CHEHRA THO DIKHAO...(updated chap7 pg29) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: shruthiR

ESP is extra sesory perception,like Pratigya in your ff they can see what's gonna happen in the future and sense things😊


oh..........i see...i ddnt knw dat......ya...a sort of.....bt not really......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely ! actually i like the suspense but hope prats is safe bcoz sometimes dreams do come true.... please update soon ! now who is this handsome man hope it's not adarsh???? waiting eagerly for the next part . Take Care!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice chap 👍🏼
wonder who is this guy calling rolli and pratigya
update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hai guys.....😃
its bin a long tym that i thot about my ff...only realised a few days ago that its in halfway.thank u Ramona for reminding me.....
i have bin a bit bc with my studies for the past three months..nw im thinking of updating it...im not a good writer but i'll try my best to make this ff interesting....
if u guys want me to continue,plz let me knw.....so i can update it today..
lub
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
naiki aur pooch pooch???
Ofcourse continue.....sooooooooooooooooon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

naiki aur pooch pooch???

Ofcourse continue.....sooooooooooooooooon😊

hey Preeeeeetiiiiiiii
wer have u bin?😃long tym........
thank u.........n ya,i'll try to update today......😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
I like it - you have a quality of writing a play script
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Hey Guys.......
here is the next update....this is especially for Ramona who constantly asked me to update.....Its a lil short though as im regaining touch with the story nw... Hope u all lyk it...
CHAPTER 3

"HEY GIRLS........."
Both of them looked at the handsome guy approaching them.....
He came dodging from the tables in between n reached them with quick steps.he stood facing both of them,leaning towards the nearby pillar,excitement shining in his eyes.....
"How are you?"he asked......his voice was deep n hoarse but at the same time,cute...
Suddenly,Rolli beated him on his arms n let out a loud giggle....
"Hey senior.......,Chandu bhai!!!"😛
Chandu:Oh,so u didnt forget me....😃
R: how shud i?Angad bhaiyya(Rolli's brother) allowed me to join here only coz u wer here....btw,how come u joined for M-Tech here itself?Bhaiyya told me that u wer so desperate to get out of this college asap....No one of ur old friends have joined here.even Bhaiyya dont want to study further....then y did u decide to continue here?
C: 😕erm...nothing....its gud to be here...thot it will be better to continue here so that i may get better opportunities.....
R: opportunities???😲😉
C: i mean......job opportunities....😳
R: oh!i thot......😆
C: btw...if i haven't joined here,then how wud u have admitted here.huh?
R: Mmm....thats a fact....😆..that is why i have bin luking for u from morning.....to be our security..😆

Both of them wer pulling each others leg that neither of them noticed the battle raging inside Pratigya....Her heart was pounding again!!
"Agar ye WOH hotha tho?"........that weird thought spread a chill throughout her body.....Her body became frozen,lyk she has been standing on ice for hours.......Soon the chillness turned into panic n she felt as though she will faint......

Chandu n Rolli wer talking non-stop.but not even a single word entered into Pratigya's mind....She wanted to run from there asap....but to her utter horror,found her body glued to the place...Her mind says "Come on pratigya,move on",but her legs wer reluctant to move....they wer paralysed.Her body began to sweat profusely.....

At the exact moment,Chandu extended his hands towards her.
C: 😃it was nice meeting you.I have heard so much about you from Rolli..from wat she told,u r a brilliant student n a sweet person...Friends?

Pratigya's eyes popped out(u knw...button eyes...😆).Her mind worked rapidly...NO!this should not happen..i wont allow this..
She shoved off his hand n without having a second thought,she stormed away from the canteen.....

Everything happened in seconds.Both Chandu n Rolli wer stunned by her unexpected behaviour.
C: Excuse.....have i done anything wrong?
R: 😲.wat?Oh! No...absolutely not...(looking at the direction Pratigya went).erm..the thing is that,she is a little reluctant in speaking to boys...But wat she did was not right.She shud have atleast shaken your hand in return.I dont know why shez behaing like this...
C: ok.leave it..may be she didnt lyk me...its ok..
R: hey,it wont be lyk that.i think she is not feeling good today....Im sorry for her behaviour..i think i should go to her now..will catch u later....see you..😃
C: Ok bye...😃

Rolli walked swiftly out of the canteen,searching for Pratigya....Chandu stood there silently.....

"what have i done?y r behaving lyk u dont understand me?😕"

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Rolli know her friend very well.She is not a bad mannered girl.May be....everything that happened just nw have bin tne aftermath of that DREAM........
She knew that they shud talk about this n sort it out......otherwise it will become worse..Rolli didnt want her friend to get ruined by a mere dream....

She searched for pratigya everywhere...in the classroom,on the auditorium,in the ground......but she was nowhere to be seen..
She came out of the classroom after searching her there forthe fourth tym,exhausted....Suddenly,she found the long haired girl......
There she was,at the end of the corridor which leads downstairs...standing near the watercooler,turned to otherside....
Rolli was confused.."whether i should go or not?".But thinking about Pratigya's dialemma,she decided to go....She slowly walked towards her.
She placed aher hand on Pratigya's shoulder.There was shudder in Pratigya's body.Rolli was more than panicked on her sudden response...She approached the other side,facing her.
Pratigya was crying!!!!!tears were bubbling from her eyes.there wer streams of tears all over her face......
R: 😲😲Prats.......wat happened??😲y r u crying lyk this?tell me na?
Pratigya suddenly fell in to her shoulders n cried her heart out.....
P: 😭😭😭mein bohut buri hun....i shouldnt have behaved lyk that...par kya karun? when i saw him,the only thing that came to my mind was that dream.....😭😭😭..i was terrified if he was HIM....😭😭
R: 😲Prats......!!!!!!!u r unbelievable!!!!!!i dont know how to make u understand.
Prats......here,luk at me.....
She held her shoulders n shook her to bring back her to reality....
R: Dont be so stupid.....u cant suspect each n every person u meet.....u r making things worser dr.....told u na?dont get that dream too much in to your head...n nw stop crying!!!

Pratigya was trying to control her tears.....she wiped her tears with her hanky...
P: im trying hard Rolli....but wen i almost begin forget about it,the dream occurs again n it makes me weaker n weaker....
dekha na?today morning,it occured agn..n..n..today itself,i met with a stranger...what if?what if it was him?
R: hey..wait,ru telling me that Chandu bhai wil propose u?No...i know him more than u..he is bhaiyya's childhood friendthat wont happen ever......EVER!!!!
P: How can u be so sure about him?what if he is hiding it from u?
R: COZ HE LUVS ME STUPID!!!!!!!
P: WAT???😲😲



Unaware to both of them,a pair of eyes wer fixed at pratigya.....a heart was writhing in pain......

"I CANT SEE U IN PAIN PRATIGYA..............ITS LIKE KILLING ME......."





done guys.......plzzzzzzzz do comment....😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: carisma2

I like it - you have a quality of writing a play script

thank u diiiiiii.........😃......updated.have a luk....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay! You updated after such a long time😃It was a very nice chp.Poor Pratigya!The dream seems to be taking a huge toll on her Whose this creep who was eyeing her and saying that he couldn't see her in pain?😲😕Looking forward to the next chp and update soon and regularly😊

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