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shahbara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#451

Shumi, You are a brillant writer!!!! 👍🏼 Many many thanks for the 3 exquisite chapters!!! It was a pleasure to read chandu and Aru love- story..... so pure and innocent !! loved the way you portray their feelings! but oh no.. what a twist 😲 .never thought aru would slap chandu😭 .....he was so exited and happy singing and dancing.... it's not his fault....feel very bad for chandu... hope aru says sorry! i'm sure she will....! but my favourite scene is no doubt part 47 !..muaahhhhh... it was mind -blowing! and the most romantic candle-light dinner! 👏 😍....you deserve a big hug Shumi 🤗 nIce idea you gave me... next time i visit Dubai i'll make sure to have a candle-light dinner with my husband!😉 thanks a lot for the irresistible pictures😃..... it was a delight to look at the jewels and mouth- watering food! Now awaiting desesperately for the thrilling precap! Please update as fast as you can!!! By the way tons of kisses to the cute little princess in the picture.... i guess she is your daughter Shumi????? She is adorable just like her mom! Allahafiz !!!!

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#452

@ shehnaz...actually i want to dedicate the candle light dinner part to you...cuz do you remember once you told me what if kriya go for candle light dinner.just for you i added that part. in the old version there was no candle light dinner. but i was so stupid. in hurry i forget to mention that. now i have edited that part 47 and mentioned it was dedicated to you.😃

PS:yep the avatar pics is my little daughter...😃

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shahbara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#453

Thank you so much for the dedication Shumi 😃 I am deeply touched !!....looking forward to the next part sooonnnn.......Take Care!!!!!

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Azi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#454

Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

hru?hope u r fine.........

missed u n ur ff soooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!

thank god!!u hav finally updated!!!!!!!!i found u online yday night n was anxiously waiting for ur update..to catch it as soon as u update it......but wat to do?i fell asleep with my mob on ma hand.........neways caught ur update 2day morning n i must tell u that u made my day!!!!!!just fresh as a hot cup of coffee.........

Lo......ab arushi ki baari.......🤣in the show,it was Prats' responsibility to slap everyone.bechari Arushi,usko tho chance hi nahi mil rahi thi show mein..let her enjoy,atleast in ur ff🤣beta....chance MARO.......!!!!!!!!!!hm.....seems lyk u have got overdose of Arushi-Chandu.............😆now u have become so kanjoos in giving KriYa scenes.........ur last few updates always have 2chaps for AC who r so cool........😭😆i want something......erm.....HOT...i mean KriYa........😉this is on behalf of my friend also.......never mind....we behoodas wil never change n esp me......u knw....cant control...

i knw that A n C also shud have some space in the ff na?actually i lyk them but not as much as KriYa....n regarding chap 46,the one thing i rllllllly lubd was a simple word by krishna-"What happened to my butterfly?"lo.......aa gaya hamare butterfly😆.but seriously,he was able to understand her eventho she didnt say anything.......i was adoring krishna more n more for the care he is showing!!!!!!!!!😳n WOWWWWWW a candle light dinner?????????at first i thot that they wil stay in london that day cz of the flight.......n i was disappointed wen they got an alternative flight.......but never thought that there wil be a big surprise waiting........it was soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet of (my)Krishna to gift her the pearl set.....

Shumi diiiiiiiiii,ur pictures are always making me stuck to it n keep staring anywhere but at them...............

n this is from my friend........"Welldone didi,wndrful.....n plz let krishna confess to Prats sooooooooon"

this is from me......"MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH"👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

lub uuuuuuuuuuuuu

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: shefads
Shumi, You are a brillant writer!!!! 👍🏼 aw...thank you so much.Many many thanks for the 3 exquisite chapters!!! aw...it is all my pleasure.if i have readers like you who encourage me in each and every update then writting a FF is purely my pleasure 😃It was a pleasure to read chandu and Aru love- story..... so pure and innocent !! yep...but some of my readers are getting annoyed with ChRr as i do while watching the serial....lol loved the way you portray their feelings! but oh no.. what a twist 😲 .never thought aru would slap chandu😭 ...i want to wind of their track soon . 😉..he was so exited and happy singing and dancing.... it's not his fault....feel very bad for chandu... hope aru says sorry! i'm sure she will....! yep she will realise that but my favourite scene is no doubt part 47 !..muaahhhhh..muahhh back you you .😆 😉 it was mind -blowing! and the most romantic candle-light dinner! 👏 😍....you deserve a big hug Shumi 🤗 nIce idea you gave me...it is all yours dear hug back to you 🤗next time i visit Dubai i'll make sure to have a candle-light dinner with my husband!😉 ...good good good...remember me during the dinner 😉thanks a lot for the irresistible pictures😃..... it was a delight to look at the jewels and mouth- watering food! u r welcome dear 😃Now awaiting desesperately for the thrilling precap! sure my next two updates going to trill you 😉Please update as fast as you can!!! i will try today inshallah 😊 By the way tons of kisses to the cute little princess in the picture.....JAZAKALLAH KHAIR😃 i guess she is your daughter Shumi????? YEP 😃She is adorable just like her mom! lol she is very naughty and adamant as pratigya....girrrrrrr Allahafiz !!!! take care allalafiz 😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: shefads
Thank you so much for the dedication Shumi 😃 aw...you deserve it ...😃I am deeply touched !!....thank you 😃looking forward to the next part sooonnnn.....will up date today inshallah 😃..Take Care!!!!! u 2 😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa
Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
hi azi 😊hru?hope u r fine.........yep...i am fine alhamdulillah.wishing you the same to you 😃

missed u n ur ff soooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!! aw so sweet of you sweety😛

thank god!!u hav finally updated!!!!!!!! yep 😃i found u online yday night n was anxiously waiting for ur update..to catch it as soon as u update it......but wat to do?i fell asleep with my mob on ma hand...oh i am sorry .....yaar i always keep my PC on and IF log in and will be doing other work.some times i leave my PC on and go out for hours...😆....neways caught ur update 2day morning n i must tell u that u made my day!!!!!!just fresh as a hot cup of coffee....aw pleasure is mine.....😃

Lo......ab arushi ki baari.......🤣in the show,it was Prats' responsibility to slap everyone.bechari Arushi,usko tho chance hi nahi mil rahi thi show mein..let her enjoy,atleast in ur ff🤣beta....chance MARO...wahi tho....!!!!!!!!!!hm.....seems lyk u have got overdose of Arushi-Chandu......... ....😆now u have become so kanjoos in giving KriYa scenes....heeeeee😆.....ur last few updates always have 2chaps for AC yarr i want to wind-up ChAr track soon that is y who r so cool........😭😆i want something......erm.....HOT...i mean KriYa........😉this is on behalf of my friend also....soon i will be giving that type scene with krishna's confession😳...keep reading my up dates...😉...never mind....we behoodas wil never change n esp me......u knw....cant control...i know i know...😆

i knw that A n C also shud have some space in the ff na? wahi tho 😆actually i lyk them but not as much as KriYa....n regarding chap 46,the one thing i rllllllly lubd was a simple word by krishna-"What happened to my butterfly?"lo.......aa gaya hamare butterfly😆.but seriously,he was able to understand her eventho she didnt say anything...true...he fund out tha she was upset. cuz of him...i was adoring krishna more n more for the care he is showing!!!!!!!!! THANKS 😃n WOWWWWWW a candle light dinner?????????ROMANTIC NA...😳at first i thot that they wil stay in london haan haan...i know what you want 😉😆 that day cz of the flight.......n i was disappointed wen they got an alternative flight...hahahaha..pako pako....😆....but never thought that there wil be a big surprise waiting........it was soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet of (my)Krishna hun hun...😉to gift her the pearl set.....

Shumi diiiiiiiiii,ur pictures are always making me stuck to it n keep staring anywhere but at them...........thanks yaar....to be frank i take more time in finding suitable pics than writing the ff ....

n this is from my friend........"Welldone didi,wndrful.....n plz let krishna confess to Prats sooooooooon" sure dear sure😃...hi to all of you and thanks for reading my ff😃

this is from me......"MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH"👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

lub uuuuuuuuuuuuu muu muu muu muu muu ahh ahh ahh ahh ahh 😛 😛 😛 i lub you😛 and your friends. 😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#458

PART-48

TWIST:

girls...your most awaiting part...here you go....angad is back...😉

avi was the first to come back to action.she slowly bend down and took the dupatta from the ground.

avi :'sorry 😔...' she said in general looking at chandu and arushi.

chandu:' ...nahi avi , sorry tho muchay kahana chahi yeh....😔'he sneak a look at arushi.

arushi grabbed her dupatta from avi and ran from there towards the bus ,holding the dupatta close to her chest.she felt hot tears wiggled its way down her cheeks.she went in to the bus and fall on her seat.dried her eyes and face with the dupatta.she was suffered with mixed emotions,closed her eyes and leaned back on the seat to calm down herself.

when her mind and body settled down she started thinking '...i should not have done this 😔.he did not do intentionally.khayl khayl mai hogaya... waise bhi wo muchse bade hai...umar mai aur ohathay mai bhi. as he always says he is my guru...i should not have done this....😔'she constantly regretted and felt guilty for her act.

soon after, all the other NIIT student returned to the bus one by one.lastly chandu entered in.as soon as she saw him she became nervous,expecting that he may come and sit next to her. 'when he come i will say sorry to him...'she decided with in herself and tried her best to keep herself normal. holding the support he stepped ahead towards her seat.her sight followed him while her heart raced furiously.she tried to catch his sight ,looked in to his eyes to know whether he is angry or as usual taken it in a light manner.

arushi:'😲...while she was longing to catch his single sight,he went ahead of her without looking at her.he crossed her seat,went back and sat with other students,the seat next to her left empty.....

as because all the students were damn tired they started relaxing and resting.some of them started sleeping but arushi spend the whole return journey restless.

around 6pm the bus entered the city and dropped the students one by one in front of their house.when it stopped in front of arushi's apartment she took all her belongings... bags, purse etc and got down slowly expecting that chandu may say bye to her,but he did not.she was utterly disappointed and went to her apartment heart broken.

next day:

around 10am...arushi's apartment:

arushi woke up and looked at the wall clock.

arushi:'omg! 😲...dus bajgayeh!..'she quickly pushed the quilt and tried to get up from her bed but could not.she felt weak and tired.

arushi:'maaaa.....'she hold her head and screamed.

parvati:'thum utt gaye?...😊'she came casually from the kitchen.

arushi:'muchay kyun ithne thayr thak soone thiya? 😡...thumai patha hai na muchay computer class jaana hai...

parvati:'aur kya karthi?😡.raat bhar thumai thayz bukaar thi,patha nahi wo field trip pe jaakar kya kya khaye aur kahaan khaan ka ganda paani peekar aaye.ab ho gaye na bemaari...yeh bhagwaan yeh ladki ko thoda tho akhal thay...'she slapped on her fore head.

'oh! god...😲 chandu sir mere baare mai kya soochangay?' her head started hurting.she realized that her physical condition is not permitting her to go to her computer class.

parvati:'jaakar moo haat dho le. mai naashta laathi hun.naaste kay saath saath bukaar ki goli le lena.ek din araam karegi tho teek hojayeh ge' she went to the kitchen.

arushi:...💔...'left heart broken for not able to go to her computer class.

around 10:30 NIIT class room:

chandu was taking the class.he noticed that arushi did not turn up to the class.he was neither surprised nor worried instead he expected that.

around 11am pratigya groups of textiles office:

krishna was busy helping sajjan. pratigya was in her cabin busy in preparing report of her UK meeting.

around 4:30 pm:

sajjan:'i am tired. i would like to leave now. left out work thum complete karlo.by the way pratigya has to complete her UK report today.uss kay baad thum pratigya kay saat ghar ajana...😊' he got up from his seat.

krishna:'fine...😊'

sajjan:'one more think...today angad will come to get the copy of the UK report...😊'

krishna:'teek hai...😊' sajjan left the office.

around 5:30pm ,the office was empty:

pratigya's cabin:

pratigya was almost done with her UK report.

pratigya:'ufff...finally...'she got up from her revolving chair, stretched her body and cracked her knuckles.she was damn tired physically and mentally.

'Hiiii sexy!...😃 😛 😃 😛'angad entered with a big grinned.she was aware that he will come to discuss about the UK meeting and get the copy of the file.

pratigya:'...UK file is ready...'she tried to maintain herself calm and patient remembering krishna's advise ' unnecessarily not to get angry with gents and it is not good for her...it may put her in trouble '

angad:'maine su na thum office kay expense mai honey moon mana kay aaye ho?😡' he was least bother to know about the UK meeting and the report.

pratigya:' that is non of your business...kaam ki baat karao...😡'she got irritated and started losing her temper in spite of krishna's advise.

angad:'yahi tho mera kaam hai...😉 😈'he smirked and moved more close to her.

pratigya:'don't come ... keep distance...😡'he was getting on her nerves .

angad:' thumne muchay bahuth thadpaya hai 😡.... i cannot imagine you had your honey moon😡...i cannot take this any more....i am not going to leave you today...😡' he growl , pushed up the sleeves of his shirt ,stretched his hand and tried to catch her.

pratigya:'you nasty fellow...don't touch me...😡' she moved back in her uneven steps.

angad:' nasty!!!!...😡..enough is enough...😡 ' his face blazed with anger.he threw his hand around her shoulder with force and grabbed her towards his chest , facing close to her face.

pratigya:'chiii... you are sick...leave me.. ..😡'she frown and tried to push his hand.

angad:'not possible darling...😈' with his other hand he circled her around her waist, hold her very close to him breathing on her face. her face burned with his furious breath, she felt as if a dirty snake circled her.she struggled to breath in,felt as if she was drowning in a dirty drainage.both her hands were under his caught.she could not battle with him.she struggled to pulled her hands from his hold and failed.she moved her body to come out of his catch, failed again! finally with her fore head she smacked him on his nose(😆)

angad:'AAHHH....'his nose started bleeding.the dirty blood dripped from his nose in to his mouth and he tasted his own blood.

angad:'😡...U... 😡...'his anger explode like a volcano.he became aggressive and started kissing her randomly....rubbing all over her face with his dirty blood and saliva.

pratigya:'😭...chodo..😭...chodo...😭...chodoooo😭...' she could not help herself.she became weak as if she has no strength , she felt like fainting.

angad:😈.....he became deaf and continued doing.

pratigya:'😲...'when she was about to faint suddenly she saw krishna comming near her cabin door.

pratigya:'krishnaaaa....😭'all at once she felt as if she got tonnes of energy.

angad:'😲 😡 😲 😡...'he never expected krishna to be there at that time. for a moment he became weak and he relaxed his hold .pratigya used his weak moment and accumulate all her energy and pushed him back forcefully away from her with all her gathered energy.unexpected angad totally lost his balance, went and fall on the sharp edge of the big black shelf. his head went and hit the edge with full force with a' TAAAKKKK...' cracking sound of a whole coconut...his skull cracked and in no time fresh blood pool formed beneath his head.

look at her office and the shelf on which angad went and fall! this pic i have already posted when krishna visited her office first time....😃

krishna:😲....he was dumb stuck,paralyzed,brain stopped working.he could not believe the things happening in front of his eyes in no time...unexpected...absolutely shocking....he was rooted to the ground.stood still near the door,it took some time for him to realize the situation.

pratigya:'😲...'she was shivering... her fingers were vibrating... lips were wobbling...and her face turned pale.

krishna:'😲...'he looked at angad lying motionless with eyes and mouth opened.his hand and legs were spread in irregular position like a frog. for a second there exist a dreadful silent .

pratigya:'krishnaa....😭'she ran with her unsteady steps in to his arms crying and shivering.krishna hold her head tightly to her chest to console her and prove her that he is with her.

krishna:'...don't panic...don't panic...kuch nahi hua...'he first tried to stop her shiver and calm down her.

pratigya:'ye...yeh...yeh😲...tho margaya...😭...he is dead...🤢' she said through clenched teeth.she was terrified.she tried to look at angad.

krishna:'ussshhhh....ussshhh...'he turned her face towards him,didn't allow her to see angad.

pratigya:'maine jaan booj kay nahi kiya...trust me...😭 ....yeh muchay bahuth thang kartha hai...muchse har waqt bathameezi kartha hai😭...par mere baat koi nahi maantha... koi bhi nahi.....😭'

krishna:'i trust you...how come i will not trust my wife ?...he deserve this...😡'he said looking at dead angad.

pratigya:'...😭'she winced in pain.tried to bury her face deep in to his chest.

krishna:'controll your self.... hoosh mai aawo...thumai kuch nahi hoga...jab thak mai hun thumai koi kuch nahi karsak tha...'they hugged each other.

pratigya:'😭...'she felt safe in his hug.she wish to retain in his hug for ever.

krishna:'chalo...'he separated her from him after she calm down a bit.

pratigya:'😭...'don't even had the strength to ask where? and why?.she tried to walk with him and about to tumbled.

krishna:'pratigyaaaa...'he saved her from falling by holding her upper arm and supported her to walk.the whole office was empty.he came down almost dragging pratigya.she tried to walk towards her car.

krishna:'pratigya...you are not in the condition of driving...'he stopped her.they came out, stopped a pass by taxi and helped pratigya to get in and closed the door.

pratigya:'😲...aap...aapbhi chalo...😭'

krishna:'don't worry about me...driver inhay greater kailash lejao...'he send the taxi.

pratigya:😭...krishna...😭...krishna...🤢'she put her hand and head out,peeped threw the window to look at him.he stood still till she disappear.

as soon as the taxi disappeared from his sight he rushed back to pratigya's cabin.while going he acted quickly and wisely,called the near by police station and the hospital for ambulance.by slipping and sliding he reached pratigya's cabin in no time .angad was still lying in the same position with his mouth and eyes open. he went close to him , sat on his toes kept his hand near his nose.

krishna:'😲 😲 😲...'he could not feel his breath🤢.