New horror ff- CHAPTER 5 UPDATED pg 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: preeti4mehta

see arhaanfanatic if you dont like the ff then please stay away from it. just dont read it but please dont make such nasty comments.i really dont understand why are you after her? we are enjoying her ff very much.this is the first time i'm writing such a thing coz it was unbearable for me.
if you cannot encourage any one , then you dont have any right to discourage that person.
its her imagination and we should respect that. she is talking a lot of efforts just to entertain us.

see if you dont like her FF you can start writing your own FF let me see your talent, your capability, your creativity, your imagination. dont take it in a wrong way coz its very easy to criticize somebody but when the same thing comes to you, you get to know how capable you are.
so my advice to you is stop criticizing aleena and start working on your FF. i'm waiting. and dying to see how talented you are that you so openly criticize someone for her sincere effort.

my intentions are not to offend any one. so pls dont misunderstand me.

preeti just ignore such people😊

I like d chp.......my krishu wasnt in it!😭.....but that cuming out of d tv scene was horrible....good my pix didnt load or i wud hv not been able to sleep😲.............but by chance did damon or krishu or grudge kill pratz dad.....maybe pratz dad is a vampire.....nainaji poor lady😭

that was very interesting update.loved pratigya and MK's dream sequence.what is the truth behind her dad's death.evil samara killed poor arushi that was very sad.eagerly waiting for the next update.plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: clueless1

good update.....

so you've added characters from geet and MJHT..... not bad.....

Poor rolli.......dying like that....... I think I prefer the grudge compared to samara. Grudge is more evil😆 and the way she kills her victims is more horriifc.....

scary pic...

update soon plz

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Originally posted by: kaasshh

hey aleena...i was hooked onto ur ff...its just toooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddd..... he he maan singh khurana and pratigya....🤣 loved it..... ewwwwwww nooooooo aarushi.............😲😲😲😲

i hope someone savbes her......wats ant pratigya's dad?😕 is he a ghost too?😆 plzzz dnt be lazy dear.....jalsdi jaldi update......muahhhhhh😳

Originally posted by: arhaanfanatic

Da ff is getting wurse.... Whr da hell does smarah fit in? Addinng. Maan is not gona impruv ff. Pafetic attempt at horur riting

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Originally posted by: preeti4mehta

see arhaanfanatic if you dont like the ff then please stay away from it. just dont read it but please dont make such nasty comments.i really dont understand why are you after her? we are enjoying her ff very much.this is the first time i'm writing such a thing coz it was unbearable for me.
if you cannot encourage any one , then you dont have any right to discourage that person.
its her imagination and we should respect that. she is talking a lot of efforts just to entertain us.

see if you dont like her FF you can start writing your own FF let me see your talent, your capability, your creativity, your imagination. dont take it in a wrong way coz its very easy to criticize somebody but when the same thing comes to you, you get to know how capable you are.
so my advice to you is stop criticizing aleena and start working on your FF. i'm waiting. and dying to see how talented you are that you so openly criticize someone for her sincere effort.

my intentions are not to offend any one. so pls dont misunderstand me.

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Wow Aleena!!Chp 2 was terrific👏⭐️⭐️.Seriously I was getting all intrigued while reading it.Keep up the good job and I am looking forward to the next chp😊

Originally posted by: kaasshh

preeti just ignore such people😊

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

I like d chp.......my krishu wasnt in it!😭.....but that cuming out of d tv scene was horrible....good my pix didnt load or i wud hv not been able to sleep😲.............but by chance did damon or krishu or grudge kill pratz dad.....maybe pratz dad is a vampire.....nainaji poor lady😭

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