FF:Kar Le Mohabbath!NEW- pt-66,67,68,69 pg-94 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,it was a delicious chap!!!!!
Makkan chor?🤣🤣🤣n i was agn 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 at Krish's dialogue "under ur Quilt".......jz lyk our real krish ,ur Krish also seem to be master of one-liners.......very thoutful indeed Shumi diiiiiii.......i thoroughly enjoyd all the nok jhoks......it ws hilarious........Pratigya is toooo...........hope we cn see a different Pratigya after she falls in lub wit Krishna........im in a hurry Shumi di.......i hv comntd nw cz i ddnt cmnt to ur few prev chaps......othrwys u knw hw long wil b my comnts.......hope u r well........i'll cmnt in my usual style to ur nxt update.........until then
tc
lub u
zash(u cn call me azi)
did i 4gt smfn?yes......here i go.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
this is for ur hilarious wrk!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Shummmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆😆

aleenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😆
Lovely update.....great work👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️....thanks dear😃...lub your stars and claps😛
It was a funny chapter........yep😉
Update soon....soon i will😃... keep it up hun 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...yep and thanks😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
today are we getting any update?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

today are we getting any update?

yep...i will try to update atleast one part....😊...with kirya scene😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

yep...i will try to update atleast one part....😊...with kirya scene😉

shukriya..shukriya :-)
for which jodi this was originally written?
u r nt watching the show? no posts from u?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

wowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,it was a delicious chap!!!!!......THANKS azi 😃
Makkan chor?🤣🤣🤣n i was agn 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 at Krish's dialogue "under ur Quilt".......jz lyk our real krish ,ur Krish also seem to be master of one-liners.......very thoutful indeed Shumi diiiiiii....thank you so much for all your appreciation dear😃...i thoroughly enjoyd all the nok jhoks......it ws hilarious....i am very glad that U enjoyed reading my FF....Pratigya is toooo...........hope we cn see a different Pratigya after she falls in lub wit Krishna...sure.....im in a hurry Shumi di....oh i see😊...i hv comntd nw cz i ddnt cmnt to ur few prev chaps...no probs dear...othrwys u knw hw long wil b my comnts...yep...i enjoy reading them😃....hope u r well...alhamdulillah😃.....i'll cmnt in my usual style to ur nxt update....ok ok😊.....until then
tc U 2
lub u lub u 2
zash(u cn call me azi) oh! so sweet...😛
did i 4gt smfn?...umm...😔 yes......here i go.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏............woooooooooooooooo....i lubbbbbbbbbbbbbbb UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU🤗
this is for ur hilarious wrk!!!!!!!!!!....that is so sweet of you😛....and thank U😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

shukriya..shukriya :-)....yaarrr😆...nandri😃
for which jodi this was originally written?...robbie-kasturi.😛.....you can see them below in my signature😛....but i here and there i am making changes according to kriya....
u r nt watching the show? yep... no posts from u?....cuz after prats said sorry to krish i was little bit convinced with her character...only little bit haannn😆...so nothing to post😆

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok nandri nandri nandri
try to update with 2 parts :-)))
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-12
krishna was eating his breakfast for formality.he was feeling very much uncomfortable and uneasy to sit with them to have his breakfast.

' ...yeh dad bhi na...kya zaroori tha break fast kay leyeh zabarzasti karne ki...😡' pratigya was fuming while sajjan and nanima were enjoying their breakfast


sajjan:'pratigya take him and show our nivas so that he will get familiar with it...😊' he said at the end of the breakfast to make krishna to feel free among them.

pratigya:'wofo... dad i have better things to do...😒'she said reluctantly.

sajjan:'pratigya...😡...why don't you....' pratigya got up from the table as if she don't want to hear him.

krishna:'rahene dho sir...it is fine...' with no expression he got up from the seat and about to go.

sajjan:'ek minute...'he too got up and went close to him.

krishna:'😕...he stood confused.

sajjan:'...pratigya thodi zithee hai ,par dill ki badi achchi hai...😊'he pat him on his back.

krishna: 😕
...he gave a confused smile.

sajjan:'maine thumai beta maana hai.mai dill se koshish karoon ga thumarae dad na hone ki kami poori karne ki...😃' he hugged krishna.

krishna:'thanks...😊'he too hugged him emotionally.without caring them kasturi went to her bed room.

pratigya's bed room:

pratigya:'yeh dad bhi na?😡...ye sab karne ki kya zaroori thi?...i don't cares about him...😡'pratigya was talking loudly to herself and searching her dressing table drawer.

krishna entered her room.as soon as she saw him her tension increased.

'yeh emotional drama karne ki kya zaroori thi dad ko...😡'she said more loudly.he understood that she is in a very hot mood.he don't want to increase it by his presence there.he walked out and started walking in the long corridor.

while he was passing a room he heard some one crying.he stopped walking with surprise.' who can it be? 😕 ' he cannot control his curiosity,he slowly walked towards the room,pushed the double door and wide opened it.

krishna:'😲....for his surprise he saw a three to four year plumpy child sitting on the bed and crying. all over the room toys were scattered,a lady in uniform standing beside him with food plate and trying to feed him.

krishna:'yeh koon hai?😕' he stood near the thresh hold and asked her.

lady in the uniform:'muchay nahi patha sir.mai isski governess hun,dus din pehle hi join ki hai....'

krishna:'why he is crying?...😕'he tried to look at his face but could not.the child was putting his head down and crying.

governess:'sir isski dhimaagi haalath teek nahi hai...'before she could finish of her sentence a toy flew from some where and hit his fore head forcefully.

krishna:'AAAHHH!!...'he pressed his fore head with pain by his left palm.soon he realized that his palm is becoming wet. he slowly took his hand and looked at his palm,it became red and wet with his blood.

governess:'😲...sir...'

without delay krishna walked fast to pratigya's room pressing his bleeding fore head.he rushed in to her room, went to the dressing table and tried to look at his fore head in the mirror.

pratigya did not noticed him.she was busy searching her dress from the ward rob.

governess:'sir yeh leji yeh....'she came in to pratigya's bed room in hurry without asking pratigya's permission,with first aid box.

pratigya:'what are you doing here?😡...'she screamed at the governess.

governess:'wo...mai..i came to give the first aid box.....'she did not stop,gave the box to krishna and went out.pratigya turned and looked at krishna standing in front of the dressing table and wiping the blood from his fore head with cotton.

pratigya:'😲...😕...'she stood still.

after cleaning with spirit socked cotton , he took a plaster form the first aid box to put it over the wound.while fixing the plaster krishna felt some shadow near the door,he turned and looked at the door.

the four year fair plumpy boy hugging a car toy and standing near the door with blurring face and confusion in his eyes.his undone long curly hair were partially covering his eyes.his chubby face,big round dark blue eyes. small sharp nose and thick milky lips made him very cute and attractive.

krishna:'andher awo...😊'he said looking at the child.

pratigya:'nahi...don't come inside...😡' she rushed to the door and obstruct that child.krishna was surprise to see her reaction.

krishna:'bachchay bhagwaan ho thay hai...'

pratigya:'bhashan maat dho😡...waise...yeh bachcha manhoos hai...😡'she said angrily looking at the child.when she said ' manhoos ' the confused child became wild and suddenly threw the car toy on pratigya and ran away.

krishna:'😲...in no time he pushed pratigya side way,the toy flew between pratigya and krishna, went and fall on the bed.she narrowly escaped from the toy.by his push pratigya lost her balance and about to fall, krishna quickly leaned forward to her rescue and grabbed her left hand .she was in a critical position that if krishna leave his hold she will fall flat on the floor.

pratigya:'leave me😡...how dare you touch me...😡'she was expecting to fall on the floor thinking that he may leave his hold,instead......he pulled her towards him, she suddenly went and fall on his chest with force.he quickly circled her around her hip with his left hand while his right hand is holding her hand.

pratigya:'you....😡...leave me....😡'her angry pink face was very close to his face. she looked at him in close up.she could smell the medicine together with spirit from his fore head.he was looking more manly with the white cross plaster on his fore head.first time in her life she was in a man's tight hold...hug....it was krishna's first hug!!!!!

pratigya:'youuuu...youuuu...😡'she struggled to speak and breath.

krishna:
'krishna saxena...😃'

pratigya:'oh!...what ever...😡'she tried to push him back.

krishna:
'say thanks to me😊...i have saved you from hitting by the toy and from falling down...'

pratigya:'
thanks my foot...😡'while she was struggling to get out of his hug her body rubbed with his and made her embarrassed.she stopped doing so. she was in her casual wear...sweat pants and short lose tee.the tee was disconnected from her sweat pant by her thin strip of fair flat belly peeping out. she felt his belt buckle on her soft belly which made her feel uneasy. it was her first feeling towards him.his slightly hairy arm around her back tickled her.

krishna:'ummm...badi bathameez ho😊.thanks ya sorry bolne ka manners hi nahi hai...😃'he said with a grin, looking in to her eyes without loosening his hold.looks as if he was enjoying her in his hug.
pratigya:'don't teach me manners...😡.....don't touch me ...😡' she tried again to get out of his hold ,trying to remove his hand from her hip.
krishna:'don't touch me ! 🤣...shayaad thum bhool gaye ho....thum mere patni ho poore reeti riwaaj se....😆...'he gripped his hug with a jolt and hold her more close to him to prove what he said.
pratigya:'mai bathameez!? bathameez tho thum ho augh!😡...'

krishna:'wo tho mai hun....🤣


pratigya:' muchay hug karthay huway sharam nahi aathi???😡...'she struggled in his hug.

krishna:'....🤣......patni ko hug karne kay leyeh sharam!.....🤣...waise yeh tho mere haq hai.😛...if i want i can even kiss you...😉'he slowly moved his face more close to her as if he was about to kiss her.she felt his warm breath on her face and she quickly turned her face away from him.

pratigya: argh!😡...U...😡'


krishna:😆....
..waise... thumare yeh nakhray muchay achchay lahthay hai...😉' even thought he said to tease her he realized he is speaking the truth.'kya such much isskay nakhray muchay achchay lakthay hai?😕'he wonder

pratigya:'leave meeee...😡'

krishna
noticed the child was crying and running in the corridor.he thought the child need more attention than pratigya
krishna:'i will leave you now😊 ...catch you later....😉'suddenly he left her and went behind the child.

pratigya:'ufff!...😡..' as she was suddenly released from his tight hold she tumbled for a second and then managed to stand. she tried to looked at him with anger but fail to show anger on her face.'why i did not feel disgusting when i was in his hug....😲'she wondered.'how i was able to manage in his hug for so long...inspite of i hate gents...😕'she was confused.

Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago

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