....πŸ˜”'she was annoyed about krishna and bothered about pratigya.

krishna:'e lo aap hi bathi yalo...😊'he spoke in allahabad style and gave it to pratigya.

naina:'pratigya...what was wrong with that brainless boy? haan!...😑'

pratigya:🀣 she tried hard not to laugh.

krishna:'kya baat hai? ...πŸ˜•'he raised his one eyebrow looking at her.

naina:'thum teek tho ho na?...πŸ˜•'she asked the same question.
pratigya:' maa mai bilkul teek ....πŸ˜ƒ' before she could complete krishna bend down and lifted her up by holding her legs just above her knees.

pratigya:'omg!😲 what are you doing!😲...chodo muchay...😲'she screamed.naina could here her scream.

naina:'pratigya ...kya hua?πŸ˜•... firse uss ka dhimaag ghoom gaya? ya gum gaya!...😑'she asked while krishna was carrying her laughing and walking towards the wash room.

pratigya:'chodo...mai gir jawoongi...muchay dar lag raha hai...πŸ˜•'she circled his neck with both her hands for support with blackberry in one hand.

naina:'pratigya...πŸ˜”'

pratigya:'maa...today evening we will come there...'she said to naina while she was raiding on krishna and slide the cell in his shirt pocket.

krishna:πŸ˜†

pratigya:' wash room kyun?πŸ˜•...muchay wash room nahi jaani hai.....πŸ˜’'she said looking krishna carrying her towards wash room.

krishna:πŸ˜†

pratigya: i thought you will take me to my bed...😳'

krishna:'aan haan!...πŸ˜‰' he kicked the wash room door with his leg to open it wide and let her down in front of the wash basin.

pratigya:'πŸ˜•....ufff...you are unbelievable!...πŸ˜•' she looked at him with confusion.

krishna:'look at your face! ro ro kay kya haal bana rakhi hai....'he opened the washbasin tap and made his finger tips wet with chill water.

krishna:' turn this side...😊 ...'he hold her chin with one hand and with other hand wiped the dark dry strains of the tears with care from her cheeks.

pratigya:😭...she was moved my his action.her eyes again filled with tears. they were like get... set... ready... to go...'

krishna:'wofo firse!...crocodile tears!...πŸ˜‰' he wiped her eyes again.
pratigya:' crocodile tears!...'😑 she pushed his hand and took handful of chill water from the tap and suddenly splash on his face.

krishna:' hayyy...😑'unexpected krishna got chocked with water.

pratigya:🀣....she tried to take some more water from the tap to throw it again on his face.

krishna:'..not again...😑' he leaned forward and tried to catch her.

pratigya:🀣....she ran out of the wash room laughing.

krishna:'pratigya ...don't run...'he ran behind her.with his quick wide steps he crossed her and blocked her way.he stood with water dripping face.pratigya's face too was wet.he ran his hand from his fore head to head towards his neck to drain the water from his head.his gesture and wet hair made him look more hot and attractive.his wet face was a delight to look.no men has ever captured her attention to this extant.for a moment pratigya forget about herself and drool over his look.he used that delicate fraction and try to catch her.

pratigya:'...nahi krishna...please no...πŸ˜›'she tried to escape. she knows that he is unpredictable.wonder what he is going to do?.

krishna:' maafi maango...😑'he stood with both his hands on his hip without caring to wipe the water from his face.

pratigya:'teek hai... teek hai...give me maafi...πŸ˜†'she said with attitude.

krishna:'😑...'

pratigya:'🀣...ok ok ...sorry...'she hold both her earlobes and made sorry and funny expression together.

krishna:'issa nahi...πŸ˜’...😑'

pratigya:'tho fir?!...πŸ˜†'she took her hands from her ears

krishna:'...isse...πŸ˜›'he wide open his hands inviting her into his arms with a kind smile flickered on his lips.in no time she ran in to his most precious hug and stuck to him.they were once again in their alluring embrace, kissing each other!

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PART-56
they soon got ready and came down.

krishna:'pratigya...call dad and tell him that we will be reaching office with in one hour...😊...he said while getting down the steps.


pratigya:'...yep! i will..😊
'

while krishna was driving pratigya was sitting next to him with a smile.

krishna:'kya baat hai?πŸ˜‰'he asked looking at her smiling.

pratigya:'aapko drive karthay hue thayk kar achcha laga...πŸ˜›'

krishna:'😊...thanks.this week end i will take you for a long drive....πŸ˜ƒ'
pratigya:'wow...that will be fantastic...πŸ˜›..'
after 15 to 20 minutes of drive when krishna parked the car pratigya was surprised.

pratigya:'kahaan agayeh hum?...πŸ˜•'both got down from the car.

pratigya:'yeah tho hospital hai!πŸ˜•...aap ki thabyat tho teek hai na?πŸ˜•...'she touched his fore head to check his body temperature.

krishna:'wofo...i am fine....come with me...😊'he hold her hand and walked ahead with a smile.

pratigya:'par kahaan?πŸ˜•...'she followed him with a question.

krishna:'angad ko thayk ne...'he said casually while walking.

pratigya:'kya?....i am not coming....😑'she stopped following him.

krishna:'pratigya...try to understand...insaaniyat naam ki koi cheez bhi hai...'

pratigya:'wo tho insaano kay leyeah ho tha hai na? ...😑'

krishna:'at least for courtesy sake we have to visit him. more over his health condition is more important for our cause...chalo...'he walked in front.with out any interest she followed just for the sake of him.

they went to the reception and asked about him.

receptionist:' we have shifted him from causality to special ward...wo abhi abhi coma se baahar ayeah hai...😊'

pratigya:what!😲 he is out of coma!...😲'she freaked out.

krishna:' that was a great news...thanks😊'

pratigya:πŸ˜”
krishna:'chalo....'

pratigya:'no i don't want to...πŸ˜”.'she was scared

krishna:'mai huna ...chalo....😊'he encouraged.she went with him hesitantly.

special ward:

angad was in light blue clean hospital uniform lying on the bed with a white bandage around his fore head.he was surrounded by few of his relatives including avi.krishna went close to him. pratigya hide herself behind krishna.angad did not notice them.

krishna:'ab kaise ho?...😊'he moved close to him and hold his hand with care.

angad:'πŸ˜•...πŸ˜•...πŸ˜•...aap..koon ho? πŸ˜•...πŸ˜•...πŸ˜•...'

krishna:😲 😲 😲

pratigya:😲......'

avi:'wo... bhaiya lost his memory.he don't remember his past...if you don't mind please introduce yourself...😊'

pratigya:'it is ok...rahey ne tho...πŸ˜ƒ'she boldly came forward with a grinned and stood beside krishna holding his hand.

angad:'aap koon ho?...πŸ˜•...muchay kuch yaad kyun aa nahi rahahai?...πŸ˜•'

pratigya:'don't strain your self.hum aap kay dost hain...😈'she smirked

krishna:'hum doctors se mil kay athay hai.take care...😊'he came out with pratigya.' thank god...aaj kay baad angad ka torcher khatham...usse tho kuch yaad hi nahi hai...😈'she was thanking her favourite god in her mind.when krishna was about to say some thing to pratigya all of a sudden they heard yelling ,crying and screaming of people. doctors,nurses,police rushing towards the causality. he tried to peep in and froze to see group of people pushing a person drenched in fresh blood fighting for his life in a wheel chair.for a second he closed his eyes to digest the scene, very next moment he grabbed pratigya in his arms.

look at the victim!

krishna:'don't look at...thum sehay nahi pawogi...'he hid her face in his chest and took her away from the crowd.

pratigya:'kya hua?...πŸ˜•'she was moved out of his hold.

krishna:'lagtha hai kuch accident case hai...let me find out...'he asked the person who was standing beside him.

person:'all because of political violence...'he said annoyingly

krishna:'political violence!😲 kahaan par?πŸ˜•...'

person:'i think near ring road...'

krishna:'😲...ring road! god! wahin tho NIIT hai jahaan chandu kaam kartha hai...'he quickly grabbed his cell phone from his pocket.

arushi's apartment:

when arushi woke up it was bit late. she remember the way she was miss behaving yesterday in holi with chandu ....'bhagwaan...ab tho sir aur bhi gusse mai ho gay...πŸ˜”'

'aaj sir ka last class...at any cast i have to go to NIIT.she quickly got ready took the auto and reached her class.she had no time or patient to go by bus.chandu was writing on the white board facing his back to her.

arushi:'excuse me sir...'her voice made her stop writing.

arushi :'may i come in...😊'

chandu :'yeah...'he continued writing on the board without turning towards her or looking at her.arushi went and sat in her place.today also avi was absent.'yeh avi ko kya hua?πŸ˜•.why she is not coming...is she dis continued the computer coursed and joined college? if that is the case she should have told me at least...πŸ˜•'she did not bother to listen chandu teaching.

10am,it was break time in NIIT:

all the students went out to relax and refresh.chandu was busy typing letter to the NIIT ADMIN.doesn't look he may go out for tea.arushi sat thinking for few minutes then grabbed her pouch,came out of her desk and went out.after some time she came with two cups in two hands.chandu was still busy.she went to chandu and kept a cup on his desk.

chandu :' i don't want coffee...'he said without looking at her.his tone was not pleasant.

arushi took that cup and kept the other cup which she was holding in her other hand.chandu raised his head and looked at her.

chandu :'i told you i don't want coffee...πŸ˜’'

arushi:'this is tea...😊'

chandu :'wofo...muchay chai ya coffee nahi chahi yeh...😑'

arushi:'aur kya?πŸ˜•...'she stood incomplete

chandu :'aur kya! 😑...i hope you remember during our field trip i proposed you.i want to know your reply...YES or NO...'

arushi: πŸ˜”.....she had no reply

chandu :'don't disturb me.take this cup and go to your place...😑' he started typing again.

arushi:πŸ˜”..... without saying anything she took the cup and came out of the class room.tears after irritating her eyes shed on her cheek.' sir ka gussa muchay kyun bura lagtha hai?...😭'she stood wiping her cheek.

'all of you evacuate the building , this building is under the attack of political gundas...QUICK...QUICK...'suddenly there was a loud intercom announcement.the announcement went on and on repeatedly.in no time tension spread every were,arushi threw the cups and pouch from her hand and ran down.chandu left the work and rushed out.'where is arushi???...😲'he immediately scanned the surroundings. she was missing.he again looked around and found her missing.
without wasting further time he rushed down along with other students and came out of the building.the whole road was messed up ,people were running in random...here and there in panic.the clash between two different party erupted a violence and tension in the public.innocent people were got injured by the extremists. traffic was stunned.crazy people started damaging public property and burnt a vehicle

look at the vehicle set fired by the extremist!

public got panic and ran randomly yelling ,screaming and pushing others trying to save their own life.they were in helter skelter.from distance chandu found arushi running along the crowd.

chandu :'arushi....'he screamed loudly and ran behind her and reached her in fraction of a minute.

chandu :'arushi...' he hold her hand and ran fast.but arushi cannot cope up with his speed.

arushi:'sir aap jaaye yeh...chodo muchay...'she pulled her hand from his hand.chandu did not stop running.he dragged her along with him.both were drenched in sweat with fear. struggled hard to breath.they were not sure that what will be their next moment.fear and tension made them weak.chandu tried to take her away from the crowd to the side walk.in his try the sandal slipped out from her right foot.she ran without sandal in one leg which made her more difficult to run.she kicked out the left foot sandal and ran with bear feet .without seeing or caring any thing she just ran with chandu.

soon police arrived to control the situation.police used lathi charge and tear gas shells to control the situation and disperse the crowd.agitated crowed pelted stones at police. some threw the stones randomly.the ring road was covered with stones and broken glass pieces.media people were taking risk and doing the coverage!

look at the agitation!

arushi:'AAAHHHH....' she stamped on a big glass piece ,the sharp glass edge pierced in to her heel , her heel tore and started bleeding...she stopped instantly.could not put a step forward.

chandu :'😲..god!...'he quickly bend down to help.arushi could not stand.she hold his head for support.he quickly plugged out the glass piece from her heel.while he was bending and removing the glass piece from her heel a stone flew from no where, came and hit the back side of his head.

chandu :'HHHAAAA....'he yelled with pain and hold his head. in no time his palm became wet with warm blood.fresh red blood started dripping in between his fingers.

arushi:😲...😲...😲...' she was about to faint.chandu gathered all his guts and pulled arushi forward.he saw a near by shop whose shutter was partially closed.chandu ran aiming towards the shop dragging arushi.with lot of struggle both reached the shop,bend down and got in to it.it was a small press looted by the extremist.the shop was very dark.no one was inside.the things were scattered all around.chandu and arushi were completely exhausted both physically and mentally.don't even had the strength to stand.

arushi:'ahhh...'she could not stand on her one leg, fall down and manage to sat flat on the floor.her right heel was bleeding constantly. she sat stretching her right leg.

chandu :'i think this is safer place...thodi thayr kay leye hi sahi...'he supported his back side of his head with his hand ,moved back and sat leaning on the wall.arushi too dragged her leg and sat beside him facing to him.

arushi:'...😭...'she looked at him bleeding.could not had the guts to speak a word.chandu tried to look at her.she was looking dim.he could not see her properly,he was slowly losing his consciousness.but he struggled hard to keep him self strong.
arushi took her dupatta and tied around his head like a turban which made chandu to feel better.back side of his neck and shirt collar were drenched with blood.he tried to wipe it with his hand.

arushi:'😭...maine baar baar kahana mera peecha maat karo...par...😭'she touched his cheek with her palm.chandu felt as if he is getting charged,gaining strength.he hold her palm.

arushi:'meri wajaise...😭' he did not let her complete her sentence,placed his other hand on her lips.
chandu's cell phone rang and they got distracted .he took her hand from her and tried to attend the phone.as he was weak the cell slipped from his hold.arushi took and attended.it was krishna!

krishna:'chandu ...thu kahaan ho?...thu teek tho hona?...'he was worried.

arushi:😭

krishna:'chandu ...chandu ...thu teek tho ho na?...'

arushi:'krishnaaaa....😭'

krishna:😲...arushi thum! thum log teek tho ho na?...chandu ka cell thumare paas!😲...chandu kithar hai?...πŸ˜•'he asked continuously.

arushi:'😭...chandu is bleeding...he need to be treated immediately...😭'she cried looking at chandu who was closing his eyes and leaning on the wall.

krishna:'god!😲...thum log kahaan ho?...' she said the location and press name.

krishna:'i will be right there...'he did not care to end the call formally.
when krishna and pratigya reached there the situation was brought under control.all the extremist were got arrested, roads were cleared,the traffic was resumed.with the help of krishna and pratigya chandu and arushi came out of the press and they were taken to the near by hospital.

hospital:

the causality ward were over flowing by victims.it was echoed by painful yelling and screaming of patients.doctors and nurses has no time to breath.more doctors from other hospitals came and joined them to serve the injured.

look at the causality wards over flowing with badly injured patients!


krishna took chandu and arushi for treatment! for their luck krishna's family doctor attended them.
krishna:'doctor...chandu ko head injury hua hai,he is feeling giddy too...is scanning necessary...?'

doctor:'i don't think so.it is only an external injury.no internal bleeding....giddiness because of tension and weakness...both of them need rest...'

krishna:'thank u ...😊'

they came out of the hospital with the support of krishna and pratigya.krishna made chandu to sit next to driver seat where as pratigya and arushi took the back seat.

while krishna was driving:

chandu :thanks...😊'he said to krishna.

krishna:'thanks!...😑...say your thanks to arushi madam...😑'

chandu :πŸ˜•...why are you angry?...'

krishna:'aur kya kar tha?...yeah sab arushi kay wajai se hua hai...na wo hothi ,na thu wo NIIT jaatha...na yeh din thayk tha...😑'he intentionally blamed arushi.
arushi:😭
krishna:'do you want to die for this hopeless girl?😑...'

arushi:😭...'she controlled herself not to shed out her tears.

chandu :'Usshhh...'he hold his hand.

krishna:😑

chandu :'issmai usski koi ghala thi nahi hai.don't be so mean...'

krishna:'ufff...mean! i am not...mean koon hai wo quth jaan thay hai...😑'

arushi:😭...'she understood that he is pointing her.

pratigya:'krishna....you better concentrate on your driving...'she diverted him looking at arushi crying.

chandu :'waise bhi i have confirmed my tomorrow's returned ticket to US...πŸ˜”'

krishna:'better you did it...good for you...😑'
his tone was still angry.
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