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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Lovely chapter hun xx👏 thanks dear 😃

hmmm it was romantic..... yep...😳but whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy is pratigya being like that???????? come on shumi......spill the beans........soooooooooooooooo curious.........hahaha....yaar if i spill now you will not read my next up date then i will miss your lovely dovely comments...😉
hahah guniya the maid...... so whos whos pissiya playing?????? hahaha...let me see wether i can give a roll in krishna's house....lol
cant wait for your next update......tomorrow...inshallah 😃keep it up hun xx👍🏼 sure😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg...krishan proposed already...i thought there was still time for tht....but pratigya rejected him😒.....wonder whtz gonna happen now when he is standing outside her house...lol....i like ur fast updates👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was very interesting update.loved the backyard scene.very beautifully described👏👍🏼👏.it was very well written.i love swings too.oh that was great that he confessed his love for her and proposed her.but it was so sad that she rejected him.guniya as prats maid .its hilarious.the end part was shocking.he came to her house again.i hope pratigya and her family will agreed to his proposal soon.thank you for the wonderful update⭐️.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: CBrocks

omg...krishan proposed already...i thought there was still time for tht...cuz i want to show more of post marriage life...😃.but pratigya rejected him😒...i know ...ouch!..wonder whtz gonna happen now when he is standing outside her house...lol..to find out read my next update tomorrow inshallah.....i like ur fast updates👏....thanks 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
That was really good but why did pratz refused him? 😒 she is really confusing But im loving krish's character 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: halaa

that was very interesting update.loved the backyard scene.very beautifully described👏👍🏼👏.it was very well written. thank you so much for all your appreciation...it means a lot to me....😃i love swings too. me too 😛oh that was great that he confessed his love for her and proposed her. yep...he is well mature...😉but it was so sad that she rejected him. she is immature...😆guniya as prats maid .its hilarious. feeling good ne...wahi tho....😆the end part was shocking.hahaha.... that is y i stopped there....other wise i would have posted one more part....no prob today i will post two parts inshallah.....he came to her house again.i hope pratigya and her family will agreed to his proposal soon. for sure... y not ? are they crazy like serial wala saxena family to say no to krishna....lol thank you for the wonderful update⭐️. thanks for u r star...😃plz continue soon.yep soon today 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mushirox

That was really good thanks 😃but why did pratz refused him? 😒 she is really confusing ...read my up dates to know y she is so?😃But im loving krish's character 😉 thanks for liking it😃

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PART-9

saxena:'koon hai...?😕'he came to the door with folded news paper in his hand.shakti came behind saxena fixing his shirt collar.

shakti:'aap!!!!😲....kahi thum rock star krishna singh tho nahi?😕...'

krishna:'namastay😊...mai wahi hun😃....'he folded his hands, kept his palms and fingers together and wished them.

shakti:'aap😲 ...yahaan????😲...come in...come in...papa...yeah delhi kay mashur rock star hai.TV pay har waqth guniya maa inhi ka concerts thayk thi raha thi hai...😊'he helped him in recognizing.

saxena:'oh😊...ab yaad araha hai...ayeah andhar...'

krishna:'dii...😊'he moved aside and called.a young and charming girl cute enough to attract a senior citizen came forwards and said 'namastay'to them.she was wearing baby pink plain chiffon sari ,with a matching short sleeve mirror work blouse.with very less accessories and least make up she was stunning.even though she was much more elder than krishna looking very much younger than him.

krishna:'yeh...meri di keser singh...😊'

shakti:'come ...in...😃' he said immediately with out any hesitation.

krishna:😈...he smirked at pratigya.
pratigya:Shocked😡....still she was blocking his way and standing.
she slowly moved aside and let him in.saxena made them sit comfortably.pratigya don't want to stand in front of them,but at the same time she don't want to go in too,thinking....'why the hell he is here now?Angry alignabsMiddle...kahin kuch wolta seetha maire bare mai papa se kahathi yatho?!Shocked...' she swallowed her saliva.

guniya came out of the kitchen to see who has come..she was wearing turmeric yellow cotton sari, tomato red long blouse.chili red big kumkum in the middle of her fore head looking like a danger light,tied up her long hair and covering her head with her pallu.she was surprised to see rock star krishna singh there.

guniya:'haila😲...krish ji...mai marjaawan😳....kahi mai sapne mai tho nahi hun😲😳...'she slapped on her face.she speaks in typical punjabi language in punjabi accent.she is a punjabi.

guniya:'bilkul...nahi ji😳...'she realized it is not her dream and tried to jump on him.

krishna:'😲...GOD...'he moved back.

saxena:'guniyaAngry alignabsMiddle...thum jakar pani lao...'he diverted her.

guniya:'srif paani kyun ji😳...chai , paani, naashta sab kuch laathi hun...'45 year old lady ran in with excitment as a kindergarten girl.
keser:'thum hi ho na pratigya?😊...ether awo...😊'she said looking at pratigya with a pleasing smile.shakti singed pratigya to go to keser.but pratigya did not move from her place.keser got up from the couch,moved forward and hold pratigya.

keser::'baito...😊'she moved a bit and made her sit beside her.

in front of others pratigya don't have the guts to look at krishna other wise she might have burnt him with her single sight.

guniya came running with hot streaming coffee in one tray and with cheese cakes and bread cheese toast in another tray.
guniya:'lo krish ji😳...garma garam coffee aur nashta...😃'along with hot steaming coffee she served bread cheese toast and cheese cake.
look at the south indian special coffee served is a traditional way!
home made hot bread cheese toast!😛
colourful and mouth watering home made cheese cakes!!! yumy!😛

she handed in the cups to all including pratigya.
guniya:'kya baat hai krish ji?😳...aap yahan!😲...aap kay show ka ticket sale karni hai kya? 😕...mere paas thaytho. ekhi din mai fata fat poora mohallah sale kar thoon ki...😉...'she started blabbering.
saxena:'guniya...Angry alignabsMiddle'he signed her to keep silent.

shakti:'aap log yahan...😕'he hesitated to ask them why they were there.
keser took pratigya's hand in her hand and caressed her lovingly.

keser:'bahuth sunder hoTongue alignabsMiddle.bhagwaan ne thumai bahuth hi dhiyan se bana ya hai...'pratigya plaster a smile on her face voluntarily.

keser:'maine suna thum krishna se pyaar kar thi ho😃...' her statement shocked and surprised every one.suddenly a dreadful silent occurred among them.

pratigya's body went up in flames.she turned and looked at krishna.even krishna was taken aback.he looked at pratigya and keser simultaneously with shock.

pratigya:'issa kuch nahi hai...'instantly she refused.

keser:'aap log se dar thi hai .iss leyeh...daro maat pratigya.hamai yeah rishta mazoor hai.hum yahan thumara haat maang ne hi aayeah hai...😊'

guniya interfered,

guniya:'yeah tho achchi baat huye na ji😃.srif haath kyun ji ....haath ,pair ,seir dill,dhimaag...sab...poore ka poora lay loji...😃'with her humorous talk she tried to reduce the tension among them.
krishna:🤣...'he tried to control himself.

keser:'saxena saab aap ko ithraas hai?...' she asked looking at saxena.

saxena:'...wo...filhaal ithraas tho nahi hai...par..pratigya...😕' he was confused and pleasantly shocked with their unexpected ...all of a sudden proposal.

pratigya:'nahi.... muchay degree poori kar ni hai..' she found a strong reason to avoid them.

keser:' shaadi kay baath bhi thum pad sakthi ho.hamai koi ithraas nahi.mai uss ka poora inthazaam karthunge...pakka...😊'she assured
pratigya:'mai kaam karna chaha thi hun...😒'she tried with yet another reason.

keser:'fantastic😊 .yeahi tho hum bhi chaha thay hain.you can work with us.if you want you can work out side for other company too.we don't have any objection.more over it is too early to talk about that.still you have two long years to complete your degree isn't it?...'she was left with no option.

keser:'saxena saab,bolo...aap ko koi ithraas hai...?'

saxena:'shakti...thum kya bol thay ho...' he looked at shakti for his opinion.

shakti:'papa...muchay lag tha hai hamai haan kar thay na chahi yeah.waise bhi pratigya pyaar kar thi hai tho.....😕'

guniya:'oh...ji😳.hamaari maharani tho krishhh se pyaar kar thi hai pyaar...😳. par...maharani bolne sharmaara hi hai😳... '

keser: mahaarani!😆....'

guniya:' haanji...hamari pratigya hum sabki laadili rani hai.....tho hue na maharani...😃'

krishna:😆
pratigya:😡

guniya: ab ithraas ya inthzaar kis baat ka ? moo meeta karo ji Tongue alignabsMiddle'she took one cheese cake and tried to stuff it in krishna's mouth.

krishna:Shocked

guniya: khalo ji...hamari maharaniji ne banaya hai....try karo...😃' krishna took it from her hand and bit it.

guniya:' kaisa laga....😛'

krishna:'umm...yum...😛'he said looking at pratigya.

guniya: wahi tho...lo aap bhi moo meta karo...😃'she gave it to keser too.

keser:' waaki mai achcha hai...'she said while enjoy eating the cheese cake.
keser:'tho hum chal thay hai.we will discuss with our pandit and send words to you at the earliest...😃' they got up.

saxena:'aap log kay ghar mai bade busruk...'still he had doubt about their proposal.

keser:'hain....hamari dadima hai.😊par hamari kushi mai hi unn ki kushi hai...aap chin tha maat kijeyeah.'she cleared his doubt.

guniya:'ek minute ji....'she took a four folded 50 rupees note from her pallu.

guniya:'autograph thay tho ji 😃...'she carefully unfold the wet note and showed to him.

krishna:'sorry mai currencies pay nahi sign kar tha...'
guniya:'haila.....issa kyun ji😳...tho fir iss mai kar tho 'she grabbed a note book from the side table and gave it to him.

pratigya:'😲Angry alignabsMiddle...guni maa...,that is my note book...'guniya did not understand what she said.

he pulled out his pen from his pocket pressed it's top to eject the refill.he opened the first page.it was written

pratigya saxena
second year chemical engineering


he looked at pratigya with a smile.with out looking at the note book, continue staring at pratigya...he scribbled below her name.

with love
krishna

guniya:'thank you ji😳...'she snatched the note book from his hand.

krishna:'dii😊...it is getting late.better we move...'they moved towards the door.saxena,shakti and guniya followed them till the door to send off but pratigya stood rooted in her place.

while exiting krishna turned and looked beyond saxena at pratigya.a smile of victory spread on his face.

she bit her lower lip till it hurts her and murmured with pain 'i hate you...'
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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PART-10
krishna and keser came out of saxena house and were walking towards their car.while walking krishna slightly jumped and kicked a small stone with his right leg which flew away beyond their sight.

keser:'kush ho????.😊..'she asked looking at him and the force he kicked the stone.
krishna:'bahuth...😃'he threw the car key up above and caught it with both the hands.he was over whelming with joy.

krishna:'dii...😊'suddenly he turned towards her.

keser:'😊...kya?'

krishna:' thum ne issa kyun kaha...😕? ki pratigya much se pyaar karthi hai..i don't under stand😕...i never told you that....' he slow down his steps.

keser:'😊...thum tho usse payaar kar thay ho na...?'

krishna:'bahuth...😃'he slightly jumped and crossed a small pit.

keser:'😊tho kya fark padtha? pyaar mai ithna tho chaltha hai😃...'she giggled.

krishna:'dii...😕 what do you mean?'

keser:'uss ne thumai NA kahana? ...'

krishna:'ummmm...😔 'for a second a sad shadow covered his face.

keser:'patha hai kyun ? yeah middle class kay log bahuth ghuth dhaar ho thay hain.chote gharon mai , chothe galiyon mai raha thay hai.par baathayn bahuth baday baday kar thay hain.we cannot cover them with money....inhay issa he handle karna hai... sentimentally or emotionally...😉'

krishna:'dii...😲...you are great😛 ' suddenly he bend down,hold her below the knees , lifted up and turned round and round.

keser:'omg😲...leave me..'she hold his shirt collar tightly and screamed.she was afraid of falling.

krishna:'...🤣...' he did not stop whirling.

keser:'yeah kay hai? koi thayk layga... leave me...'

krishna:'i don't care😊...i love my dii..'with a great difficulty she pushed him and jumped down.

keser:'ufff....😡'she was taking quick and short breaths.she trembled while trying to walk.

krishna:'🤣...

keser:'look !...how happy you are.iss kay leyeh tho mai kuch bhi bol sakthi hun...😊'she justified herself.

saxena house:

shakti:'proposal from rock star krishna singh?😲...i cannot believe this...'he was wondering to his father.

pratigya:'papa...i don't want to marry now...Unhappy'she slowly refused.

shakti:'do you want to say NO to them!....are you crazy???😡'

saxena:'jab thum chahoge , thab thumai issa rishta nahi melay ga pratigya...'he spoke as a responsible father.

saxena:'papa i am too young to marry...'again she tried.

shakti:'thum ithni bhi choti nahi ho pratigya.going to be twenty soon...few of your friends already got married....by the way ...thumai shaadi nahi karni hai thi pyaar kyun kiya?...Angry'
pratigya:ShockedShockedShocked...she got mad at krishna and his sister for letting that lie.
saxena:'pratigya...thum shakti ka bhi soocho.thees saal ka hogaya hai.shakti ne kiran kay shaadi kay inthzaar mai usski shaadi nahi ki.par kiran thumari hi jaise shaadi kay leyah mana karthi rahi...'

shakti:'kiran was postponing her marriage saying that she want to complete her studies.papa allowed her.then she said she want to work.again papa listen to her.finally what happened? she end up her life.we don't want the same things to be repeated with you.'

saxena:'mai chaha tha hun shakti bhi jalthse jalth settle ho jayeah....thumari maa hothi tho wo bhi yehi chahathi thi ....'he got up and went in as if he don't want to discuss further in this regard.

pratigya was left with no choice.

next day:

university break time:

rolli and pratigya was sitting on a long cement bench.

rolli :'why are you looking confused?...dull too ?' she asked looking at her long face.
pratigya:'wo..yesterday krishna came to my house...'

rolli :'what...😲'

pratigya narrated from krishna proposed her on the terrace ,in spite of her NO he came to his house with his sister to propose her.

rolli :'....she did not speak

pratigya:'kyun chup ho...?'

rolli :'it is quite unexpected.but any way... i think he proposed you in a very decent way.better marry him...'

pratigya:😡...you know what....he told that i love him....Angry'
rolli:😆
pratigya:' kyun hass rahi ho...Angry'
rolli:'it is not a pure lie though....if i am not wrong you are the one who initiated......'
pratigya:'wofo...thab mai paagal hogaye thi....😒'
rolli:'log pyaarmai paagal hi hoja thay hai....😆'
pratigya:'girr....you are unbelievable roll....'

rolli :'waise... duniya saari kay ladki yaan uss par marthay hai...'

pratigya:'why do you speak like that...😔'

rolli :'pratigya...be practical.in fact you are the luckiest among the crowd....think that way...'

'luckiest!😡 you never know roll...i hate him...'she could not speak out her thoughts.she boiled in.

rolli :'advance wishes pratigya😊...i hope you will not forget me after marring the rock star...'

pratigya:😡

rolli :'😊'

in singh music company:

it was around 3:30 pm.krishna was in his rehearsal floor with his troop.naina came in with an formal 'excuse'

naina:'sir...'she drew his attention.

krishna:'yes...'he turned towards her.

naina:'sir the board members have called for a immediate meeting at 4pm.keser ma'm told to inform you...'

krishna:'teek hai...' he windup the rehearsal before 4pm.

conference room:
at 4pm:

few of the members were already present.keser and few more were yet to come.as soon as all gathered they started the meeting.

the purpose of the meeting was , six months before the music company which they started with the collaboration of a growing UK music company was facing sudden fall in their share.some one from this company should immediately go to UK to look in to it.at the end of the meeting the senior members suggested krishna to go personally to UK.
when he came out of the conference room it was 5:15pm.

in singh house:

at the dinning table krishna ,keser and their maasi were having their dinner .
maasi:'krishna...kuch parayshaan lag rahay ho?...kya baat hai...?'she asked him looking at the way he was keeping the food plate with out eating.

krishna:'kuch nahi...😕😔'he said formally.but actually he was.he was thinking to meet pratigya after he visited saxena house with keser, but today he could not because of the meeting.tomorrow morning the company has made all arrangements to go to UK by morning flight.he is going to held up there for a week.first time he was messing up his personal feelings with his profession.

keser:'i think you are brooding about the saxenas.don't do.i will look in to them.better you concentrate only on your work...'she assured him.

next day morning before going to office keser went to air port with krishna to send him off.
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