FF: Thoda Sa Pyaar! part 50 51-pg-85

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girls...i am here with yet another FF Thoda Sa Pyaar!...it is also written for some other jodi...now i am going to modify it for KriYa...hope you will like it...😃
this is the story of 26 year old young rock star krishna falls in love with 19 years old teen age girl pratigya and how this mature man...a celebrity... a public figure handles that little innocent college going teen from an uper middle class family. this little teen initially want to marry him for some reason and try to attract him towards her and tempted him...later she realized that she is wrong and tried to back up from him but he could not....😊
PART-1,2 -PG-1
PART-3-PG-5
PART-4,5-PG-9
PART-6,7-PG-11
PART-8-PG-15
PART-9,10-PG-17
PART-11,12-PG-19
PART-13,14-PG-22
PART-15,16-PG-24
PART-17,18-PG-28
PART-19,20-PG-31
PART-21,22-PG-34
PART-23,24-PG-37
PART-25,26-PG-38
PART-27,28-PG-41
PART-29,30-PG-44
PART-31-PG-47
PART-32-PG-48
PART-33-PG-51
PART-34,35-PG-53
PART-36,37-PG-55
PART-38,39-PG-57
PART-40-PG-59
PART-41-PG-61
PART-42-PG-65
PART-43-PG-67
PART-44-PG-70
PART-45-PG-73
PART-46-PG-76
PART-47,48-PG-79
PART-49-PG-83
PART-50,51-PG-85
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PART-1

University Of Delhi:
around 11pm: pratigya was sitting in second year B.E engineering lecture hall and busy taking notes.her friend rolli was sitting beside her and scribbling in her notebook.
'i hate this class...😡' rolli wrote in a bit paper and passed on to pratigya.pratigya did not care to look at her note, she was concentrating on professor gupta's lecture and taking notes carefully.

soon after the lecture was over pratigya and rolli collected their books and note books from the desk and came out of the lecture hall.

rolli:'uff...😡'she said while they were walking on the corridor along the crowd.

pratigya:'kya hua..?😕' she asked rolli.they were heading towards the cafeteria.

rolli:'how do you concentrate on that bakwaas lecture?...mujay tho kuch samach mai nahi aatha...Confused alignabsMiddle..half of the students bunk his class😆'

pratigya:'rolli😊...i know that you don't like that professor ...that is why you don't concentrate on his lecture ...so you don't understand too😃...'

rolli:'omg...ab thum lecture shuru maat karo...let us have some thing in the canteen...'

pratigya:'rolliii... now it is not our lunch break.if we go to cafeteria we will be late to our next lecture...'she tried to stop her.

rolli:'oh...come on..don't be boring 'she pulled her towards the canteen.
rolli went to the canteen counter and took two tokens for apple juice ,went to the other counter ,gave the tokens and got the apple juice in two disposable glasses.as because it was not the lunch break the canteen was almost empty.both pratigya and rolli took the seat in one corner of the canteen.pratigya turned her wrist, looked at her tiny titan watch with black leather strap.5 more minutes left for the next lecture to start.rolli did not care about the time.

rolli:'pratigya...patha hai kal kay college function may chief guest koon hai?...who is going to distribute the academic excellency certificates?...😛'

pratigya:'i know...'she said with no interest.

rolli:'mr.krishna singh...the rock star...my long time wish is going to come true...Tongue alignabsMiddle'she was excited.
pratigya for a second stop drinking the juice.she bit her lip and lowered her gaze to hide her feelings and expressions.but she failed.
rolli:'pratigya...are you ok?Confused alignabsMiddle'

pratigya:'umm...'

rolli:'are you sure?...'

pratigya:'it is getting late for the class.let us go...'she got up from her seat to divert her, both rushed to their next class.

singh music company:

krishna singh the rock star,heart throb of the nation was leaning back and sitting in his black leather revolving chair.his assistance naina was standing in front of him and reading his appointments.

naina:'after noon 2pm lunch with ramsha,3pm board meeting with the board members,6pm Delhi University function..'she read as a parrot.

krishna:'umm...'he was playing with the paper weight and listening to her.he kept the paper weight on the table ,leaned for ward ,opened his draw and took a CD from it.

krishna:'give this CD in the recording room and tell them to check the voice quality...'

naina:'yes sir...'she took the CD from him and went out.

evening 5:45 pm:
Delhi University auditorium was filled with the students,the future india!.pratigya went to the front row moving through the crowd and took the place which is specially meant for the student who are going to receive the awards.

sharp at 6pm the function started with a small prayer by the final year student miss.rama at the end of the prayer she called up on the principal to continue the function. the principal addressed the audiences and gave the speech about the university, their goals and achievements.
while he was delivering his speech krishna entered the auditorium from the back side door.he would like to take his seat without disturbing principal's speech, but could not.as soon as the student saw him a wave of disturbance spread over the auditorium.

krishna:'excuse me...Smile'he said in general in a soft tone and took his seat on the stage beside other VIPs.he was in cream suite.he fixed his coat while sitting.his presence made pratigya restless.small drop lets of sweat appeared on her fore head.she took her hand kerchief and wiped her face.she tried her best to avoid looking at him and concentrate on the principal's speech.rolli too got restless but with different emotion...

followed by vice principal speech it was academic award distributing ceremony, most awaiting moment for the outstanding students.the student who were going to receive the award were already informed.pratigya got alert and was keenly hearing the announcement of her name.for the first half of the student the awards were given by the chief guest Dr.Ramdoss,director of the university.second half should be given by the rock star krishna singh.fortunately or unfortunately pratigya's name was not announced in the first half.

for the second half krishna got up from his seat ,fixed his coat and went near the podium.while a senior student was calling the names,yet another senior student took the respective certificates and medals from the tray and gave it to krishna.there was a video coverage while he was honoring the great students with awards and medals.

announcement:'... the excellent student of the year goes to pratigya saxena...second year chemical engineering '

when her name was announced pratigya got up coolly from the front row and went to the stage. she climbed the steps by holding her long skirt little bit up and showing her puffy fair feet inside a slightly high heels sandals.

krishna did not notice her.he carefully took the certificate from the tray and turned towards pratigya to honor her.by that time pratigya reached krishna and she was standing very close to him , few centimeter apart.looks she reduced the distance between them intentionally.for a moment he forgot to blink.his sight stood still on her.he could smell her feminine fragrance.no women has ever captured his attention like this.

pratigya!!!!!!

she was hardly nineteen but looks like sixteen.she was wearing a light apple green long new silk skirt with a thin zari border at the bottom. tiny golden zari flowers scattered over the skirt. short sleeve long matching blouse,no accessories around her long fair neck.black silky hair flowing below her shoulder,small dangling in the ears,trimmed eye brows,no bindi,innocent eyes,small sharp nose,chubby cheeks,short chin,thin wide pink lips and million dollar smile on it, sufficient enough to mesmerize a Himalayan saint.

krishna shook his head ,recover his conscious and gave the certificate to her.

krishna:'congratulation...😃'he was still wondering about her .'no doubt she has taken extra care about her look...'he said in his mind. '...usually people say, those who are outstanding in their studies less concentrate in make up and least bother about their look. but she is exceptional..'again the thought ran in to his mind.he hold his thought , took the medal from the tray and leaned forward to put it in her neck.

pratigya:' thank you...😃'she stepped back with extra large smile and took the medal from him in her hand.her unexpected action slightly shook him.

pratigya:'thanks...😃'she said again and extended her fair long hands.it has no bangles in it.neatly trimmed and polished nails with a solid plane finger ring in the ring finger. he got yet another shock.in no time he came out of his shock and extend his hand to her.

she slide her elegant palm in to his and shook gently, which radiated a feeling of pleasant throughout his body.he tried to control him self by swallowing his saliva.a moment later he realized that she was holding his hand for more than necessary.he gently took back his hand from hers.before he could act or say she went away.she walked out of the auditorium with a sigh.

rolli:'pratigya....Smile'she came running behind her.

rolli:'congratulations pratigya...i am very glad...😃'she hugged her.

pratigya:'thanks...😕'said formally.she was not happy instead she was looking confused.but rolli was not in a mood to notice pratigya's confussion.

rolli:'chalo andther...thodi thayer mai cultural programme shuru hone wala hai...'

pratigya:'nahi rolli...thum jawo...' she had no interest.

inside the auditorium:

krishna distributed rest of the awards mechanically and went back to his seat.his eyes searched for pratigya but failed to find.he quickly scanned the whole auditorium but of no use.while his eyes searching for pratigya one of the senior student came to him.

student:'excuse me..'he bend down and whispered to him.krishna raised his head and looked at him with a question mark on his face.

student:'sir.. students want to hear you singing...'

krishna:'oh...no...i am sorry...' he shook his head as a sign of no.

student:'please sir...we are all excited to hear you singing...' students those who are sitting in the auditorium understood their talk and started shouting.

students:'krishna...krishna...krishna...' they cheered,they went out of control.

krishna:' fine...i will...i will..Smile'he got up from his seat and try to controlled the crowd.a student came running and gave the mike to him.krishna looked around the crowd,tried to find pratigya.but no.....he could not...he closed his eyes for a second to gather his concentration .when he opened his eyes.....'y..e..s.....there... she... is...'finally his eyes caught her while she was entering the auditorium with rolli.he instantly started signing...

krishna:
Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara
Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja]2
Baby i love u 4 so more
Baby i love u
I love u so more

girls here in the audio link of the song. enjoy the melody....mesmerizing voice of atif aslam .just open the link. it will start playing for you.....

http://www.imeem.com/sohailkhowaja/music/EEy4faDk/atif-aslam-pehli-nazar-mein/

students:'once more...once more...come on...'they cheered.krishna waved his hand with a smile to the students and went back to his seat.

Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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PART-2

Delhi University function came to an end with few cultural programmes by the students.

usually krishna never sits till the end of the function.but today he don't feel like going in the middle of the function.after the end of the function krishna was surrounded by the students for autograph.good...there was no media people disturbance.they were prohibited by the university authorities.while he was signing the autograph he searched for pratigya.

pratigya was walking out with rolli.she was holding the certificate and the medal in her hands.

rolli:' pratigya...ruko...every one is taking autograph of krishna...let us also ....😛'she hold pratigya's hand and try to stop her.

pratigya:'i am not interested...'she passed on.

rolli:' pratigya...why are you behaving so weird.come on...'she pulled her.

pratigya did not move.after signing few autograph krishna moved ahead and he saw pratigya standing few meters away from him.

rolli:'khadi khadi kya thayk rahi ho?...wo chalay jayeah ga..'she again pulled her.

pratigya:'wo aayeah ga...'she said with out expression on her face.

rolli:'kya?...😲😕'

pratigya:'wo aayeah ga...' she strongly repeated .

rolli:'wo rock star hai.wo kyun aayeah ga?.we have to go.come we will...😛' before she could finish she saw krishna heading towards them with the crowd following him.rolli stood speach less.

students:'please...autograph...😃'

students:'sir...please....😛' they followed him.

he neglected their plea and came to them with his wide foot steps.rolli was first time looking at the rock star krishna very closely.

krishna!!!!
young rock star. heart throb of billions...hardly 26 years.he is moderately tall and fair.brown twinkling eyes with neat eyebrow.wide fore heard and short hair cut.strong manly jaws with sharp nose and thick lips.well sketched face with build up body.attractive smile and impressing personality.no doubt girls can easily fall for him.a date with him is a dream for them.

krishna:'auto graph nahi lo gi?...😊'he spoke in his husky and sexy voice.cannot believe while singing how his sexy and husky voice turns in to such a melody.

pratigya:'ummm...😊 nahi...yeah mari tharaf se aap kay leyeah...'she raised on her toes and put the medal in his neck as a garland and vanished in the crowd in no time.

krishna was taken aback with her unexpected action. she was the one who objected to take the medal from him when he was about to put it on her neck....he stood rooted on the ground with confused look!

rolli:' pratigya... pratigyaaaa...'she tried to follow her....with out taking autograph rolli went in search of her.

Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I jus LUBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB your ff😃😃😃😃
Continue soon hun😃 Eagerly waitng for your 1st update
haha me first to comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Welcome Back Shumi!!!!! i like your new ff, it's different but cool .... i like the story even though i am not a big fan of rock music and atif aslam but i like pratigya and krishna seems it's love at first sight for krish.... looking forward to the next part soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

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Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I jus LUBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB your ff😃😃😃😃 thank you soooooo much dear...😃
Continue soon hun😃 Eagerly waitng for your 1st update yep...first two parts were updated😃
haha me first to comment me gald to see you first to comment on my ff😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow 2 parts were really nice.U know i love rockstars.pls update soon.Would love to read ur ff.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow......lubb the name. reminds me of sujal and kashish....
anyways. its rlly nice di..........awesome......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yipeeeeeeeeeeee Another FanFic From You!!
Will Read When Im Free x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Actually Couldn't Resist It So I Read It Rofllll!!
Omgggggggg!!! WOWWWWWW!!! Mindblowingggg!!!
It Was Sooooo Goooddddd!!! Reminds Me Of Robbie Kasturi Somehow...
Haayeee I Loveee How You Describe Everythinggg!
Hmm...Suspenseee Lool
Update Sooon x

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