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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pree25thi

hay that was very fun

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mushirox

shumi............🤗 yesssss...🤗this was a fab update...aw...thank you ..........loved each n every part of it...........😃 glad you loved it...😃so krish's bed was suitable for two to sleep while holding hands......😆 heheeeee😉😳

how romantic........😍 to find out how romantic read my up coming up date...😉finally chandu came..........his n kriya trio r so funny together.........😛 yep...😆the holi part was hilarious.........arushi drank bhang n was teasing chandu.......so a boy got teased by a girl...kya zamana aa gya hai..............🤣🤣🤣 such mai...😆liked the way kriya enjoyed each n everything.........Embarrassed☺️...thanks 😃looking forward to the next chap........will try to up date today inshallah 😃
lub u lots........🤗 lub u 2 🤗
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for u.......😆
😆 😆 😆 thank you and this is from me....😃

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laks76

Nice upadate. really loved it. THANKS 😃eagerly waiting for the next one.will try to up date to day 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shefads

Dear.. Dear.. Dear.. Shumi, oh! my dear shehnaz 🤗 loads of applause for these irresistible chapters! Bless you for giving us such romantic and passionate love- story !!!!!! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH YAAR 😃😛The Holi scene was the best part with hilarious scenes between Chandu and Arushi.👏 and Kriya!.👍🏼..thanks again for liking it 😃loved also krish bedroom.😆...hahahaha...😆.. his bed is perfect for cuddling! 😉😳 exactly 😉😳Great Work ! thanks 😃 Waiting for the next update!!! will try to up date to day inshallah 😃!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 lub you dear.🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiii,

azi....kutty...😛😉again its meeeeeeeeeeeee............yehhhhhhhhhh again azi molay....😛
caught ur double update...thanks😃.........sry,im in a hurry.....clearly running short of tym....so my comments will be a lil bit short......no worry no worry....even a single word comment is more than enough for me😛
as always the updates wer awsome!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS and as always your are sweet 😃n finally we got to see the holi celebration....yep😉..n i rlllllllly lykd the fact that nw Krishna's family is more comfortable with Pratigya.....all cuz of naina 😃...n seems lyk Arushi n Chandu's lub is on the ryt track...hope so...😃...absolutely lubd the Nasha part of the trio....hahahaha...😆....seems lyk krishna wil soon confess his lub due to the effect of bhang..good guess😃😉..it was real fun to read the Holi celebrations....thanks😃....u know a lot about north indian as well as south indian festivals.....epdi?athuvum ivlo azhaka epdi explain panna mudiyuth?...it is not a big deal...after all i am a indian and i love my country...😃u r simply superb!!!!!! thanks 😃!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 thank you thank you thank you
eagerly waiting for ur next update.......going to up date today inshallah 😃
lub u loads........lub you too😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Firstly Happy Diwali to all 🥳

Hi Shumi....been busy with work so haven't been posting my coments lately but i've been religiously reading each chapter as soon as its posted and as always you out do yourself and leave me wanting more !!!
👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Krish and his mum's bonding is really very sweet and touching relationship and the way she has taken to Pratigya is trully beautiful 😃
The food pix always leave me craving for each and every dish 😆
The Holi part was hillarious .... can't wait for them to get home 😉
And the then the whole Krish' bedroom bit was priceless.....i can't top thinking of that single bed 😆 😉 😳


Can't wait for next update....love you Shumi for giving us this beautiful KriYa Lubstory 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Cara86

Firstly Happy Diwali to all 🥳 thank u and wish you the same cara😃

Hi Shumi...yes dear 😃.been busy with work so haven't been posting my coments lately never mind yaar...😃but i've been religiously reading each chapter as soon as its posted and as always you out do yourself and leave me wanting more !!!
👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 THANKS U SOOOOOOOOO much for all your kind words😃
...and alternate claps and stars😃

Krish and his mum's bonding is really very sweet and touching relationship yep 😃and the way she has taken to Pratigya is trully beautiful 😃 thanks😃
The food pix always leave me craving for each and every dish 😆 heheheheeeeeeeee😃
The Holi part was hillarious .... thanks 😃can't wait for them to get home 😉 umm...hum...i understood 😉
And the then the whole Krish' bedroom bit was priceless....it too lot of time to find that pics lol.i can't top thinking of that single bed 😆 😉 😳...heheheeeeeee😆😉


Can't wait for next update...will try to post now 😃.love you Shumi for giving us this beautiful KriYa Lubstory 🤗 love you too for reading my updates regularly and encouraging my constantly by your wonderful comments 😃

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lUB UR UPDATE

when would they have their C of M,,, CAN'T WAIT

plz UPADATE SOON


I CANT WAIT

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Posted: 14 years ago


PART-54
Diwali treat - kriya's consummation and krishna's confession!

komal:'maa...thay kho inn dono ko...😒'she enter the house with pratigya and krishna drown in colours with their unsteady steps.

naina:'yeh bhagwaan!...😲' she slapped on her fore head.

komal:'maa...muchay thayr horahi hai.take care of them. i am leaving...😊'she left.

pratigya could not stand properly she was about to fall on the sofa.

naina:'don't spoil the sofa...go and take bath...go...'she send pratigya to the attached bath room in krishna's bed room
.krishna stood playing with the colours in his hands.

krishna:'happy holi...😛'he giggled and touched naina's cheek with his colour power hands.

naina:'haan... haan happy holi...😊...now go and have a shower...😡'she gave the towel and send krishna to the main bath room.

after a quick hot shower krishna came out wiping his head.naina gave him a tray with two cups of hot milk.

naina:' give this hot milk to pratigya.if you don't want to drink keep it in your room...😊'krishna put the towel on the sofa,took the tray from her and went to his room and kept it on the small wooden almairah beside his bed.the effect of the bhang was still existing with in him.he was feeling unsteady,felt as if the floor was slipping beneath his feet,things were going around his head, every thing was looking dim and dull.he felt as if his head became heavy.he fall flat on the bed and closed his eyes for a while.

when he opened his eyes he saw some one coming from his bath room.he managed to get up and sat on the bed.rubbed his eyes and looked again....it was pratigya who came out of his wash room after taking shower.

krishna:'😕....he tried to opened his eyes wide to see her clearly.
she looked different today.he stared at pratigya and tried to figure out what was different in her? .she was wearing his pant and shirt! she covered her head partially with a thin towel leaving front bang free,twisted it along with the hair and made a bun on her neck.he blinked and looked at her again.she was in his pants and full sleeve light brown checked shirt.she walked with her unsteady feet aiming to his bed but her unsteady steps lead her to the door.

krishna:'pratigya come here...😊' he could not speak clearly.

pratigya:'ok...ok...😃'she closed the door and bolted it, came walking zigzag and sat beside him.krishna looked at her strangely.

krishna:'yeh tho mera shirt hai!😲...'he touched its sleeve and checked.

pratigya:'haan...😛...i did not bring my dress that is why?😃'she turned towards him.

krishna:😲

pratigya:' am i looking good?😛' she showed his shirt

krishna:'😲...'almost all the shirt buttons of hers were undone.

krishna:'thum ne buttons kyun nahi lagaye?😲...'he was still under the high influence of bhang.he felt as if he was sitting on a magical bed which is flying high above the ground.

pratigya:'wo...buttons hai hi nahi... 😒' she shook her head to remove the towel and let her hair fall free, from the wet hair water dripped on her back. .krishna glued at her.she was looking amazing with her wet hair waving on her back, fair clean fresh face with out any make up. in his dim sight she was looking as beautiful as a apsara.he could not take off his eyes from her.he was dumb stuck by her beauty.

pratigya:'...thay kho na...'she moved close to him to show that his shirt has no buttons.
krishna:'show...😕'he checked near her collar. while checking his fingers moved on her neck.soft and smooth feeling of her skin drive him crazy. she was smelling like a bouquet of fresh roses .unresistant krishna moved his hands further below and his hand slipped down. first time he was seeing pratigya so intimately and had a glance of her bare chest.she was not wearing any inner garment.he was highly tempted by her.many times he was attracted by her charm and seduced by her closeness. in all those times he kept himself under control. those times he was in a sense to put sudden break to his emotions. but today he was not under control.all his hidden and suppressed feeling were stimulated by her and her closeness.
krishna:'thum bahuth sunder ho pratigya...😛'he drooled and gripped her collar.
pratigya:😛 she looked at him with a glint in her eyes .her ocean blue eyes made him insane.he got lost in her.
krishna:'i love you...😛' he said dreamily.
pratigya:😲 😭...'he said i love you to me!!!!!!!!...😲😭 ...she was deeply touched ,and her feelings were electrified by his statement .she felt as if her long term tabasya was granted.' nasha mai hi sahi he told me i love you...😭' her eyes welled up with tears. his ' i love you ' echoed in her ears as melodious as nightingale which was soothing to her heart and soul. welled up tears spilled from her eyes.
pratigya:😲😛...come again krishna...say again...😛' she touched his cheek and longed to hear him saying i love you. she gently moved her long elegant fingers from his cheek down...to back side of his neck , gently ran up through his hair and played with his hair by messing it up.
krishna:'thum muchay bahuth achchi lag thi ho...😛' he said gazing in to her eyes.

pratigya:' srif achchi?...😛'she pecked on his cheek

krishna:'i love you too...😛' he was moonstruck by her feminine fragrance and her peck.his hidden hunger for pratigya got alert.he quickly pulled her in to his arms.
leaned closed to her face and kissed on her neck below her earlobe, and nuzzled on her most sensitive parts of her body, which send vibes up and down her spine. pratigya put her hands around his neck and circled him .she was over whelmed with sensation.she don't want to loose that intimate moment.she closed her eyes and enjoyed it thoroughly.
he slipped his one hand around her waist and hold her arm with his other hand...his hold was bit strong, not as gentle as before....which showed how much he was longing for her. she turned her neck and looked at his strong hold. 'this pain is pleasure for me...😭'...tears happily jumped down from her eyes.'krishna...😭'she gossip his name as chanting and hugged him intensely.both slide on the single bed one over the other in slow motion, it was their first intimacy.they were ecstatic and more and more demanding for one another.they were not in full control of their minds and bodies, and they were not able to think and act,they were happy...extremely excited...ecstatic...they caressed...hugged...kissed...cuddled... after making love for a long time they consummate their marriage.
next day around 8am:

krishna woke up and looked around for pratigya and found his room empty.he got up and sat on the bed. he was feeling strange with in himself.'why i feel so?😕 there was a feeling of satisfaction with in him.he wonder why? he wiped his face and tried hard to think about yesterday.he vaguely remember his consummation.' how come it is possible? then...? do i forced myself on pratigya?😲...omg! if so how am i going to face her?' he worried deeply.with confused and worried mind he got up and went to wash room to take a shower.after a hot refreshing shower he came out of the tub and took the towel from the long steel towel handle fixed on the wall.while wiping his body he noticed his pant and light brown checked shirt hanging in the towel handle.his mind instantly flashed yesterday pratigya said no buttons in his shirt.at once he pulled the shirt from the towel handle and checked it in hurry.

krishna:'😲...issmai tho saare buttons hain!!!😲'he was shocked.a unknown feeling of anger cracked in him.he threw the shirt down and rushed out of the bath room ,wore his dress in no time and came out of his room.

krishna:'pratigyaa...😡'he was loud.pratigya was wearing komal's salwar, sitting in the hall and enjoying tea.

pratigya:'😲...'she was shocked to hear his loud voice.she kept the tea cup on the tea table and looked at him.

krishna:'utto...😡'he hold her arm and pulled her up.

pratigya:'😕

naina:'issa kyun chillara ha hai? what is wrong with you...😕'she came out from the kitchen.

krishna:'abhi issi waqt yahan se chalo...😡'he pulled her.

naina:'kya baat hai?😕...why are you behaving with her like this?...'

krishna:'maa...please...ab mai yahan ek minute bhi rook nahi saktha...😡'

naina:'pratigya thum ne kuch kaha kya?😕'

pratigya:'nahi maa...maine kuch...😕'he did not allow her to complete her sentence.

krishna:'chalo mere saat...😡'he dragged pratigya to the exit door.

pratigya: 'muchay kahin nahi jana hai...😒' she refused.

krishna:' mai ne kaha na chalo yahaan se...😡'

pratigya:' maa ne muchay yahaan rahe ne kay leyeh kaha hai...maa bolona...muchay nahi jana hai...'she said looking at naina.

krishna:'
walk out from here...😡'he did not leave his hold.

pratigya:' you are hurting me...leave me...'she tried to remove her hand from his hold.he left her,went out and got down skipping the steps.pratigya ran behind him.

naina:'😲...'she understood that it is impossible to stop him.she stood still helpless looking at them going.

he stopped an auto and got in to it.pratigya almost jumped in to it and fall beside him. she was breathing heavily.he did not speak till they reached pratigya nivas.he got down,paid the auto driver and walked fast with his wide steps. he claimed the steps two two and reached his bed room.pratigya followed him.as soon as pratigya entered the room krishna closed the door back.

pratigya:'kya baat hai?😕...why are you so mad?...much se kuch qalathi hogaye kya?...' she asked in broken sentence while she was gasping.

krishna:'thum ne much se jhoot kyun kaha...?😡' he moved with his heavy steps towards her.

pratigya:'😲...she stepped back.

krishna:'yesterday mai ne thumai mana kiya fir bhi thum ne bhang pee...kyun? 😡' he stepped ahead.

pratigya:'😲...'again she stepped back.

krishna:'thum ne muchay bhang peene kay leyeh force kiya...kyun?😡...'

pratigya:'😲....'his behavior made her remember the very first day of her marriage he entered and threatened her.she was hit by her bed and stopped moving back.

krishna:'mere shirt mai poore buttons hai...but you said no buttons...why?😡' he hit her shoulder.

pratigya:' 😲...'she lost her balance and sat on the bed.

krishna:'don't test my patient...😡'

pratigya:'wo...wo...mai...'she cleared her throat nervously and got up from the bed.

krishna:'bolo...😡 kyun?'

pratigya:'cuz...i want to sleep with you...😭'she burst out with cry.

krishna:'😲 😲 😲...'his feeling suddenly explode out as angry volcano.in no time he turned to the other side facing his back to her, he don't want to unveil his burning emotions to her.he clench his jaws and fist tightly to drain them, but he failed miserably. he bit his lower lip till it bleed to bring his emotions under control.he felt as if her heart wrenching words pierced his heart and made innumerable slits in it.uncontrolled tears rolled down from his eyes.

pratigya:'😭...muchay maaf kar tho.i don't mean to hurt you...😭' she ran and hugged him from his back with loud cry .she leaned on him placing her cheek on his back.

pratigya:'😭...mai jaan thi hun aap muchse pyaar nahi karthay...you don't love me...kyun ki mai thumse zabar thasthi shaadi ki, par mai thum se bahuth par kar thi hun.even tho you don't love me aap ne pati hone ka har ek farz nebha ya hai...mere leyeh aapne ghar choda,pariwaar choda...yahaan thak ki kaam bhi choda...mere gunaho apne sir layle...par mai ne kya kiya?😭...kuch nahi...kuch bhi nahi...😭...srif thakleef thay thi rahi.patni tho door ki baat mai tho aapki achchi dost bhi ban nahi paaye...aap ne mere leyeh sab kuch kiya...
mai aap kay leyeh inthna tho kar sakthi hun... after all i love you...😭 i can not see you in distress ...because of the forced marriage i don't want to deprive of your basic happiness a married man deserves...😭' she said in between her sobbing.she made his shirt wet with her tears.her each and every word hammer his heart...touch his soul.

krishna gently removed her hands from his chest, quickly pulled her front and grabbed in his intense hug.

krishna:'😭...maine Kar Le Mohabbath pratigya Kar Le Mohabbath thumse...i love you...😭'he confessed with full awareness and consciousness.

krishna:'😭...mai thumare leyeh bana hun.isse leyeh thumne muchay doond nikala.hum dono ek doosre kay leyeh bane hai....i thought i love arushi...but it was an illusion...wo mera brahmtha... muchay yehasaas hoga ya hai... payaar tho muchay thumse hua hai... srif thum se.i love you...😭..'

pratigya:😭

krishna:'i never thought that i can fall in love with a rich girl with lot of attitude like you. you proved that i was wrong. i never expected that you can go below your dignity and submit your virginity... a girl's precious asset
which you cared and protected for years together, just for the sake of my few minutes pleasure😭. if you can go to this extant for the sake of my happiness....pariwaar kya? mai yeh dunyan chod sak tha hun thumare leyeh😭....you are the best blessing in my life...😭'with all his love and passion he hugged her firmly close to his chest as if he don't want her to go away from her.

pratigya:😭

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago

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