FF - A Dangerous Love **Chp 5 .. Page 12** UPDATE! - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone - I'm back with my second chapter!

Chapter 2
'Where has my insolent son wandered off to now? Behooda - he's always here when I don't want him, and never here when I do!' muttered Thakur Sajjan Singh, the renowned, ruthless businessman from Allahbad. He paced around the site, looking annoyed and irritable.. His workers decided it was in their best interests to keep well away from him!
'So, old man, did you miss me?' he laughed. A handsome, muscular young man walked slowly, yet proudly, towards Sajjan Singh. He wore a purple shirt and dark jeans, his shirt sleeves rolled up, and his top buttons undone, revealing part of his toned muscular upper body.. His mouth curled into a smirk, his eyes narrowing - if there had been any girls around, they would have fainted!
'Behooda where have you been! I have been waiting for you for the last half hour, and then all you do when you do get here is give me that stupid look! Don't show me that stupid flirty look behooda - I am your father! If we were at home right now, I would have shown you, Krishna!' said Sajjan Singh, annoyed.
'Ahh, Babuji, just admit it - you love me too much to tell me off!' Krishna replied in a rather amused voice!
'Hutt! Sasura, you're telling me how I will behave!' came the reply!
'Anyway, what did you want?' asked Krishna.
'Come inside and I will tell you..' said Sajjan Singh, slightly less ticked off than before..!
Pratigya walked slowly to the market, her head down so she could conceal the tears dripping down her face.. She often thought about her predicament, but there was nothing she could do.. How Pratigya longed to get married - to have a family, to love and be loved. Her saas should be like a mother, and her sasur should be like a father to her - something which she ached to have. She remembered the time where she had called her aunt and uncle 'Maa' and 'Papa'.. and how they had coldly rejected her. What was it they said? ..'We are not your parents and you are not our daughter - you are a worthless good-for-nothing child thrust upon us against our will!' The tears fell faster and Pratigya's vision was blurred. Wiping off the tears, she looked up.. oh no.. trouble!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
o my god 😭😭😭 poor pratigya !!😔 i hope this sindrella meets her prince charles as early as possible!!😍 ( i am krazzy over sindrella-prince charles's lub story u know 😉) i hope he wippes all her tears away😳😊 waiting eagerly to know what happens next😃 thanx aloat for writing such a beautifull concept..🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Oh wow....it's brilliant!! I am loving the concept!! Aww....I am feeling so sorry for Prats. She wants a family that she can call of her own. Hahaha....I always love conversation between SS and Baba. Too good yaar, keep it up and please update soon! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
continue soon dear, lovely chapter.
the chapter was too short pls make it long next time. it ended even before it started.i guess kriya will meet in the market.
waiting eagerly for your next update. update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was very interesting update.loved krishna's entry and their convo.i hope pratigya's wish of having her own family will come true soon.thank you for the wonderful update.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg......totally lubbed krishna.........

and at same time felt bad for pratigya....
anyways nice chap dear........update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
good start 👏really liked it a lot.could u? make it a bit longer.eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Edited by shalinikanagu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
It was a very nice chp.Krishna's introduction was good and he shares the same equation with his father like how he does on the show here on your ff as well.I wonder what trouble Pratigya has got into now!Looking forward to the next chp.Pls update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️mindblowing ff i just lub itt 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by chhaya007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
OMG krishna!! too good 🤗 lovely chapter 👏👏👏 update soon!!

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