CHEHRA THO DIKHAO...(updated chap7 pg29)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys,
jz thot of writn an FF aftr reading many FFs in d forum...gt inspiration 4m u all...
its nt a fiction...bt somethn wichz rlly happnd...bt i wont b able to write d chaps ryt nw as im abit bz wit fasting...will continue aftr ramsan...

For now jz a Precap...

Starry night...Full moon ws at its elegance...
They wer standing ,unable to face each other...
Silence spread btw them lyk eternity...
Suddenly she spoke:
wat do u want to tlk 2 me?its getn late.i must go...

Aftr a long pause...he tried to speak:Pratigya...
bt nothn othr dan her name came out of hs throat...
Pratigya:wat?
The man:i want to say to u dat...i jz thot to say dat...I LUB UUU very much!!!!!!!!!!i dnt want to lose u!!!!!!!!plzzz dnt say no!!!!!!
He suddenly came more closer to her n hold both her hands...
pratigya:😲😲😲,wat r u saying???????...meine sapne mein nahi dekha ki tum aisa karogey...!!!!!!!!!!!i thot u r a nice frnd!!!!!!!bt u cheatd me!!!!!!!...
M:aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...beliv me..at first i thot dat i lyk u sooo much as a frnd,bt pata nahi,kab iss LYK LUB ban gaya...
pratigya:😡😡Nooo,im nt gonna listen to u.chodo muje!!!!!!!!
M(still holding hr hand):Pratigya,listen!!!!!i cnt live without u.plzzz try 2 undrstnd me...nvr hurt me by saying dat im a cheater!!!💔
P:Nooo,i said jz lev me...i cnt betray my parents' trust lyk u betrayed mine!!n im nt gonna acept u😡
Bt hez nt leaving hr hand...infact he cam evn more closer to hr...evnthoshe ws bold she got scared by hs sudden move...She cud hear hr heart thumping as tho it may burst out of hr chest!!!!!!
P:Dnt u dare come close 2 me!!!!!!😲
bt hez nt listening to her...he tightend hs hold on hr hands...she ws dumbstruck!!!!!!!!she lukd at hs eyes...she cn clearly feel d undyn lub n want 4 her in dat eyes...
She felt lyk somthnz snaking around hr waist...to hr horror she felt dat it ws hs ryt hand circled around hr waist...pulling hr mor close 2 hm...
She tried to protest...bt no!!!his grip is too strong 4 hr...
They wer nw 1ly a breath apart...she cud feel hs warm breath hitting hr cheek!!!!!hr heartbeat pounded!!!!!!!!!!
Slowly he movd hs face 2wrds hr...2wrds hr lips...
Suddenly...hr brain woke up frm its trance...she knew hs intentions...She quickly covered hr mouth wit both hr hands n shook hr head sideways vigourosly shown dissaproval...
M:Y r u nt undrstndn my feelings 2wrds u...😭😭😭no1 cn evr lub u mor dan me!!!!i cn do anythn to u ryt nw.!!!!!noonez gonna question me.bt i dnt want to hurt u as i cnt c u in pain.its lyk killing me!!!!!i lub n wil lub u 4evr n i'll w8 4 d whole lyf 4 ur answer!!!bt i will not lev u!!!!!
P:😭😭
She sw him moving away hs face frm hr...n d clear tinkling in hs eyes show dat he ws crying!!!!!!!
God!!!!!hw cn som1 refuse such a pure luv lyk dis...hw cn she miss such a gem lyk hm?
He began to loosen hs grip on hr waist...bt suddenly he felt two hands circling around his neck n pulling hm closer!!!!!!!!!!
it took a few seconds 4 hm 2 realize watz happening n by d tym...he cam face to face wit Pratigya...eyes shining wit tears!!!!!!d nxt thng he knew dat shez gettn closer to hm...tiptoed...n leaning agnst hs lips...
She slowly pressed hr lips on hs...it ws as tho a high voltage thunder gt struck!!!!!!!!
he cnt cntrl himslf anymor...he responded slowly bt passionately...


TRRRINGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She woke up suddenly...it ws 5am..she ws sweating lyk mad frm tip to toe...panting heavily...her heartbeat in its fastest pace!!!!!!!!she cnt undrstnd anythn astho hr brain gt jammed!!!!


IT WAS ONLY A DREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n disz nt d first tym shez seeing ds...it ws d 8th tym shez at d same pathetic condition!!!!!!!n to hr utter dissappoinment...dis tym also...
SHE DDNT C HS FACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kaun hai woh ladka????????


guys plzzz do comment.
i want ur comments so i cn continue confidently...

Precap - Pg 1
Chap 1 - Pg 4
Chap 2 - Pg 5
Chap 3 - Pg 7
Chap 4 - Pg 9
Chap 5 - Pg 13
Promo - Pg 17
Chap 6- Pg 22
Chap 7- Pg 29

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aleena1 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow lovely ff ..... Congrats on ur first ff hun....

It's very intersting....... That is Krishna right????


Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArhainArhaan

nyc yar do continueee.....


thnk u soooooooooooo much 4 encouragn me.😃yaa,i'll continue it aftr ramsan as i may gt some gud ideas aftr d bz fasting.......
Edited by zash_sparkling - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

Wow lovely ff ..... Congrats on ur first ff hun.... thnk uuuuuuuuuuuu dr!!!!!!!!

It's very intersting.......glad dat u lykd it That is Krishna right????hu tld u its Krishna?😉.......jz jkn.........i also dnt knw.hop v'll see😃 hu it'll b latr..........lol


Plz continue soon

ya,i will..........thnk uuuuuuu 4 lyking 1c agn!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was so intersting and exciting at the same time.I was literally hooked to your intro.Pls continue soon and I am looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow....that was really interesting precap.I just hope that guy is krishna.pls pls continue soon.👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oooh im loving it already! i thought it was real! hehe =P
please do continue after ramadan....i know the feeling hun, im so busy as well in ramadan!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing !!!! Just can't wait for the first chapter ! Please hurry up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!! Veryyy Nicee! Do Continue x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome!!! 👏 👏
do continue

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